考點(diǎn)20應(yīng)用文寫作建議信道歉信（解析版）

考點(diǎn)20應(yīng)用文寫作：建議信、道歉信（解析版）【命題解讀】書信類寫作包括邀請(qǐng)信、感謝信、推薦信、求職信、祝賀信、告知信、求助信、建議信、道歉信、咨詢信以及慰問(wèn)信等類別。 以下對(duì)建議信、道歉信類別提供對(duì)應(yīng)的模板和基本寫作技巧。建議信【考情分析】1、學(xué)習(xí)類：給圖書館建議，提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量；給選修課提建議；給讀書節(jié)提建議2、環(huán)境保護(hù)類：給相關(guān)部門或報(bào)紙?zhí)峤ㄗh①限制使用白色塑料袋，②節(jié)約食物③合理使用共享單車。3、文化自信類（★★★★★）：外國(guó)留學(xué)生，來(lái)你們學(xué)習(xí)，給他們的學(xué)習(xí)生活或?qū)W習(xí)中文提建議。4、身心健康：給校長(zhǎng)寫信，關(guān)于提高學(xué)生身心健康：身體健康，減壓等?！静季炙季S導(dǎo)圖】段落要點(diǎn)首段寫信目的正文提出建議、說(shuō)明原因結(jié)尾表達(dá)期望和祝愿【基本模板】Dear______(稱謂)Youcan’timaginehow______(情感)Iamhearingabout______(寫信的原因).I’mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Firstly,youaresupposedto______(建議一).Additionally(Foronereason),itmakessenseto______(建議二/理由一).Moreover（Foranotherreason）,______(建議三/理由二)isalsoagoodchoice.Dobearinmindthat（Therefore）______(建議四/理由三) Iamfullyconvincedthatusethe

tipsaboveandwewill______(以上建議的好處).Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount(表達(dá)希望接受建議).Yoursincerely,LiHua【必備詞句】Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...

我寫此信來(lái)表達(dá)我關(guān)于……的觀點(diǎn)。Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...，andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestions.

對(duì)于你來(lái)信問(wèn)我關(guān)于……的事，現(xiàn)提供幾條有益的建議。Iwouldliketosuggestthat...

我建議……Whynot.../Whydon'tyou...？為何不……？Ithinkitwillbeagoodidea/morebeneficialifyoucould...

我認(rèn)為……是個(gè)好辦法/有利的。It'simportantto.../Ithelpsto...Itshouldbeagoodideato...

很重要/有幫助/是個(gè)好主意。Iamwritingtoputupsomesuggestionsconcerning...

我提出幾條有關(guān)于……的建議。Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thanks.

請(qǐng)仔細(xì)考慮我的建議，謝謝。Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/remendationshelpful/useful.

希望這些建議對(duì)你有幫助。Thankyouforyourattention.感謝你對(duì)此事的關(guān)注?！緦懽鲗?shí)操技巧】 假如你是李華，你的外教MrGeller計(jì)劃讓8歲的女兒在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)一門傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)作為興趣培養(yǎng)，正在書法、剪紙與象棋中選擇，寫郵件尋求你的看法和學(xué)習(xí)建議。請(qǐng)你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括： 1.推薦內(nèi)容及簡(jiǎn)要原因； 2.切實(shí)可行的學(xué)習(xí)建議； 3.祝福與希望。注意：1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右； 2．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；參考詞匯：書法：calligraphy剪紙：paper-cutting象棋：Chinesechess_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】Dear______(稱謂)Youcan’timaginehowoverjoyed(情感)Iamhearingaboutyourplan(寫信的原因).I’mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Firstly,youaresupposedtochooseChinesecalligraphybecauseit’sanaturalbinationofbeauty,strength,historyandtechnique(建議一).Additionally,aimingatlearningitwell,itmakessensetodevotehimself/herselftolonghoursofpractice(建議二).Moreover,signingupforacalligraphycourse(建議三)isalsoagoodchoice,whichwouldhelpherstudyinasystematicway.Dobearinmindthatit’dalsobebeneficialtostudyandimitatetheworksoffamouscalligraphers(建議四) Iamfullyconvincedthatusethe

tipsaboveandyouwillgainbenefit(以上建議的好處).Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount(表達(dá)希望接受建議).Yoursincerely,LiHua【仿寫演練】 假定你是李華，你朋友張帥在美國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)，你們經(jīng)常用英文通信。他即將完成學(xué)業(yè)，前不久,他來(lái)信就是否回國(guó)工作征求你的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示回信。1.建議他回國(guó)。2.你的理由是國(guó)內(nèi)形勢(shì)好、學(xué)有所用、就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)多、便于照顧父母、報(bào)效祖國(guó)等。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右：2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearZhangshuai(稱謂)Youcan’timaginehowoverjoyed(情感)Iamhearingaboutyouaregoingtograduate(寫信的原因).I’mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Inmyopinion,youaresupposedtoebackafteryoufinishyourstudiesabroad(建議).Foronereason,whatyouarestudyingisbadlyneedednowadaysinChinaanditwillbequiteeasyforyoutofindagoodjob(理由一).Foranotherreason,itwillbemuchmoreconvenientforyoutolookafteryourparentsastheyare

gettingold(理由二).Therefore，it'sagoodideaforyoutoreturn.(總結(jié)) Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount(表達(dá)希望接受建議).Yoursincerely,LiHua道歉信【考情分析】①活動(dòng)沒(méi)有去參加（道歉時(shí)，活動(dòng)已經(jīng)結(jié)束）；②活動(dòng)不能去參加（道歉時(shí)，活動(dòng)還沒(méi)有開(kāi)始）；③給別人造成了損失：如把對(duì)方東西弄丟；把車給損壞了；④答應(yīng)的事情（或任務(wù)）沒(méi)有按時(shí)完成等?！静季炙季S導(dǎo)圖】段落要點(diǎn)首段表表示歉意，道歉的原由正文解釋原因，提出彌補(bǔ)措施；結(jié)尾再次請(qǐng)求原諒?！净灸０濉緿ear______(稱謂)I'mterriblysorrytoinformyouthat______(寫信事由).Thus,Iamwritingtoapologizefornotkeepingmyword.Somethingunexpectedhappenedand______(失約理由).Shallwefixanothertime?I’llbeavailableanytimeafter______(補(bǔ)救辦法).Will______(另約時(shí)間)suitsyourconvenience?Ifit’sok,let’smeetat______(見(jiàn)面地點(diǎn)).Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ihopetheadjustmentwon’tputyouintomuchtrouble.Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua【必備詞句】Iwouldliketoexpressmyapologyfor...

對(duì)于……，我想要表達(dá)我的歉意。Willyoubegoodenoughtoexcusemefor.../Excusemefor...

請(qǐng)?jiān)徫摇璓leaseacceptmysincerestanddeepestapologyfor...

請(qǐng)接受我最真誠(chéng)的致歉……I'mterriblysorrytotellyouthat.../Iregrettoinformyouthat...很抱歉地告訴你……Iwritetoyoutoexpressmydeepregret.

我寫此信向你表示深深的懊悔。Iamwritingtoapologizetoyoufor...

我寫信向你致歉，因?yàn)椤璚ouldyoumindifI...？你是否介意如果我……？Tomakeupmythoughtlessbehavior，I...為了彌補(bǔ)我欠考慮的行為，我……IwishIcouldbegivenachancetomakeupformyinconsideration.

我希望你能給我一個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)彌補(bǔ)我的考慮不周?！緦懽鲗?shí)操技巧】 假定你是李華，你和外教MrSmith本來(lái)約好去看在你們所在城市舉行的國(guó)際攝影展，但你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括: 1.表示歉意； 2.解釋原因； 3.補(bǔ)救措施。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearMrSmith(稱謂)I'mterriblysorrytoinformyouthatIcan'tacpanyyoutotheInternationalPhotographyFestivalheldthisSaturday(寫信事由).Thus,Iamwritingtoapologizefornotkeepingmyword.SomethingunexpectedhappenedandmyparentshavetogooutsideofthecitythisSaturday,soIhavetostayathomeandtakecareofmylittlebrother(失約理由).Shallwefixanothertime?I’llbeavailableanytimeafterthisSaturday(補(bǔ)救辦法).WillthisSunday(另約時(shí)間)suitsyourconvenience?Ifit’sok,let’smeetatourschoolgateat8a.m.(見(jiàn)面地點(diǎn)).Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ihopetheadjustmentwon’tputyouintomuchtrouble.Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua【仿寫演練】 假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友David本周六即將結(jié)束在中國(guó)的旅行，乘飛機(jī)返回英國(guó)，你因有事無(wú)法按原定計(jì)劃取機(jī)場(chǎng)為他送行，只好寫信向他道歉，內(nèi)容如下:1.表達(dá)歉意；2.說(shuō)明不能送行的原因。注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearDavid(稱謂)I'mterriblysorrytoinformyouthatIcannotmakeittoseeyouoffattheairportthisSaturdayaspromised(寫信事由).Thus,Iamwritingtoapologizefornotkeepingmyword.SomethingunexpectedhappenedandIhavetohelpmakepreparationsfortheEnglishSpeakingContesttobeheldthisweekend.Actually,Ihavejustbeeninformedofthisplanbytheschoolmaster.Moreover,asthechairmanoftheStudentUnion,Ifeelresponsibleforthisjob.HowIwishIcouldhavethechancetotalkwithyouoncemoreaboutthehappydayswespenttogetherbeforeyouleave!(失約理由).Ihopetheadjustmentwon’tputyouintomuchtrouble.Wishyouasafejourney.Yoursincerely,LiHua【真題1】(2018全國(guó)卷I)假如你是李華,你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國(guó)朋友家做客,發(fā)郵件向你詢問(wèn)有關(guān)習(xí)俗,請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件,內(nèi)容包括：到達(dá)時(shí)間；2.合適的禮物；3.餐桌禮儀注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于80；2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earTerry,Howareyoudoing?LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandfeelconfusedabouttheChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoofferyousomeadvice.Tobeginwith,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushouldarriveontime,becauseitisimpolitetobelateinChinesetraditionalculture.Inaddition,itisagoodideatobringsomeappropriategifts,suchasabunchofflowersoraboxofChocolates.Lastbutnotleast,youaresupposedtopayattentiontotablemannerswhenenjoyingthemeal.Forexample,youshouldavoid-makingnoisewhilechewingthefoodorstickingyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionswouldbehelpful/beneficial/beofbenefittoyou.Iamsureyouwillhaveagreattime.Yours,LiHua【真題2】（2017·北京卷）你的英國(guó)朋友Jim所在的要組織學(xué)生來(lái)中國(guó)旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長(zhǎng)江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來(lái)信希望你能給些建議。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你建議的線路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。【參考范文】DearJim,I’mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou’reingtoChina.OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,botharehighlyremended.Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtze,thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization.YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.Hopeyou’llhaveagoodtimeinChina.Yours,LiHua【真題3】（2019北京卷）假設(shè)你是紅星高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)好友Jim打算暑假期間來(lái)北京、天津和上海旅游，發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.交通出行；2.必備衣物。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim，_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearJim,I’mpleasedthatyou’reingtotourinChina.IsuggestthatyoubeginfromBeijing,andI’llshowyouaround.Tianjinwillbeyournextstop.Afterthat,youcangotoShanghai,whereyoucanstayforaweek.Youcantakehigh-speedtrainstobothcities.Summerinthesecitiesishotandrainy,sotakesummerwearplusanumbrellawithyou.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua【真題4】（2017·北京卷）假設(shè)你是紅星高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)文化感興趣，計(jì)劃明年來(lái)北京上大學(xué)。他向你咨詢相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：(1)表示歡迎；(2)推薦他上哪所大學(xué)；(3)建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。注意：(1).詞數(shù)不少于50；(2).開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearJim,I’msogladtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijinginyourlastletter.FirstIwouldliketoexpressmywarmestweletoyouandIamsureyouwillhavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbepletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.Asforpreparation,somereadinginadvanceinneededlikeTheStoryoftheStonewhilesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadaptintotheChineselanguageenvironment.Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwilletrueandit’smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijingwhenthatdayes.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【真題5】【2019·天津卷】假設(shè)你是晨光的李津，英國(guó)友好校將派教師來(lái)你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動(dòng)。活動(dòng)期間，英方教師Chris將做一個(gè)有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座、現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學(xué)生的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給Chris寫一封電子郵件:（1）你喜歡的講座話題（從音樂(lè)、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一）；（2）選擇該話題的原因及關(guān)于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；（3）希望從中有何收獲。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100：（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；（3）開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出、不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearChris，I'mLiJim，astudentatChenguangHighSchool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours，LiJin【參考范文】DearChris，I'mLiJin,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.Igotthenewsthatyourschoolwillsendteacherstomyschoolforaweek-longsummerexchange.Duringtheactivity，youwillgivealectureonWesternart.Youwanttoseekforadviceonwhattopicthelecturewillbeabout.Frommypersonalnote，musicismypriority.Iaminterestedinallkindsofmusic，amongwhichJazzismyfavorite.Iwanttoknowaboutthehistoryofjazz，andsomefamousjazzsingers.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanaddsomesessionsofenjoyingjazz.Thankyouforyourtime.Yours，LiJin【真題6】假設(shè)你是紅星高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)文化感興趣，計(jì)劃明年來(lái)北京上大學(xué)。他向你咨詢相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：(1)表示歡迎；(2)推薦他上哪所大學(xué)；(3)建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。注意：(1).詞數(shù)不少于50；(2).開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearJim,I’msogladtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijinginyourlastletter.FirstIwouldliketoexpressmywarmestweletoyouandIamsureyouwillhavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbepletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.Asforpreparation,somereadinginadvanceinneededlikeTheStoryoftheStonewhilesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadaptintotheChineselanguageenvironment.Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwilletrueandit’smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijingwhenthatdayes.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【真題7】（2016·新課標(biāo)卷III）假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說(shuō)明原因；3.另約時(shí)間。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【參考范文】DearBob,I’msorrytosaythatIcan'tgotothebookshopwithyouonSundaymorningasweplannedlastweek.Iamwritingtoapologizeforbreakingmypromise.HereisthereasonwhyIcan’tgotothebookstorewithyou.Sincethefinalexamisjustaroundthecorner,Idecidetostayathometogoovermylessons.Youknow,Ididn’tdowellinthelastexam.SoIwanttodevoteallmysparetimetoworkingonmylessonsinordertogetgoodscoresinthefinalexam.IamwonderingifwecangotothebookstoreonthesecondSundayinJanuary.Sorryagainfortheinconveniencecausedtoyou.Yours,LiHua【真題8】（2014·北京卷）你給英國(guó)朋友Chris寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你們?cè)?jì)劃7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于腳部受傷，你無(wú)法按原計(jì)劃前往；3.表達(dá)你的歉意并建議將旅行推遲到8月份。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earChris,Howiseverythinggoing?IrememberweplannedtovisitYunnaninJulybutnowbecausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.I’msorryaboutit.CanIsuggestthatweputitoffuntilearlyAugust?Iwishyoucouldunderstand.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,Joe【真題9】（2014·山東卷）假如你是新華的學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)雙下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件：1.未及時(shí)回信的原因；2.你假期的打算（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）注意：1.詞數(shù)：120-150；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earTom,Howiseverythinggoing?Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofansweringyourletterintime.Youknow,I’vebeenpreparingforthefinalexamsthesedays,soIforgottowriteback.Inyourletter,youaskedmeformyplansonsummervacation.Now,Iamwritingtotellyousomespecificdetails.Overall,threethingswillmakemysummervacationmeaningful.Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreamandIintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.Inaddition,itisafabulouschoicetovisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation,inordertoenjoyappealingsceneryandmakemorefriends.Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.Isincerelyapologizeagainformymistake.Bytheway,what’syourplantospendyoursummervacation?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【真題10】2021年6月北京卷假設(shè)你是紅星高三學(xué)生李華。你和英國(guó)好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)歉意并說(shuō)明原因；2.提出建議并給出理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearJim,Howareyouthesedays?Wehaveplannedtohangaroundtogetherthisweekend,andhowmuchIamexpectingthat!Tomypity,IwasinformedtoattendthenurseryhousewiththeStudentUnionthismorning.SincethisweekendistheDoubleNinthDay,atraditionaldaycelebratedfortheseniorinChina,ourschoolhaslaunchedthisactivitytoshowourconcernandresponsibilityfortheold,whichisameaningfulandinstructiveactivityforusteenagers.Iamreallysorryandhowaboutgoingouttogethernextweekend,andasapensation,Iwouldliketoteatyouabigmealandinviteyoutovisitlocalmuseum.Ifthetimeisnotconvenientforyou,youcansetanytimenextweek.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyforthat.Lookingforwardtoseeingyousoon!Yours,LiHua【模擬檢測(cè)1】（2022·江蘇·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，得知你的英國(guó)好友Jim在國(guó)際數(shù)學(xué)奧林匹克大賽（InternationalMathematicalOlympiad）中失利。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.獲知消息；2.勸他坦然面對(duì)挫折；3.給予鼓勵(lì)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJim,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua參考答案：DearJim,IamsorrytolearnthatyoumetyourwaterloointheInternationalMathematicalOlympiad,whichyouhadpreparedforthewholesummervacation.True,thisbigdefeatmightfrustrateyouforalongtime.Butpleaserestassuredthatfailureisjustpartoflifeandinfact,withoutit,countlessgreatmenwouldneverhavedrawnusefullessonsfromtheirlossandachievedtheirambition.So,pleaseassumeapeacefulandcalmmindset,meanwhileadjustingyourstrategyandresumingyourhardwork.YouhavealreadygonealongwayinthisOlympiad.Infact,hardlyhaveIseenamorediligentcontestantthanyou.So,pickyourselfupandkeepupyoureffort.

IamfullyconvincedsuccessisthereforyourtakinginthenextOlympiad.

Yours,Lihua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生在得知英國(guó)好友Jim在國(guó)際數(shù)學(xué)奧林匹克大賽中失利后用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封郵件。其內(nèi)容包括：獲知消息、勸他坦然面對(duì)挫折和給予鼓勵(lì)?！驹斀狻吭~匯積累遭遇：meet→suffer

沒(méi)錯(cuò)：true→indeed事實(shí)上：infact→asamatteroffact

抱負(fù)：ambition→aspiration2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：True,thisbigdefeatmightfrustrateyouforalongtime.拓展句：Itistruethatthisbigdefeatmightfrustrateyouforalongtime.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】IamsorrytolearnthatyoumetyourwaterloointheInternationalMathematicalOlympiad,whichyouhadpreparedforthewholesummervacation.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Infact,hardlyhaveIseenamorediligentcontestantthanyou.（運(yùn)用了hardly放句首引起的部分倒裝）【模擬檢測(cè)2】（2022·天津和平·一模）假如你是晨光的李津，你給已經(jīng)是大學(xué)一年級(jí)學(xué)生的筆友Chris寫信，請(qǐng)對(duì)方給你提一些建議。信的內(nèi)容如下：（1）詢問(wèn)Christ大學(xué)生活的狀況；（2）詢問(wèn)Christ當(dāng)初根據(jù)什么選擇的專業(yè)；（3）自己希望選擇的專業(yè)及原因（如興趣、父母意愿、就業(yè)前景等）。參考詞匯：專業(yè)major注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；（3）開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearChris,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin參考答案：DearChris,Nicetoknowthatyouhavealreadybeenafirstyearstudentintheuniversity.Iamwritingtoaskyouforsomesuggestionsonmymajorinthefuture.Whatinterestsmeiswhetheryouhaveadaptedtotheuniversitylife.Doyouhaveatightscheduleonyourstudies?Iwaswonderingwhatitwasthatmadeyouchooseyourpresentmajor.AsformymajorIamtotake,IprefertostudyEnglishlanguagebecauseIhaveagreatpassionforit.Inaddition,myparentsalsostronglyremendmetotakeitasmymajor,whichisplayingamoreandmoresignificantroleinspreadingtraditionalChineseculturearoundtheworld.Thirdlyandmostimportantly,ithasamostpromisingemploymentprospect.Hopeeverythinggoessmooth