高考英語(yǔ)二輪研討會(huì)書(shū)面表達(dá)：邀請(qǐng)信課件

二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)1應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)P作racticalwritingTo

analyze

the

writing

precisely.To

express

key

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completely.To

use

language

beautifully.How

to

write

a

better

invitation？2全國(guó)卷近五年應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作文體話題考查一覽表（2015-2019）年份卷別文體話題2019I卷申請(qǐng)信在倫敦申請(qǐng)做當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館舉辦的中國(guó)畫(huà)展的志愿者II卷告知信告知隊(duì)友Chris球隊(duì)近期將參加比賽III卷邀請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)英國(guó)朋友Allen參加學(xué)校的音樂(lè)節(jié)2018I卷介紹信向外國(guó)人介紹來(lái)中國(guó)家庭做客的禮儀、習(xí)俗等II卷通知為校宣傳欄寫(xiě)一則通知，介紹一部英語(yǔ)短片III卷介紹信向?qū)Ψ浇榻B自己學(xué)校的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況2017I卷告知信告知外國(guó)朋友下次上課的計(jì)劃II卷邀請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)外教參觀中國(guó)剪紙藝術(shù)展III卷邀請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)留學(xué)生朋友加入校乒乓球隊(duì)2016I卷求助信請(qǐng)外教幫忙修改申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷II卷邀請(qǐng)信為攝影展征稿III卷道歉信為不能赴約道歉2015I卷約稿信請(qǐng)朋友為“外國(guó)文化”欄目寫(xiě)稿II卷邀請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)外教去敬老院陪老人們過(guò)重陽(yáng)節(jié)

3全國(guó)I卷近五年應(yīng)用文文體考查201520162017201820192020約稿信求助信告知信介紹信申請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)信（？）文體預(yù)測(cè)：全國(guó)一卷文體考查多樣化！邀請(qǐng)信會(huì)成為考查文體嗎？話題預(yù)測(cè)：中外交流、中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化和社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀的結(jié)合4全國(guó)I卷近五年應(yīng)用文話題關(guān)鍵詞201520162017201820192020外國(guó)文化外教幫忙上課計(jì)劃中國(guó)做客中國(guó)畫(huà)展？一、評(píng)分原則本題總分為15分，按五個(gè)檔次進(jìn)行評(píng)分。評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)主要從內(nèi)容組織、詞匯語(yǔ)法和篇章結(jié)構(gòu)三個(gè)方面考慮，具體為：對(duì)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的覆蓋情況以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。使用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性、恰當(dāng)性和多樣性。上下文的銜接和全文的連貫性。5二、各檔次的給分范圍和要求第五檔：(13-15分)能寫(xiě)明全部要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤；行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚；第四檔：(10-12分)能寫(xiě)明全部或絕大部分要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)言有少量錯(cuò)誤；行文不夠連貫,表達(dá)基本清楚；第三檔：(7-9分)能寫(xiě)明基本要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)言雖有較多錯(cuò)誤，但能基本達(dá)意；第二檔：(4-6分)能寫(xiě)出部分要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多，影響意思表達(dá)；第一檔：(1-3分)只能寫(xiě)出一兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤很多，只有個(gè)別句子正確。6如何寫(xiě)一封完美的邀請(qǐng)信？審題要準(zhǔn)（precise）要點(diǎn)要全（complete）語(yǔ)言要美（beautiful）7假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國(guó)學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友George寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。注意：詞數(shù)80左右；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.8（2020年1月浙江高考真題）邀請(qǐng)信寫(xiě)作關(guān)鍵之一：Analyzing審題要準(zhǔn)Precise9三審假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外

國(guó)學(xué)生中文演

講比賽，請(qǐng)給

你的英國(guó)朋友

George寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：比賽時(shí)間；演講話題；報(bào)名方式。審文體:邀請(qǐng)信審人稱：第一人稱和第二人稱審時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，一般將來(lái)時(shí)為輔10審題失誤11邀請(qǐng)信寫(xiě)作關(guān)鍵之二：Key

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Purpose列要點(diǎn).........13假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國(guó)學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友George寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：比賽時(shí)間；演講話題；報(bào)名方式。14列要點(diǎn)1)Background：

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I'mwritingto

invite....Para

1：Para

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at...

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upExpectation:

look

forward

to...假定你是李華，首段你缺校少將舉背辦景外介國(guó)紹學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友George寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；首段2.缺演講少話寫(xiě)題作；目的3.報(bào)名方式。How

are

you

doing

recently?

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school

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going

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writing

the

letter

to

invite

you

to...15假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國(guó)學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友George寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：比賽時(shí)間；演講話題；報(bào)名方式。結(jié)尾沒(méi)有表示出期待或希望I

hold

the

belief

that

your

participation

will

addcolor

to

the

contest.

Looking

forward

to

your

reply.16假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國(guó)學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友George寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。23缺少要點(diǎn)17假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國(guó)學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友George寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。213順序顛倒18at

3

o'

clock

this

Saturday

afternoon,

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two

hours.假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國(guó)學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友George寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。時(shí)間籠統(tǒng)19邀請(qǐng)信寫(xiě)作關(guān)鍵之三：Language語(yǔ)言要美

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be

heldwhich

is

to

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for語(yǔ)言出錯(cuò)22The

contest

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take

place

in

our

school

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Sunday.

All

should

center

around

thetopic

”

Dream

in

my

heart

”.

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you

areinterested

in

it,

do

not

hesitate

to

callStudents'

Union

to

sign

up.語(yǔ)言要簡(jiǎn)潔連貫has過(guò)于啰嗦23套語(yǔ)使用要得體不合語(yǔ)境24How

to

polish

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that

you

are

good

at

Chinese,

I

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like

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invite

you

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in

the

contest.

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ChenJie)1.

I'm

writing

the

letter

to

invite

you

to

join

in

the

contest.（From

LinShuai）I'm

writing

the

letter

to

invite

you

to

participate

in

the

contest.Knowing

that

you

have

a

good

command

of

Chinese,

I

would

liketo

invite

to

compete

in

the

contest.I詞匯高級(jí)化晚詞優(yōu)先學(xué)以致用262.

I

hold

the

belief

that

the

activity

is

beneficial

to

Chinese

learners.(From

Zhang

Chang)2短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先化1.

I

sincerely

hope

that

you

will

consider

my

invitation.(FromWangYu)I

sincerely

hope

that

youwill

take my

invitation

into

consideration.Iholdthebeliefthattheactivityis

of benefit

to

Chinese

learners.短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先活學(xué)活用271.

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news

never

fails

to

come

on

time.

(From

Shao

Mingyang)3.

A

Chinese

speech

contest

is

going

to

be

held

in

our

school.(From

Sun

Hao)2.

So

pleased

am

I

to

hear

it

that

I

write

to

invite

you

to

participate.(From

Wang

Bingyu)4.

Knowing

that

there

will

be

a

contest,

I

can't

wait

to

tell

you

about

it.（

From

Wang

Siya

）III28句式多樣化肯定不如雙否好陳述不如倒裝妙主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧分詞結(jié)構(gòu)不能少1.

To

begin

with,

you

are

talented

in

making

a

speech.

(From

RenFeiran)3.

However,

you

should

sign

up

on

our

school

website

byyourself.(From

Teng

Ziyue)2.

A

month

later,

you

will

get

the

opportunity

to

show

yourChinese

.

(From

Sun

Peiyao)well.(From

Wang

Zhengyang)4行文連貫化起---創(chuàng)造良好開(kāi)端承---順勢(shì)承上啟下轉(zhuǎn)---巧妙轉(zhuǎn)折過(guò)4.

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a

word,I

do

hope

you

w渡ill

accept

my

invitation

and

perform合---完美結(jié)束文段29beautiful

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化14句式多樣化3212詞匯高級(jí)化conveniencecontestorganize3313行文連貫化34One

possible

version35Dear

George,How

are

you

getting

on

these

days?

Our

school

plans

to

hold

aChinese

speech

contest

for

foreign

students

and

we'd

like

to

inviteyouto

compete

in

it.The

contest

is

a

good

chance

for

you

to

show