高一英語短文改錯

4/8高一英語短文改錯1.Havingadreamisofgreatimportance.Yourdreamsareordinaryandrealistic.IhopeIwilladmittedintoatopuniversityandbecomeagooddoctorafterIwillgraduatefromuniversity.IhopedonedayIcanfindacureforcancer.IhopethosewhomlovemeandthosewhomIloveupmybody.Iwilltrymybesttofocustimeandenergytomystudy.Imustworkhardatmylessonsorbefullypreparingfortheentranceexam.【小題1】通篇都在講我的夢想，因此代詞My?！拘☆}2】加動詞原形，“被錄取”beadmittedinto,后面加be.2.Onenight,IwasonmywayhomeformyChristmasholidaywhenmycarbrokedown.Itwascompletedead,andIwasafewmilesawayfrommyhomeinthatcold,wetnight.IdecidedtowalkaroundalittleafteracceptingthatI’dhavetospendthenightinthecar.MaybeIcanfindatelephone.Actually,Ididn’thavetowalkfarbeforeIfoundthesmallhousestandinginafieldwithalightshonefromthesittingroom.Iknockedthedoorwasdelightedwhenapleasantoldmanopenedthedoorandlistenedtomystorycarefully.Hesaidhehadnotelephoneandthatitwasn’tanywithinwalkingdistance,buttheoldmanwhoofferedtogotorepairmycar.【答案】1.complete改為completely2.in改為on3.after改為before4.can改為could5.the改為a6.shone改為shining7.knocked后加at/on8.was前加and9.it改為there10.who刪掉3.MynameisLiHua.IwasborninQingdao，ShandongprovinceonFebruary1995．Istartedtheschoolin2001whenIwassix.IstudiedhappyinGuangmingPrimarySchoolfrom2001to2007.AfterthatIwenttoNo.39MiddleSchoolofQingdaoandgraduatelastsummer．ThemainsubjectsIstudyatschoo1includedChinese，maths，English，physics，chemistryandcomputer．IlikeEnglishandcomputerbestandIamverygoodatit.LastyearIwinnedfirstprizeintheschoolcomputercompetition.InmysparetimeIenjoylisteningpopularmusicandcollectingstamp．Myfavouritesportsisswimminginsummerandskatinginwinter．【答案】【小題1】on-in【小題2】去掉the【小題3】happy-happily【小題4】graduate-graduated【小題5】study-studied【小題6】it-them【小題7】winned-won【小題8】listening-listeningto【小題9】stamp-stamps【小題10】is-are【解析】4.Maryisahighschoolstudent,whodevotedherselftoherlessonseveryday.LastSaturday,asusual,shewenttoseveralclass.Intheevening,shecontinuedtostudyuntildeeplyintonight.Shewastoosleepyandtiredthatshecouldn’tworkeffectively.OntheSundaymorning,shewasabouttodoherlessonswhileherfathercameupandadvisedhertotakeabreak.Soontheycameupagoodidea.Wedecidedtogocyclinginthecountryside.Maryenjoyedherself,competingandchattingwithherfather,andfeltrelaxingintheopenair.OnMonday,Marywasenergeticbutactiveinclass.【答案】【小題1】devoted改為devotes【小題2】class改為classesunderstand“realmusic”·AfterIgraduatedfromhighschool,thefriendofminesuggestedthatwestartedtolearntheguitarbecauseweallthoughtitwascool.Iwillneverforgetthedayonthatwewenttobuyguitarsintheguitarstore.HereIsawaguitarplayerplayingtheguitar,whichIreallyenjoyed.Hebecamemyfirstguitarteacher.ThereweretoomanywonderfulmodelstochoosethatittookmealongtimetobuyoneNowtheguitaristhemostimportantlypartofmylifeandIpracticeiteveryday.9.Thismorning,Igotothestorenearmyhometodosomeshopping.IwaswalkingdownthepassagewhileIgaveaviolentcough.Thewomanstandingnexttomewassoshockingthatsheconsequentlydroppedajarofoil.Forthatverymoment,agirlwaswalkingby.Sheslippedontheoil,fellontothebrokeglassandhitherheadonthefloor.Afterawhile,therewerebloodpourdownherface.Ifeltreallyguiltyandsentthegirltothenearesthospitalwithoutthedelay.Thedoctorexaminedherwoundcarefully.Tomyrelief,itwasnotserious.Thegirlhadalittlesmileonherfacebeforethedoctordressedwound.【答案】【小題1】go-went【小題2】while-when【小題3】shocking-shocked,【小題4】For-At,【小題5】broke-broken,【小題6】were-was,【小題7】pour-pouring,【小題8】thedelay去the,【小題9】before-after，【小題10】wound前加the/her10.Dearschoolmates，Inordertogethighschoolstudentstoattachingimportancetotheenvironmentandraiseourawarenesstoprotecttheenvironment，andChinaDailyisplanningtoholdaninterestinglyknowledgecontest．AconteststartsonOctober14thandendon31st．Remember,youcantakethecontestinChinaDailynewspaper,thatisverypopularamonghighschoolstudent．TheanswersheetmustcutfromthenewspaperandsenttoChinaDailyafterthedeadline．Pleasepaymoreattentiontotherelatedinformationofthecontestandtakeanactivepartinthemontime．Students’Union【答案】【小題1】attaching改為attach【小題2】第二行and去掉【小題3】interestingly改為interesting【小題4】第三行A改為The【小題5】end后面加s【小題6】第四行that改為which【小題7】student后面加s【小題8】must后面加be【小題9】after改為before10.最后一句them改為it11.DearAndy,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Youaskaboutmyhealthinyourlastemail.SoI’mgoingtotellyouaboutdiet.I’maveryhealthperson.That’swhyweliveneartheseaandweoftenhavefish.Idon’tknowexactlywhatmymotherwillcookforustonight,andtherewillprobablebefishandvegetables.Andofcoursetherewillalsobesomerices.IfyoucometovisitmeinChinaononeday,youwon’teatmanysweets.SoIhopeyoudon’thavesweettooth.I’mgoingtoaskmyfathertotakesomephotosforthefootballmatchandI’llemailthemtoyou.Ithinkyou’lllikeourteam’sclothes.12.Patienceisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.OnceIwaitedabustocomeatastop.Thirtyminutespast,butnobuscame.Bothupsetandannoyed,Idecidedtowalkonfeet.ButnosoonerhadIleftwhenthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminute,Iwouldhavecaughtit.IfIchosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforother30minutes.OnlythendoIrealizemyproblem.Beingimpatientwillpossiblewastealltheeffortthatwehaveputitin.NowwheneverIamclosetolosemypatience,I’llthinkofthisexperience.【答案】【小題1】添加for【小題2】past改為pasted【小題3】feet改為foot【小題4】when改為than【小題5】a改為the【小題6】other改為another【小題7】do改為did【小題8】possible改為possibly【小題9】去掉it【小題10】lose改為losing13.Thewinterholidayiscoming,whichmademeexcited.I