2023屆遼寧省部分市高三英語一模試題匯編：讀后續(xù)寫（含答案）

2023屆遼寧省部分市高三英語一模試題分類匯編

讀后續(xù)寫

2023屆遼寧省葫蘆島市高三一模英語試題

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

67.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Alanandtheothercamperssataroundthefirechewingmeatchops.ItwouldbeAlan,sfirst

nightinatent,andhewasexcitedbutalittlenervous.

Astheyate,theconservationofficerspoke.44Muchofthewildlifeinthisareacomesoutonlyat

night.Soaftersupper,let,sstartanightwatch.Volunteerswilltaketurnstostaydownherebythe

fire,awayfromthetents.Thosewhotakepartwillgetachancetoseeaworldthatmanyofyou

neverknewexisted.,,

Alan,sstomachtightened.Thenheheardtheofficercontinue,??Therearenodangerousanimals

thisclosetoCapeTown.Anyvolunteers?^^

Atough-lookingkidwithredhairmutteredsomethingaboutneedingagoodnight,ssleep.

Anotherboyspokeup.'THtakeashift."Thekidwho,dsatnexttoAlanonthebusvolunteered.

Alansattight.Thenoneofthegirlsraisedherhandwithagiggle.Alanfrowned.Ifagirlcoulddoit,

hecould,too.Hevolunteered.

Afewmorekidsraisedtheirhands,andthentheofficerexplained,??Thisishowitworks.When

therestofyougotobedinatent,thefirstwatchertakeshisorherplacebythefire.Thedutyof

watcheristokeepthefiregoinggently.Afterthirtyminutes,heorshewakesthenextperson.v

Alanheardhisvoiceasking,44Areyousureit,sabsolutelysafe?^^

Theofficerlookedathim."Thedangerisminimal.Wewouldn,thavetakenyouhereotherwise.

Doyoustillwanttovolunteer?^^Alannoddedbutfeltuneasy.

Earlierthatday,theofficerhadchallengedthecamperstospotanimaltracksalongtheriver.

Thatwasfiιn.Butbeingaloneinthedarkwasnot.Alan,sflashlightwasalreadyfadingtoadim

glowbecausehehadusedittoooften.Lookingaround,Alanthoughthesawalargebirdswooping

（俯祝∣）andwonderedifitwasanowl.Hehadseensmallpawprintsinthesandbytheriver.Wasthe

owlhuntingforthecreaturethathadmadethem?

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。

Paragraph1:

Hearinganoise,Alanfroze,feelingsomethingwasthereinthedarkness.

Paragraph?:

Thenextmorning,theofficeraskedforreports.

2023屆遼寧省丹東市高三一模英語試題

第二節(jié)（滿分25分）

47.閱讀下面文章，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整短文，續(xù)寫

詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

“Judy,hurryup!Let,sgotothebeach!,,Thatwasafamiliarmorningcallfrommyolderbrother,

Sirin.Hearingthat,IwouldspringupquicklyandWewouldsetoffonourjourney.Raisedbyour

grandparentsinSavanna,Weexperiencedourhappiestmomentsthere.Nestledbetweenthe

mountainsandthesea,withitslushgreentrees,crystal-likeocean,andclearbluesky,Savannawas

likeasmallvillagefromafairytale.

SirinandIoftenenjoyedthegentleseabreezeasweexploredthebreathtakingcoast,withthe

endless,openwaterbesideusandthevast,clearskyoverhead.Wefeltasenseoffreedomtowander

thesandybeachorexperiencetheexcitementofsailingouttosea,delightingintheawe-inspiring

beautyofnature'swonders.WhenWegrewtired,leisurelywalkingonthesoft,warmsandsto

collectunique,fascinatingseashellsbroughtusadifferentkindofpeacefuljoy.Thefriendly,

warmheartedvillagerstreateduslikefamily,oftensharingtheirfreshly-caughtseafoodwithus.

ThreeyearslaterWeweretakenawayfromthevillagetoreceiveabettereducationbyour

parents.Occupiedwithourstudy,Werarelyvisitedourbelovedgrandparents,onlycallingthem

occasionally.Wegraduallyadaptedtothefast-pacedcitylifeandfounditmoreefficientand

convenient.WheneverWehadanappetiteforseafood,ourdadwouldsimplyorderitthroughhis

phone,anditwouldbedeliveredtoourdoorstepwithinminutes.Inadditiontoseafood,wecould

orderanythingourheartsdesired,nomatterhowlateitwas.Whatwelovedmostwasthe

convenienceofnotneedingtowashthedishesaftereating,astheywerealldisposable,designedfor

singleuse.

However,deepwithinus,wesometimeslongedforthesimplepleasuresofvillagelife.We

weretoldbyourgrandparentsthatmoreandmoretouristsfloodedintothevillage,which

strengthenedourdesiretoreturn.So,whentheeagerly-awaitedsummervacationarrivedthisyear,

wefinallymadeourdreamtripbacktoourchildhoodparadise.Aftergreetingourgrandparentswith

hugsandsmiles,weeagerlyheadedtowardsthesun-kissedseasidetoreliveourcherished

memories.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:However,whatWesawshockedus.

Paragraph2:HearingGrandfather,swords,Wecouldn,twaittodosomethingtotacklethe

pollution.

2023屆遼寧省撫順市高三一模英語試題

第二節(jié)（滿分25分）

47.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Emilyfinishedplayingthemusic,andthenbowedtotheanimaltoysonherbed.??There,three

timesinarowwithnomistakes,,,shesaid,44IjusthopeIcanplayitthatwellattheconcert.^^Injust

anhourshewouldbeplayingherfirstsolo,andthethoughtwasgivingherbutterflies.

“You'reluckyyoudon,thavetoplaybyyourselfinfrontofeverybody,,,shesaid,smoothing

LeatheTiger,sfur,andgazeddownatthesmilingfaceofZoeytheZebra.Emilyscolded,4?You,rea

bighelp.Howcanyoubesohappyatatimelikethis?”

Shelookedaroundtheroomatthebear,lion,monkey,andotheranimaltoysthatlinedherbed

andshelves.??Iwishyoucouldallcomewithme,^^shesighed.Shegavethemonelastglanceand

wenttojoinherparentsinthecar.

“DoIhavetoplayintheconcert?"askedEmilyassheclimbedintothebackseat.??Ismy

favoritefirst-gradergettingnervous?^^herdadasked,smiling.Emilydidn,tanswer.Shewastrying

topicturewhatitwouldbeliketoplayinfrontofallthosepeople.fc?You,lldofine,honey."Headded.

“Thefirsttimeisalwaysthehardest.^^

Whentheyarrivedattheconcerthall,Emilyhandedherviolintoherteacher,MrsAllen,for

tuningandtiptoedovertowherethecurtainsparted.Lookingout,shecouldseethatalltheseats

werefilled,withmanymorepeoplestandinginback.

Nervouslyshetookherviolinandsatwiththeotherstudentsonstage.Sheheldherbreathasthe

curtainsstartedtoopenandMrsAlienpickedupthemicrophonetobegintheprogram.Onebyone

thestudentsplayedtheirpieces.Finally,Emilyheardhernameannounced.Herheartpoundedas

shewalkedtowardthefrontofthestage.

注意：

?.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Sheputherviolinunderherchin,butshecouldn'trememberevenherfirstnote.

Assheplayed,the“animals“audienceseemedtobechangingbackintopeople.

2023屆遼寧省鞍山市高三一模英語試題

第二節(jié)（分25）

47.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

IlovetoplaythepianoandIgreatlyenjoyperformingmysongs,sowhentheannualwinter

recitalwascanceled,Iwasdisappointed.Ihadlookedforwardtoitforalongtimeandhadalready

preparedtwoofmybestsongs.

Mymomhadawonderfulidea,however,toturnthisdisappointingletdownintosomething

worthwhile.??YoucanperformyoursongsatCarriageHouseSeniorLiving,,,mymomsuggested

brightly.??I,msuretheseniorstherewhodonothavefamiliesvisitthemthatoften,wouldreally

appreciatethemusicandyoucouldplaymorethanjusttwosongs.”

Iimmediatelythoughtthiswasagreatidea.OneofthethingsIdidnotlikeabouttherecitals

wasthatIwaslimitedtoplayingjustacoupleofsongs.PlayingthepianoatCarriageHouseseemed

likeawin-winsituationbecausenotonlywouldIgettoplaymoresongs,butIwouldalsohavethe

chancetocheeruptheresidentstherewithsomelivelytunes.

MymomcalledCarriageHouseandmadearrangementsformetoperform.Inthecomingdays,

IworkedespeciallyhardtopolishupfifteenpiecesthatIthoughtthecrowdwouldenjoy,including

manyoldclassics.

Whenthemuch-anticipateddayfinallyarrived,myfamilyandIdrovetoCarriageHouse.

Walkingthroughtheenormousdoubledoors,westeppedintoanentrywaythatoverlookedthe

spaciousgranddiningroom.Rightattheentrancetothediningroomstoodthepianoasifitwere

justwaitingtomakesomemusictoliventheplaceupabit.Atnearlyeverytableseveralgray-haired

womenormenwereseatedenjoyingtheirdinnerandthecompanythatthecrowdedroomprovided.

Despitetheconversationsgoingonatvarioustablesthough,isolationhunglikeadarkcloudinthe

room.

Almostimmediately,weweregreetedbyanoldwomanwithawalkerwhointroducedherself

asPhyllisinchargeofCarriageHouse.Shewelcomedmeandledmetothestage.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2?請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

AsISatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearnosound.

NervousnessmeltedawayandIstartedtoenjoytheperformancewiththeold.

2023屆遼寧省沈陽市高三一模英語試題

第二節(jié)（滿分25分）

47.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

IntheGame

'Tmgonnaplaybasketball,Daddy."Mydaughter,Lauren,whooped,skippingintotheroom.

“ThereareonlyelevengirlsinVerden,andeverybodymakestheteam.”

High-schoolsportsisthebiggestthingthathappensinVerden,soIshouldn,thavebeen

su?prisedwhenLaurcnannouncedshewasgoingoutforthegirls,basketballteams—LadyTige匚

ButIwas.MywifeandInevertoldLaurenthatshewasdisabled.Wedidn,twanthertofeel

differentfromotherchildren.ShehasDownsyndrome（唐氏綜合征）.

Whatiftheothergirlsontheteamfailedtoaccepther?WhatifLaurenspentmostofhertime

onthebench?Whatifshegotinjuredduringthegame?WhatshouldIsaytothecoach?

Thenextafternoon,Iparkedbythebasketballcourt.

“Hey,Johnny,,,CoachForthythecalled.t?We,regladLaurencameoutfortheteam.^^

“Well,Mr.Forthythe,youknowwedon,texpectyoutoplayherinagame,justincludeher

whenyoucan.”

ThegamearrivedthenextSunday.Isettledintoaseatonthesecondrowwithmywife.

Momentslater,atrainofgirlschuggedoutofthelockerroom.LastinlinewasLauren.Istoodalong

withthecrowdandclapped.Shesearchedthestands,spottedusandwavedbroadly.

Thegamegotofftoagoodstart,butsoonVerdenwasbehind.IgazedatLauren,themost

excitedontheteam.Sheslapped（拍打）herkneewhentheopponentsscored.Herarmsmoved

aroundintheaireachtimeVerdenshot.Eventhoughshewasn,tplaying,shelookedasifshewere

havingthetimeofherlife.Now,Ifeltadmirationformydaughter.Herteamwasgettingbeat,yet

shestillenjoyedtheaction.

Justlessthantwominuteswereleft,andVerdenwasdownby17points.Coachcalleda

time-out.Thenboomedtheannouncer,svoice,“Numberthirty-three,Lauren,infortheLady

Tigers.”

注意：

L續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Withaslaponherback,CoachsentLaurenrunningontothecourt.

“Didyousee?DadandMum.Iscored!Imadeabasket!”

答案：

2023屆遼寧省葫蘆島市高三一模英語試題

【答案】

Hearinganoise,Alanfroze,feelingsomethingwasthereinthedarkness.Arippleoffearcrept

uponhimashecastaglancethere.Heartbeatingwildly,Alanmadehiswaytothenoise,withboth

ofhislegstremblinguncontrollably.Acloserlookconvincedhimthatitwasonlyarabbit,which

quicklydisappearedinthedark.Inrelief,hefeltthegentlebreezerubbinghisface.Themoon

sheddingitssilverlightonthewoods,Alanwasgreetedbythesoundofbirdsandinsects.

Envelopedbyfragrantair,hefeltasifinthewonderland.

Thenextmorning,theofficeraskedforreports.Othercampersbraggedabouttheiradventure

inthedark一howtheyranintosome“horrible"creaturesandbravelyscaredthemoff.Theofficer,

wearingadoubtfullook,offerednocomments.WhenitwasAlan,sturn,hetoldthetruththatthere

werenoscaιyanimalsbutbreathtakingscenerytobeexplored.Asmileblossomedontheofficer,s

face.Thatwasexactlywhatthecampingwasallabout.Onlyafteroneovercamethefearinhisown

heartcouldheembracetherealbeautyofnature.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了AIan第一次晚上露營，他很興奮但很緊張。晚飯

過后，長官告訴他們這里晚上會(huì)有野生動(dòng)物出沒，需要志愿者輪流守夜。Alan雖然感覺守

夜很危險(xiǎn)，但是在一個(gè)女孩自告奮勇后，Alan也申請(qǐng)當(dāng)志愿者。輪到他守夜的時(shí)候，他看

到一只大鳥在俯沖下來，且地上有動(dòng)物的爪EfJ,這讓他感到害怕。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“聽到一個(gè)聲音，Alan愣住了，感覺黑暗中有什么東西?！笨芍?/p>

一段可描寫Alan在黑夜中探究這個(gè)聲音的過程。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“第二天早上，長官要求他們作報(bào)告。”可知，第二段可描寫Alan和

其他露營者說出自己守夜時(shí)的發(fā)現(xiàn)。

2.續(xù)寫線索：

聽到聲音后愣住一一害怕一一尋找聲音——發(fā)現(xiàn)小兔子——不再害怕——享受夜景——作

報(bào)告一一感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①前往：makeone'sWaytOZheadfbr

②顫抖：tremble/shake

③包圍：envelope/surround

情緒類

①嚇人的：scary/fearsome/frighten?ng

②令人驚嘆的：breathlaking/amazing

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Acloserlookconvincedhimthatitwasonlyarabbit,whichquickly

disappearedinthedark.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]WhenitwasAlan'sturn,hetoldthet?uththattherewerenoscaryanimalsbut

breathtakingscenerytobeexplored.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和that引導(dǎo)的同位語從

句）

2023屆遼寧省丹東市高三一模英語試題

【答案】ParagraphI:

However,whatwesawshockedus.Plasticbagsandsingle-usecontainerslitteredthebeaches,

andwecouldhardlyseeanyunderseacreatureintheoncecrystal-clearsea.Tomakemattersworse,

thewaterwasdarkanddifficulttoseethrough.Becauseoftheunpleasantsmell,Wehadtocoverour

noses.Withtearsblurringourvision,wedesperatelywonderedwhathadhappenedtoourbeloved

village.Lookingatouranxiousfaces,Grandfathersighedwithhisheadbowed.Itwasthosevisitors

whodidhelpusearnmoremoney,buttheyalsobroughtmassiveamountsofrubbish,whichcaused

severepollutionandchangedourbeautifulvillagecompletely.Whiletellingusaboutthechanges,

Grandfathergazedatthesea,hiseyesfilledwithdisappointmentandhelplessness.

Paragraph2:

HearingGrandfather?words,wecoιddn,twaittodosomethingtotacklethepollution.

Withouthesitation,SirinandItookoffourshoesandwalkedneartheseatocollecttherubbishwith

ourbarehands.SeeingwhatWeweredoing,ourfamilyandsomevillagersjoinedusinourefforts.

Somevillagersfetchedhelpfultools,likesticksandnets,whichwerequiteusefulincatchingthe

waste.Ialsopulledoutmymobilephoneandtookphotosoftherubbishfloatingonthesurfaceof

thesea.Bypostingthoseimagesonsocialmedia,Ihopedmorepeoplecouldbeawareofthe

pollutionandlendahelpinghandtoo.Muchtoourrelief,ourjointeffortsmadeadifference.The

seasidebecamecleanoncemore,andthebreezefromtheseasmelledfreshandsweetagain.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本文以事件發(fā)展為線索展開，講述了作者兄弟兩人從小在海邊鄉(xiāng)村快樂地長大，但

是后來被父母帶到城市，接受更優(yōu)良的教育，然而兄弟倆懷念鄉(xiāng)村愜意的生活，返回鄉(xiāng)村尋

找童年的快樂，但是回到鄉(xiāng)村后，兄弟倆對(duì)到處的污染感到震驚，決定撿拾海水中的垃圾。

在兩個(gè)孩子的帶動(dòng)下，村民也加入其中，使美麗的海邊鄉(xiāng)村恢復(fù)了美麗。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“然而我們看到的一切令我們震驚”可知，第一段可描寫作者兄弟倆發(fā)

現(xiàn)海邊到處都是垃圾，爺爺解釋說是游客帶來的大量垃圾，并露出了無助的眼神。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“聽到爺爺?shù)脑挘覀兤炔患按叵胱鳇c(diǎn)什么來解決污染問題”可知，

第二段可描寫作者兄弟倆下海撿拾垃圾，帶動(dòng)了周邊村民參與其中。兄弟倆還將他們清理垃

圾的圖片發(fā)到網(wǎng)上，倡議游客注意保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生，恢復(fù)了海邊鄉(xiāng)村的美麗。

2.續(xù)寫線索：震驚一一海邊垃圾一一游客帶來的一一爺爺感到無助一一決定對(duì)付污染問題

一撿拾垃圾——村民幫忙一一把照片發(fā)到網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行倡議一一，恢復(fù)了鄉(xiāng)村的美麗一一感悟。

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①看見：see/spot/catchsightof

②捂?。篶over/shelter

③告訴：tell/inform

情緒類

①焦慮的：anxious/nervous/stressed

②有益的：helpful/beneficial

【點(diǎn)睛】［高分句型1］.Tomakemattersworse,thewaterwasdarkanddifficulttoseethrough.（非

謂語動(dòng)詞作目的狀語）

［高分句型2］.Somevillagersfetchedhelpfultools,likesticksandnets,whichwerequiteusefulin

catchingthewaste.（非限制性定語從句）

2023屆遼寧省撫順市高三一模英語試題

［答案］Onepossibleversion:

Sheputherviolinunderherchin,butshecouldn'trememberevenherfirstnote.Withaflushof

sadness,shecouldn,tholdbackhertearswellingupinhereyes.Sheshuthereyes,hopingtoblink

thetearsaway.Whensheopenedthemagain,everythingseemedmisty.Tohersurprise,itlookedas

ifallthepeopleinthehallhadchangedintoherdollanimals,andsheevensawhersmilingZoeythe

Zebrastandingattheback.Itwasalmostlikebeingathomewithherlovelyfriends.Morerelaxed,

shepickedupherconfidenceandrememberedherpiece.

Assheplayed,the"animals“audienceseemedtobechangingbackintopeople.ButEmilywas

nolongernervousbecausealltheaudiencelookedfriendlynow.Shealsofoundherparents5smiling

eyesfocusedonher,tellinghert?you,realwaysthebesf,.Theaudiencelostthemselvesinhermusic.

Finally,sheplayedthelastnote,putherviolinunderherarmandlookabigbow.Themusiclingered

intheairaftertheperformance,whiletheentireaudiencebrokeintoloudapplause.Shemadeit!She

hadplayedherfirstsolo!

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了主人公EmiIy將要在舞臺(tái)上演奏她的小提琴獨(dú)奏曲，

她為此感到特別緊張。上臺(tái)后她緊張到快忘了如何去彈奏她的曲目，幸好她及時(shí)地調(diào)整了過

來，并為現(xiàn)場的觀眾獻(xiàn)上精彩的表演。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“她把小提琴放在下巴下，但她甚至記不起她的第一個(gè)音符”可知，第

一段可描寫EmiIy上臺(tái)后緊張的情緒以及如何去調(diào)整她的情緒。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)她演奏時(shí)，“動(dòng)物”觀眾似乎又變回了人。”可知，第二段可描寫

EmiIy在把現(xiàn)場觀眾設(shè)想成動(dòng)物后，她不再那么緊張，盡情表演，獲得大家的認(rèn)可。

2.續(xù)寫線索：即將演奏——緊張——調(diào)整——重拾信心——盡情表演——掌聲雷動(dòng)——感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①閉上雙眼：shuthereyes/closehereyes

②集中注意力于：focuson/concentrateon

③爆發(fā)出掌聲：burstintoapplause/eruptintoapplause

情緒類

①忍住淚水：holdbackhertears/fightbackhertears

②放松：relaxed/atease

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型?]Tohersurprise,itlookedasifallthepeopleinthehallhadchangedintoher

dollanimals,andsheevensawhersmilingZoeytheZebrastandingattheback.（運(yùn)用了asif弓∣

導(dǎo)的表語從句）

[高分句型2]Morerelaxed,shepickedupherconfidenceandrememberedherpiece.（運(yùn)用了形

容詞relaxed作狀語）

2023屆遼寧省鞍山市高三一模英語試題

【答案】AsIsatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearno

sound.Feelingasifthewholeworldwaswatchingme,Iwasstruckdeadwithembarrassment.How

couldIperformthesongwithoutthepiano?IwasonpinsandneedleswhenPhyllisslowlymadeher

waytothefrontofthecrowdofdinnersandannouncedinacomfortingtone,44Thisgirlhascometo

singforusbutthepianoseemstobealittlenervous.^^Almostimmediately,therewasscattered

applauseandseveralpeoplesteppedforwardtohelpmepluginthepianoandsetthemicrophone.

Witheverythingready,Itookadeepbreathandcommencedmyperformance.

NerVoIASneSSmeltedawGyCItldISlaHedioenjo?lheDerlimnanCe卬〃∕?theold.Onewomangotup

andbegantoanimatedlydanceabouttheroom.Someofthepeopleswayedintheirchairstothebeat

ofthemusicwhileotherstappedtheirstoes.Theperformanceendedupwithastormofapplause

fromthecrowd,?realizedthatitwasfarbetterthanapianorecitalbecausealmosteveryoneseemed

totrulyappreciatemymusicandI,mproudthatIhavethepowertospreadkindnesstothem.It

endedupbeingablessingindisguisethattherecitalwascanceled,leadingtomesharingthegiftof

musicwiththosewhoneededitmost.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者喜歡彈鋼琴，也非常喜歡表演自己的歌曲，所

以當(dāng)年度冬季獨(dú)奏會(huì)被取消時(shí)，作者很失望。然而，媽媽提議去CarriageHoUSe為老年人表

演時(shí)，作者欣然同意并為之積極的做準(zhǔn)備。

詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)我坐在長凳上時(shí)，我按下了鋼琴的一個(gè)鍵，奇怪的是沒有聽到任何聲

音?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡弑硌輹r(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)鋼琴?zèng)]有聲音的內(nèi)心的緊張以及問題解決后大家

對(duì)作者的鼓勵(lì)。

由第二段首句內(nèi)容“緊張的情緒消失了，我開始喜歡上了和老人一起的表演。”可知，第二

段可描寫作者的演奏給老人帶來的快樂和作者的感受。

2.續(xù)寫線索：演出時(shí)鋼琴出問題——緊張不已——老人鼓勵(lì)——緊張消失——融入音樂——

感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①表演：perform/show

②.宣布：announce/declare

情緒類

①.尷尬：embarrassment/awkward

②.緊張的：nervous/intense/beonpinsandneedles

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型?].IwasonpinsandneedleswhenPhyllisslowlymadeherwaytothefrontofthe

crowdofdinnersandannouncedinacomfortingtone（運(yùn)用了when弓∣導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）

[高分句型2]Ireal