大學(xué)英語六級寫作7 綜合改錯

綜合改錯(ErrorsCorrection)：

一、語法錯誤

二、詞匯錯誤

三、邏輯錯誤

四、多詞少詞

Example:Televisionisrapidlybecomingtheliterature

ofourperiods.Manyofthearguments

1.time/times/acie

havingusedforthestudyforliteratureasa2./

schoolsubjectarevalidforAstudyoftelevision.3.the

一、語法錯誤

1、平行結(jié)構(gòu)(notonly...butalso\both...and\either...or\and)

1)Aprofessor'ssalaryishigherthanasecretary.[secretary's]

2)Oneoftheseisinformative,interesting,andiseasytounderstand.[4

掉】

3)Definingaproblemiseasierthant。provideasolution.[providing]

2、連詞錯誤

1)Candlewilllaterbereplacedbylamp,thatcouldburnlongerand

lighter,[which]

2)Thechildrenattendedasmallelementaryschool(oftenofjustone

room)tothattheyhadtowalkeveryday,possiblyforafewmiles,

[which,that前只能有except和in。exceptthat除此以外;inthat因?yàn)?

體現(xiàn)在]

3)Itwillbeinterestingtodiscoverhowmanyyoungpeoplegoto

universitieswithoutanyideaofthattheyaregoingtodoafterward,

[what,what相當(dāng)于thethingthat]

4)Itappearsthatweallfindcompanyinsound,ifwedemandalittle

quietfromtimetotime,[but或yet]轉(zhuǎn)折，所以不能用if

5)Theyarelikelytotravelmoreandtowantmoreeducation.

Nevertheless,manymorejobsareavailableintheseservices.

[Therefore或So]因果

3、分詞錯誤

1)Police'srecordsshowasurprisedlinkbetweenchangesinthe

seasonsandcrimepatterns,[surprising]

2)Eventhequietofourcarefulprotectedwildernessareascanbe

invadedatanymomentbyapassedjet.[passing]

3)Soasportsman'sindividualwayofwalkingwithraisedshouldersis

imitatedbyanadmiredfan.[admiring]

4、指代錯誤

1)Abreakintheiremployment,oradecisiontoworkparttime,willslow

itsraisesandpromotions-asitwouldformen.[their]

2)Clearlysomerisksareworthtaking,especiallywhentherewardsare

high:amansurroundedbyflamesandsmokegenerallyconsidersthat

jumpingoutofasecond-floorwindowisanacceptablerisktosaveits

life,[his]

3)Themodernlight-housealsoidentifiesitinacodeknowntoallships,

[itself]主語賓語相重疊用反身代詞

5、形容詞、副詞(略)

6、謂語錯誤(主謂一致、時態(tài)、語態(tài))

1)Businesstodaywhetheritisrunningalittlegas-stationorabig

factorytakegoodmanagement.[takes]

2)Advancesintechnologyhasalsochangedpeople'slives,[have]

3)Butif98percentofusdoesn'tneedtowork,whatarewegoingtodo

withourselves?[don't]復(fù)數(shù)

4)Whetherwomenwhohavestartedacareerwillattainpayequalitywith

menrestonatleasttwofactors,[rests]句子做主語為單數(shù)

5)Insomeplacesallthetreeshavecutdown,[havebeen]

二、詞匯錯誤(搭配錯誤、用詞錯誤)

三、邏輯錯誤(肯定否定亂用)

1)Bloodpressuredrugsdefinitelyhelpsomepeopleliveafteraheart

attack,butthesesamedrugsmaybebothnecessaryandharmfulfor

thosewithonlymildbloodpressureproblems,[unnecessary]

2)Ineverycase,theinfluentialpersonmayconsciouslynoticethe

imitationbuthewillfeelcomfortableinitspresence,[unconsciously]

四、多詞少詞(少介詞、冠詞、形式賓語；多介詞和副詞)

1)WhentwoAmericansmeetforfirsttime,itisnormalfor