五年高考高考英語真題分項詳解 專題09 書面表達（含解析）-人教高三全冊英語試題

專題09書面表達【2020年】1.（2020·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ）你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括:1.人物簡介；2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文題目和首句已為你寫好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文。時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。要求：1.人物簡介：2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。第二步：列提綱（重點短語）Asforme；sparesometime；listentomepatiently;第三步：連詞成句1.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmostly.2.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.3.Myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：介紹人物；闡述原因2.表示并列補充關(guān)系：Asfor;and;but;So第五步：潤色修改2.（2020·新課標(biāo)Ⅱ）上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動，內(nèi)容包括:1.農(nóng)場情況；2.采摘過程；3.個人感受注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目已為你寫好。題目:MyWeekend_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyWeekendLastweekend，wetookpartinapickingactivity.Wedrovefromtheschool,andthefarmwasabout2kilometersawayfromourschool.Whenwearrivedatthefarm,thereareallkindsofanimals,greenfreshvegetablesandfruittreesinthefarm.Weweredividedintotwogroups.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruits,theotherpackedupthefruits.Timeflyingquickly,theactivitywasover.Butitwasameaningfulday,whenwelearnalotformit.Throughthisactivity,weknowhowhardthefarmersareandhowpreciousthefoodis.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生為英語角寫一篇關(guān)于和同學(xué)一起參加采摘活動的短文。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文。時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。要求：1.農(nóng)場情況；2.采摘過程；3.個人感受第二步：列提綱（重點短語）tookpartin；wasresponsiblefor；ameaningfulday；shouldtreasure第三步：連詞成句1.Lastweekend,wetookpartinapickingactivity.2.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruitstheotherpackedupthefruits.3.Butitwasameaningfulday,whenwelearnalotformit4.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：介紹農(nóng)場；描述采摘過程；個人感受2.表示并列補充關(guān)系：and;But;Through第五步：潤色修改3.（2020·新課標(biāo)Ⅲ）假定你shi李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括:1.劇情簡介；2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；3.商定時間地點。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.We’dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,ontheraftdowntherivernavigation,weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink.Wesavedascaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon’twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，請求外教MissEvans對于《theSteamboat》改編短劇的支持。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時，一般過去時和一般將來時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總法第一段說明寫這封郵件的目的；第二段詳細說明英語戲劇的劇情介紹和指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容細節(jié)問題；第三段表達感謝，并期待早日得到回復(fù)。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）writeto；accordingto；combine；adaption；challenge；attachedto；convenient第三步：連詞成句根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。第五步：潤色修改4.（2020·江蘇卷）請閱讀下面有關(guān)中國題材紀錄片(documentary)的對話，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150個詞左右的文章。SuHua:Hi,LiJiang!DidyouseetheBBCdocumentaryonCCTV9lastweek?LiJiang:YoumeanDuFu:China’sGreatestPoet?Yes,Idid.Fantastic!SuHua:JustthinkanEnglishactorrecitesChinesepoems.LiJiang:Idon’treallyunderstandeverylineherecites,butIbelievehetrulylovesthepoemshimself.SuHua:Right.ItisreportedthatthefilmiswellreceivedoutsideChina.LiJiang:Yeah,It’smyfirsttimetohearChinesestoriestoldbyanEnglishspeaker.SuHua:Infact,documentariesaboutourcountryareplentifulbothathomeandabroad.Thesefilmscanhelpforeignfriendsbetterunderstandthisland-Chineseliterature,geographyhistory,food...LiJiang:Icouldn’tagreemore.【寫作內(nèi)容】1.用約30個詞概括上述對話的主要內(nèi)容；2.談?wù)勚袊}材紀錄片受到外國朋友歡迎的原因(至少兩點)?！緦懽饕蟆?.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題?！驹u分標(biāo)準】內(nèi)容完整語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】CCTV9broadcastDuFu:China’sGreatestPoet,adocumentaryproducedbyBBC.Thiswell-madefilmprovidesforeignaudienceswithafreshwayofbetterknowingChina’spastandpresent.DocumentariesaboutChina,producedeitherinChinaorinothercountries,arebecomingincreasinglypopularamongforeigners.Foronething,theoveralldevelopmentoverthepastdecadeshasbeensostrikingthattheyfeeleagertofamiliarizethemselveswithwhatisgoingoninChina.Foranother,Chinaenjoysalonghistoryandrichculture.IthasalwaysbeenanattractionforthosewhoarekeenonanythingthatisChinese.ThesedocumentariespresentasplendidpictureofChinainfrontoftheiraudiences-ithistory,landscape,art,food,oreventraditionalChinesemedicine.Becauseofthesefilms,someforeignershavebeguntothinkofcomingtoChina.Inthisway,theycanformatruepictureofChinathemselves.【解析】這是一篇讀寫任務(wù)。第一步:審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。要求閱讀中國題材紀錄片的對話，寫一篇150個詞文章。包括兩部分。(一)、用30詞概括對話內(nèi)容。(二)、談?wù)勚袊}材紀錄片受到外國朋友歡迎的原因。要求至少兩點原因。第二步:布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為四段。第一段，概括對話內(nèi)容。第二段和第三段，中國題材紀錄片受到外國朋友歡迎的原因。第四段，總結(jié)因為電影吸引外國人想來到中國。第三步:確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語:producedby,provide…with,either…or,bekeenon,present,becauseof,inthisway,theoveralldevelopment，sostrikingthat，feeleagertofamiliarizethemselveswith.第四步:確定較為高級的句子:非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)adocumentaryproducedbyBBC；定語從句的運用:IthasalwaysbeenanattractionforthosewhoarekeenonanythingthatisChinese.第五步:連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進行過渡銜接:foronething,foranother.第六步:注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。5.（2020·山東卷）假定你是李華,上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道,內(nèi)容包括:1.參加人員:2.跑步路線:從校門口到南山腳下:3.活動反響。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右:2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ACross-CountryRunningRaceLastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本篇要求考生就上周日學(xué)校舉行的5公里越野賽活動寫一篇新聞報道。體裁:應(yīng)用文時態(tài):根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)以一般過去時為主結(jié)構(gòu):總分總要求:1.參加人員2.跑步路線3.活動反響第二步:列提綱(重點詞組)attend/witness/drawone’sattention/managetodosth./measure/speakhighlyof/providesth.forsb.第三步:連詞成句1.LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.2.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.3.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.4.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessaryhelpaswellasencouragement.5.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.6.Theactivityishighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydoesitprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomakesusmorecohesive.第四步:連句成篇(加入銜接詞或從句)表示并列的連詞:and/but/or/so…狀語從句連詞:because/if/though/although…定語從句連詞:which/that/when/where…第五步:修改潤色(加入高級詞匯或短語)6.（2020·天津卷）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李津。你校于6月8日舉辦了成人禮活動，你的英國朋友Chris很想了解該活動。你于當(dāng)晚給Chris回一封電子郵件，介紹關(guān)情況，內(nèi)容包括:(1)成人禮活動內(nèi)容(成長點滴回顧、觀看校友抗疫事邊錄像)；(2)對活動的感受；(3)對自己未來的展望。注意:(1)詞數(shù)不少于100；(2)可適當(dāng)加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行方連貫；(3)開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:成人禮thecoming-ofageceremony新冠腦炎COVID-F9DearChris,I’msogladtohearfromyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin【答案】DearChris,Iamsogladtohearfromyou.Thecoming-of-ageceremonywasheldinourschoolonJune8ththismonth.Duringthecoming-of-ageceremony,theheadmastercongratulatedusonsteppingintotheadult,reviewingthegrowthperiodthatwehadexperienced.Afterthat,weallwatchedthevideoofalumnusfightingagainsttheepidemic.Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamabletoshouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmoredetermined.Whenfacedwiththedifficultiesandfailures,Imustovercomethem.Inthefuture,Iwillbeagooddoctortohealthewoundedandrescuethedying,devotingmyselftomywork.Bestwishes！Yours,LiJin【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。第一步:審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你校于6月8號舉辦了成人禮活動，你的英國朋友Chris很想了解該活動。你于當(dāng)晚給Chris回一封電子郵件，介紹相關(guān)情況，內(nèi)容包括:(1)成人禮活動內(nèi)容(成長點滴回顧，觀看校友抗疫事跡錄像等)2.對活動的感受。3.對自己未來的展望。第二，人稱為第一人稱。第三，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，一般過去時和一般將來時。第二步:布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段:成人禮活動內(nèi)容(成長點滴回顧，觀看校友抗疫事跡錄像等)。第二段:對活動的感受；對自己未來的展望。第三段，表達期望。第三步:確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語:congratulatesbonsth.,befacedwith,healthewoundedandrescuethedying,devoteoneselftodoingsth.；第四步:確定較為高級的句子:that引導(dǎo)的定語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語Duringthecoming-of-ageceremony,theheadmastercongratulatedusonsteppingintotheadult,reviewingthegrowthperiodthatwehadexperienced.that引導(dǎo)的表語從句Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamabletoshouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmoredetermined.時間狀語從句的省略句Whenfacedwiththedifficultiesandfailures,Imustovercomethem.第五步:連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進行過渡銜接:Afterthat,besides,however.第六步:注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。7.（2020·浙江卷）假定你是李華，你校來自愛爾蘭的外教Peter因病回國休假。請給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.詢問近況；2.分享班級最新消息；3.表達祝愿。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearPeter,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavegonebackhomeonsickleave.Howareyoufeelingnow?Ihopemygoodnewsforyouwillsweepawaytheshadowofdisease.Lastmonth,anEnglishfestivalwasheldinourschool,andourclassperformedasongwhichyoutaughtusatthefestival.Assoonaswefinishedthesong,alltheaudiencegaveuswarmapplause.Ifonlyyouhadbeenthere.Weallmissyouverymuchandwishyouaquickandcompleterecovery.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，向因病假回國休假的外教老師詢問近況，分享消息和表達祝愿。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時。結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段詢問近況；第二段告知班級消息；第三段表達祝愿。要求：1.詢問近況（Howareyoufeelingnow?）2.告知班級消息（mygoodnews;performedasongwhichyoutaughtus）3.表達祝愿（wishyouaquickandcompleterecovery）第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）besorrytodo;onsickleave;sweepaway;assoonas;givesb.warmapplause;recovery第三步：連詞成句1.Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavegonebackhomeonsickleave.2.Ihopemygoodnewsforyouwillsweepawaytheshadowofdisease.3.Assoonaswefinishedthesong,alltheaudiencegaveuswarmapplause.4.Weallmissyouverymuchandwishyouaquickandcompleterecovery.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤色修改【2019年】1.【2019·全國卷I】假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要劇版中國畫展。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.個人優(yōu)勢；3.能做的事情。注意:：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua.【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。1.審題立意本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫申請信，人稱使用第一人稱和第二人稱，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在式。2.謀篇布局書信格式，稱呼和落款文中已經(jīng)給出。首段，寫信的目的，中間段寫個人優(yōu)勢和能做的事，最后一段總結(jié)。3.關(guān)鍵詞根據(jù)寫作要點及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯有：volunteer，aChinesePaintingExhibition，localcity，advantages，agoodcommandof，beneficialfor，familiaritywith，appreciate，takemyapplicationintoconsideration。通過詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語法錯誤，并增加一些細節(jié)和過渡性的詞匯，如Firstofall,Besides,tobeginwith，moreover，asforme，Lastbutnotleast，等，使全文銜接自然，語義流暢?！痉段摹緿earsirormadam,IamaChinesestudentnamedLiHua,whoisstudyinginLondonduringthesummervacation.KnowingthatthelocalartgallerywillholdanexhibitionofChinesepaintings,Iamwritingtoapplyforvolunteering.AsastudentwhohaslearnedChinesepaintingsince5yearsold,IamverypleasedtohaveanopportunitytointroduceChinesepaintingstoforeigners.Besides,myfluentspokenEnglishandrichknowledgeaboutChinesepaintingswillhelpvisitorsunderstandthemeaningbehindeachpaintingdeeply.IwillappreciateitifIcouldbegiventheopportunity.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua.2.【2019·全國卷II】假定你是校排球隊隊長李華。請寫封郵件告知你的隊友Chris球隊近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括:1.比賽信息；2.賽前準備；3.表達期待。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris,I’mwritingtoletyouknowthatwewillhaveavolleyballmatchnextmonth.ThematchwilltakeplaceinourschoolgymontheafternoonofJuly4th.WewillplayagainsttheteamfromHongXingHighSchool.Inordertowinthematch,weshouldgetfullypreparedandpracticehard.Sofromtomorrow,weneedtotrainfortwohoursafterschooleveryday.Pleasecometotheschoolgymat6:30pmfromMondaytoFriday.You’reanexcellentplayer.Withyouontheteam,weareconfidentthatwecanwinthegame.Let’stryhardtogether!Cheers,LiHua【解析】今年的書面表達沿襲近幾年的體裁，仍舊是應(yīng)用文。本次書面表達要求考生寫一封郵件告知隊友有關(guān)比賽的信息。本篇書面表達是一封告知信。首先要告知寫信目的；然后簡明扼要地告知排球比賽的時間、地點以及賽前的準備事項，注意事件信息的三要素：時間、地點、人物，要交代清楚；第三則要表達對隊友的期待和鼓勵。3.【2019·全國卷III】假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括:1.時間；2.活動安排；3.歡迎他表演節(jié)目。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearAllen,Howiseverythinggoing?OurschoolwillholdamusicfestivalnextSundaymorningintheschoolhall.AndI’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.Theopeningceremonywillstartat9:00am,andtheschoolmasterwilldeliveraspeech.Thentherewillbevariousfantasticperformancesplayedbytalentedstudents.Youaredefinitelywelcometoshowuponstage,whichwilladdcolorandfuntoourfestival.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes,LiHua【解析】今年的書面表達要求考生寫郵件，告知英國朋友音樂節(jié)的情況。首先確定提綱。先介紹寫作目的，之后介紹音樂節(jié)的時間、活動安排等具體信息，最后歡迎他表演節(jié)目。第二，根據(jù)提綱，確定關(guān)鍵詞語，如：Howiseverythinggoing?amusicfestival，intheschoolhall，Theopeningceremony等。第三，注意選用合適的連接詞將各要點串聯(lián)起來。4.【2019·北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim打算暑假期間來北京、天津和上海旅游，發(fā)來郵件詢問相關(guān)信息。請你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.交通出行；2.必備衣物。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【范文】DearJim,I’mpleasedthatyou’recomingtotourinChina.IsuggestthatyoubeginfromBeijing,andI’llshowyouaround.Tianjinwillbeyournextstop.Afterthat,youcangotoShanghai,whereyoucanstayforaweek.Youcantakehigh-speedtrainstobothcities.Summerinthesecitiesishotandrainy,sotakesummerwearplusanumbrellawithyou.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求給朋友寫回信?！窘馕觥考t星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華的英國好友Jim打算暑假期間來北京、天津和上海旅游，發(fā)來郵件詢問相關(guān)信息。要求給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.交通出行；2.必備衣物。本文時態(tài)應(yīng)采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，用第一人稱和第二人稱來寫。文章可以分為三部分來寫：首先表達歡迎Jim來中國；然后交代交通出行和必備衣物；最后盼望朋友的到來。注意使用高級詞匯和句式，為文章增添色彩；注意使用連接詞、銜接詞，使文章自然、流暢。5.【2019·天津卷】假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津，英國友好校將派教師來你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動?；顒悠陂g，英方教師Chris將做一個有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座、現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學(xué)生的意見。請根據(jù)以下提示給Chris寫一封電子郵件:（1）你喜歡的講座話題（從音樂、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一）；（2）選擇該話題的原因及關(guān)于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；（3）希望從中有何收獲。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100：（2）可適當(dāng)加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出、不計入總詞數(shù)。DearChris，I'mLiJim，astudentatChenguangHighSchool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours，LiJin【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來。動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果.【范文】DearChris，I'mLiJin,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.Igotthenewsthatyourschoolwillsendteacherstomyschoolforaweek-longsummerexchange.Duringtheactivity，youwillgivealectureonWesternart.Youwanttoseekforadviceonwhattopicthelecturewillbeabout.Frommypersonalnote，musicismypriority.Iaminterestedinallkindsofmusic，amongwhichJazzismyfavorite.Iwanttoknowaboutthehistoryofjazz，andsomefamousjazzsingers.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanaddsomesessionsofenjoyingjazz.Thankyouforyourtime.Yours，LiJin6.【2019·浙江卷】第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作(滿分15分)假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.表示感謝；2.回顧Alex對你的幫助；3.臨別祝愿。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能選漏要點，跑題偏題.本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次.特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化.平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。【范文】DearChris,Iamsoregretfultoknowthatyouaregoingtoreturntoyourhomebeforelong.WegetalongwellduringyourstayinChinaandyouofferedmelotsofhelp.IwouldliketoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourhelpwithmyEnglish.WhilestudyinginChina,youalwaysspentyourfreetimeinhelpingmepolishupmyoralEnglish.ItisyouwhosharedmewithrichknowledgeofEnglishandEnglishculture.NeverwillIforgetyouandyourkindness.Itismyhopethatyoucanremembermeasoftenaspossible.Yours,LiHua【2019·北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們班上周組織了一次以“勞動最光榮”為主題社會實踐活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：西瓜watermelon________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LastweekItookpartinafarmworkprogrammeinthesuburbs.Attheclassmeeting,ourteachertoldusabouttheprogrammewiththetheme“Workingismostbeautiful”.Andhestressedtheimportanceofworkingwithourownhands.WhenIgothome,Ipackedupmyluggageforthetrip.Onthefarm,wehelpedpickwatermelons.Whileworking,Irealisedhowharditwastoworkinthefieldsunderahotsun.WhenIcamebackhome,Isharedmyexperienceswithmyparents.Andtheywereveryproudofme.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文屬于圖畫作文，要求根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容寫一篇英文周記。【解析】假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你們班上周組織了一次以“勞動最光榮”為主題的社會實踐活動。要求根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個過程。圖畫作文內(nèi)容要點比較清晰，其中包括：老師宣布活動內(nèi)容和意義，我為活動準備，在農(nóng)場的勞動過程，介紹活動感受。這樣有利于學(xué)生寫作時發(fā)揮與擴展。全文可分成三部分，開頭段概括活動，中間段描述圖畫，結(jié)尾段總結(jié)收獲和意義。文章用第一人稱來寫，使用一般過去時?！?018年】1.【2018·全國卷I】假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．到達時間；2．合適的禮物；3．餐桌禮儀。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】本文是一篇電子郵件類應(yīng)用文寫作。餐桌禮儀也是考生比較熟悉的話題。成文時注意以下幾點：一、內(nèi)容要點要齊全1．到達時間；2．合適的禮物；3．餐桌禮儀。二、時態(tài)：主要用一般現(xiàn)在時和將來時；三、人稱：第二、三人稱。四、注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)母呒壴~匯、短語或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞和插入語，使文章表達自然、流暢。1.瀏覽信息要點2.三個任務(wù)點，第一段內(nèi)容：問候?qū)Ψ?，馬上呈現(xiàn)對方所涉及的話題，拜訪中國家庭，做客時間的要求和忌諱!第二段內(nèi)容：做客拜訪的合適禮物，可以適當(dāng)延展，初次拜訪，親密朋友之間拜訪，二次拜訪，家庭情況適合的禮物，通用的禮物等。第三段：tablemanners,可以描述兩三個通常的中國人的餐桌禮節(jié)和忌諱的地方，有鮮明特色之處，最后一句表達祝愿。3.時態(tài)，給對方的建議和說明，用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述風(fēng)俗禮儀這是客觀規(guī)律性的東西，用一般現(xiàn)在時。4.頭腦風(fēng)暴短語、句型結(jié)構(gòu)，開始打草稿5.行文6.檢查拼寫和語法?！緷M分范文】DearTerry,Howareyoudoing?LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandconfusedabouttheChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoputforwardsomeadvice.Firstly,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyouarrive5to10minutesearlier,whichiscommoninChinesetraditionalculture.Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwouldbringsomeappropriategiftswithme,suchassouvenirsfrommyowncountry.Besides,tablemannersarealsowhatyoushouldpayattentionto.Forexample,youarenotsupposedtostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Instead,layingthemonyourdishisasmartchoice.Ifyouhaveanyotherproblems,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactme. Yours LiHua【素材積累】做客禮儀：1.預(yù)先約定一個時間以便對方事先作好安排。如果事先已經(jīng)約定好了時間，就應(yīng)遵守約定，準時到達，如需提早十分鐘二十分鐘之內(nèi)可以接受，不要遲到，以免主人等候，也不要太早到，以免主人未作好準備。這是一個基本禮節(jié)問題。2.如果有專屬地域文化特色的禮物是最好的。如果朋友家有長輩，帶點煙酒和茶葉或一些老人家用的保健品等；如果朋友家有小孩，帶點兒童玩具或買箱牛奶，然后加點煙酒或茶葉；不要送鐘、梨、傘等這些東西，被認為不吉祥。3.主人會請客人入座上席，再請長輩入座客人旁。入座的時侯要從椅子的左邊進入。在中餐結(jié)束時，筷子應(yīng)整齊地放在靠碗右邊的桌上，并應(yīng)等客人們都放下筷子以后，主人示意離席后方可以離開，不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走，這樣做是很沒禮貌的表現(xiàn)。常用詞語和句子準時ontime/punctually餐桌禮儀tablemanners合適的、恰當(dāng)?shù)腶ppropriate拜訪payavisittoYouaresupposed/expected/requiredtodo…It’sagoodideato…It’sappropriate/suitabletodo…It’ssensible/reasonable/advisabletodo…It’sgoodmannerstodo…It’snoteworthythat…Ithinkitwouldbemorehelpfulifyoucoulddo…Itwouldbewiseofyouto…It’sdesirabletodo…It’sinappropriatetodo…It’simpolitetodo…It’sunwise/inadvisabletodo…Never（助動詞/系動詞/情態(tài)動詞）主語+謂語動詞…It’snotsuitableforyoutodo…insuchasituation.【備考啟示】近年來高考寫作的命題常用的思想就是高起點低落點。高起點題目很高，中國文化，中國故事，中國禮儀等等，但最終都把它們落在應(yīng)用文的框架里，這就是低落點。寫這樣的作文，一定要注意不能寫過于具體的內(nèi)容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的寫，不要面面俱到，中國餐桌禮儀內(nèi)容太多，100單詞無法寫。找重點，以點帶面。但選擇重要內(nèi)容本身就是一種能力。2.【2018·全國卷II】你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英語短片GrowingTogether，內(nèi)容包括：(1)短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展；(2)放映時間、地點；(3)歡迎對短片提出意見。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________