讀后續(xù)寫（1）浙江卷polarbear課件高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫（1）

2020年浙江卷polarbearsParagraph1Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp…Underlinesomekeywords.Paragraph2Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived…What’stheproblemHowwastheproblemslovedtheendingofparagraph1whatdidthebeardothen...weweresaved.WhatdidwedothenwhenReadforthebasicinformationonefallwherewhowhatataresearchcampEillandI;AyoungmalepolarbearWeplannedtophotographpolarbears.Whenwecookeddinner,abearcametoourcampandtriedtogetin...

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Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.ReadfordetailsWhatthingscanbeusedinyourcontinuationwriting

②Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.ReadfordetailsWhatdoes“that”“thosetimes”refertointhissentenceThistime,itwasgoingtobedangerous!長(zhǎng)焦鏡頭feeling:expectedParagraph1&2:Plot:Weplannedtophotographpolarbears.Feeling:adventurous,expected③AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.④Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Findsomeverbsaboutthepolarbear.WhywouldapolarbearlivinginitsnaturalhabitatbesohungryThepolarbearwasindesperateneedoffood.Paragraph3&4:Plot:A

bearpushedatthewoodenfencepostssurroundingsourcamp.Bear:hungry⑤Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws（爪子）.⑥Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter（相遇）,Itooksomepicturesofthebear.defenseactions:yelled,hit,fired,radioedbear’sreaction:sometimeswillbesacredoff;kepttryingtoteardownthefenceadventurousMaybeyoucanusetheseactionsinyourpaper.feeling:terrified⑦ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar（吼叫）,thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.defenseactions:bear’sreaction:

usepepperspray,approachedslowly,sprayedinthefaceanangryroar,rantowashhiseyesWhatelsedefenseactionsdoyouknowAfewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp…1.Whatdidthebeardoafterheadingback2.Whatobject(物品)didweusetopreventthebear3.Whatwasthebear'sreactionAtthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived…feeling:desperateParagraph5-7:Plot:Wetriedtoscarehimoff.Feeling:terrified,desperate,braveBear:aggressive,angry,uncomfortableUnderstandthethemeTheybothwantedtoprotectthemselves,onefromhungry,theotherfromtheattack.twoadventurousfansofphotographyahungryandangrybearCanthesituationbesolvedpeacefullyWhywouldapolarbearlivinginitsnaturalhabitatbesohungryWhytheauthoremphasize“blankshotgunshells”,“doesn’thurtthem”1.climatechangeleadtofoodshortage2.loseitswaytoitshome3.illnesspreventsitfromhuntingforfood4......animalsandhumanscanliveharmoniouslywitheachotherPicturesParagraph1Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp…Designthemainplots.Paragraph2Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived…What’stheproblemHowwastheproblemslovedtheendingofparagraph1whatdidthebeardothen...weweresaved.Whatdidwedothen1.Whatdidthebeardoafterheadingback2.Whatobject(物品)didweusetopreventthebear3.Whatwasthebear'sreaction1.Whatdidwedothen2.Whataboutthebear3.Howdidwefeelafterweweresavedfrustratedfearfulfeeling:reliefDesignplotswhenwherewhoMainplotsP1

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Scene1:_____________________________Theme:__________________________________________________________Bear’sactionDefenseactionandbear’sreactionbear;EillandIEillandI;bearcampcamphelicopterhomeFacingbear’sactionAftertheysawthehelicopter;whentheysawthosepicturesAnimalsandhumancanliveharmoniouslywitheachother.Behaviorsandfeelings動(dòng)名詞Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.（動(dòng)名詞作主語）with結(jié)構(gòu)Withanangryroar,thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.虛擬語氣ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.

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Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.（過去分詞作狀語）②

Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter,Itooksomepicturesofthebear.（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）定語從句①

AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.（限制性）②

Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.

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Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.（省略關(guān)系詞）LanguagefeatureDescriptionsofbear1.clawn.(動(dòng)物或禽類的)爪，腳爪，腳趾(用爪子或手指甲)v.抓，撕，撓eg:Thebearceased（抓?。゛tthewirefence,stooduprightonhishindlegs,（后腿站立）

clawedandbititferociously（野蠻地）.2.growlvi./n.~(atsb/sth)低聲吼叫eg:Thebearcameourway,lettingoutarumblinggrowl.Thebeargrowledandbareditssharpfangs.那只熊吼叫著露出鋒利的牙齒。

3.roarvi.大聲吼叫;咆哮eg:Allofasudden,thebearstooduprightandroaredloudlywithfury,beatingitspawsmadlyagainstthefence.4.snarlvi.~(atsb/sth)toshowtheteethandmakeadeepangrynoiseinthethroat齜牙低吼eg:Heagilely（靈活地）rosetohisfeetandsnarled,baringhiswhitefangs.5.bangv.tohitsthinawaythatmakesaloudnoise;砸→shovev.topushsb/sthinaroughway猛推，亂擠，推撞smashv.tomovewithalotofforceagainststhsolid;tomakesthdothis(使)猛烈撞擊，猛烈碰撞slamv.toput,pushorthrowsthintoaparticularplaceorpositionwithalotofforce用力一放;使勁一推;猛勁一摔Vividverbs1.它（熊）的吼叫聲（roar）在我們周圍回響（echo）。Thebear’sroarechoedallaroundus.2.他用后腿站立，推著木柵欄的柱子(post)。Itstoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.3.在仔細(xì)地觀察了這片區(qū)域之后，熊向前小跑(trot)了幾步。Aftercarefullyobservingthearea,thebeartrottedforwardafewsteps.4.在我意識(shí)到她的意圖之前，她把包扔過柵欄，落在遠(yuǎn)處的灌木叢里。BeforeIrealizedherintentions,shetossedthebagacrossthefence,whichlandedinabushfaraway.5.我抓起相機(jī)，拍下了最后一張熊的照片。Isnatchedmycameraandsnappedonelastshotofthebear.V-ing1.我們緊緊地抱在一起，害怕地直打哆嗦（shiver）。Shivering

withfear,wehuddledtogether.2.聽說我們沒有受到任何身體傷害，飛行員讓我們待在原地，捂住耳朵。Hearing

thatwehadnotsufferedanyphysicalinjury,thepilottoldustostayputandcoverourears.3.聽到直升飛機(jī)的聲音，我們迅速跑回營(yíng)地，用顫抖(trembling)的聲音呼叫我們的救助者。Hearing

thehelicopter,weranbacktothecampswiftly,andradioedoursaviorinatremblingvoice.4.看到北極熊逼近，我嚇得呆住了，嚇得不敢動(dòng)。Seeingtheapproachingofthepolarbear,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.V-ed1.被熊的吼叫聲驚嚇住，埃利和我嘗試了我們所知道的所有應(yīng)對(duì)熊的防衛(wèi)措施。Terrifiedbyitsroar,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.2.那只熊被噴霧激怒了，怒吼著迎接我們Irritatedbythespray,thebeargre