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Conflicts-Experience-Reflection維也納之約2024屆全國卷I

ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestospare,werolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueuestillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."'Wemadeit,"hesaid.JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage,"Outoforder.Sorry."

Para1：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Para2：

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestospare,werolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueuestillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."'Wemadeit,"hesaid.JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage,"Outoforder.Sorry."

Gunterresponsiblewarm-heartedfriendlyprofessionalAnalyze

CharactersIanxioushonestImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestospare,werolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueuestillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."'Wemadeit,"hesaid.JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage,"Outoforder.Sorry."

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conflictsConflict1:ItriedtocatchthelastbustoPraguesolution1:jumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankConflict2:Gunterdidn’thearmydestinationclearly.solution2:Guntergothelpfromhisfriendandstartedhiscar.Conflict3:Ihadnocashtopaythetaxifee.solution3:Iusedmybankcard.Conflict4:Thecardmachineandthecashmachinewentwrong.Conflict5:Thebuswasabouttostart/setoff.Solution4:?Solution45:?Readforelementscharacters：Ithetaxidriver(Gunter)2.narrativeperspective:

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3.time：acold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember

4.place：inVienna---atabusstation;---continuationpart:atthebusstation

5.storylineBeginningClimaxEndingIhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.Ijumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankonarrival.ThedriveGuntertriedeverymeanstohelpmemakeittothebusstation.Para1：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Para2：

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Ihadnocashtopayhimandthetwocardmachineswentwrong.Thebuswasabouttosetoff.backgroundReadforcluesandechoes

hiddenclues

echoesImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.

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WhathappenedonthatSeptembercold,wetandunforgettableeveningservedasabeautifulreminderthattrustbringspeoplecloserandmaketheworldabetterplacetolivein.

Noticingthebuswasabouttostart,GunterurgedmetoboardthelastbustoPragueincaseIshouldmisstheconference.Readforcluesandechoes

hiddenclues

echoesImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.

3.WearrangedtomeetonthetaxirankoftheViennaairport,whereItookhistaxiandhadaremarkableencounterwiththishumblebutamazingtaxidriver.4.Ijumpedintohiscar,expressedmyheartfeltgratitudeandeventuallypaidoffmypreviousdebt.Readforcluesandechoes

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echoesJustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.FearingthatIwouldmissthebus,IpromisedtoGunterthatIwouldcomebacktoViennainfourdaysandIwouldcallhim.Afterleavinghimmymobilephonenumber,Ihurriedontothebus,wavinggoodbyetohimandfeelingsosorryforbeingunabletopaytheduetaxifee.PlotContinuation點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的故事（常與原文最后一段呼應(yīng)）和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。Think?Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage,"Outoforder.Sorry."Para1：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Para2：Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Question:SinceIhadnocash,Icouldn’tpayGunterthetaxifee.HowcouldIboardthebuswithnocashforthebusfare?Possibleanswer:ThoughGunterdidn’tgetthetaxifee,heevenfishedoutsomecashfromhispocketandboughtaticketforme.ToshowGunter’sremarkablequality.Para1：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Para2：Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.PlotthecontinuationstoryLink1:

HowdidGunterreact?Whatdidhesaidtome?Body:HowdidIfeel?WhatdidGunterdo?Withnocash,howcouldItakethebustoPrague?Link2:

WhatdidIpromise?Link3:

WhatdidGuntersay?HowdidGunterfeel?Body:

WhatdidIdo?HowdidIfeel?Theme:

Whatlessondidtheexperiencedemonstrate?Designlink1Link1A:

Whenheheardit,hisexpressionchangedslightlybutseeingmyapologeticlookonmyface,Gunterreassuredme,“It’snotabigdeal.”Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage,"Outoforder.Sorry."Para1：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Designlink1Link1B:

Breathlessandsweaty,Istoleasecretlookatthebus,sighingwithasinkingheartasIwoulddefinitelymissthebusbecauseofmysillymistake.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage,"Outoforder.Sorry."

Para1：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Designlink1Link1C:

However,theterriblenewsthatIcouldn’twithdrawanycashfromthecashmachinedidn’tbotherGunteratall.Instead,smilingatme,hewishedmegoodluck,readytorunhiscartopickupanotherpassenger.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage,"Outoforder.Sorry."

Para1：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Para1：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Para2：Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Designlink2Link2:Withthebusabouttostart,aftersayingnumeroussorryandthankstoGunter,IaskedhimtoleavemehisphonenumberpromisingIwouldcallhimaftertheimportantconferenceinPragueandpayhimtheduetaxifee.ThankstoGunter’sunderstandingandgenerosity,ImadeittoPragueandattendedtheconferenceonschedule.Para2：Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Designlink3Link3A:Itwasjusttoowonderfultohearhiswarmandfriendlyvoiceoverthephone,whichinfusedmyheartwithmixedemotions.Apparently,hewasoverthemoonwhenhegotanunexpectedcallfromme---anoddpassenger.Para2：Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Designlink3Link3B:Nosoonerhadheblurtedout“hello”thanhisfamiliar,warmandreassuringvoicecameintomyears.Undoubtedly,whenIexplainedmyintention,hesoundedmoreastoundedthanhappyasifhecouldn’tbelievewhatheheardonthephone.Para2：Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.DesignendingEndingA:Echo1：（幽默式結(jié)尾）

SpeedingtotheconferencevenueinVienna,IsaidjokinglythatthistimeIhadpreparedenoughcashtopayhistaxifee.Para2：Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.DesignendingEndingB:（人與人之間美好的信任）WhathappenedonthatSeptembercold,wetandunforgettableeveningservedasabeautifulreminderofhowtrustcanbringpeopleclosertogether.Para2：Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.DesignendingEndingC:（我的一諾千金）Iprovedtothegenerous,warm-heartedtaxidriverthatIamamanofintegrityandGunterdeservedtoberepaidandrespected.Para2：Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.DesignendingEndingD:（奇妙際遇，成就奇緣）TheunforgettableencounterbetweenGunterandmeformedaclosebond/friendship.Thatstressfulandchaoticsituationwouldstickinmymemoryforever/wouldbeengravedinmyheart,whichtaughtmethatmutualtrustistheseedthatblossomsintodeepandlastingconnections.Para1：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Breathlessandsweaty,Istoleasecretlookatthebus,sighingwithasinkingheart.Definitely,Iwouldmissthebusbecauseofmysillymistake.Itwastooterribletopicturethecomingdisasterofnotbeingabletoattendtheconference.NeverinmywildestdreamhadIimaginedthatmyinabilitytopayhimdidn’tbotherhimatall.Instead,hefishedoutsomecash,rushedtopurchasemeabusticketandurgedmetoboardthebustoPrague.Overwhelmedwithanenormoussenseofgratitude,Iwasalmostmovedtotears.Withthebusabouttostart,aftersayingnumerousthankstoGunter,Iaskedhimforhisphonenumber,promisingIwouldcallhimaftertheimportantconferenceinPragueandpayhimtheduetaxifee.ThankstoGunter’sunderstandingandgenerosity,ImadeittoPragueandattendedtheconferenceonschedule.Para1：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Whenheheardit,hisexpressionchangedslightlybutseeingmyapologeticlookonmyface,Gunterreassuredme,“It’snotabigdeal.”Feelingextremelyembarrassedandnotknowingwhattodowiththeunexpectedsituation,Iwasinanewdilemma.WhatIneverexpectedwasthathesmiledwarmlyatme,shrugginghisshouldersandstraightforwardlyresponding“OK.Therideisfreesinceyouhavenocash.”Noticingthebuswasabouttostart,GunterevenurgedmetoboardthebustoPragueincaseIshouldmisstheconference.Afteraskingforhisphonenumber,IjumpedontothebusandwavedgoodbyetoGunter.Movedtotears,IpromisedthatIwouldbeinViennaforanotherconferenceinfourdaysandthatIwouldcallhimandpayhimthetaxifee!Para2：Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVie