Unit10SectionBWriting課件人教版英語八年級(jí)下冊(cè)

Unit10I'vehadthisbikeforthreeyears.BySummerLiSectionBWriting[話題分析]

本單元的話題是“以前的物品及周圍的變化”。通常要求學(xué)生寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的某個(gè)物品或者描述家鄉(xiāng)的變化。

寫這類作文時(shí)，多用第一人稱。要注意文章層次分明，感情真切。話題分析WritingTopic1Thinkaboutyourfavoritethingfromchildhoodwhichyoustillhave.Forexample,itcanbeatoyorabook.shareitwithyourpartners,andtakenotesusingthefollowingquestions.Free-talkHowlonghaveyouhadit?Howdidyougetit?Didsomeonegiveittoyou?Whogaveittoyou?Whydoyoulikeitsomuch?Whyisitspecial?Canyousayanythingmoreaboutit?Free-talkMyfovoritethingfromchildhodis____________.I'vehaditsince________________.____________gaveittome.myteddybearIwastenyearsoldMybestfriendMyfovoritethingfromchildhodis____________.I'vehaditsince________________.____________gaveittome.SturctureFree-talkIlikethe_________somuchbecauseitis________________.Itisspecialtomebecause____________________________________________________________.IthinkIwilkeepitforverenotonlybecauseitremindsmeof_______________________________,butalso________________________________________.teddybearlovelyandbeautifulmybestfriendgavemeitwhenIfailedinanimportanttestmybestfriendandourdeepfriendshipitgivesmewarmthandcouragewhenIfeelupsetFree-talkThetoybear________(give)memanymemories.IrememberwhenI____(is)sad,Ilikedtotalkwithit.Istillgotobedwithitnow.Oneday,I_______(can)finditanywhereafterI______(wake)up.Ibegantolookforiteverywhere.Ittookmealongtimetofindit.AndIwaslateforschoolthatmorning.Luckily,Ifounditintheend!hasgivenwascouldn'twokeWhatisthispartabout?MyfavoritethingIntroduceyourfavoritethingBeginningBodyEndingtalkaboutwhyyoulikeitorwhyitisspecialwriteastoryormemoryaboutitSructureofanarticleReasons:aboutthepersonwhogaveitaboutthethingitself(eg.fun)Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodis...I'vehaditfor/since.......gaveittome.BeginningBodyEndingIlike...somuchbecause...It'sspecialtomenotonlybecause...butalso...IthinkIwill......hasgivenmemanymemories.Irememberwhen...Itgivesme...when...Usefulsentences:Outlineofanarticle審題體裁話題時(shí)態(tài)人稱記敘文喜歡的東西；家鄉(xiāng)的變化一般過去時(shí)；現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)第一或第三人稱

Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodisawatch.Ihavehaditforsevenyears.MyfathergaveittomewhenIstartedschool.Itisthemostpreciousthinginmylifebecauseitshowsmyfatheer'sloveandhisexpectationsforme.Itisthiswatchthatrecordsmycolorfullifeandremindsmetocherishtime.Thewatchhasgivenmeanumberofgoodmemories.WhenIwasyoung,Iwasafraidtospeakinfrontofothers.HowevereverytimewhenItouchedthewatch,itgavemeconfidenceandcourage.Thankstothiswatch,Iamanoptimisticandconfidentpersonnow.ApossibleversionPara.1Whatisthething?Para.2WhyIloveitandspecial?Para.3Memoriesaboutthething隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，你的家鄉(xiāng)肯定也發(fā)生了一些變化，請(qǐng)以“Thechangesinmyhometown”為題，用英語寫一篇文章，描述你的家鄉(xiāng)近年來發(fā)生的變化。要求：語句通順，表達(dá)流暢，詞數(shù)80詞左右。WritingTopic2ChangesinMyHometownOurcountryhasmadegreatprogress,almosteverywherehaschangedalot,andsohasmyhometown.BeginningBodyEndingInthepast...Thingshavegreatchangesnow...Ireallylovemyhometown.Ibelievetherewillbemuchmorechangesinthefuture.SructureofanarticleChanges:howthingswereinthepasthowthingsareatthepresentTheChangesinMyHometownOurcountryhasmadegreatprogress,almosteverywherehaschangedalot,andsohasmyhometown.

Inthepast,peopleinmyhometownlivedapoorlife.Thehouseswereveryoldandsmall.Pollutionwasveryserious,andtherewasrubbisheverywhere.Thetrafficwasnotconvenient,soitwasdifficulttogooutside.

Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Theenvironmenthasimprovedalot.Themountainshaveturnedgreener,theriversareclearerandtheskyisbluer.Therearetrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Peopleliveabetterlife.Theirhousesarelargeandbright.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Soit'smoreconvenienttotravelaround.ApossibleversionIreallylovemyhometown.Inthefuture,Ibelievemyhometownwillbemorebeautiful.People'sliveswillbebetterandbetter.ApossibleversionPost-writingAssessment(評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn))Structure(結(jié)構(gòu))2分Doesthearticalhasseveralparts?Conten(內(nèi)容)5分Areallthed