高中英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫素材積累1

1、讀后續(xù)寫素材積累 1 2019.10.16一、環(huán)境描寫的素材環(huán)境描寫分為客觀和主觀兩種角度 :客觀為從環(huán)境事物本身入手 ,主觀則從觀察者 角度描寫。通常在描寫時(shí)主客觀交替進(jìn)行,主觀描寫比重稍大?？陀^環(huán)境描寫 :part 1環(huán)境描寫的 adj 要求:有聲,有色,有質(zhì)感,有味道the blue sky(藍(lán)天)the songs of birds(鳥鳴)thethundering clouds(電光閃雷鳴)the fragile flowers嬌嫩的(花);(the dark, raining evening雨夜交加的夜晚)the greengrass(青草) the fragrant roses(

2、艷麗的玫瑰);the setting/rising落日sun(/冉冉升起的 太陽(yáng))part 2環(huán)境描寫的 verb (vi&vt)要求一).wind (blow/click/howl/wail/roar)1.a gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow lcurtain,一陣風(fēng)吹,吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條,就像卷起的窗簾。2.the wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushesprinkled

3、the slope.風(fēng),輕柔卻寒冷,輕點(diǎn)著樹枝,攪動(dòng)著斜坡下的灌木叢。3.a cool breeze blew through the quiet涼爽park.的微風(fēng)吹拂著寂靜的公園。 4.a cold breeze wafted through my 冷hair.風(fēng)吹拂(過我的頭發(fā))the wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some li(今日正是放風(fēng)箏的好天氣,強(qiáng)勁的風(fēng)力帶動(dòng)了風(fēng)箏的上升。)二).water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter)聲音:1.at on

4、e point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley. 在某處,潺潺的的水聲在山谷中奏響。顏色 2.the water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.水是深藍(lán)色的,陽(yáng)光在透明的玻璃表面閃閃發(fā)光。3. a little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank. 離此不遠(yuǎn),有一條小溪,在綠色的河岸間奔騰閃耀。3

5、. it murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother. 似乎它在溫柔低語(yǔ),就一位天真少女對(duì)著她那慈愛的母親細(xì)細(xì)私語(yǔ)。(action, sound, colour)三).sky (stand/ appear/turn)1.the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.天空是濃濃的灰色,伴著擁擠的朵朵云2.blue skies stood tall and far 藍(lán)藍(lán)的天空高高聳立主觀環(huán)境描寫 :1. sb

6、 found sth adj/doing/done 某人發(fā)現(xiàn)某物(狀態(tài)/動(dòng)作/被).2. sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done 某人看到/聽到/感到/聞到某物(狀態(tài)/動(dòng) 作/被)3. it was so adj that we find/feel 它是如此.以至于4. sth kept sb spellbound/amazed/景物使我如此陶醉/驚訝/sth held sb entirely in their power 景物讓我完全驚呆了5.it looked/seemed/appeared/felt like 景物看起來像二、場(chǎng)景描寫的素材 (來自原

7、著:追風(fēng)箏的人 )1. at least two dozen kites already hung in the sky, like paper sharks roaming for prey.within an hour, the number doubled, and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spunin the sky. a cold breeze wafted through my hair. the wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give

8、 some lift, make the sweeps easier.(放風(fēng)箏的場(chǎng)景描寫,從各個(gè)角度,立體描述)空中已經(jīng)掛著至少二十來只風(fēng)箏,如同紙制的鯊魚,巡游搜獵食物。不到一個(gè)鐘頭,這個(gè)數(shù)字翻了一番 ,紅色的、藍(lán)色的、黃色的風(fēng)箏在蒼穹來回飛舞 , 熠熠生輝。寒冷的微風(fēng)吹過我的頭發(fā)。這風(fēng)正適宜放風(fēng)箏,風(fēng)速不大,恰好能讓風(fēng)箏飄浮起來,也 便于操控。2. the water was a deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface. 湖水澄藍(lán),波平如鏡,陽(yáng)光照在湖上熠熠生輝。2. then i glance

9、d up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky.they danced high above the trees on the west end of the park, over the windmills,floating side by side like a pair of eyes looking down on san francisco, the city i now call home. (場(chǎng)景、比喻)我抬起頭,望見兩只紅色的風(fēng)箏,帶著長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的藍(lán)色尾巴,在天空中冉冉升起。它們舞動(dòng)

10、著 ,飛越公園西邊的樹林 , 飛越風(fēng)車 , 并排飄浮著 ,如同一雙眼睛俯視著舊金山 , 這 個(gè)我現(xiàn)在當(dāng)成家園的城市。4. blue skies stood tall and far, the sun l ike a branding iron searing the back of yourneck. creeks where hassan and i skipped stones all spring turned dry, and rickshaws stirred dust when they sputtered by.(場(chǎng)景、比喻)天空一碧如洗 ,陽(yáng)光像烙鐵般灼痛后頸。整個(gè)春天我和哈桑

11、在溪流打水漂 , 到了夏 天它們也干涸了。黃包車嗒嗒走過,揚(yáng)起陣陣灰塵。5. somewhere, a branch snapped, an owl hooted. the wind, soft and cold, clickedthrough tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope. and from below, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.在某個(gè)地方傳來樹枝劈啪作響的聲音 ,還有貓頭鷹的叫聲。寒風(fēng)微微拂動(dòng)樹枝 ,吹 過山坡上的灌

12、木叢。而下面,水流在山谷淌動(dòng),傳來陣陣微弱的聲音。6. by three oclock, the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. a cool breeze blew through the park.(天氣)到三點(diǎn)時(shí),雨停了,鉛灰色的天空陰云密布,一陣寒風(fēng)吹過公園。7. the sun was beginning to set, glittering red through the cracks between the ramshackle buildings.(景象

13、)太陽(yáng)開始下山,那些搖搖欲墜的房子的裂縫中,滲出閃閃的紅色斜暉。三、描寫時(shí)間 ,動(dòng)作,心理和情感一)、情感好詞:1.喜樂1 the smile on her face shone like a diamond.她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā) 光。2 a smile of understanding flashed across his face.他臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。 a ripple of excitement ran through them.一陣激動(dòng)聲穿過他們。4 laughter lingered around the room.笑聲在房間里縈繞。5 his eyes twinkl

14、ed with pleasure.他的眼睛閃爍著快樂。6 a wild gaiety(快樂) took hold of her.一種瘋狂的快樂控制了她。7 unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile. 令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光,嘴角保持著穩(wěn)定的微笑。8 i was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。9 i was pleased beyond description.我高興得難以形容。10 she wore a shining smile on he

15、r face.她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。 her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整個(gè)房間。 she shed tears of joy.她高興得流下了眼淚。 her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛閃著鉆石般的光芒。 she was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢著幸福。 her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅。 joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悅。 i was floating on a

16、ir.我漂浮在空中。 amusement gleamed in his eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。 2.憤怒 :1 i was seized by anger.我充滿了憤怒。2 he was fuming with rage.他氣得大發(fā)雷霆。3 his anger boiled over.他的憤怒爆發(fā)了。4 he could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。 he was breathing fire and fury.他充滿著怒火。6 his voice trembled with anger.他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。7 he ga

17、ve me a look of burning anger.他憤怒地看了我一眼。8 he glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼熱的目光怒視著我。 he flared up at the word.他一聽到這個(gè)字就勃然大怒。 his face clouded with anger.他氣得臉色陰沉。3.悲傷煩惱1 he stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他靜靜地站著,眼淚順著面頰流了 下來。1 i feel like i am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲傷的海洋

18、里。3 her hands were shaking. she was on the verge of tears.她的手在顫抖。她快要哭 了。4 h earing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.聽到這 個(gè)消息,他絕望地把悲傷淹沒在酒里。5 she burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起來,跑出了房間。 she sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。 i tried to fight back te

19、ars. /my eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼淚。/ 我的眼里充滿了淚水。8 a frown(皺眉)now stood on his face.他皺起了眉頭。9 they sat there with glum looks on their faces. 他們坐在那里,帶著一臉憂郁。10 the news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.這消息使他臉上蒙上了一層陰影。 he brimmed over with sorrow when.他滿是悲傷 they were immersed in sorrow.他們沉浸在悲痛之中。 these days he was in low spirits.這些日子他情緒低落。4.害怕 :he turned t