如何進(jìn)行概要寫作課件

1、如何進(jìn)行概要寫作1如何進(jìn)行概要寫作2rear-ending 追尾追尾 run off the road crash into treecrash into houseturn overtraffic accidents are dangerous. 如何進(jìn)行概要寫作3reasons: speedingtired drivingdrunk drivingcareless drivingusing cell phones while driving.?如何進(jìn)行概要寫作4topic: using cell phones while driving 1. its a dangerous distrac

2、tion to drivers. 2. it should be forbidden.para 2: argument (論點(diǎn)論點(diǎn)) 1 para 3: argument (論點(diǎn)論點(diǎn)) 2 para 4: suggestionpara 5: conclusiontip1: structure is a guide to find the main pointspara 1: viewpoint (觀點(diǎn)觀點(diǎn)) 如何進(jìn)行概要寫作5para1 cell phones are used everywhere, but on the road they are a dangerous distracti

3、on to drivers and should be forbidden.a facta viewpointpara 1: viewpointtip2: the viewpoint of an argumentative writing （議論文）（議論文）should be included in a summary.如何進(jìn)行概要寫作6point1：cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.main points of the summary如何進(jìn)行

4、概要寫作71. cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers. para 2: argument (論據(jù)論據(jù)) 1 using a not using aon the phoneon the roadunpredictablecarefulits dangerous.its safe.drivers using a phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using.driversattentiondrivingr

5、esult(support)如何進(jìn)行概要寫作8point1：cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.point2：drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. main points of the summary如何進(jìn)行概要寫作9para 3: argument (論據(jù)論據(jù))22. cell ph

6、ones used on the road should be forbidden. at least 1,000 deaths per yearagainst the lawand strictly enforcedlaws are need to forbid the use of cell phones in carsan example：phones used by driversdrunk drivingsimilarly（support)如何進(jìn)行概要寫作10point1：cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction

7、 to drivers and should be forbidden.point2：drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. main points of the summarypoint3：just like drunk driving, california need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.如何進(jìn)行概要寫作11q1：before using a cell

8、phone, what question should drivers ask themselves?para 4: suggestionsuggestion1：suggestion2：is this call really that important?yes.no.drivers need to be more responsible when using cell phones.use a phone wiselynot use a phone（support)如何進(jìn)行概要寫作12point1：cell phones used on the road are a dangerous di

9、straction to drivers and should be forbidden.point2：drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. main points of the summarypoint3：just like drunk driving, california need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.point4：drivers at least

10、need to be more responsible when using cell phones. 如何進(jìn)行概要寫作13para5 cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. as professional racer john andretti says, “driving safely is your first responsibility.” the best road to safety is to just hang up and dr

11、ive.para 5: conclusiona quote (引語(yǔ)引語(yǔ)) tip3: a quote is usually used to support an idea and should be not included in a summary.如何進(jìn)行概要寫作14point1：cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.point2：drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to hav

12、e an accident than those not using a phone. main points of the summarypoint3：just like drunk driving, california need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.point4：drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones. point5：cell phones can be a very important link in emergen

13、cies, but drivers need to use them wisely. the best road to safety is to just hang up and drive. 如何進(jìn)行概要寫作151. cell phones used on the road dangerously distract the drivers and should be banned.skills:1. 詞性轉(zhuǎn)換法 2. 近義替換法 3. 正話反說(shuō)法 4. 語(yǔ)態(tài)互換法 5. 句式變化法 skills of restatement(重述重述): “point1” as an examplepoin

14、t1：cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.2. using cell phones while driving dangerously draw away drivers attention and should not be allowed.3. we should forbid using cell phones on the road for their harmful distraction to drivers.4. drivers sh

15、ould be prevented from using cellphones while driving because they can be dangerously distracted.并列句并列句復(fù)合句復(fù)合句簡(jiǎn)單句簡(jiǎn)單句6. 主語(yǔ)變身法 如何進(jìn)行概要寫作16have a try: work in groups of 4 to create a good summarypoint1：cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.point2：driv

16、ers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. point3：just like drunk driving, california need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.point4：drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones. point5：cell phones can be a ve

17、ry important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. the best road to safety is to just hang up and drive. 如何進(jìn)行概要寫作17factors checking pointscompleteconcisecoherentcorrectobjective2. no details in 4080 words1. cover the main points using your own words 4. no grammatical mistakes5. n

18、o personal opinion3. use transitional words if possible learn to use the checklist: 4c+1o如何進(jìn)行概要寫作18using cell phones while driving can distract the drivers and should be baned. drivers have a higher rate of accidents when use phones. accidents are danger, which include running off a road and crashin

19、g into trees, fences. just like drunk driving, laws are needed to restrict the use of cell phones in cars. drivers should use phones with greater responsibility for safe. in conclusion, cell phones are important in emergencies and should be used wisely. after all, we only have one life at all. (89words)copy original wordsto ensure safe driving, drivers had better not use them. unnecessary detailsno p