英語寫作常見錯誤分析

1、二、語言表達的錯誤從題目或給出的關鍵詞中照搬，不注意單詞在句中所做的成分及大小寫忽視第三人稱單數忽視被動語態(tài)的用法三、語言表達的錯誤重點分析。 1句子結構混亂，出現(xiàn)句子不完整句子結構混亂，出現(xiàn)句子不完整 或或句子成分多余句子成分多余 2 詞性誤用詞性誤用 3主謂不一致主謂不一致 4根據中文逐字硬譯根據中文逐字硬譯5. 名詞可數與不可數的誤用名詞可數與不可數的誤用6.介詞介詞to和不定式符號的混淆和不定式符號的混淆7 .動賓搭配不當動賓搭配不當8. 詞組搭配錯誤詞組搭配錯誤9綜合性語言錯誤綜合性語言錯誤: 有諸如時態(tài)，有諸如時態(tài)，語態(tài)，標點符號，大小寫等方面的錯誤語態(tài)，標點符號，大小寫等方面的錯

2、誤 改為1： 改為2： 改為3： as well as 例Its likely to success if you have confident, diligent and intelligence.改為1： You are likely to succeed if you have confidence, diligence and intelligence. 改為2： Its likely that you will achieve success if you are confident, diligent and intelligent.改為3： 例2You cant success

3、without your efforts.改為1：You cant succeed without your efforts.改為2：You cant obtain success without your efforts.改為3：You cant become successful without your efforts.改為4： Success is no longer out of reach with your great efforts.例3As the development of science and technology,-改為：With the development o

4、f science and technology,- / As the science and technology develop -改為： I usually do some public services for free, trying my best to serve the public.例5 The public service advertisement is benefit to us.改為1: The public service advertisement is beneficial to us. 改為2: The public service advertisement

5、 benefits us.改為3：The public service advertisement is of great benefit to us. 改為4: We benefits a lot from the public service advertisement. 例6Some seniors were died because of without their childrens support.改為：Some seniors died for lack of their childrens support. 例7The old man was hit by a car when

6、 he across the street.改為：The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. 例8The children are supposed to spare some time to company their parents.改為： The children are supposed to spare some time to accompany our parents chatting . 例9With the rapid development of economic, the conditions

7、 of our life is improving.改為： With the rapid development of economy, the conditions of our life are improving.例10They need economical concerned , but also mental concerned.改為： They need not only financial support, but also emotional support .例11With the development of the mordern social, more and mo

8、re families prefer to have one child or even none, which cause the sum of the seniors has been increase quickly.改為： With the development of the modern society, an increasing number of families prefer to have one child or even none, which cause the rapid increase of the sum of the seniors. cause sth.

9、 cause sb. to do sth.例12The fire was because of the wrong of electricity.改為： The fire was due to electric fault.例13The cause of the fire includes peoples careless and dry weather.改為： The cause of the fire includes peoples carelessness and dry weather.例14Although I am not a specialize student of comp

10、uter, I have enough knowledge about computer and I have ever take a part-time summer job as a sellman before.改為： Although I am not a computer major / a student majoring in computer, I have enough knowledge about computer and I have ever taken a part-time summer job as a salesman before.例15Many stude

11、nts choice go to the library in their spare time in order to get more knowledge.改為： Many students choose to go to the library in their spare time in order to update their knowledge. 改為： There are too many things we can do to protect our earth. 改為1：Hard work then enables / helps us to achieve the suc

12、cess. 改為2: We are bound to succeed through hard work.改為: With 改為：. Students should Students should strive to learn knowledge. / Education and Science Institute 改為1: / improve earth environment .改為2: / improve earth environment .改為1: 改為2: 改為1:改為2: 改為3: 改為: 改為1: 改為2: 改為3: Various 改為: 改為: 改為： 1、使用有難度的詞

13、匯；2、使用形容詞修飾名詞，用副詞修飾動詞或整個句子；3、使用被動語態(tài)；4、使用倒裝句；(not only. but also.；only.)5、盡可能地使用名詞，而不是習慣中的動詞和形容詞。There be +主語主語+定語定語+狀語狀語.1. There must be (a variety of) reasons for this.2. There is no point in talking about it about again. (sense/use/good)3.There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extr

14、emely serious problem. 4. There remains nothing (more) (to be done).5. There is a great change (produced in the worlds communications).6. There is something (you dont know).7. There are about 78% of the college students (wanting to further their study after their graduation).名詞化結構名詞化結構1名詞從句轉換成名詞短語名詞

15、從句轉換成名詞短語That the women actively participate in public life causes the change of their role in the society.The womens active participation in public life -2. 表語從句轉換成名詞短語表語從句轉換成名詞短語 One of the positive effects of physical exercise is that it contributes directly to a persons physical health.-is its d

16、irect contribution to a persons physical health.3由由of 連接含有連接含有by 的名詞短語的名詞短語That James Watt invented the steam engine started the Industrial Revolution in the 18th century.The invention of the steam engine by James Watt4. 被動結構轉換成名詞被動結構轉換成名詞It has been suggested that we should spare no effort 不遺余力不遺余力

17、to beautify our environment.A suggestion has been made that-5. 副詞與動詞一起轉換成名詞短語副詞與動詞一起轉換成名詞短語The computer is chiefly characterized by accuracy and quick computation.計算計算The chief characteristic of the computer is -6.介詞短語與動詞一起轉換成名詞短語介詞短語與動詞一起轉換成名詞短語The professor explained the theory of relativity to hi

18、s students in detail.The professor gave his students a detailed explanation of -7. 動詞轉換成介詞短語動詞轉換成介詞短語Some problems are being discussed.Some problems are under discussion.Exercise:He has breakfast quickly.As the science and technology develop, the peoples living standard is on the rise.There is still

19、 room for improving your work.What he said is brief and to the point.1.The money in itself is not important to us.He has a quick breakfast.With the development of science and technology, the peoples living standard is on the rise.There is still room for improvement in your work.His words is brief an

20、d to the point.The money in itself is of no importance to us.平行結構平行結構1. 名詞平行名詞平行The doctor recommended plenty of food, sleep and exercise.2. 形容詞平行形容詞平行Air travel is fast, safe and convenient.3. 副詞平行副詞平行He always speaks English slowly and clearly.4. 非謂語動詞短語平行非謂語動詞短語平行They waited for hours at the airp

21、ort, reading and sleeping.5. 動詞平行動詞平行Lucy and Lily lived, worked and studied together.6. 不定式平行不定式平行 To go ice skating and to go skiing are popular winter sports in North china.7. 動名詞平行動名詞平行 My sister likes dancing, swimming and bicycling.8. 從句平行從句平行 extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on phy

22、sical growth of the children and because extra studies deprive children of the time to play and communicate with their peers, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is absurd不合理的，荒謬的不合理的，荒謬的 to force children to take extra studies after school.Proof reading：To get a job you are satisfied with, it

23、 is not only depends on your ability, how to succeed in a job interview is also very important.Firstly, you should have a good appearance, tidy clothes, making hair well.Her speech is witty詼諧的詼諧的, interesting and she plans it carefully.1.Her ideas were progressive and therefore adopted without doubts. ReferenceTo get a satisfactory job not only depends on your ability, but also on a successful job interview.Firstly, you should have a good appearance, tidy clothes, well-done hair.Her speech is witty詼諧的詼諧的, interesti