《書面表達(dá)解題技能》進(jìn)階演習(xí)

1、書面表達(dá)解題技巧進(jìn)階練習(xí)I. 書面表達(dá)1假設(shè)你是陳輝，Tom邀請(qǐng)你和幾個(gè)朋友周六去他家吃飯，你已經(jīng)接受了邀請(qǐng)，但是 你突然得了重感冒不能去了，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示給Tom寫一封信，表示歉意。(1) 感謝Tom的邀請(qǐng)；(2) 由于發(fā)燒咳嗽，醫(yī)生建議休息幾天；(3) 希望Tom代你向赴約的其他朋友問好。(1) 詞數(shù)100字左右；(2) 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2假定你所在的學(xué)校最近要舉辦一次征文大賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一篇有關(guān) 交友的短文。你燉交友的許法L Yj i午多何題試白己無祛解決.需嬰朋友的幫勵(lì)2.可與朋友分享快樂分擔(dān)憂愁你對(duì)朋友的軒法1在你需要的時(shí)慷決不離開妳2. !&am

2、p;勵(lì)你堅(jiān)持正確的東西少犯錯(cuò)謀結(jié)論注意:(1)文章需包含所有要點(diǎn)，結(jié)論部分可自由發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)：100左右。(3) 開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。In life, we can hardly do without friends.參考答案【答案】1.Dear Tom,Thank you for inviting me to have dinner in your house this Saturday.However, I regret to tell you that I may not be able to keep my promise because I have caught a bad

3、 cold. I' ve been having a high fever and coughing badly. My doctor suggested that Ishould take a rest for several days. I must make an apology to you.It ' s a pity that I will miss such a good chance of enjoying the perfect disheswith so many friends. Please give my best regards to other fr

4、iends who come to the dinner.Yours sincerely,Chen Hui2.In life, we can hardly do without friends. Friends are an important part in our lives. As we know, life is not easy. There are many difficulties and problems we can't overcome through our own efforts alone. We need friends to support and hel

5、p us out of them. Also, we need friends to share our joys and sorrows. Otherwise, we will suffer from loneliness and feel sad. However, there are many kinds of friends. What is true friendship? As the popular saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed. " True friends are those who n

6、ever desert you when they are badly needed. What's more, they will encourage you to stick to what is right and to avoid doing what is wrong or illegal, however stubborn you are.In conclusion, make friends with those who can share our feelings and will suffer from loneliness with us.【解析】1. 本文是一封道

7、歉信，需要注意文中的時(shí)態(tài)及語(yǔ)氣。 本文中應(yīng)該注意在所給的材料的 基礎(chǔ)上，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞， 使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡(jiǎn)單句而造成的單調(diào)感?？忌鷳?yīng)在宏 觀上把握書信體寫作的要求， 如格式、文體等， 寫作段落以三段式為宜， 首段體現(xiàn)問候、 寫信背景等，尾段再次致歉。考生在微觀層面上應(yīng)具體把握寫作的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言，做到句子之間有效的連接，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，多用 doing 及物做主語(yǔ)，句子加上原因、結(jié)果、目的等具體細(xì)節(jié)的解釋、利用簡(jiǎn)單而有效的中文思路擴(kuò)展英文細(xì)節(jié)。2. 根據(jù)提示信息可以判斷文章應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)態(tài)，使用第一人稱。而且文章

8、 需包括三個(gè)方面內(nèi)容，即你對(duì)交友的看法、你對(duì)朋友的看法，最后得出結(jié)論。寫作時(shí)要 根據(jù)表中所列的信息進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象， 以使文章內(nèi)容豐滿。 在寫作時(shí)要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B 接詞把提示信息有效連接起來，使文章語(yǔ)言通順流暢，上下文銜接緊湊。此外，在寫作 時(shí)還要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和多種句式表達(dá)。文章亮點(diǎn)：使用了短語(yǔ)： share our joys and sorrows 分享快樂和悲傷；suffer from Ioneliness 忍受孤寂；encourage sb. to do sth.鼓勵(lì)某人做某事；使用了定語(yǔ)從句： As we know, life is not easy. True friends are those who never desert you when they are badly needed. In conclusion, make friends with those who can share our feelings and will suffer from loneliness with us. 及讓步狀語(yǔ)從句： Wh