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1、1. Go to the students Centre to get your ID card on the very first day of school.2. Open the door. 3. Sit down.4. Stand up.5. What a day! 省略主語的句子省略主語的句子1)The old man likes take a walk in the village after supper.2) I enjoy talk with him over a cup of coffee3) The boy ran to his mother cry. 4) After

2、write the notice, he put it up on the wall. The boy ran to his mother crying. After writing the notice, After he wrote the notice, 一個(gè)句子同時(shí)不能有兩個(gè)謂語一個(gè)句子同時(shí)不能有兩個(gè)謂語1)Those who eat too much will easily ill.2) When he walking in the park, he felt a little tired. 3）When I at school, I studied very hard.Those

3、who eat too much will easily get ill. When he was walking in the park, he felt a little tired. When I was at school, I studied very hard.不要把從句的謂語當(dāng)成句子的謂語不要把從句的謂語當(dāng)成句子的謂語, 或把主句的謂語當(dāng)或把主句的謂語當(dāng)成從句的謂語。成從句的謂語。 如果是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，主句和從句都應(yīng)該如果是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，主句和從句都應(yīng)該分別有自己的主語和謂語。分別有自己的主語和謂語。一一. 不一致不一致(Disagreements)所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致，它還包

4、所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致，它還包括了數(shù)的不一致時(shí)態(tài)不一致及代詞不括了數(shù)的不一致時(shí)態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致等一致等.When one have money, he can do what he want to .Once one has money, he can do what he wants (to do)寫作出現(xiàn)的句子錯(cuò)誤：寫作出現(xiàn)的句子錯(cuò)誤：二二. 修飾語錯(cuò)位修飾語錯(cuò)位(Misplaced Modifiers)英語與漢語不同，同一個(gè)修飾語置于句子不同的位置，句子的含義可能引起變化. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the

5、 world outside the campus.better位置不當(dāng)，應(yīng)置于句末.三三. 懸垂修飾語懸垂修飾語(Dangling Modifiers)所謂懸垂修飾語是指句首的短語與后面句子的邏輯關(guān)系混亂不清. 1.At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 2.To do well in college, good grades are essential.To do well in college, a student needs good grades.When I was ten, my grandfather died.四四. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整句子

6、結(jié)構(gòu)不完整1.There are many people agree to keep pets at home. Although pets may pollute the environment. 2.There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on .五五. 不平衡結(jié)構(gòu)不平衡結(jié)構(gòu) 1. The new house is large, beautiful and has enough rooms for people to live in. 2. There is a

7、great difference between dining out and to have a snack at home. 六六. 指代不清指代不清(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)指代不清主要講的是代詞與被指代的人或物關(guān)系不清，或者先后所用的代詞不一致。1.Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid. We can also know society by serving it ourselves. Mary was friendly to my s

8、ister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.七七. 累贅累贅(Redundancy) 言以簡潔為貴。寫句子沒有一個(gè)多余的詞;寫段落沒有一個(gè)無必要的句子。能用單詞的不用詞組;能用詞組的不用從句或句子。如：In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they nee

9、d.In spite of his laziness, I like him. For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.八八. 不連貫不連貫(Incoherence)不連貫是指一個(gè)句子前言不對后語，或是結(jié)構(gòu)上不暢通。例1. The fresh water, it is the most important thing of the earth.Fresh water is the most important thing in

10、the world.九九. 詞性誤用詞性誤用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)“詞性誤用”常表現(xiàn)為：介詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用等. None can negative the importance of money.None can deny the importance of money.十十. 粘連句粘連句Beijing is a beautiful city, I enjoy living here. There are many ways we get to know the outside world.There are many ways for

11、 us to learn about the outside world. 十漢語式英語十漢語式英語 1. Who will instead of Miss Green? 2. We all against all kinds of terrorists activities. 3. There were 20 people died in the car accident. 4. Dont worry. Your body will get well soon. 5. I was very glad to hear from her letter. 6. The film had begun for 5 minut