河北高二上學(xué)期期中考試寫作讀后續(xù)寫精講課件

1、讀后續(xù)寫Continuation Writing目錄contents01 要求說明，心中有數(shù)02 真題回顧，文本分析03 段首提示，確定思路04信息整理，羅列要點(diǎn)05 范文欣賞，潤色提升01要求說明，心中有數(shù)01要求說明字?jǐn)?shù)續(xù)寫內(nèi)容為150詞左右材料350詞以內(nèi)要求續(xù)寫兩段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)給出體裁記敘文故事類邏輯性較強(qiáng)01寫作要求融洽度高銜接合理語法&詞匯豐富&準(zhǔn)確結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊02真題回顧，文本分析02Thorough reading提煉原文情節(jié)，解讀有效信息原文信息 As the graduation ceremonys class speaker, Verda Tetteh, a senio

2、r at Fitchburg High School, had just finished her speech and taken a seat when the school made an exciting announcement that Verda had been awarded Fitchburg High schools General Excellence Scholarship, valued at $40,000. She had a few moments to reflect as the ceremony continued. Ten minutes later,

3、 she knew what to do. She returned to the platform and apologized for interrupting. Then she made an announcement that shocked the crowd. She refused the scholarship and requested that the funds instead be awarded to a student who needed it more than she did.02Thorough reading提煉原文情節(jié)，解讀有效信息原文信息 “I am

4、 very grateful for this, but I also know that I am not the one who needs this the most,” Verda said.Para1-2 故事情節(jié)已很清晰：畢業(yè)典禮上Verda作為學(xué)生代表講完話入座，這時母校宣布Verda榮獲本校卓越獎學(xué)金（4萬美金）?？墒撬?dāng)場做了一個出乎所有人意料的決定，她重新回到主席臺，宣布自己要把這筆獎金讓給比她更需要這筆錢的學(xué)生。02Thorough reading提煉原文情節(jié)，解讀有效信息原文信息 Her generous gesture shocked the audience, ma

5、de up of her fellow classmates, their families and faculty (全體教員) members. Her mother, Rosemary, loudly cheered her daughter on from the audience.Para3 觀眾都被她這一舉動震驚了。她的母親(Rosemary)在觀眾席為女兒大聲歡呼。(表明母親的態(tài)度是非常支持的。)02Thorough reading提煉原文情節(jié)，解讀有效信息原文信息 Verda is planning on going to Harvard University in the f

6、all as a pre-med (醫(yī)學(xué)院預(yù)科的) student. The straight-A honor student has already been awarded a full scholarship for her Ivy League college education. However, she could have used her schools scholarship to help pay for additional expenses such as books, computers and living expenses.Para4 成績?nèi)珒?yōu)的Verda打算去哈

7、佛，這位優(yōu)等生也已經(jīng)獲得了常春藤盟校的全額獎學(xué)金。即便如此，家庭并不富裕的她本可以利用母校給的這筆獎學(xué)金來支付書本費(fèi)、電腦費(fèi)和生活費(fèi)等額外費(fèi)用的。(自己不是不需要錢，但仍然做出了這個無私的決定，去幫助別人。)02Thorough reading提煉原文情節(jié)，解讀有效信息原文信息 Verda knew, though, just how important a college scholarship is to a student whose family is financially struggling. Her mother earned her bachelors degree from

8、 a local community college at age 47, while raising her four children and holding down two jobs to support her family. Her mothers determination to get an education despite her financial hardship inspired the young womans selfless decision. She wanted the funds to go to a student pursuing a communit

9、y college degree, just as her mother once had. Para5 母親47歲帶著四個孩子，打兩份工，堅(jiān)持考社區(qū)大學(xué)的經(jīng)歷，讓Verda明白獎學(xué)金對于一個家庭困難的學(xué)生來說，是多么重要。正是母親困境求學(xué)，重視教育的決心激發(fā)了她，讓她做出了這個無私的決定。(深受母親的影響，兩方面，一個是對教育的重視，一個是愛心激發(fā)，要去幫助困難中求學(xué)的人。)02Thorough reading提煉原文情節(jié)，解讀有效信息原文信息 That day, Rosemary took pride in her daughter. “Now Im 100% sure she is re

10、ady to go into the world on her own,” she said.Para5 母親為女兒驕傲，確信女兒是真的長大了。03段首提示，確定思路優(yōu)秀課件PPT公開課優(yōu)質(zhì)課PPT課件讀后續(xù)寫（以浙江高考題為例）(共25張PPT)03續(xù)寫段落提示語解析，確定寫作思路提示語一：Verda also admired her mother and kept in mind what her mother taught her. _ 解析：意思是“Verda也很欽佩母親，并且牢記母親的教誨?！蹦敲矗赣H有什么值得欽佩的地方？又教給了她什么？母親說過什么，做過什么，是怎樣影響Verda

11、的。因此，這一段就要圍繞“What exactly did her mother teach her?”來寫，把母親重視教育的思想(教育可以改變命運(yùn)，可以爭取更多人生機(jī)會等)，要去幫助有困難的人的思想都包含進(jìn)來。03續(xù)寫段落提示語解析，確定寫作思路提示語二：The young woman expressed no regrets over her decision to give away the money. _ 解析：意思是“年輕的Verda說自己捐出這筆錢，一點(diǎn)兒也不后悔?！边@段的主體不再是母親，而是“the young woman”，也就是Verda, 那么，她捐出這筆錢之后，內(nèi)心是怎

12、么想的，又說了什么(What did Verda say about it?) 她對未來有哪些期許？我們要把結(jié)尾升華為一種正能量的傳遞，一個溫情的結(jié)局。要揭示文章主旨，挖掘深度思想。04信息整理，羅列要點(diǎn)04信息整理，列出寫作要點(diǎn)tip3tip1tip2寫作體裁：夾敘夾議寫作時態(tài)：一般過去時寫作篇幅：每段平均75個詞，大概6句話tip4寫作時間：25-28分鐘04寫作要點(diǎn)Verdas mother always stressed to her the importance of having an education.1. 母親總是對Verda強(qiáng)調(diào)教育的重要性。emphasized the i

13、mportant role ofplaced emphasis onattached great significance tohighlighted the value of04寫作要點(diǎn)2. Verda常被教導(dǎo)，教育能給她提供更好的機(jī)會。Verda was taught that education could provide her with better chances.offer her better opportunitiesbring her a better chance04寫作要點(diǎn)3. 母親教導(dǎo)她，她應(yīng)該為自己樹立目標(biāo)，并盡最大努力去實(shí)現(xiàn)它。Her mother taught

14、her that / She was taught thatshe should set up/build up/establish a goal for herself and try her best to pursue/seek/achieve it.04寫作要點(diǎn)4.另外，還要有一顆善良的心，幫助那些需要幫助的人。In addition/Moreover/Whats more/Besides/Furthermore（表示遞進(jìn)或補(bǔ)充的過度詞）she should have a kind heart, and help those who needed help/in need.04寫作要點(diǎn)

15、5. 她自強(qiáng)不息，努力實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢想，并去幫助盡可能多的人。She strived to achieve her dreams and help as many people as possible.struggled to realizeworked hard to make her dream come true04寫作要點(diǎn)6.她很高興看到這些錢可以幫助那些需要幫助的人。She was happy to see the money could help those who needed help.was excited/glad to seeIt delighted her that04寫

16、作要點(diǎn)7. 她希望她所做的能改變他們的生活。She hoped/wished/expected that the things that she did could change their life.what she did（主語從句）04寫作要點(diǎn)8.她很感激母親支持她的決定。She was thankful to her mother for supporting her decision.was grateful that her mother supported her decision.She really appreciated that04寫作要點(diǎn)9. 校長對他的學(xué)生贊不絕口，認(rèn)

17、為Verda將是一位偉大的女性。The headmaster had high praise for his student and thought Verda would be a great woman.The headmaster spoke highly ofThe headmaster praisedVerda won high praise from05范文欣賞，潤色提升Verda also admired her mother and kept in mind what her mother taught her. Her mother always impressed the

18、importance of having an education on her daughter. Verda was taught that education would offer her better opportunities. Her mother taught her that she should set up a goal for herself and try her best to seek it. In addition, she ought to have a kind heart and help those who need help. She never forgot the valuable life lessons. She struggled to work hard to achieve he