高三英語(yǔ)寫作課件

1、直溪高中高三英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)專題書面表達(dá)Presentation 最近，國(guó)家教育部要求中小學(xué)生參加冬季長(zhǎng)跑活動(dòng)：建議小學(xué)生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。對(duì)此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反對(duì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下材料，寫一篇以“Should we give more attention to students health or grades?”為題的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。支持方的理由反?duì)方的理由你的看法及理由1可以促進(jìn)對(duì)體育的重視；2可以增強(qiáng)學(xué)生的體魄；3更有利于提高學(xué)習(xí)效率。1學(xué)生以學(xué)習(xí)為主，考試成績(jī)決定個(gè)人前途；2過(guò)高的要求學(xué)生難以達(dá)到；3長(zhǎng)跑可能引起感冒或傷害。(考生自行發(fā)揮23點(diǎn)

2、)注意：1詞數(shù)150左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，設(shè)當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。Should we give more attention to students health or grades?The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity. . 如何算是一篇好文章？ 1.覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn) 2. 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文

3、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊詞匯,句型 （高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）要點(diǎn)全連接詞Should we give more attention to students health or grades? The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity. It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day, junior sch

4、ool students, 1,500 and senior school students, 2,000.Different people always offer various views. Some people say yes to this activity. They think, for one thing, it can make people pay more attention to physical education; for another, running can improve students health and help them study effici

5、ently so they can have good grades. However, others hold opposite opinions about the activity. They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future depends on their grades in their subjects. Meanwhile, many cant meet the high requirements. Whats worse, some will suffer

6、 cold and injuries. In my opinion, its all right for schools to care about students health and carry out the activity step by step. Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.抄改連擴(kuò)抓審書面表達(dá)書面表達(dá)六步法審題抓要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句連句成文查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò)謄寫對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)展開議論寫作這種題型一般會(huì)給出兩個(gè)或兩個(gè)以上的對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)，要求考生發(fā)表自己的看法或見解。這類題型的基本模式可分三段：1、有人認(rèn)為2、有人認(rèn)為3、我的看法是（或雙

7、方討論沒(méi)有得取一致意見）但有時(shí)也可給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，要求考生持反方意見，這類題型基本模式為兩段：1、有人認(rèn)為2、我的看法是1.Different people always offer various answers when they are asked about 2.Something has already become a hot topic among people in the our school, particularly among the.3.Defferent people have different opinions on something. 下面介紹怎樣寫這類題型的

8、作文。作文前面一般加上個(gè)引子，但是引子不要過(guò)長(zhǎng)?，F(xiàn)在簡(jiǎn)單介紹各段常用的一些重點(diǎn)句型。引子句型：第一段：1.Some people agree to NO. One, because they usually think that .In the meantime , . In addition.2.Some people think that A is right because .3.Some people suggest / say that . At the same time they point out the fact that.Whats more.4.Some people p

9、refer NO. One. In their opinion A . In addition .第二段：1.On the other hand, some people hold that B is right. They think .2.But many more people dont agree with them. They prefer B. They say that.The reason is that.3.On the contrary, some people hold that .4.Some people think that B is better. It is c

10、lear that. Whats more, .Also. 在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列舉等方式展開段落。第三段：提出自己的見解并且加以論證1.In my opinion B is better than A. There is no doubt that .2.I support A. The reason goes as follows.3.As far as I am concerned, I agree to the latter. First.Second. Finally.4.It is likely that people will go on arguing over t

11、hese questions. I think that everything has both its positive and negative sides. We should keep an open mind. 5.People will continue to argue over the questions, I think wed better keep an open mind because everything has two sides. It all relies on. 6.Of these two ways of .I prefer.First of all,.

12、Second,. 在寫作中除了使用以上談到的重點(diǎn)句型外，還應(yīng)該注意文章的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)和五種過(guò)渡詞的使用。例如： 1.表示舉例時(shí)使用： for example, for instance, take .for example, another example of, here are a few examples,namely等。 2.表示列舉時(shí)使用： first, second, third.finally; to begin with, for one thing, for another等。 3.表示歸納總結(jié)時(shí)使用： in a word, in all, to sum up, thus, in

13、 brief, in short等。 4.要加強(qiáng)句與句之間的連貫時(shí)使用：in addition ,whats more ,furthermore, on top of that, besides, moreover等。 5.表示轉(zhuǎn)折時(shí)使用： however, while, on the contrary等。1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句)3. He did not know what had happe

14、ned until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虛擬語(yǔ)氣）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Have a tryWeak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had

15、happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過(guò)去分詞)6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)7.I wont believe what he says. （使用狀語(yǔ)從句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）9

16、He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll mak

17、e rapid progress.Practice 現(xiàn)在正是春暖花開春游時(shí)節(jié)。你校學(xué)生會(huì)以“高三學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動(dòng)”為題，向高三學(xué)生作調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的調(diào)查結(jié)果，以“Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?”為題，寫一篇短文，上交學(xué)生會(huì)。65%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為35%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為1、應(yīng)該春游1、不應(yīng)該春游2、接觸大自然，呼吸新鮮空氣，有利于健康。2、高考臨近，沒(méi)有心情玩。3、活動(dòng)使精神放松，大腦休息，有利于學(xué)習(xí)。3、春游耽誤學(xué)習(xí)。注意：1、短文標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2、詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)150左右。3、參考詞匯：高考：co

18、llege entrance examination.Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion on whether Senior 3 students should go spring outing. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students,about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.Th

19、ey think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their studies. On the other hand , about 35% students are against the idea

20、. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Homework 最近，你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)紙組織的一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是：公園要

21、不要收門票？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論的情況。60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為1、不應(yīng)收門票2、公園是公從休閑的地方3、如收門票，需建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象1、應(yīng)收門票，但票價(jià)不宜高2、支付園林工人工資3、購(gòu)新花木注意：1、信的開頭已為你寫好。 2、詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)150左右 3、參考詞匯：門票entrance fee.Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Yours truly, Li HuaDear Editor, Im writing to tell you