英語寫訓(xùn)練記敘文課件

1、 讀寫任務(wù)寫作指導(dǎo)記敘文 Narration Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（釣魚竿） with bait（魚餌）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours l

2、ater, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾東西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “

3、About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇約150字的短文。 Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and w

4、aited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收釣魚線）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realiz

5、ed that the secret of success was patience. 寫作內(nèi)容1) 以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)；2) 然后以約120個(gè)詞寫一篇記敘文，描寫你認(rèn)識(shí)到耐心的重要性的一次經(jīng)歷，并包括以下要點(diǎn)：a) 敘述你認(rèn)識(shí)到耐心的重要性的一次真實(shí)或虛構(gòu)的經(jīng)歷；（一定要有結(jié)果）b)你是如何認(rèn)識(shí)到耐心的重要性的； c) 耐心對(duì)你的生活、學(xué)習(xí)有什么影響。寫作要求(1) 可以參照閱讀材料的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，組織故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；(2) 標(biāo)題自定。讀A narrative(記敘文).寫A narrative(記敘文). 寫作模板四部曲敘事類文章的寫作模板：1.Title (題目）1

6、分 有時(shí)不一定要求寫標(biāo)題2. Summary (概要 約30-40個(gè)詞) 5分3. Body (正文) 19分 1) A transitional sentence (過渡句引出例子) 2) An example and so on (舉一個(gè)相同主題的例子,再按題目要求談感受或 發(fā)表看法等)4. Ending (結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題)What should we pay attention to when writing a title?第一步. TitleSuggestions:What should we pay attention to when writing a title?We should

7、use a noun phrase or a sentence as a title.2.The first letter of every word in a title should be written in a capital(大寫) letter except articles(冠詞), prepositions(介詞) and conjunctions(連詞).3. The number of a title had better not be more than 10 words.寫作內(nèi)容1) 以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)；2) 然后以約120個(gè)詞寫一篇記敘文，描寫你認(rèn)識(shí)到耐心的重

8、要性的一次經(jīng)歷，并包括以下要點(diǎn)：a) 敘述你認(rèn)識(shí)到耐心的重要性的一次真實(shí)或虛構(gòu)的經(jīng)歷；（一定要有結(jié)果）b)你是如何認(rèn)識(shí)到耐心的重要性的； c) 耐心對(duì)你的生活、學(xué)習(xí)有什么影響。寫作要求(1) 可以參照閱讀材料的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，組織故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；(2) 標(biāo)題自定。 Whats the title that we should use?1.Patience Is Important.2 The Important of Patience.3 How Importance Patience Is.4 Patience Is the Secret of Success.5 The Key

9、 to Success Patience summary?WritingHow to write a 第二步 summary速讀文章，找出要素：When (時(shí)間)： Where (地點(diǎn))：Who (人物)：What (事件)How (發(fā)展經(jīng)過）Result (結(jié)果)：What to learn (如篇末有點(diǎn)題語句，或升華主題，或點(diǎn)明給人們的啟示，或經(jīng)念教訓(xùn)）skills Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a

10、lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（釣魚竿） with bait（魚餌）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾東西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old m

11、an sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Do

12、nt consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇約150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（釣魚竿） with bait（魚餌

13、）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾東西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “

14、Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇約150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they w

15、ould rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（釣魚竿） with bait（魚餌）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began

16、 to pack up my stuff（收拾東西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt

17、believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇約150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of min

18、e. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（釣魚竿） with bait（魚餌）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾東西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surp

19、rise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring s

20、port. Just enjoy it.”閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇約150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（釣魚竿） with bait（魚餌）, I sat down on the bank of t

21、he lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾東西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have y

22、ou sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇約150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are e

23、mbarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（釣魚竿） with bait（魚餌）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾東西）, pr

24、eparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its ver

25、y important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇約150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing.

26、 After setting up my fishing rod（釣魚竿） with bait（魚餌）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾東西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of f

27、ish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”閱讀下面的短文，然

28、后按要求寫一篇約150字的短文。 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（釣魚竿） with bait（魚餌）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later,

29、I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾東西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About

30、four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇約150字的短文。 Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited

31、for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收釣魚線）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized tha

32、t the secret of success was patience. Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收釣魚線）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. I

33、n the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience. Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touc

34、h the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收釣魚線）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.

35、Summary 1. Focus on main ideas and omit(省去) examples, details.(注重大意，省去詳細(xì)的例子、細(xì)節(jié)) 2. Do not include your own opinion, but be sure to use your own words. .(不能添加自己的見 解，但是要用自己的語言概括） 3. Write it in the third person . （第三人稱） 4.Control the number of words about 30.(25- 40個(gè)字之內(nèi)不會(huì)造成扣分) 5. How to check the summ

36、ary:看要點(diǎn)看人稱看時(shí)態(tài)看語法看結(jié)構(gòu)2. How to summarize a story:Skill: Combination of five elements要素串聯(lián)法 WhatWhoWhenWhereResult What to learn(主題) was taught a lesson by an old manthe writer and an old manwhen going fishing last Sundayon the bank of the lakePatience is important.Patience is the secret of success. cau

37、ght some fish套用語句記敘文的摘要開頭語:1The passage mainly tells us the writers experience of 2.The writer tells us his experience of 3 The story/passage is about4 The writer/author tells us about.5 The story mainly tells us that主題句 + 支撐句 故事的寫作目的/ 主題（一句）+故事大意（兩三句） In this passage, the writer mainly tells us his

38、 experience of fishing and was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man. He knew the importance of patience and finally got some fish.(33 words）my version for the summary過渡句 + 經(jīng)歷 + 觀點(diǎn)觀點(diǎn)：教育意義、故事告訴我們什么道理，務(wù)必要和材料的一致。第三步 正文敘述類似經(jīng)歷過渡句1.This story reminds me of a similar experience of mine.2.I had a sim

39、ilar experience. 3.I once had a similar experience.4. I also had the same experience as the writer. 5.This made me think of my own experience.+引出個(gè)人經(jīng)歷的標(biāo)志性句子：.Once ,I .One day,.On a Sunday morning last summer, . Last year , 第四步 Ending （總結(jié)句，呼應(yīng)主題）總結(jié)句開頭語：1 To sum up/In short/In conclusion/All in all 總之2.From the above two stories, we can see that+(主題）3.Now, whenever I ，Ill think of + 4 From then on, I All in all, patience is very important.（點(diǎn)題） Everyone should have patience to do everything. My version本文寫作框架： The passage mainly tells us the experience of This story reminds m