最新上海高三英語一模作文范文匯編

1、學習好資料更多精品文檔更多精品文檔2018年高三一模作文匯編黃浦區(qū)2017年已接近尾聲，還記得年初你為自己定下的小目標嗎？不知你是否實現(xiàn)了你的小目標？發(fā)一個微信朋友圈來回顧一下吧（文中請不要出現(xiàn)真實的校名人名）。你的朋友圈文字內(nèi)容需包括：你的2017年度小目標；你為實現(xiàn)年度小目標所作的努力；你實現(xiàn)（或沒有實現(xiàn)）年度小目標的經(jīng)驗總結(jié)。范文：Mynewyearsresolutionfor2017wasthatIshouldbeabletocommunicatewithforeignpeopleinEnglish.Toachievethisgoal,IhadaskedmyEnglishteacher

2、forhelp.Accordingtohersuggestions,Imadeupaplan.Firstly,IstartedwithsimplyreadingEnglisharticlesandfoundmanypronunciationerrorsinmyreadingafterlisteningtothevideotapeofitsrecording.Then,Itriedtolearnphoneticsandpracticeonesyllableafteranotheragainandagain.Istartedwithasingleword,thenaphrase,asentence

3、,aparagraphandfinallythewholepassage.After3-monthpractice,Iwasabletoreadanarticlefluentlywithoutmakinganymistakesinpronunciation.Ifelthappy.Next,Ipracticedmylistening.Bylisteningtoapassagefourtimes,Irequiredmyselftotakeitdownwithoutspellingerrorsoranyinformationblank.Lastbutnotleast,Iinstalledanappc

4、alledShanbeiOralEnglishonmyphonetopracticebothmylisteningandspeaking.Itslikehavingconversationswitharobot.Ihadtounderstwhatitsaidtomeandansweritsquestionsaccordingly.Afterpracticingforalmost8months,IhadmyfirsttalkingsessionwithanAmericanteacherinourschool.Iwasproudofmyself.WhatIhavelearntfromthisexp

5、erieneeissomethingasasayinggoes:nopainnogain.Thoughtheprocessoflearningcouldbedullandtiring,itsworthalltheeffortsafterIachievedmygoal.EvenifIdidnpartofmylife.閱卷作文8+8+4=20Thewonderfulyearof2017isdrawingtoanend.IrememberthatIsetanannualgoaltokeepfitatthebeginningof2017,sincestayinghealthyiscrucialtoen

6、suringmystudy,thusbetterpreparemyselfforGaokao.Toachievemygoalofkeepingfit,herearesomeeffortsIvetakenthroughouttheyear.Ontheveryfof2017,IdownloadedafitnessappcalledKeep.Followingthefitnessinstructionstheappoffered,IexercisedeveryothernightbeforeIgotobed.Also,IdidsomeresearchintothedailynutritionInee

7、dinordertostayhealthybothphysicallyandmentally,afterwhichIdevisedamoderatedietingplan.Apartfromtheabove,Ifamilymembersandfriendstojoinmesothatwecanencourageeachotherandexchangefitnessexperienee.Sofar,therecordshownonmyfitnessappshowsthatIvedonewellthisyear,reachingarecordhighotrainingtimesintotal.Al

8、thoughattimesIfeltlikegivingupbecauseoftoomuchstudypressureandlimitedtime,ImgladIhavestucktomyplan.ItseemstomethatanythingispossibleifIthrowinallofmyenergyandpassion,andmostofall,perseveranee.Somerulesapplytostudy.SoIhopeIwillkeepsuchpassionandstrengthtodomybestinthecoming2018.（237words）點評：文本結(jié)構(gòu)段落清晰，

9、符合作文題目要求。1）第一段明確告知自己的年度小目標是什么；2）第二段有總起句，段落中有清晰的標記詞（如also,apartfrom）告知讀者自己所做的努力，且努力的行為都非常具體。3）第三段對經(jīng)驗的總結(jié)可以再和第二段的三個努力匹配些，a.借助科技的力量（app）；b.借助科學的力量（didresearchintothedailynutrition）;c.組團抗擊惰性。2在語言表達能力比較強的基礎(chǔ)上，可以考慮文字的進一步精煉。是否有“廢話”？字數(shù)建議不超過200（此學生語言能力強，中等學生160左右即可）。精練而準確的表達也是思維和表達功力的體現(xiàn)。7+8+4=19Greetingfromthe

10、endof2017!Itsnowthetimetoconcludeouryearlygoalsagain.Onthenewyearsetuptwogoalsfortheyear:togetterbettergradesandtoloseweightandIrproudtoannouncethatIveaccomplishedthefirstone.Torealizethegoals,muchefforthasbeenputinthroughouttheyear.Firstofall,Ichangedmyattitudestowardsvarioussubjects.Ivespentmoreti

11、meonthem,asyoumightalreadyknow,andtrytofindmyownstrengthandweaknessesandstrivedhardtoovercomemyweakpoints.Inaddition,IvefoundmyownpaceofstudyiIregardasthemostpreciousrewardofthisyearseffort.Secondly,Ibegantotakeamoreactivepartinsportsyear.ItookeveryopportunityIhavetoexercise,andtakesportslessonsatag

12、ymnearmyapartment.ThoughIhaventlosemuchweight,Ifeelmyselfmuchhealthierthaneverbefore.ToconcludehowIvemadetheseprogress,herecomesmyyearsmotto:nopains,nogains.Nomatterhowharditmightbe,sticktothegoalandneverquit,andneverdreamofshortcutstosuccess.Soifyouwanttoachievesomething,justtryhard,nomatterwhatthe

13、resultmightbe,youresurelygoingtobenefitfromtheprocluckeveryone,andIwishyouahappy,successfulnewyearin2018!(241words)點評：1，有讀者意識，明確知曉是在朋友圈發(fā)的年度總結(jié)，所以開頭結(jié)尾很應景。2，段落結(jié)構(gòu)總體比較清晰，符合作文題目要求。第一段告知了自己的兩個年度目標。第二段中有總體句、標記詞(如：firstofall,inaddition)，方便讀者閱讀。但總體表達都比較含糊，建議可以更加清晰化具體化(改變的行為不具體是因為目標不具體導致的)；特別是第二點，如果學生把目標定位，今年我

14、要參加多少節(jié)健身課，或者我要完成多少公里的跑步，那么行為可以更具體，對是否可以達到自己年度目標的檢測也可以更明確。第三段的經(jīng)驗總結(jié)與之前努力的匹配度不高。如果要寫nopains,nogains，那么第二段里應該有具體的自己在遭遇瓶頸或者難以堅持的時候是如何咬牙堅持下來的。Goodluck建議可以另起一段。3，文本字數(shù)偏長。7+6+3=16Atthebeginningofthisyear,Ihavemadeupmymindtoachieveagoal.ThatwasIhopedthatIcouldlosemyweight.Withthepassingby,Ihaveachievedmygoal.

15、Thefollowingaresomeofmyconclusionofthisobjective.Toreachmyobjective,Iworkedoutaseriesofplans.Tobeginwith,Idesignedahealthydietmenu,whichexcludedunhealthyfoodsthatIwasfondofbefore.Thatsthebasicoflosingweight.Secondly,Iwenttoparsportingplacesregularlytodovarioussports.Asweallknow,themoreexerciseyoudo,

16、themoreheatsyouwillconsume.Lastbutnotleast,Itookanactivepartineverykindsofschoolactivitywhichcannotonlyhelpmeloseweightbutalsoenrichmylife.Fromthisexperience,Iconcludethatonceyouhaveagoal,youshouldsticktoeveryhardshipsothatyoumayreachthemountaintop.Theprocessmaybefullofdifficultiesandyouarelikelywan

17、ttogiveup.Goahead,andthenyouwillfindthereisnothingcanhitdownyou.(191words)點評：1，段落結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰，符合作文題目要求。第二段中的標記詞(tobeginwith,secondly,lastbutnotleast)不恰當。第三個努力的行為(Itookanactivepartineverykindsofschoolactivitywhichcannotonlyhelpmeloseweightbutalsoenrichmylife.)的內(nèi)容不恰當，部分與主題無關(guān)(如：enrichmylife)。第三段的總結(jié)toogeneral

18、,基本與第二段的努力行為沒有關(guān)系。根據(jù)第二段的內(nèi)容，經(jīng)驗應該是：管住嘴，邁開腿。字數(shù)偏多,建議160左右。5+6+2=13Attheendof2017,IcanthelpthinkingtheaimwhatIhavesetaboutmakingagreatprofessinmathbeforethe2017come.Mathisaterribleformetostudywell.Tostudymathwell,asIfirmlybelieve,onlybypracticingmore,canIgainagoodmark.Inordertorealizethisaim,Igetupearlier

19、everydaysothatIcanhavemoretimetodothemathexercise.Iaskteachermanyquestionsaboutthemath.Mymotheralwaysencouragemetostudymathwhenitcomestotheproblemofmath.Ialwaysfeelnervous,becauseIthinkitisverydifficultformetostudymathwell.ButbeingencouragedbytheparentsandteacherIhaveconfidence.Finally,Irealizedit.I

20、wanttosharemyexperiencetothestudentswhichhavethesameproblemasme.Practicemakesperfect.Ifwewantgainagoodmarkweshouldpracticemore.(162words)點評：1,涵蓋了作文題目要求的三個部分。第二段的內(nèi)容需要重新梳理，做了三個努力：a每天早起做數(shù)學題目；b.有問題勤問老師；c.心理焦慮時向媽媽傾訴（要說我做了什么，而不是文中Mymotheralwaysencouragemetostudymathwhenitcomestotheproblemofmath.）。3，由此，第三段

21、的經(jīng)驗總結(jié)是：a.practicemakesperfect；b.多向他人求助4+4+1=9Theyearof2017willbeover.Ialwaysthinkitisayearwithmyambition.Istillremberthedaywhichisthefirstof2017.OnthatdayIpraiedIcouldgethigherscoresinthetest.Imademyplantogetclosetothetopoftherank.Forthesakeofgoodmarks,whatImusthaveisaseriousattitude.Itwasthemostimp

22、ortantthingsformetoinsisttheplan.IdecidedtoreadbooksofEnglish.Itwasthemostdifficultsubjectforme.Irecitedthewordsandvocabularydaybyday.Andthereadingisananotherproblem.BecauseofthelackofvocabularyIcouldntunderstandthepassageclearly.IstartedreadingtheEnglishlessonsineverymorning.ThatsIcouldneverforget.

23、AlthoughIstillnotgetmyplan,Istillwanttogethigherscoreinnextexam.Itwasmyambition,IbelieveIcandoitnextyear.Eventhoughthelifeistoughtome.（179words）點評：1，結(jié)構(gòu)性缺失，沒有“經(jīng)驗總結(jié)”。2，第二段的內(nèi)容需要重新梳理。a.每天背多少單詞；b.每天早晨讀多少時間英語；c.每周（或每兩周或每個月）讀1本英語書。2.普陀區(qū)學校圖書館優(yōu)美的學習環(huán)境和豐富的文獻資源為學生們綜合素質(zhì)的提升提供了良好的平臺。為了進一步提高圖書館的服務水平，圖書館現(xiàn)向?qū)W生們征集建議。假如

24、你是李華，寫信給圖書館負責人對圖書館的現(xiàn)狀進行分析，并就此提出一些實用性的改進建議。DearSir,Inresponsetoyourcollectingsuggestionstofurtherimproveourschoollibrarysservicequality,Iamwritingtoputforwardmyhumbleadvice,hopingtobeofsomevalue.Ourschoollibrary,withbeautifulenvironmentandawiderangeofbooksandreferencematerials,servesasagoldenplatform

25、topromotestudentsoverallability.However,therearestillsomeproblemsremainingunsolved.Theavailableseatsarealwaystight,somevacantonesareoccupiedbystudentswiththeirpersonalstuffandtomakethingsevenworse,someofthemdonotappearinthelibraryatall.Besides,sometimesitisnoisybecausethediscussionareaisnotseparated

26、,whichmakesstudentswhilelearninghardtoconcentrate.Also,thenetworkinourlabdoesntworkwellthatitsnoteasytohavewhDsnsset（alitcollectinginformationonline.Fortheabovesituation,Isuggestanexclusiveroomshouldbeappointedasameetingroomwherestudentsareallowedtodiscuss.Moreover,rulesshouldbemadeabouttheusageofth

27、eseatsthatifonepersonleaveshisseatover20minutes,theseatcanbeavailabletoothers.Andifpossible,putsomefundtoupdateourexistingnetwork.Iwouldbesogladifmyadviceisadopted.Iappreciateyourdevotiontotheconstructionofourlibraryandmayourlibrarybebetterandbetter.SincerelyyoursLiHua徐匯區(qū))。你是否同意這一說俗話說“萬事開頭難”(Allthin

28、gsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.法？請用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1.你對這句俗語的理解；學習-好資料學習-好資料更多精品文檔更多精品文檔2.結(jié)合生活中一個具體事例加以說明。注意：請勿透露本人真實姓名和學校名稱。范文1【上中一模最高分20分】Asanoldsayinggoes,“Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.Thewidespreadn”tionrevealsthetruththatwearelikelytoencountersetbackswhenwestarttodosomethingbutifwefaceth

29、emwithperseveraneeanddetermination,wewillfindtherestoftheworkeasier.Personally,Iamstronglyinfavouroftheproverbandmyownexperiencecanwellserveascaseinpoint.WhenIwasaSeniorOnestudent,Imadeupmymindtosetupasciencefictioncommunityinourschool.Ithoughtitwouldbeapieceofcake,butthefirstfewweeksfollowingmydeci

30、sionturnedouttough.Tomydisappointment,fewstudentsshowedinterestinthecommunity.Filledwiththebitternessoffailure,Iwasalmostgoingtogiveupbutthebottomofmyhearturgedmetokeepcalmandgoon.Afterweeksofstruggleandeverypossiblemeanstried,Imanagedtofindseveralmembersandoncewestartedtoholdactivities,morestudents

31、becameinterestedandjoinedourcommunity.Whatcanbelearntfrommyexperienceisthatperseverancecarriestrueweightinourpursuitofsuccess.Lifeisneverlikethosefairytalesandweinrealityalltendtomeetfrustrationsandsetbacksinourlives.Trickyasthesituationmightseeminthebeginning,wemustalwaysbearinmindthat“Everycloudha

32、sasilverlining”andouieffortswontgoinvain.Nevertheless,ifwegiveuphalfway,chancesarethatwellneverseeththedifficultiesandhewhoiseasilybeatentothegroundbyhardshipiscertaintoendupachievenothing.Tosumup,thesaying“Ajlstahdifficultbeforetheyareeasy”usaperfectreminderthatthingsallseemtoughatthebeginning.Face

33、dwithdifficulties,weshouldcheerupandworkwithperseverance.Thus,successisboundtobewithinarms9reac+.2)(334words)范文2Itissaidthat:allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyreeasy”,Icouldntagreewithitmore.Lnothingcanbeachievedwitheaseuniessyouhavethequalityofdevotionandperseverance.OnceIwentfishingwithmyfather.Initi

34、ally,Iwasveryexcitedandfullofconfidence,figuringhardcanitbe?Youjustsitthereandwaitforthefishtobite.Itsapieceofcake.Howe、satthereforalmostonehour,yetIgotnothing.SoonIwasdistraughtandimpatient.JustwhenIwasabouttoquit,myfatherturnedaroundandsaid,“Befocusedandwait.”Havingnothingelsetodo,Ididwhathesaid.I

35、calrmyselfdownandre-concentratedonthepole.Twohourslater,Igainedmyreward.Theexperiencehasindeedtaughtmesomething.Thatisallthingsaredifficultbeforetheyyoudevoteyourselfandhangon,youllsucceed.范文3Theoldsayinggoeslike“allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy,”whichsuggeststhatthneedsgothroughisthebeginning

36、ofatask.Asforme,Isimplyholdtheoppositeopinion.Personally.Ibelievethatitsalwayseasytonbuthardtocarryitoutstrictly.Becauseofthecommonpassionatthebeginning,effortsarewillinglymade.Nevertheless,itisperseverancethatisneededtocompleteit.ThetopicnaturallyremindsmeofthedayswhenIstruggledforphysicalexaminati

37、on,inwhichIneedtogetahighscoretobeaddictedtomydreaminghighschool.ImakeupmymindfirmlythreemonthsbeforetheexamthatIwouldgojoggingeverynightandkeptondoingsoforonemonth.Whentheinitialpassionfadedandthetirednessstrokemeeveryevening.Iwassoeagertotakeabreathfromtheexhaustedtrainingandalmostgaveuptheplan.It

38、wasthestrong-willpowerthatkeptmegoingon.Thisunforgettableexperiencetaughtmetheimportanceofperseverance,whichconfirmsmethatthingsareespeciallydifficultinthemiddlestage.范文4Asthefamoussayinggoes“Allthingsaredifferentbeforetheyareeasy.”Frommyperspectivemeansthatwereallinexperieneedandmightmeetnumerousfr

39、ustrationsbeforehandlingthetaskwell.Thereisnoexceptionthatwehavetogothroughacertainperiodtofamiliarizeourselveswiththepractice,duringwhichtheperspectiveismostrequired.Takemyselfasanexample,onceIwasassignedtodeliveraspeechonmyEnglishlearningmethod.NeverhadIgotsuchexperiencebefore,Iwastotallyoverwhelm

40、edbythetask.Despitetheshynessandlackinconfidenee,Iknowitclearthatthecapabilityofexpressingoneselftothepublicisofgreatimportanceinfuturework.Therefore,Istartedtopracticetryingtokeepoffnervousness.IlookedoutforvideosonTEDtomusic,thegestureofspeakersandspokealoudbeforemyparents.Thankstothesehardships,I

41、managedtogiveasatisfyingspeech.OnemustbeequippedwithenduranceandfaithfuInessduringthecourseofexploration.Fewofusareborntobegenius.楊浦區(qū)馬拉松(marathon)比賽需要志愿者發(fā)放礦泉水，學校校慶需要招募引導員。請你從中選取一個感興趣的志愿者崗位，寫信給負責老師完成報名，并在信中具體談談你的理由。范文1Dearsir,Hearingthatthemarathonmatchandschoolcelebrationneedalotofvolunteersandguide

42、s,IthinkIamqualifiedforthepositionofguidesanditwillbemygreathonortodothejob,soIwritetoyoutoenterfortheguide.First,Ihaveagreatsenseofdirection,whichenablesmetoleadactorsandactresstoarriveattheirpositionswithoutdifficulties.Itveryessentialwhenthebackofstageiscrowdedwithpeopleanddifferentkindsofdecorat

43、ionsandalltheperformersarehurryingtodressthemupandgettheirneededthingsready.Second,IhavetheexperienceofbeingaguidebeforeandIknewhowtodealwithunexpectedaccidentsandmistakes.Suchexperienceishelpfultocalmmyselfdowntoarrangethingsinorder.Besides,Iamfamiliarwithmyschoolmatesandhavegreatabilitiestocommuni

44、catewiththem,whichmakesitpossibleformetofindtherightpersonandtalktothemtorelievetheirnervefortheperformance.Accordingtoalltheabilitiesabove,IthinkImsuitableforthepositionandIreallyhopethatyoucangiachancetousemypowertoaddatouchtoourSchoolCelebration.Thankyouforreadingmyletter.YourssincerelyLiPing范文2D

45、earSir,IvelearntthatourschoolisrecruitingguidesforthecelebrationofschoolanniversaryandIaself-recommendation.Firstofall,anacutesenseofdirectionandmyfamiliaritywithallthelocationsoncampusputmeanadvantage.Consideringthatsomeofouralumnusmaytakealongandtiresomejourneytoattendourcelebration,Iamsurethatmya

46、irofdelightwillsweepthemofftirednessinnotime.Besides,informingthemofthechangeinrecentyearsandsharinganecdotesabouttheschoolcanremindthemoftheirpreciousmemoriesheresothattheywillnoIongerbeshroudedinasenseofunfamiliarity.Furthermore,itismyoutstandingcommunicationskillsandabilitytoarticulatethatdisting

47、uishme.Iwouldnforgettoleavethemprivatespacefornostalgiaafterfulfillingmyobligations.Iwouldbegreatlyobligedifyouwouldallowmethisgoldenopportunitytoenhancemysocialskillsandtocontributetotheasavolunteer.YourssincerelyLiPing范文3DearSir,Iamwritingtoapplyforthevolunteerwhogivesmineralwatertomarathonrunners

48、.Whyithinkamqualifiedforthispositioncanbeconcludedinthefollowingthreeaspects.Firstandforemost,iamanexperieneedchoicebothinmarathonandintheworkofvolunteering.Althoughihaveneverrunamarathonbefore,ihaveaccompaniedmyuncletoattendthiseventformanytimes,soiamquitefamiliarwiththerunningrouteandsomecommonkno

49、wledgeofit.Second,ipossesstheknowledgeoffirstaidandandhavegreaterpatiencewithpeople.Oncesomethinghappens,iwillbeabletogiveahelpinghandtothemedicalteamtoreducerisktolargestextent.ltalwaysadvisabletomakefullpreparationsforfearofunexpectedaccidents.Asthejobrequiresstandingforalongtimeinthesunlight,wait

50、ingforeveryparticipatetopassby,patienceisundoubtedlyamust,whichisfortunatelymymerit.Lastbutnotleast,ihaveastrongandhealthybodywhichenablemetostandthehotweatherandtheexhaust,keepinghelpingtheparticipantsuntilthemarathonisover.Ireallyrespecttheparticipantsnotonlyfortheirdoggedperseveraneebutalsoforthe

51、irhugecouragetosignupformarathoniwishonedayicouldtakepartintheeventaswell.Butbeforethat,ifeellikeservingasavolunteertocontributemyowneffortsoastoshowmyrespect.Hopeiwillbeyourfirstchoice.YourssincerelyLiPing范文4Dearsir,Iveheardthatthecomingmarathonraceneedsvolunteerstohelpgivewatertoathletes.IIhopeIco

52、uldbeofferedthisposition.IhavetoadmitthatImahugefanofmarathon.ButsinceImnotthatsuitableforsuchexhaustingsentertheracemyself.SoIwanttojointhevolunteerteaminordertogetclosetosuchanexcitingevent.ItwouldbeagreatexperieneeifIwereabletobechosenandtofeeltheheatoftheraceandtheenthusiasmoftheattendants.Besid

53、es,Idohaveexperiencesinvolunteeringduringamarathon.Ididitseveraltimesinthepastfewyears.Iknowhowtogivethewaterwithoutdisturbingtheathletes.Itsalwaysbettertohaveanexperieneedon(severalfreshmenwhoarenotsurewhenandwheretogivethewater.Ibelievewewillbeingoodcooperation.Soplease,considermyapplicationandgiv

54、emeachancetoprovemyselfasanexcellentvolunteer.Iforwardtoyourreply.YourssincerelyLiPing崇明區(qū)明啟中學計劃在寒假的2018年2月5日至2018年2月18日（2018年2月16日為中國春節(jié)）期間組織一批學生到美國的結(jié)對學校JenisonPublicSchool進行為期兩周的交流學習，但具體的交流內(nèi)容還在研討之中?，F(xiàn)學校要求想要參加的學生自行向負責該項目的王老師寫申請書，并就交流的內(nèi)容提出建議，然后再由學校商討確定交流學生的名單。假設(shè)你是該校學生李敏，想要參加該項目，給王老師寫申請書。你的申請書需包括：?想要參加該

55、項目的愿望；?想要參加該項目的理由；?就交流內(nèi)容提出具體建議。注：文中不得提及你的真實姓名或?qū)W校。DearMr.WangImLiMin.HearingthatyouareplanningtoorganizeagroupofstudentstoJenisonPubilcSchool,USA,foracademicexchange,Iwouldreallyliketoapplyforthisopportunity.MyparentsandIhavediscussedthematterandtheystronglyapproveofmyparticipationinthisactivity,whic

56、hliterallymeansIwillmissthefamilyreunionthisSpringFestival.SinceIhaveneverexperieneedtogoabroadforexchangestudy,Iwillsurelybenefitquitealotbylearningandcommunicationinadifferentstudyatmosphere,letaloneJenisonPubilcSchoolenjoyingtheIongesthistory,thegreatestreputationandthemostexperieneedteachingmode

57、.Problemssuchascommunicationbarriersandculturalshockmustbefeltandreadytobesolvedduringtwoweeks,sothatAmericanstudentsandIcanachievemutualunderstandingsinthefieldofcultureandeducation.Whatsmore,Ihavealreadyworkoutascheduletoenrichthisprogramforyourfurtherreference.AspecialfoodplanisonthewayforAmerica

58、nstudents.TheywillbeexposedtothewonderfulChineseCuisine,enablingthemtohaveatasteofadifferentfoodculture.Themostimportantofall,IhaveawishtorepresentourstudentstoenhancetheSino-USrelationship.Andpersonally,Ifirmlybelievethatwithsuchadetermination,thisprogramwillimprovemystudyinterest,andcultivateamore

59、matureandindependentpersonality.Isincerelyhopeyoucangivemethishonor.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiMin長寧區(qū)近年來，人工智能(ArtificialIntelligenee)認為，人類創(chuàng)造出的機器，不可能超越人類?；艚?發(fā)展迅速，人們?nèi)找骊P(guān)注AI對人類未來的影響。馬云StephenHawking)則表示：人工智能的完全發(fā)展可能預示著人類的終結(jié)”。你同意誰的觀點，請說明理由。范文1Withthefast-paceddevelopmentofArtificialIntellig

60、enee,human-beingsconcernsaboutitsinflueneearealsogrowing.WhileothersarepersuadedintoMaYunsbelievingthatthemachinescreatedbyhuman-beings(exceedhumanintelligenee,IwillalwayssticktomypersonalopinionthatthesufficientdevelopmentofArtificialIntelligeneemaycausetheendofhuman-beings,thesameasStephenHawkings