高考英語讀后續(xù)寫中的對(duì)話寫作

1、高中英語讀后續(xù)寫中的對(duì)話寫作一.利用對(duì)話描寫需要注意的3個(gè)原則1.控制對(duì)話的比重，對(duì)話促進(jìn)情節(jié)的發(fā)展，但不能代替故事情節(jié)，1到2處即可。即簡(jiǎn)短+地道+量少。2.對(duì)話內(nèi)容應(yīng)符合人物性格特點(diǎn)。3.對(duì)話內(nèi)容應(yīng)緊扣原文主題和中心。不要脫離文章主線，說一些不著邊際的話。二.對(duì)話的3種表現(xiàn)形式1.對(duì)話標(biāo)簽在前She said, I would like to go with you, but I havent finished myhomework. 2.對(duì)話標(biāo)簽在后I would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework. Shesai

2、d.3.對(duì)話標(biāo)簽在句子中間I would like to go with you, she said, but I havent finished myhomework. 注意對(duì)話標(biāo)簽在后或者在句子中間時(shí)（第2，3種情況），如果主語是名詞，則可以倒裝。而代詞不可以倒裝（said she是錯(cuò)誤的）。I would like to go with you, but Ihavent finished my homework. saidEmily/Emily said.I would like to go with you, said Emily/ Emily said, but I haventfi

3、nished my homework.三、讓你的對(duì)話標(biāo)簽不平庸的小技巧在對(duì)話標(biāo)簽中加入語氣，嗓音，情感以及伴隨動(dòng)作，讓你的描寫更生動(dòng)傳神。1、添加恰當(dāng)?shù)慕樵~短語表不同語氣或嗓音in a/an+形容詞+tone；in a/an+形容詞+voiceI would love to， said Emily in a pleasant tone.愉悅的語氣用的語氣如 in a pleasant愉悅的/firm堅(jiān)定的/rude粗魯?shù)?sad悲傷的tone也可以用in a tone of +名詞的搭配如 in a tone of surprise/curiosity/impatience/regret/co

4、mmand命令/sarcasm諷刺I didnt mean to，she murmured in a low voice.小聲地說道用的聲音如 in a high /low / sweet/loud/soft /weak voice.I.dont thinkIm right for the part,Ireplied with embarrassment.2、用介詞短語或者副詞來表達(dá)情感I will never do that again，Ianswered firmly堅(jiān)定地.=Firmly，Ianswered，Iwillnever do that again.可將副詞提到句首介詞短語有 i

5、n in surprise/shock/sorrow傷心/horror害怕with: with delight /excitement /embarrassment /pride/caution/care/patience/certainty堅(jiān)定 等等副詞有 firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully等等3、添加一點(diǎn)動(dòng)作描寫小結(jié)在說的同時(shí)，可以加入伴隨動(dòng)作，即說話的同時(shí)（自己/別人）在做什么，用動(dòng)作描寫來輔助對(duì)話?？梢杂胊s引導(dǎo)的從句，非謂語，并列謂語以及with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。（1)Well, said the farmer,

6、as herubbed thesweat of the back of hisneck，此處在說的動(dòng)作后，緊跟了as引導(dǎo)的狀語從句，翻譯成一邊，一邊。他一邊擦脖子后面的汗水一邊說好啊。(2)I want that one,the boy said,pointingto the little dog= Pointing the litle dog, the boy said,I want that one此處在說的動(dòng)作后，緊跟了doing的非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)，表伴隨。(3)The farmer picked up the dog,knelt downand said in asoft voice,Its

7、 yours now.=The farmer picked up the dog andknelt down,saying,Its yours now.此處是拿起狗，蹲下并溫柔地說的三個(gè)并列動(dòng)作，可以用并列謂語，也可以用第二條中的非謂語。(4)With herhead down/With tears in hereyes, she said,Sorry.四、包含情緒的各種各樣的說。1.喊叫 shout大喊;scream尖叫;yell大喊;exclaim驚叫（因高興、憤怒、痛苦、驚訝等發(fā)生的喊叫）;cry out喊叫; call喊叫如 He yelled at her，You are an id

8、iot.2.問與答 ask詢問; reply回復(fù);answer回答;如She answered in a firm tone，That doesnt matter. 3.建議 propose; suggest; offer如 She offered，How about going to the beach this weekend? 4.其他的說 add補(bǔ)充說道=continue繼續(xù)說道;retort反駁道; explain解釋道;state陳述道; protest抗議道;sob哭訴道;agree同意地說;comfort安慰道;promise承諾道;assure保證道;insist堅(jiān)持說;an

9、nounce宣布道;mumble/whisper/murmur/grunt嘟囔; stammer/stutter結(jié)巴地說如 After a slight pause，she added，Thank you.James comforted her, Dont worry about your son.表示說話的的不同詞匯“It was great” criedAmy大聲說Ohdear, Amygroaned.IllhavetoseeMrPeck.抱怨What are you doing?snappeda voice behind her厲聲喝道Hedgehogs!bawledMr Peck.嚷道

10、Over there, snappedMr Peck, pointing with his nose.Amysnortedgently to the hedgehog.噴響鼻子;What are you talking about?whisperedMrs Harris.低聲說Animals,indeed,sniffedMrPeck.Whatsortofanimals?不屑地說“excuse me-”began Amy“and whats more,”Mr Peck cut in,.插話學(xué)以致用：1.Mrs Read _ (希爾太太冷靜地說), “Take her away to the red room and lock her in there.”2.“我不知道我在做什么,”她笑著說。“I didnt know what I was doing,” she said,_ (laugh).3.“我去給我們拿點(diǎn)咖啡，”她說著朝廚房走去。“Ill get us some coffee,” she said,_ (head) for the kitchen.4. “太好了,”亞歷克斯平靜地說，專注于他的盤子?！癟hats nice,” Al