福建省中考英語第一輪復(fù)習(xí)課件話題寫作三階攻關(guān)技巧篇(共34張)

1、技 巧 篇寫作技巧1 巧用并列連詞寫作技巧2 巧用三大從句寫作技巧3 巧用短語目錄寫作技巧4 巧用特殊句式 初中英語寫作中，除了內(nèi)容豐富和組織緊密外，詞匯的運(yùn)用和句子的處理同樣重要。很多考生往往因為句子結(jié)構(gòu)不清楚，采用錯誤的中式翻譯表達(dá)而失分；同樣，也有考生因為寫作通篇的句子太單調(diào)而得不到高分。究其原因，主要還是對英文句子的結(jié)構(gòu)和特點不熟悉，沒有掌握句子結(jié)構(gòu)之間的轉(zhuǎn)換方法，缺乏使用多種句子形式來表達(dá)統(tǒng)一思想內(nèi)容的技能。實際上，一篇好的寫作范文都是以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，配合適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)合句，而簡單句可長可短，通常要加一些附屬成分，比如：介詞短語、副詞短語、不定式動詞短語等。 總之，在寫作的過程中學(xué)

2、會“增加句式的多樣性”，會使文章更加靈活生動?？忌趯懽鬟^程中可運(yùn)用以下四大增分技巧： 并列連詞用于把兩個或兩個以上的簡單句連接起來，且各個分句之間存在著一定的邏輯關(guān)系。常見的并列連詞有：and“和”，表示并列或順承關(guān)系；but“但是”，表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系；or“或者，否則”，表示選擇或條件關(guān)系；so“所以”，表示因果關(guān)系；both.and.“兩者都”；not only.but also.“不但而且”；either.or.“或者或者”；neither.nor.“既不也不”。寫作技巧 1巧用并列連詞1. 順承關(guān)系：I cooked lunch. I made a cake.I cooked lunch

3、 and made a cake.2. 轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：I love the book. The book is too expensive.I love the book but it is too expensive.3. 因果關(guān)系：He got up late. He missed the train.He got up late, so he missed the train.4. 選擇關(guān)系：Can you play the drums? Can you play the guitar?Can you play the drums or play the guitar?句 式 連 接 范 例

4、 5. 條件關(guān)系：Be quiet. You will be asked to go out.Be quiet, or you will be asked to go out.6. 并列連詞短語：In her spare time, she either swims or runs.Both Jim and Jack are tall.Not only my parents but also I am looking forward to meeting my uncle.Neither he nor his children like fish.小 試 牛 刀 1. She made a w

5、ish. She blew out the candles.(用and)_2. I received an invitation. I didnt accept it.(用but)_3. He ate too much. He became fatter.(用so)_4. Clean the room quickly. Youll be punished.(用or)_She made a wish and blew out the candles.I received an invitation but I didnt accept it.He ate too much, so he beca

6、me fatter.Clean the room quickly or youll be punished.教材鏈接5. Lily is good at playing the piano. Lucy is good at playing the piano, too.(用both.and.)_6. My uncle can draw. My uncle can also sing.(用not only.but also.)_7. You or he will go there. (用either.or.)_8. I dont like juice. I dont like tea, eith

7、er.(用neither.nor.)_Both Lily and Lucy are good at playing the piano.My uncle can not only draw but also sing.Either you or he will go there.I like neither juice nor tea.寫作技巧 2巧用三大從句狀語從句 在復(fù)合句中，修飾主句中的動詞、形容詞或副詞等的從句叫狀語從句。常見的狀語從句有：時間狀語從句、讓步狀語從句、條件狀語從句、原因狀語從句、目的狀語從句、結(jié)果狀語從句。句 式 連 接 范 例 1. 時間狀語從句：while, whe

8、n, since, before, after, until/till, as soon as.(1)When I got to school, it was raining.(2)Dont make any noise while others are reading.(3)He has been a teacher here since he graduated from university.(4)My grandparents like going for a walk after they have supper.(5)We need to think twice before we

9、 follow others.(6)I wont fully believe it until I see it myself.2. 讓步狀語從句：though/although, even though/if, whatever, whenever(1)Though/Although he was ill, he still came to school.(2)He will not tell others the secret even though/if he knows it.(3)He helps his parents with housework whenever he is f

10、ree.3. 條件狀語從句：if, unless, as long as(1)If you come, we will be very happy.(2)You will be successful as long as you work hard.(3)We will not get there on time unless we go off earlier.4. 原因狀語從句：because, sinceLily stayed at home. It rained.Lily stayed at home because it rained.5. 目的狀語從句：so that, in or

11、der thatShe worked hard. She could make more money.She worked hard so that she could make more money.6. 結(jié)果狀語從句：so.that., such.that.I was very worried. I wanted to give up.I was so worried that I wanted to give up.小 試 牛 刀 1. 她打掃完房間之后，就離開了。_2. 盡管身體不好，她仍繼續(xù)執(zhí)行任務(wù)。_3. 他不會完成工作除非他早點開始。_4. 我喜歡坐火車因為火車便宜。_She l

12、eft after she cleaned the room.Although/Though in poor health, she continued to carry out the task.He wont finish the work unless he starts earlier.I like taking the train because it is cheap.5. 這些天她忙于復(fù)習(xí)功課以便于考試能取得更好的成績。_6. 他是一個如此善良的男孩以至于我們都喜歡他。_7. 當(dāng)我們到了鄉(xiāng)村的時候，天下起了雨。_She is busy reviewing the lessons

13、these days so that she can get better marks in exams.He is such a kind boy that we all like him.When we arrived at the countryside, it began to rain.8. 如果每個人都為保護(hù)環(huán)境做貢獻(xiàn)，我們的世界將會變得更加美好。_If everyone can make a contribution to environmental protection, our world will become much more better.賓語從句 賓語從句是主從復(fù)合

14、句的一種。其從句部分在整個句子中作賓語，從句的語序必須是陳述句，即“連接詞主語謂語其他部分”。常見的連接詞有：that, if/ whether, what, when, where, how, who等。句 式 連 接 范 例 1. “Its delicious.” She said.She said (that) it was delicious.2. Does Kate get up early? Do you know?Do you know if/whether Kate gets up early?3. “When did you come here？” She asked me.

15、She asked me when I came here.4. Where does Jane come from? Can you tell me?Can you tell me where Jane comes from?小 試 牛 刀 1. The students said, “The club is very funny.” _2. Does he go to school today? Do you know?_3. “Who will give a speech tonight？” She asks her teacher._The students said that the

16、 club was very funny.Do you know if/whether he goes to school today?She asks her teacher who will give a speech tonight.4. Mr.Li asked his son, “Where do you want to have a picnic？” _5. How to make the milk shake? Can you tell us?_6. When and how can we begin our project? Our teachers are talking ab

17、out it with us._Mr.Li asked his son where he wanted to have a picnic.Can you tell us how to make the milk shake?Our teachers are talking about when and how we can begin our project with us.定語從句 在定語從句中，從句在句子中作定語，修飾先行詞。初中階段要能掌握簡單的由which, that, who引導(dǎo)的定語從句。先行詞為人：who/that引導(dǎo)；先行詞為物：which/that引導(dǎo)。句 式 連 接 范 例

18、 1. 先行詞為人：(1)I know the girl who/that has curly hair.(2)A nurse is a person who looks after peoples health.(3)He is the one who has given me a lot of help.2. 先行詞為物：(1)I like sports which/that are safe for me.(2)This is the best gift that I have ever received.小 試 牛 刀 1. This is a book. It can tell a

19、lot of stories._2. I like to make friends. They give me courage._3. Something happened yesterday. Tom told it to his mother._This is a book which/that can tell a lot of stories.I like to make friends who/that give me courage.Tom told that something happened yesterday to his mother.4. That is our pla

20、n for the summer holiday. My father and I made together._That is our plan for the summer holiday that my father and I made together.寫作技巧 3巧用短語 利用不定式短語、介詞(短語)或形容詞短語等來增加句子的句式，從而使句子表達(dá)更加多樣化。句 式 連 接 范 例 1. 利用不定式短語：My parents encouraged me. They told me to believe in myself.My parents encouraged me to bel

21、ieve in myself.2. 利用介詞(短語)：You can write well by reading more.You should read more in order to write well.3. 利用形容詞短語：We got to school after a threehour trip. We were tired but happy.We got to school after a threehour trip, tired but happy.小 試 牛 刀 1. 為了體驗不同的生活，他在暑期做了一份兼職工作。_2. 我擅長幾乎所有的科目，除了數(shù)學(xué)。_3. 現(xiàn)在很

22、多衣服在促銷，漂亮但不貴。_To experience a different life, he did a parttime job during the summer holiday.I am good at almost all subjects except math.A lot of clothes are on sale now, beautiful but not expensive.4. 眾所周知，他在這些志愿者活動中扮演了重要的角色。_5. 此外，我們不允許獨自游泳，尤其在深水區(qū)。_6. 為了保證我們的安全，我們學(xué)校不允許我們游泳。_As is known to all, h

23、e plays an active role in these volunteer activities.Besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep water.In order to make us safe, our school doesnt allows us to swim.7. 不論生活多么艱難，她從來不放棄。_8. 他喜歡交朋友，一直和他們相處得很好。_9. 我們在這里過得很愉快。_No matter how hard the life is, she never gives up.He likes

24、making friends, and always gets on well with them.We had a great time/enjoyed ourselves here. 利用感嘆句、比較級、it形式主語或形式賓語等特殊句式，來豐富文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，以避免造成讀者的閱讀疲勞。寫作技巧 4巧用特殊句式句 式 連 接 范 例 1. 感嘆句：We were very excited.How excited we were!She is an outgoing girl.What an outgoing girl she is!2. 比較級：她做的鍛煉越多，她就會越健康。The more exercise she does, the healthier she will be.3. it形式主語：We should learn English well. Its import