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敘事專題讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練ContinuationWritingLead-in:ShareamovingstoryTherewasayoungcouple,JimandDella,wholedapoorlife,buttheylovedeachotherverymuch.WiththeapproachingofChristmas,Theywantedtobuyaspecialgiftforeachothersecretly…Canyouguesstheendingofthestory?Lead-in:Shareamovingstory
goldwatch
longblondhair
Lead-in:Shareamovingstory
watchchain
hairpinLead-in:Shareamovingstory
InordertomatchJim’spreciousgoldwatchwithaperfectwatchchain,DellacutoffandsoldherlongblondhairtobuyagoldenchainasaChristmasgifttoJim.Inthemeanwhile,Jimsoldhisbelovedgoldwatchtobuyajewelhairpin(發(fā)夾)todressuphiswife’sbeautifulhair.OnChristmasDay,whentheymeteachotherinapark,theywerebothsurprisedtoknowthetruth.Itseemedthatthewatchchainandthehairpinwereuseless.Buttheyweretrulythemostpricelessgiftsforthepoorcouple,becausetheybothgaveuptheirmostpreciousthingstoloveeachother.TheGiftoftheMagiLead-in:ShareamovingstoryAgoodbeginningishalfdone,whileagoodendingmakesaperfectstory!Timeforpractice閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Lucy
wastheonlychildinherfamily.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandshe
ranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn'thelpweepingsorrowfullywhenshethoughtofthescold-
ingfromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryand
wishedforsomethingtoeat.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedseller
busydoinghisbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shegaveasighandhadtoleave.Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,“Hey,girl,youwanttohavethe
noodles?”“Oh,yes,butIdon'thavemoneyonme,”
shereplied.“That’snothing.I’lltreatyoutoday,”
saidtheman.“Comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,thesmellsoattractive.Asshewaseating,Lucycried
silently.“Whatisit?”
askedthemankindly.WritingPractice:
“Nothing.ActuallyIwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”
saidLucyasshewipedhertears.
"Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymotherdrovemeoutof
thehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissomercilesscomparedtoastranger!”Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled,“Girl,doyoureallythinkso?Ionlygaveyouabowlof
noodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.
Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourgratitudetoher?”Lucysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock;sherememberedhermother'sfamiliarfaceand
weatheredhands.“Whydidn'tIthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeel
grateful.Whyhaven'tIthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme?”O(jiān)nthewayhome,Lucymadeuphermindtomakeanapologytohermotherforherrudenessas
soonasshearrivedhome.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;Paragraph1:Approaching
the
doorway,...____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:A
gentle
touch
on
her
hair
called
her
mind
back.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
when:Where(place):Who(character):What(event)inthestreet
Lucy,hermother,astrangerafternoon
quarrel
Step1:
Readformainidea--6WHquestions
ranoutofthehouseastrangermadeanapology...How:
stranger’swords,kindadviceStep1:Readformainidea--6WHquestions
angry
sorrowful/sad
touchedgratefulandregretfulspeechlessandnumbwithshock
why:
Step2Makepredictions
推測故事續(xù)寫發(fā)展(MindMap)BackgroundforPara1:Approachingthedoorway,…doorLucyHowdidshefeel?whatdidshedo?Lucy'smotherPara1:Lucyfelt_______________whenshewasinthedoorway.2.
WhatdidLucythinkabout?
1.
HowdidLucyfeelandwhatdidshedowhenshewasinthedoorway?Lucywasso_________thatshe___________infrontofthedoor.Lucythoughtof___________./Ithit/occurredtoLucythat…Approaching
the
doorway,...
Step3:Gatherideasforwriting(GroupWork)3.
WhatdidLucydonext?
Lucy___________________.Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.Step2Makepredictions
推測故事續(xù)寫發(fā)展(MindMap)doorLucyLucy'smotherBackgroundforPara2:Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback…athomeHowdidshefeel?Whatdidshesay?Whatdidshesay?Whatdidshedo?
Step3:Gatherideasforwriting順延故事續(xù)寫1.
HowdidLucyfeelwhenshesawhermother?
Para2:Lucywas__________________whenshesawhermother.2.
WhatdidLucysayordo?
3.
WhatdidLucy'smothersayordo?
Lucy'smother__________________Lucy___________________________.
Step3:Gatherideasforwriting(GroupWork)Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.upset/worried/nervous/不安的/擔(dān)心的/緊張的take
adeepbreath深呼吸beangrywith對...生氣careabout關(guān)心be/feltashamedof
感到羞愧gatherone’scourage鼓起勇氣tearsrolldownhercheeks眼淚從臉上滑下couldn’thelpdoing情不自禁做...hugsb.擁抱throwingoneselfintosb’sarms投入某人的懷抱expressgreatgratitudeto
對…表達(dá)感激
Step4:Draftacontinuation(起草續(xù)篇)TimeforPresentationHomework1.Finishyourwritingandpolishit.2.Sumtheskillsforcontinuationwriting.ThankYou!
[寫作提示]本文是一篇充滿教育意義的故事。Lucy因和母親爭吵而負(fù)氣離家,在街上得到陌生的面店老板贈予的面條而心生感激,在面店老板的提醒下,她終于認(rèn)識到了母親的偉大。原文最后一段提到Lucy決定回家向母親道歉,那么后文的續(xù)寫一定要圍繞這一線索展開。續(xù)寫第一段的提示句告訴我們這一段是Lucy到家門口后的情景,而又根據(jù)第二段的提示句“一個(gè)在她頭發(fā)上的溫柔的撫摸拉回了她的思緒”可知上一段最后一定要出現(xiàn)Lucy沉思的語境。充分利用這些信息并結(jié)合自己的想象應(yīng)該可以構(gòu)思出合理的結(jié)尾。本文原文的基調(diào)暗示整個(gè)故事是一個(gè)內(nèi)容健康向上,具有很好的教育意義的故事。所以續(xù)寫一定要延續(xù)這個(gè)主題。Approaching
the
doorway,Lucywasverynervousandtookadeepbreath.Standinginfrontofthedoor,shewasafraidwhetherhermotherwouldforgiveherforherrudeness.ButwhenShethoughtofhermother’sfamiliarfaceandthenoodleseller’skindadvice,shedecidedtoknockonthedoorbravely.HermotheropenedthedoorbutLucywassoashamedthatshedidn’tknowwhattosay.
PossibleVersionversion1:Paragraph2:A
gentle
touch
on
her
hair
called
her
mind
back.Lucycouldn’thelpcryingandsaid“Sorry,mom,IknowIhavemadeabigmistake.I
shouldn’thavequarreledwithyou.
Ishouldn’thaverunawayfromhome.Couldyouforgiveme?”Lucy’smotherwasmoved,saying“Goodgirl,nevermind,Ialsoshouldmakeanapologytoyouforscoldingatyouangrily.Iamveryworriedaboutyou.”Tearsrolleddownfrombothoftheirfacesandtheyhuggedeachothertightly.version2:Paragraph1Approachingthedoorway,Lucy
tookadeepbreath.Whensheknockedatthedoor,shefoundthedoorwaslockedandhermotherwasnoti
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