讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)講義-高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)講義第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)（滿(mǎn)分25分）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Floraandherdadweregoingtomovetoanewhouse.Friday,atruckwouldcomeforthefurniture.Thenthenextweek,workerswoulddiguptheyard.WhereFloraandPapihadgrownflowers,theworkerswouldputinaparkinglot.“Ourpoorflowers,”Florasighedtoherself,lookingatthebrightpurplebloomsandsoftandgreenweedcomingoutofthesoil.Shesatoutside,sellingthingsshedidn’twanttotaketothenewhouse.Besideherhungasignthatsaid“YardSale”.HeryardsalewasthefirstoneoftheyearonAppleStreet,andseveralofherneighborshadcomeovertohavealook.Papicameout.Heheldadishpiledhighwithnuts.“Here’sasnackforeveryone,”hesaid.Flora’sdadlovedsharingthings.Mostofallhelovedsharingjokes.HesmiledwhenhesawFlora’ssignandwinked(眨眼)atthecustomersgatheredaround.“Yardsale?Whatareyousellingyardsof?Ormetersof?”heasked.“Ribbons?Carpet?Cloth?Where’syourruler?”“Notthatkindofyard,”jokedMrs.Ciro.“Itmustbethisnicegrassyyardwe’restandingonthat’sforsale.”“Howmuchfortheweedbyyoursign?”askedMr.Johnson,joking.Floragavenoresponse.Shedidn’tthinktheirjokeswerefunny.Shefeltextremelyinlowspiritsatthethoughtthatthelovelyyardwasalreadysold,andsoontheirpoorflowersandweedwouldberuined.“Deaderthanadoorknob,’Papi’spapiwouldsay”,shethoughttoherselfbitterly,“What’sworse,thenewhousedoesn’thaveanyflowersatall.”Withasigh,Floradugherheelsdeepintothegrass.Butwhenshefeltthesoftearthmoveunderherheels,sheknewwhatshecoulddo.ShewhisperedhercleverplantoPapi.Henodded,smiling,andsatdowninherseatinstead.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Florafetchedoldflowerpotsandfoundatrowel(園藝鏟)todigwith._______________________________________________________________________Nowshewasreadyforsellingtheyardandjokingwithcustomers._____________________________________________________________________試題分析1.人物（角色）：①Flora：要搬新家了，舍不得老屋的花花草草②Herdad:Flora’sdadloved

sharing

things.Mostofallhelovedsharing

jokes.③neighbors：

“Notthatkindofyard,”

jokedMrs.Ciro.“Itmustbethisnicegrassyyardwe’restandingonthat’sforsale.”“Howmuchfortheweedbyyoursign?”asked

Mr.Johnson,

joking.2.主題：人與自我（社會(huì)）本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了一個(gè)叫做Flora的女孩跟爸爸要賣(mài)掉房子及其舊物，搬去新家，但Flora對(duì)院子里的花草十分不舍，害怕會(huì)被遺棄。于是，心生一念，一個(gè)聰明的計(jì)劃就展開(kāi)了?！?.續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)安排：?第一段：Florafetchedoldflowerpotsandfoundatroweltodigwith.①（與開(kāi)頭句銜接）院子讓她想起了很多過(guò)往，但到了不得不說(shuō)再見(jiàn)的時(shí)候了②Flora把花移栽到花盆里③（與下文開(kāi)頭句銜接）把花盆搬出去“售賣(mài)”?第二段：Nowshewasreadyforsellingtheyardandjokingwithcustomers.①（與開(kāi)頭句銜接）鄰居又來(lái)開(kāi)Flora的玩笑了②Flora做出怎樣的回應(yīng)③學(xué)會(huì)了怎樣的人生道理下水作文

Florafetchedoldflowerpotsandfoundatroweltodigwith.Shewentstraighttotheyard,whererestedmanyofhermarvelousmemories,chattingwiththeflowerswheninlowspirits,enjoyingthebreezesinthehotsummer,etc.It’stimetosaygoodbyetotheyard!Shewalkedaroundtheyard,sayingsomethingasiftoanoldfriend.Thenshebentdownandbegantodigthelovelyflowers.Socuteweretheythatshetransplantedthemtotheoldflowerpotswithcare.Thetaskfinished,Floracarriedsometothesign“YardSale”.(86words)

Nowshewasreadyforsellingtheyardandjokingwithcustomers.Mr.JohnsonandMrs.CirostoppedchattingwithPapiandcamebacktoFlora.“We’vedecidedtosavetheYARD!Howmuchwouldyouofferforit?”theyjokedagainwithsmilesontheirface.Flora’scleverplanbegantowork.“Priceless!”shereplied,smiling.“However,Icanpresentthepotsofyardtoyou,mygoodneighbors.Buttherequirementisthatyoushouldtakegoodcareofthem!”Floraknewthatbysharinglikeherdadtheyardcouldsurviveforalongtime.(86words)參考范文

Florafetchedoldflowerpotsandfoundatroweltodigwith.Shewalkedtotheyard,kneltdown,andfoundtherightplacetoshovel.Carefullyshedugupchunksofearththathadflowersgrowingoutofthem.Then,shegentlypackedeachchunkandmoresoilinapot,decidingtocarrytwoinside.Theywouldcomealongtothenewhouse.Theothersshelinedupnearhersign.Alltheworkfinished,shecameback.“Thanks,Papi,”Florasaidwithsmile,takingherseatagain.(78words)

Nowshewasreadyforsellingtheyardandjokingwithcustomers.Mr.Johnsonwaspickingsometoysfromthestand.Mrs.Ciropickedseveralstorybooks.Andthetwoaskedjokinglyagain,“Buthowmuchfortheyard?”Thistime,Florasmiled.HersmilewasjustlikePapi’