讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)素材積累之環(huán)境描寫(xiě)素材積累2023屆高考英語(yǔ)備考

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：環(huán)境描寫(xiě)借景抒情、寓情于景是寫(xiě)作中常用的手法。恰當(dāng)?shù)谋尘皥?chǎng)景描寫(xiě)有利于推動(dòng)故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展，烘托人物的心理活動(dòng)，給讀者身臨其境的感受。背景場(chǎng)景描寫(xiě)要有全貌有細(xì)節(jié)，有全景有特寫(xiě)，要點(diǎn)面結(jié)合，重點(diǎn)突出?？梢悦鑼?xiě)事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境等，也可以描寫(xiě)人看到的景象或感受到的某種情緒。注意：環(huán)境描寫(xiě)只是起畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用，環(huán)境描寫(xiě)不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)，且環(huán)境描寫(xiě)一定為你的內(nèi)容服務(wù)，而不是為了看起來(lái)高大上。所以我也提醒大家寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候千萬(wàn)不要本末倒置，寫(xiě)一些無(wú)關(guān)緊要的套句或者環(huán)境描寫(xiě)只會(huì)對(duì)情節(jié)起到反作用。那么接下來(lái)我們先看看環(huán)境描寫(xiě)的常見(jiàn)作用以及常見(jiàn)的環(huán)境描寫(xiě)素材。環(huán)境描寫(xiě)在讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)中的作用：1.襯托或突出人物性格、心理等2.暗示或推動(dòng)故事情節(jié)發(fā)展3.增添或烘托某種氣氛和意境，奠定基調(diào)4.揭示主題，深化主旨1.氣氛氛圍Aheavyanddeadsilenceblanketedtheroom.（描寫(xiě)房間的寂靜）Ahushfellupontheclass.（描寫(xiě)教室寂靜）Attheendoftheday,nightcomesandtheworldispeacefulandcalm.白天漸漸隱去，夜晚悄悄來(lái)臨，周圍一片安寧、靜謐。Thesilenceoftheforestwasrippedapartbyasoundlikearoaringwind.（描寫(xiě)狂風(fēng)打破寂靜）Anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.（描寫(xiě)黑暗）Itdidn’ttaketoolongfortheforesttobeenvelopedindarkness.(描寫(xiě)森林變暗）Darkcloudsweregatheringinthesky.烏云密布。Thedarknesswassoheavyitwaslikeathickblanketsmoothingher.黑暗是如此之重，它像一個(gè)厚厚的毯子撫平她的情緒。Thenightskywaslitupbyflashesoflight.一道道燈光照亮了夜空。Thecloudshadspreadandnearlycoveredtheentiresky.云彩擴(kuò)散開(kāi)來(lái)，幾乎遮住了整個(gè)天空。Anairofsadnesssettledovertheroom.（描寫(xiě)悲傷氛圍）Itsuddenlyseemedfrighteninglyquiet.Theairwaschargedwithtension.（描寫(xiě)緊張氣氛）Timefliesintheblinkofaneye.時(shí)間轉(zhuǎn)眼即逝。2.江河湖海、山川峽谷、草地花鳥(niǎo)Thegurgleofthestreamsoothedme.（描寫(xiě)潺潺流水）Aclearlittlestreamranquitemerrilyalongitsnarrowway.(描寫(xiě)歡快的溪流）Thelakemirroredtheskyabove.(描寫(xiě)天空映襯下的湖面）Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.（描寫(xiě)波光粼粼的水面）Thegoldensunlightsparkledonthesurfaceofthelake.金色的陽(yáng)光灑向湖面，波光粼粼。Thebeachwasbathedintheamber-likesunshine.（描寫(xiě)陽(yáng)光下的沙灘）Themeadowwasagloriousexpansesofgrassandmeadowflowers,grassrustlinggentlyinthebreeze.(描寫(xiě)青青草地)Thegrassygrasslandalsohasathinriver,exposedtothesun,faraway,likeashinysilvernecklace.綠草如茵的草原上還有一條細(xì)細(xì)的河，袒露在陽(yáng)光下，遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)看去，像一條發(fā)光的銀項(xiàng)鏈。Patchesofweedsdottedthemountainside.（山坡草坪）Thesettingsuncastanorangeglowoverthemountains.橘紅色的夕陽(yáng)輝映著群山。Hewasinafieldofgreenishwhiteflowersthatseemedtoextendasfarastheeyecouldreach.(滿眼的綠色)Themeadowflowedlikeaseaofgreenoverthehill,studdedwiththepurpleofthistles.(描寫(xiě)漫山的花草）Thevalleyseemedtogrowquieterandquieterashesatandstaredatthebrightdelicateblueness.(描寫(xiě)山谷的寂靜）ItwasatypicalsummereveninginJune.Theairwasdelicateandtherewasacompleteabsolutesilence.這是六月一個(gè)典型的夏日傍晚?？諝馊岷颓逍?，四周靜悄悄的，沒(méi)有一絲聲響。Theairwasrichwithspring;thesunwaswarmandyellowedontheasphalt.空氣中洋溢著春天的氣息；太陽(yáng)暖洋洋的，柏油馬路上鋪著一層黃色的光。Onthatdaythemountainwasfullofflowers,andthetreeshadnewgreenleaves.那天山上開(kāi)滿了花，樹(shù)上也長(zhǎng)出了新的綠葉。Thechirpingbirdswelcomedourcoming.鳥(niǎo)兒啁啾，像在歡迎我們的到來(lái)。Thefragrantflowersattractedlotsofbirds,lingeringaroundthem.(描寫(xiě)花香鳥(niǎo)語(yǔ)）3.天氣，大自然，風(fēng)雨雷電，陰晴冷暖，霧雪冰霜Theskyisovercast（陰暗的）withdarkanddenseclouds.烏云滿天。Theduskisgathering暮色正濃Thewindhadpickedup.風(fēng)愈刮愈大。Itwasgettingdarkandthewinddiedaway.天漸漸黑了，風(fēng)漸漸小了。Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.（描寫(xiě)微風(fēng)拂柳）Alightbreezeblew,swayingthetreebranchesandmakingtheraysoflightglimmeranddance.（描寫(xiě)微風(fēng)）Thebreezegentlykissedhercheeks.(描寫(xiě)微風(fēng)）Agentlebreezecameup,wrinkling(使…起皺)thesurfaceofthelake.一陣清風(fēng)吹來(lái)，湖面掀起了漣漪Thefragilelittletreecrackedandfellinthewildhowlingwind.（描寫(xiě)狂風(fēng)）Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.(描寫(xiě)寒風(fēng)）Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨敲打在窗上，并向最后一縷陽(yáng)光告別。Thewindblewcrazilyandtherainbegantofalllikedogsandcats.狂風(fēng)呼嘯，緊接著大雨傾。Windandrainnowwhippedthehouse.（描寫(xiě)風(fēng)雨擊打窗戶）Thedrizzlekissedmeonmycheeksgently.（描寫(xiě)細(xì)雨）Afiercewindwasroaringwhilethepoundingrainwasbeatingtheground.Therumbleofthunderwasheardinthedistance.（描寫(xiě)風(fēng)雨雷電）Thesharpclapsofthunderpiercedthequietnight.（描寫(xiě)雷聲）Warmsunshinepouredoverthelittlebush.溫暖的陽(yáng)光灑在小樹(shù)身上.Aglimmeroflightspilledintothecorridor.一縷微光灑入走廊。WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.（描寫(xiě)陽(yáng)光灑進(jìn)窗戶）WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltliketheamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.（描寫(xiě)陽(yáng)光）Inthelightofcalmandgoldensunsetitbecomeslovelybeyondexpression.在安詳而金燦燦的夕陽(yáng)的余暉中,天地間非常壯美,難以言表。Thecozysunshinefilteredthroughthewindow,dancingandwhirlinginmyeyes,sparklingwithexhilaration.(陽(yáng)光喜悅).舒適的陽(yáng)光透過(guò)窗戶透過(guò)，在我的眼睛里跳舞和旋轉(zhuǎn)，閃爍著興奮的光芒。Themountainslope/mountainsideswas/werewrappedinathinmist.山坡上罩著一層薄霧。Thethickmistsblurred（使……模糊）thehills.霧遮群山，朦朧不清。Thefogwasbeginningtoclearandafullmoonshonebrightly.（描寫(xiě)霧氣消散）Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.(描寫(xiě)下雪）Thewindhowled,pilingupsnowindrifts,blindingthenightwithice-whitedust.(描寫(xiě)晚上下雪場(chǎng)景）Thesoundsoftheinsects,thechirpingbirdsandthelargeranimalscreatedasymphonyofnaturecallingyoudeeper.(自然和諧).昆蟲(chóng)、嘰嘰喳喳的鳥(niǎo)和較大的動(dòng)物的聲音創(chuàng)造了一種大自然的交響樂(lè)，更深沉地呼喚你。Branchesoftreesstretchedleisurelyintothesapphireskyandthevariousflowersmingledintoblazeofcolor.(自然)樹(shù)枝悠閑地伸展到藍(lán)色的天空中，各種各樣的花朵混雜成一起。Themountainareaiscoveredentirelyindensejungle.山區(qū)完全掩映在茂密的叢林中。Weclimbedupawindingtracktowardsamountainrefuge.我們沿著一條蜿蜒的小道爬向山上的一處避難所。Bathedinthesunshineanddelightedbyfantasticscenery,weheadedforthedestination.沐浴在陽(yáng)光下，享受著美麗的風(fēng)景，我們向目的地出發(fā)。4.春夏秋冬Myfingerslingeredalmostunconsciouslyonthefamiliarleavesandblossomswhichhadjustcomeforthtogreetthesweetsouthernspring.（描寫(xiě)春意盎然）Thatisanoilpaintingofalandscapeinspring.那是一幅描繪春天景色的油畫(huà).Thenewspringgrassshotupastimeitselfhadspedup.(描寫(xiě)春草）Themoorislovelyinspringandsummerwhenthereareflowers.Italwayssmellssosweet.Theair'ssofresh,andthebirdssingsobeautifully.這片荒野春天和夏天都開(kāi)滿了花，可愛(ài)極了，連空氣都是甜的。那兒的空氣新鮮極了，鳥(niǎo)也叫得那么動(dòng)聽(tīng)（形容美麗的荒野）Anoverwhelmingtorrentofheatflewthroughtheatmosphere,filledwithuneasydiscomfort.（描寫(xiě)夏天的熱）Therewerenocloudsintheburningsky,anditwastoohottothinkorfeel.熾熱的天空中沒(méi)有一片云，天熱得讓人無(wú)法思考，沒(méi)有知覺(jué)。Inthisheateventhetreesappeardefeated.(描寫(xiě)天氣極熱）Thesunwasburning,andtherewasasoundofthecicadas.太陽(yáng)火辣辣的烤著大地，不遠(yuǎn)處傳來(lái)知了的聲音。Thehotsuntoretheskinoftheearth火辣辣的太陽(yáng)撕開(kāi)了大地的皮。Thesummersunwasscorchingthelandandtherewasnoshadeintheopenstreet.盛夏的陽(yáng)光炙烤大地，坦蕩蕩的街上沒(méi)有一塊陰涼地。Fallenleavesdanceddowninthecoolmid-autumnair,biddingfarewelltosweetsummerandwelcomingtheautumnin.(描寫(xiě)夏去秋來(lái)）TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.(描寫(xiě)秋天腳下的落葉)Autumnwasgettingholdoftheoldoak-tree,itsleaveswerebrowning.那顆老橡樹(shù)染上了秋天的顏色，葉子逐漸變成黃褐色。Autumnisatimeoffabulouscolorsandcolorsburstfromthetreeslikesplatteredpaint.秋天層林盡染，如潑灑的顏料般濃墨重彩。Freezingwintermarchedintothevillage.(描寫(xiě)寒冬）Itwasbitterlycoldnowandthegroundwasfrozenhard.現(xiàn)在天氣冷極了，地面都凍硬了。Apersistent,coldrainwasfalling,mingledwithsnow.外面不停地下著冰冷的雨，間或還夾雜著一些雪片。Thesnowflakesweredancingintheair,flying,hovering,fallingstraightandfast,andlayingontheground.雪紛紛揚(yáng)揚(yáng)落下，那一片雪花在空中舞動(dòng)著各種姿勢(shì)，或飛翔，或盤旋，或直直地快速墜落，鋪落在地上。Theglitteringsnowflakesfellonthepalmofmyhand.Theylookedtransparent.Slowly,theymelte