專題062021新高考I卷II卷讀后續(xù)寫(母親節(jié)驚喜)講義及滿分語料10類68句背默

《2024年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分寶典》專題062021新高考I卷&II卷讀后續(xù)寫(母親節(jié)驚喜)講義及滿分語料10類68句背默（解析版）目錄真題呈現(xiàn)1答案解析2研讀材料3思維拓展3謀篇布局5滿分語料分類背誦10類68例5滿分秘訣一、無靈主語（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、情感、自然現(xiàn)象、動作行為類名詞作主語）5滿分秘訣二、動作鏈（AandB型，A,BandC型）6滿分秘訣三、獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)/with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)6滿分秘訣四、非謂語短語（作主語、賓語、狀語、定語、賓語補(bǔ)足語等）6滿分秘訣五、介詞短語位于句首7滿分秘訣六、環(huán)境描寫8滿分秘訣七、主題升華句8范文背誦9真題呈現(xiàn)真題呈現(xiàn)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【簡要分析】【原文解讀】本文以母親節(jié)為線索展開，講述了雙胞胎Jenna和Jeff為了獻(xiàn)給母親一份美味的早餐，自己動手，做起飯餐來，但是不幸的是，他們連連失敗，后來在父親的幫助下，獲得成功，他們把早餐獻(xiàn)給親愛的母親，媽媽非常感動的故事?！纠m(xù)寫線索】幫助——指導(dǎo)——積極——獻(xiàn)禮——感動【段落續(xù)寫】1.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時(shí)，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了”可知，第一段可描寫他們的父親指導(dǎo)幫助他們準(zhǔn)備早餐。2.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“這對雙胞胎把早餐端到樓上，叫醒了他們的母親”可知，第二段可描寫母親收到孩子們的禮物早餐，非常感動。第二節(jié)本文是一篇記敘文。講述的是Jenna和Jeff這對雙胞胎兄妹為了在母親節(jié)早上給母親驚喜而精心策劃并制作早餐的故事；他們克服困難，永不放棄，折射的是他們對母親的拳拳之愛。Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Knowingwhattheywerepreparingfor,hewasgreatlysurprised.Soimmediately,heofferedtogetinvolvedinthekids’job.Firstly,heputthepotofporridgeonagentleheat,askingJefftowatchoutforitgoingforfifteenminutes.Andthen,heaskedJennatobreakanothertwoeggsandmixthemwithmilk.Withallpreparationsdone,theystartedtofrybreadtogether.Inaflash,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.Totheirdelight,thebreakfastwasasuccessintheend.Paragraph1:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Eyesopened,thewomanheardaharmonious“HappyMother’sDay”fromhertwinkidswithhot,sweetbreakfastbeforeher.Behindthechildrenstoodtheirfather.Toshedlightonthegameofthegift,hetoldthemotherthewholestory.Afterlearningaboutwhathappened,sherosequicklytogazeattheboy’shandwithmovedtearsrollingdownhercheeks.“Thankyou,myhoney!”saidthemother.【導(dǎo)語】本文以母親節(jié)為線索展開，講述了雙胞胎Jenna和Jeff為了獻(xiàn)給母親一份美味的早餐，自己動手，做起飯餐來，但是不幸的是，他們連連失敗的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時(shí)，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫他們的父親指導(dǎo)幫助他們準(zhǔn)備早餐。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“這對雙胞胎把早餐端到樓上，叫醒了他們的母親?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫母親收到孩子們的禮物早餐，非常感動。2.續(xù)寫線索：指導(dǎo)——積極——獻(xiàn)禮——感動3.詞匯激活行為類①幫助：help/assist②完成：finish/plete③擁抱：hug/embrace情緒類①高興：happy/delighted②感動：moved/touched【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)

[高分句型2].Itwasnotonlythebreakfast,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.(固定短語notonly…but(also)和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)研讀材料研讀材料一、讀大意，抓中心主題雙胞胎Jeff和Jenna準(zhǔn)備在母親節(jié)為母親做法式吐司和雞肉粥的早餐，母親節(jié)當(dāng)天，他們先煮粥，然后把面包放進(jìn)雞蛋和牛奶的混合液中。但由于火太大，面包焦了，在第二塊面包將要煎成功的時(shí)候，沸騰的粥把火熄滅了，廚房里一片狼藉，Jeff的手也燙傷了，Jenna幫他用冷水沖手的時(shí)候聞到了面包燒焦的味道。二、讀人物，找續(xù)寫人物讀續(xù)寫兩段的首句可知，Dad,Mom和twins是續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的關(guān)鍵人物三、讀時(shí)態(tài)，選續(xù)寫時(shí)態(tài)通讀全文可知，該故事主要是用一般過去時(shí)講述的，故續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的時(shí)態(tài)也應(yīng)一致。四、讀結(jié)構(gòu)，辨劃分方式弄清故事的結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn)及表現(xiàn)形式，選擇合適的方式劃分段落，常用的有4種：1.以時(shí)空變化劃分(指時(shí)間和地點(diǎn))；2.以人物思想感情的變化來劃分；3.按記敘內(nèi)容的變化來劃分；4.按描述角度的變化、事情發(fā)展的階段來劃分。再看回真題，一開始，這對雙胞胎在母親節(jié)前就在策劃給母親的驚喜，而后是在母親節(jié)當(dāng)天，兩人在廚房為母親準(zhǔn)備早餐。而由續(xù)寫兩段首句可知，續(xù)寫第一段這對Twins還是在廚房里，第二段是在樓上媽媽的臥室里，人物所處地點(diǎn)不斷變化，由此可知,題目是按照時(shí)空變化來劃分的。而我們在構(gòu)思續(xù)寫內(nèi)容時(shí)也應(yīng)在這兩個(gè)地點(diǎn)的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行拓展。五、讀語言，定風(fēng)格特色挖掘文本語言表達(dá)風(fēng)格，模仿原文語言寫句子。使續(xù)寫部分的語言風(fēng)格與原文的風(fēng)格相一致，以促進(jìn)語言協(xié)同。此外，如果原文有較多對話,續(xù)寫也可出現(xiàn)對話；如原文沒有對話,盡量少用對話形式。思維導(dǎo)圖思維導(dǎo)圖謀篇布局謀篇布局續(xù)寫第一段：根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段提示句可知，早餐最終被做好了，因此本段可圍繞“爸爸出現(xiàn)”后給予雙胞胎的幫助展開故事情節(jié)，可以是爸爸給他們指出補(bǔ)救辦法，或者爸爸直接幫忙，不管是哪種構(gòu)思，雙胞胎做早餐的困難在本段應(yīng)該得到解決。續(xù)寫第二段：根據(jù)提示句可知雙胞胎已經(jīng)端著早餐上樓并叫醒媽媽，因此本段可圍繞雙胞胎見到媽媽后的故事展開，可以穿插雙胞胎和媽媽之間的對話，還可以提到爸爸假裝睡覺，最后可以通過自然式結(jié)尾，給故事畫上句號，或通過主題式結(jié)尾，突出“親情”、“勞動”、“克服困難、解決問題”等主題。語料背誦語料背誦滿分秘訣一、無靈主語（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、情感、自然現(xiàn)象、動作行為類名詞作主語）1.一看到這一片狼藉，他的下巴就驚嚇掉了。1.Hisjawdroppedopenatthesightofthegreatmess.2.如釋重負(fù)的淚水像一條斷了的珍珠項(xiàng)鏈一樣滾落下來。2.Tearsofreliefrolleddownlikeabrokenpearlnecklace.3.很快，廚房里彌漫著早餐的香味。3.Soon,thedelicioussmellofbreakfastfilledthekitchen.4.母親面帶微笑，燦爛的笑容照亮了整個(gè)房間。4.Themother’sfacebeamedandhershiningsmilelituptheroom.5.很快，一份精心設(shè)計(jì)的法式吐司和一碗粥就做好了。5.Soon,awelldesignedFrenchtoastandabowlofporridgewereready.6.當(dāng)她看到早餐時(shí)，眼睛睜大了，興奮得閃閃發(fā)光。6.Whenshesawthebreakfast,hereyeswidenedupandtwinkledwithexcitement.7.她的眼睛在早餐和雙胞胎之間徘徊，好像在問發(fā)生了什么事。7.Hereyeswanderedbetweenthebreakfastandthetwinsasifshewasaskingwhathappened.8、整個(gè)上午，大家沐浴在幸福家庭的溫暖中，度過了一段幸福的時(shí)光。8.Thatwholemorningwitnessedahappytimewitheveryonebathedinthewarmthofahappyfamily.9.她一注意到早餐端到床上，臉上就閃過一絲興奮。9.Theinstantshenoticedthebreakfastwasbroughtinbed,arippleofexcitementflashedthroughherface.10.食物的香味彌漫在臥室里，仿佛變了魔法，臥室變成了世界上最可愛的地方。10.Thescentofthefoodfilledthebedroom,which,asifbymagic,hadturnedintothemostlovelyplaceintheworld.滿分秘訣二、動作鏈（AandB型，A,BandC型）11.杰夫又吃了一片面包，這一次一切都很完美。11.Jeffputinanothersliceofbreadandthistimeeverythingwasperfect.12.他們擁抱著她，喊道：“媽媽，母親節(jié)快樂！”12.Theyhuggedherandyelled"HappyMother’sDay,Mummy!"13.父親拿出藥盒，在詹娜的手上涂了一些藥。13.FatherfetchedthemedicineboxandappliedsomemedicinetoJenna’shand.14.媽媽咬了一口三明治，大聲說這是她吃過的最好的三明治。14.Motherbitintoasandwichandexclaimeditwasthebestsandwichshehadevertasted.15.他們的母親立刻坐了起來，緊緊地?fù)肀е麄?，感激他們做的豐盛早餐。15.Theirmothersatuprightaway,huggedthemtightlyandappreciatedthemfortheirbrilliantbreakfast.滿分秘訣三、獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)/with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)16.他們的父親發(fā)現(xiàn)了混亂的局面，明白了一切。16.Spottingthemessysituation,theirfatherunderstoodeverything.17.一切都解決了，父親離開了廚房，答應(yīng)保守他們的秘密。17.Everythingsettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.18.詹娜哭了，悔恨和內(nèi)疚像無盡的潮水一樣淹沒了她。18.Jennacriedwithregretandguiltoverwhelmingherlikeendlesstides.19.他們的父親困惑地問他們，心中閃過一絲憤怒。19.Theirfatheraskedthemconfusedlywithasenseofangerfloatingupinhismind.20.母親深深地感動了，說了聲“謝謝”，擁抱著孩子們，淚水模糊了她的眼睛。20.Deeplytouched,themothersaid“Thankyou”andhuggedthekids,tearsblurringhereyes.21.母親熱淚盈眶，緊緊地?fù)е麄儭?1.Withtearswellingupinhereyes,themotherthrewherarmsaroundthemtightly.22.父親嚇了一跳，倒在地上，皺著眉頭望著現(xiàn)場。22.Astonished,Fatherwasrootedonthefloor,staringatthescenewitheyebrowfrowning.23.這對雙胞胎大喊“母親節(jié)快樂”，眼睛里閃爍著興奮的光芒。23.Thetwinsyelled“HappyMother’sDay”,withtheireyestwinklingwithexcitement.24.由于每個(gè)人都扮演不同的角色，沒過多久，他們?nèi)齻€(gè)人就完成了所有的事情。24.Witheveryonesharingdifferentroles,itdidn’ttakelongforthethreeofthemtogeteverythingdone.25.母親摟著雙胞胎，緊緊地?fù)肀е麄?，眼淚從臉頰上流下。25.Motherthrewherarmsaroundthetwinsandhuggedthemtightly,withmovingtearsstreamingdownfromcheeks.滿分秘訣四、非謂語短語（作主語、賓語、狀語、定語、賓語補(bǔ)足語等）26.父親看到這里一片狼藉，嚇得僵住了，好像在地上扎了根似的。26.Seeingthemess,Fatherfrozewithshock,asifrootedontheground.27.聽到這些話，這對雙胞胎點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭，眼睛里閃爍著興奮的光芒。27.Hearingthewords,thetwinsnoddedtheirheads,theireyesshiningwithexcitement.28.看著誘人的早餐，他們激動得失去了說話的能力。28.Lookingattheinvitingbreakfast,theyweredeprivedofallpowerofspeechbyexcitement.29.聽到這些話，這對雙胞胎點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭，眼睛里閃爍著激動的光芒。29.Hearingthewords,thetwinsnodded,withtheireyessparklingwithgreatexcitement.30.看著精心準(zhǔn)備的早餐，三人會心一笑。30.Lookingatthewellpreparedbreakfast,thethreeexchangedanunderstandingsmile.31.他們把早餐遞給她，大喊“母親節(jié)快樂！給你一個(gè)大驚喜！”31.Theyhandedthebreakfasttoher,yelling“HappyMother'sDay!Abigsurpriseforyou!”32.她站起來，把雙胞胎緊緊地抱在懷里，說：“這將是我一生中最好的早餐?！薄?32.Shegotupandheldthetwinstightlyinherarms,saying''Thiswillbethebestbreakfastinmylife."33.看到他們灰心喪氣的臉，他叫他們打掃廚房，同時(shí)幫他們給媽媽做早餐。33.Seeingtheirdiscouragedfaces,hetoldthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.34.看到美味的早餐，這對雙胞胎可以想象他們的母親在享用時(shí)會多么驚訝和自豪。34.Seeingthedeliciousbreakfast,thetwinscouldimaginehowsurprisedandproudtheirmotherwouldbewhenenjoyingit.35.她瞪大了眼睛，忍不住品嘗著早餐，驕傲地說這是她吃過的最好的早餐。35.Hereyeswidenedandshecouldnothelptastingthebreakfast,sayingproudlyitwasthebestbreakfastshehadeverhad.滿分秘訣五、介詞短語位于句首36.一瞬間，廚房的空氣中彌漫著甜甜的味道。36.Inaflash,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.37.說完之后，杰夫結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說出了他們的計(jì)劃，臉漲得通紅。37.Afterthat,Jeffstammeredouttheirplan,hisfaceflushing.38.一看到臟亂的廚房，他就知道發(fā)生了什么事。38.Atthesightofthemessykitchen,heknewwhathadhappened.39.他毫不猶豫地關(guān)上了鍋下的火。39.Withouthesitation,heturnedoffthefireburningunderthepan.40.讓他們欣慰的是，在父親的指導(dǎo)下，他們成功地做好了早餐。40.Totheirrelief,withtheguidanceoffather,theysuccessfullymadethebreakfast.41.一看到法式吐司和粥，他們的媽媽就哭了：“太驚喜了！”41.AtthesightoftheFrenchtoastandporridge,theirmumletoutacry,“Whatasurprise!”42.他們的父親沒有責(zé)怪他們的粗心大意，而是燦爛地微笑著拍拍他們的頭。42.Insteadofblamingthemfortheircarelessness,theirfatherputonabrightsmileandpattedontheirheads.43.不到一個(gè)小時(shí)，廚房就打掃干凈了，父親做了一些雞蛋三明治，煮了一些燕麥粥。43.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascleaned,andFatherhadmadesomeeggsandwichesandcookedsomeoatporridge.44.在父親的指導(dǎo)下，他們收拾殘局，成功地做了法式吐司和雞肉粥。44.Undertheirfather’sinstruction,theycleanedupthemessandsucceededinmakingFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.滿分秘訣六、形容詞、副詞短語位于句首45.他們的母親既震驚又驕傲，輕聲說：“謝謝，我的孩子們。”45.Shockedandproud,theirmothersaidinasweetwhisper,“Thanks,mykids.”46.很快，美味誘人的法式吐司和雞肉粥就做好了。46.SoonthedeliciousandinvitingFrenchtoastandchickenporridgewereready.滿分秘訣七、直接引語/簡潔對話47.他輕輕地拍了拍，安慰道：“別擔(dān)心，我會幫你修的?！?7.Hepattedthemgently,forting“Don'tworry!I'llhelpyoufixit.”48.“驚喜！媽媽，母親節(jié)快樂！”他們說著，把胳膊舉向空中。48.“Surprise!Happymother’sday,mummy!”Theysaid,throwingtheirarmsintotheair.49.他笑著小聲對他們說：“哇，你們兩個(gè)真讓我驚訝，我能和你們一起去嗎？”49.Hewhisperedtothemwithasmile,“Wow,youtworeallysurprisedme,canIjoinyou?”50.“別慌！”他遞給每個(gè)人一條濕毛巾，幫助他們迅速清理殘局。50.“Don’tpanic!”hehandedeachoneawettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessquickly.51.這個(gè)世上最幸福媽媽不停地重復(fù)著，“謝謝你們，寶貝?！?1.“Thankyou,myhoney.”thehappiestmotherintheworldkeptrepeatingthesewords.滿分秘訣八、特殊句式（倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)、感嘆）52.驚喜來得太突然他們的母親沒有意識到發(fā)生了什么事。52.Sosuddenwasthesurprisethattheirmotherdidn'trealizewhathadhappened.53.她非常高興，緊緊地抱著雙胞胎，喜悅的淚水奪眶而出。53.Sodelightedwasshethatshehuggedthetwinstightly,tearsofjoywellingupinhereyes.54.她羞愧得低著頭流下了愧疚的淚水。54.Soashamedwasshethatsheshedguiltytearswithheaddrooping.55.他們的母親突然沒有意識到發(fā)生了什么事。55.Sosuddenwasthesurprisethattheirmotherdidn'trealizewhathadhappened.56.媽媽剛一醒來，就發(fā)現(xiàn)了美味的早餐。56.Nosoonerhadmotherwokenupthanshespottedthedeliciousbreakfast.57.家庭的愛有助于做出最美味的早餐。57.Itisthefamilylovethathelpsmakethemostdeliciousbreakfast.58.在任何情況下，他們的母親都沒有想到她的一天會以這樣一份溫暖的禮物開始。58.Undernocircumstanceshadtheirmotherexpectedherdaytostartwithsuchawarmgift.滿分秘訣九、環(huán)境描寫59.陽光透過窗戶照在驕傲的母親臉上。59.Thesunwasshiningontheproudmother’sfacethroughthewindows.60.清晨的陽光灑進(jìn)來，全家人沐浴在愛和幸福之中。60.Theearlysunlightstreamingin,thewholefamilywerebathedinloveandhappiness.61.沐浴在陽光下，他們一起享用早餐。61.Bathedinthesunshine,theyenjoyedthebreakfasttogether.滿分秘訣十、主題升華句62.整個(gè)房間都沐浴在母親節(jié)快樂的氣氛中。62.ThewholeroomwasbathedinahappyMother'sDayatmosphere.63.他們的父親站在門口，記下這感動的場面。63.他們的父親站在門旁，記錄著這感人的一幕。63.Theirfatherwasstandingbesidethedoor,recordingthistouchingscene.64.這位父親用相機(jī)記錄下了令人難忘的一幕。多么令人驚喜的母親節(jié)啊。64.Usingthecamera,thefatherrecordedthememorablescene.WhataMother’sDaySurprise.65.沉浸在家庭的愛中，媽媽高興地