Module9寫作能力提升練課件英語八年級下冊

Module9FriendshipModule9寫作能力提升練?

?素材典藏單詞separate,explain,treat,lonely,regret,patient,encourage,friendly,treasure短語

explain

sth.to

sb.,

feel

lonely,in

silence,encourage

sb.to

do

sth.,

day

by

day句型1.

I

was

lonely,and

afraid

to

make

friends

with

anyone.2.

It

made

me

feel

happy,lively

and

warm.3.

It

was

like

a

hidden

treasure

and

changed

my

life.?

?經(jīng)典例題Dear

Li

Ling

,I

have

a

problem

in

the

new

school.I

often

feel

lonely

and

worried.I

have

no

close

friends

and

I

don't

know

how

to

get

along

well

with

my

classmates.What

should

I

do

?

Yours,

Wang

Xiaowei［審題指導］1.體裁：

應(yīng)用文2.人稱：

以第二人稱為主3.時態(tài)：

一般現(xiàn)在時為主［思路構(gòu)建］［范文欣賞］DearWangXiaowei，Gladtoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter，yousaidyoufeltlonelyandworried.Don’tworryaboutit.Hereissomeadvice.First，friendshipisatreasureforeveryonebecauseitbringsalotofhappiness.Whetheryouareatschoolornot，trytomakefriendswithyourclassmates.Second，youshouldtrytohelpothers.

Helpingothersisagoodwaytodevelopfriendship.Third，

pleaseremembertogiveeveryoneasmileeveryday.Ifso，youwillbehappyandhavemorefriends.Ihopeyoucanenjoyyourself.Bestwishes.Yours，LiLing?

?寫作實踐朋友是我們生命中最重要的存在。你的朋友是怎樣的一個人呢？為什么你們會成為朋友？請寫一篇短文來向我們介紹你的一位朋友吧。要點：1.描述自己與朋友的相同點和不同點；2.至少舉一個例子說明你們成為朋友的原因；3.談?wù)勀銓τ颜x的感悟。要求：

詞數(shù)：不少于90。

MyFriend

Ihavealotoffriends.AndmybestfriendisKate.Weareinthesameclass.Sheisastallasme.Herhairislongerthanmine.SheisoutgoingandfunnybutIamquiet.WhenIamsad，sheoftenmakesmelaugh.Wehavethesameinterest.Webothlikereadingbooks.ShelikesnovelsandIlikestories.Weoftentalkaboutourbookswitheachother.MyFriend

Ihavealotoffriends.AndmybestfriendisKate.Weareinthesameclass.Sheisastallasme.Herhairislongerthanmine.SheisoutgoingandfunnybutIamquiet.WhenIamsad，sheoftenmakesmelaugh.Wehavethesameinterest.Webothlikereadingbooks.ShelikesnovelsandIlikestories.Weoftentalkaboutourbookswitheachother.HerEnglishisgoodbutIampooratit.WhenIhaveproblems，shealwayshelpsme.Shetellsmesomegoodlearningmethods.Withoutherhelp，myEnglishwon’timprovesomuch.

Itreasureourfriendshipverymuch.Ithinkitisthemostpreciousthinginmylife.Imusttakegoodcareoftheboatofourfriendship.

?HerEnglishisgoodbutIampooratit.WhenIhaveproblems，shealwayshelpsme.Shetellsmesomegoodlearningmethods.Withoutherhelp，myEnglishwon’timprovesomuch.

Itreasureourfriendshipverymuch.Ithinkitisthemostpreciousthinginmylife.Imusttakegoodcareoftheboatofourfriendship.

?一、話題分析本模塊以“friendship(友誼)”為話題,討論了擁有朋友的重要性及怎樣尋求建議或幫助解決朋友之間出現(xiàn)的問題。書面表達中要求同學們能夠運用所學的知識介紹自己的朋友或友誼，并能對朋友間出現(xiàn)的問題提出合理化建議。同學們要學會運用所學知識和技能,積極樂觀地生活學習,誠實交往,與朋友一起成長進步。二、寫作方法“三要素”法寫友誼類話題作文1.展示主題，確立中心。2.圍繞中心，分層陳述。3.總結(jié)全文，表達感想。三、素材積累1.“友誼”類話題的常用詞匯：friendship//important//treat//suggestion//difficult//share//solvetheproblem//feel//respect//honest//friendly//trustyourfriend//understandothers//eachother...2.“友誼”類話題的常用句子：開頭句1.Everyoneneedsfriendship.2.Friendshipisveryimportantineveryone’slife.3.Ithinkfriendshipisthebrightestfeelingintheworld.4.I’llgiveyousomeadviceonmakingfriends.中間句1.Youaresupposedtorespectthem.2.Thenyouwillmakemorefriends.3.We’vebeenfriendsfor...4.Trytomakefriendswithyourclassmateswhetheryouareatschoolornot.5.Youshouldtrytohelpthemwhentheyareintrouble.6.First,youshouldbefriendlytoothers.結(jié)尾句1.Ifyoudoso,Ibelievethatyou’llhavemorefriends.2.Inmyopinion,friendshipisveryimportantandweshouldtreasureitinourlife.四、寫作任務(wù)友誼是我們生活中的重要組成部分。請你結(jié)合下面的漢語提示用英語談?wù)勗谏钪袘?yīng)該如何對待朋友。提示：1.學會傾聽和分享；

2.彼此坦誠,不要說謊；3.互相信任是很重要的；4.我們應(yīng)該理解朋友的感受；5.當遇到困難,我們要互相幫助?！緦懽髂０濉空故局黝}，確立中心圍繞中心，分層陳述總結(jié)全文，表達感想Friendshipisanimportantpartinourlife.Friendsaretheimportantpartinourlife.First,learntolistenandshare.Second,behonesttoothers.Third,trustyourfriends.Fourth,weshouldunderstandfriends’feelings.Finally,helpeachother.友誼【高分作文】______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Friendshipisanimportantpartinourlife.Howshouldwetreatourfriendsinourlife?First,learntolistenandshare.Whenourfriendstalktous,weshouldlistentothemcarefully.Second,behonesttoothers.Don’tlietoourparents,teachersorfriends.Third,trustyourfriends.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________It’simportantto