高考英語(yǔ)沖刺讀后續(xù)寫失去父親的圣誕節(jié)講義

讀后續(xù)寫原文Actofmemory

Iwasayounggirlofeleventhen,livinginBrooklyn.Myfatherhad

diedunexpectedly

thatsummer.Timeswassuddenlyveryhardformymother,mybrother,andme.

那時(shí)我還是一個(gè)十一歲的小女孩，住在布魯克林。那年夏天，我父親意外去世了。突然間，我的母親、哥哥和我的日子都很難過(guò)

PapahadalwaysmadeabigdealoutofChristmas.EveryChristmas,whenwewereabouttodecoratethetree,

hewouldmakealittleceremonyoutoftakingaspeciallittleKewpie-dolloutofitsbox,holdingitupinfrontofme,saying,“Maria,thisdollisasoldasyouare.”ThenhewouldhangitontheChristmastree.

PapaboughtthatlittledollwhenIwasborn,andthenitbecameasmalltradition.ButthisChristmasweweretohavenotree.Mymotherwasapracticalwoman,sayingitwasaluxury.Ithought,withquietbutstrongbitternessandanger,thatithadnevermeantasmuchtoherasithadtoPapaanyway.

爸爸總是把圣誕節(jié)當(dāng)作一件大事。每年圣誕節(jié)，當(dāng)我們準(zhǔn)備裝飾圣誕樹時(shí)，他都會(huì)做一個(gè)小小的儀式，從盒子里拿出一個(gè)特別的小丘比娃娃，把它舉到我面前，說(shuō)：“瑪麗亞，這個(gè)娃娃和你一樣老了?！比缓笏麜?huì)把它掛在圣誕樹上。我出生的時(shí)候爸爸就買了那個(gè)小娃娃，然后它就成了一個(gè)小傳統(tǒng)。但是今年圣誕節(jié)我們沒有樹了。我母親是一個(gè)務(wù)實(shí)的女人，說(shuō)這是一種奢侈。我?guī)е届o但強(qiáng)烈的苦澀和憤怒，心想這對(duì)她來(lái)說(shuō)從來(lái)沒有像對(duì)爸爸那樣重要。

Wehadbeentochurchthateveningandwerewalkingbackhome

insilence.AllIcouldseewerethetree-litwindowswepassed.Theircheerfulglowmademybitternessevenmoreintensebecause

Ipicturedhappyfamiliesinthosehouses,sharinglaughter,exchangingpresents,talking,joking.

Iknewwhilearrivinghome,wewould

begreetedby

darkenedwindowsandendlessemptiness.

那天晚上我們?nèi)チ私烫?，正默默地走回家。我所能看到的只是我們?jīng)過(guò)的那些被樹照亮的窗戶。他們歡快的光芒讓我的痛苦更加強(qiáng)烈，因?yàn)槲蚁胂笾腋５募彝ピ谀切┓孔永?，分享歡笑，交換禮物，交談，開玩笑。我知道，當(dāng)我們到家時(shí)，迎接我們的將是黑暗的窗戶和無(wú)盡的空虛。

Aswepassedmyfriend’shouse,Iaskedmymothertopleaseletme

dropin

forawhile.Shenodded.Iwaiteduntilmymotherandbrotherdisappearedaroundthecorner.ThenIturnedandheadedformyfriend’shouse.Suddenly,apileofabandonedChristmastreesfromthestorenexttoherhouse

cameintomysight.Surprisedandexcited,Idashedtothetrees,pickedoutthebestoneandbeganhalf-draggingmytreasurehome.

ItseemedasifPapawasmixedupinthissomehow.Itseemedasifhewasinthestarsaboveme,ineverylighted-house,intheverytreeIwascarrying.

當(dāng)我們經(jīng)過(guò)我朋友家時(shí)，我請(qǐng)我媽媽讓我順便來(lái)一下。她點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭。我一直等到母親和弟弟在拐角處不見了。然后我轉(zhuǎn)身向朋友家走去。突然，她家旁邊商店里的一堆廢棄的圣誕樹進(jìn)入了我的視線。我既驚訝又興奮，沖到樹上，挑選出最好的一棵，開始半拖著我的寶貝回家。爸爸似乎不知怎么地卷入了這件事。他似乎就在我頭頂?shù)男切抢?，在每一座燈火通明的房子里，在我抱著的那棵樹上?/p>

注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150

左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Para1:WhenIgothome,Irangthedoorbellandcouldn’twaittoshowthemthetree.

Para2:Beforegoingtobed,Islippedtoseemytreeonelasttimebutsawmymotherstandinginfrontofit.

文章大意文章大意：本文以人物為線索展開，講述了在父親去世后，由此日子突然變得非常艱難。作者的爸爸總是把圣誕節(jié)看得很重。每年過(guò)圣誕節(jié)的時(shí)候都會(huì)有圣誕樹的裝飾而且還會(huì)在樹上掛娃娃，可是因?yàn)榘职值娜ナ?，所有的一切都已然不再。就在這次的圣誕節(jié)夜晚，作者和家人從教堂回來(lái)之后，作者借由去鄰居家串門的時(shí)候，

看到了隔壁商店里一堆廢棄的圣誕樹，作者從中挑選了最好的一棵，然后帶回家進(jìn)行裝扮，所發(fā)生的故事。參考范文Para1:

①brother的反應(yīng)—欣喜②媽媽的反應(yīng)—最好是沉默③一起裝扮圣誕樹④銜接Para1:

WhenIgothome,Irangthedoorbellandcouldn’twaittoshowthemthetree.Mybrother

answeredthedoorwithhisastonishedbutcheerfullook,saying,“Wheredidyougetthat?”Facingtheirdoubt,Iexplainedwhathadhappened.We

dragged

thetreeinside

andimmediately

startedtodecorateitwithawildexcitement.However,she

stoodinsilence

andtooknopart.Itwasatthatmomentthat

mybitternessandangercouldn’tbeheldback

anymore.“ItwouldmeanalottoPapa.”I

dashedtomybedroom,

tearsstreamingdown.(刻畫矛盾沖突)或者Seizedbyexultation(興高采烈),Icouldhave

stayedupallnight

decoratingit.Butmymother

insistedthat

itwasnearlymidnight,andthat

weshould

allgetreadytobed.We

hadnoalternativebut

to

saygoodnight.(銜接)Para2:

①我觀察媽媽的行為②理解媽媽之前的沉默③主題—回憶的形式有所不同Para2:Beforegoingtobed,Islippedtoseemytreeonelasttimebutsawmymotherstandinginfrontofit.Thetreewas

helduprightoverthere,decoratedwith

sometinyChristmas

bulbs(燈泡).Surprisedbythescene,I

cautiouslyapproached

mymother.

Meanwhile,sheturnedaround

withtheKewpie-doll

gripped(緊握)inherhands.

Asif

noticingmyfeelings,thepracticallady

squeezedoutagentle

smile(擠出微笑)while

tearswelledupinhereyes.“Maria,thedollisasoldasyouare.”HearingthesamewordsPapahadsaideveryyear,I

threwmyselfintomymother’sarms,burstingintotears.

NotuntilthendidIrealizethat

wemighthavedifferentactsofmemory,butwehadthesamelovetoPapa,andtothefamily.（主題句）中文意譯：第一段：當(dāng)我回到家時(shí)，我按了門鈴，迫不及待地想給他們看那棵樹。我哥哥驚訝但高興地應(yīng)門說(shuō)：“你從哪里弄來(lái)的？”面對(duì)他們的懷疑，我解釋了發(fā)生的事情。我們把這棵樹拖了進(jìn)去，立刻開始用一種瘋狂的興奮來(lái)裝飾它。然而，她沉默地站著，沒有參加。正是在那一刻，我的痛苦和憤怒再也無(wú)法抑制了?！斑@對(duì)爸爸來(lái)說(shuō)意義重大?！蔽覜_到臥室，淚流滿面。我欣喜若狂，本可以徹夜裝飾它。但我母親