新高考英語三輪沖刺重難點(diǎn)練習(xí)熱點(diǎn)04 人物介紹之應(yīng)用文寫作押題（解析版）

熱點(diǎn)04人物介紹之應(yīng)用文寫作押題

縱覽高考命題思路，2023年全國甲卷應(yīng)用文寫作中考到人物介紹的話題，雖然新高考卷沒有出現(xiàn)，但是人物介紹依然是寫作的熱點(diǎn)話題，人物介紹主要要寫該人物是誰，主要貢獻(xiàn)是什么，該人物的影響等，所以平?？忌喾e累人物介紹的素材，才能在考試中游刃有余。（一）人物簡介的寫作步驟；(概,貌,育,平,估)1）概.age,sex,birth-place,background2）貌,.)appearance,character3）育,education4）平,bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)5）估.evaluation(二)語法，句法高分技巧A.概況（盡量用同位語結(jié)構(gòu)，分詞)B．外貌,性格(巧用with做定語)C.教育經(jīng)歷(注意盡量用非謂語動(dòng)詞,使文章精煉)D．生平(盡量用復(fù)合句倒裝,非限定定語從句等，潤色文章)E．評估（注意運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞,形容詞等短語，詞組）典例分析典例分析（2023·浙江麗水·統(tǒng)考期末）假定你是李華，將參加學(xué)校舉行的以“ThePersonIamEspeciallyMovedby”為主題的英文演講比賽。請你寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.人物介紹；2.感動(dòng)原因；3.對你的影響。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Dearfellowstudents,It’smyprivilegetodeliveraspeechhere.Ofallthemostrespectablepeople,IamespeciallymovedbyZhongNanshan.This85-year-oldmanwithgrayhairworksreallyhard,forthepeople,forthemotherland,forhisresponsibility.HeisoneofChineseheroesvolunteeringmanytimestofightagainstpandemics.Thepictureofhimrestingonthehigh-speedrailseatmadeustouchedandtearful.SuchgreatcontributiondidhemakethathewasawardedtheMedaloftheRepublic.Hisdeedsandspiritdomakeagreatdifferencetome.Thankyou.【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生為即將參加學(xué)校舉行的英文演講比賽寫一篇英文演講稿，主題為“ThePersonIamEspeciallyMovedby”，內(nèi)容包括：人物介紹；感動(dòng)原因；對你的影響。【詳解】1.詞匯積累榮耀：privilege→honor發(fā)表演講：deliveraspeech→makeaspeech祖國：motherland→homeland責(zé)任：responsibility→duty2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：This85-year-oldmanwithgrayhairworksreallyhard,forthepeople,forthemotherland,forhisresponsibility.拓展句：This85-year-oldmanwhosehairisgrayworksreallyhard,forthepeople,forthemotherland,forhisresponsibility.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]HeisoneofChineseheroesvolunteeringmanytimestofightagainstpandemics.(運(yùn)用了非謂語動(dòng)詞做后置定語)[高分句型2]SuchgreatcontributiondidhemakethathewasawardedtheMedaloftheRepublic.

(運(yùn)用了倒裝句，即在“such…that+句子”句型中，such位于句首，該部分用部分倒裝)（建議用時(shí)：10分鐘/篇）1．（2023上·山東·高三校聯(lián)考開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter對中國文學(xué)作品感興趣，來信請你介紹一位中國古代文學(xué)作家及其作品，請你給他寫一封e-mail，內(nèi)容如下：1.介紹一位中國古代文學(xué)作家及其作品；2.說明你喜歡的理由。注意：1、詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dearpeter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,I’mgladtoknowthatyouareinterestedinChineseclassicworks.NowIamwritingtointroduceSushiandhisworkstoyou.SushilivedinSongDynastyinancientChina.Duringhislife,hecreatedmanyworks,includingpoemsandmanyessays.Ihavereadalotofhisworks,andonepoemcalledOdetoChibiismyfavorite,whichdescribedonebigwarbreakingoutontheYangtzeRiver.IadmireSushiforhisgreatcontributionstotheliteratureandhishighspiritwhenfacingchallenges.Iamsureyouwillalsolikehisworks.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國朋友Peter寫封e-mail，介紹一位中國古代文學(xué)作家及其作品?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累高興的：glad→delighted給……取名：call→name肯定的：sure→certain對……感興趣：beinterestedin→showinterestin2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Duringhislife,hecreatedmanyworks,includingpoemsandmanyessays.拓展句：Duringhislife,hecreatedmanyworks,whichincludedpoemsandmanyessays.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I’mgladtoknowthatyouareinterestedinChineseclassicworks.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型2]Ihavereadalotofhisworks,andonepoemcalledOdetoChibiismyfavorite,whichdescribedonebigwarbreakingoutontheYangtzeRiver.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)2．（2023·浙江金華·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測）下周，你將參與你校與英國友好學(xué)校舉辦的“我最喜愛的藝術(shù)家”線上交流活動(dòng)。請你準(zhǔn)備一篇英語發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹你最喜愛的藝術(shù)家及其代表作；2.說明理由。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearall,Itismypleasuretosharewithyoutodayaboutmyfavoriteartist,VincentvanGogh.VanGoghwasaDutchpost-impressionistpainter,bestknownforhisvividandexpressiveuseofcolor.Oneofhismostfamousworksis“StarryNight”,whichdepictsthenightskyoveravillageinFrance.Theswirlingstarsandboldbrushstrokesmakethepaintingcometolife,conveyingasenseofmovementandemotion.IadmirevanGoghbecauseofhisabilitytoconveyintenseemotionsthroughhisart.Hehadadifficultlife,strugglingwithmentalillnessandpoverty,buthefoundcomfortandmeaninginhispainting.Hisdedicationandpassionforartaretrulyinspiringtome.Thankyouforlistening.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校將與英國友好學(xué)校舉辦的“我最喜愛的藝術(shù)家”線上交流活動(dòng)，要求考生準(zhǔn)備一篇英語發(fā)言稿，介紹自己最喜愛的藝術(shù)家及其代表作，并說明理由?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累樂事：pleasure→enjoyment/delight知名的：known→renowned/famous描繪：depict→portray因?yàn)椋篵ecauseof→dueto2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：VanGoghwasaDutchpost-impressionistpainter,bestknownforhisvividandexpressiveuseofcolor.拓展句：VanGogh,whoisbestknownforhisvividandexpressiveuseofcolor,wasaDutchpost-impressionistpainter.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Oneofhismostfamousworksis“StarryNight”,whichdepictsthenightskyoveravillageinFrance.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Theswirlingstarsandboldbrushstrokesmakethepaintingcometolife,conveyingasenseofmovementandemotion.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語)3．（2023上·湖北襄陽·高三校聯(lián)考期中）假如你是紅星中學(xué)校報(bào)記者李華，請你為中學(xué)生英語報(bào)社寫一篇新聞報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：人物王宗源，男，2001年10月24日出生于湖北襄陽事件杭州亞運(yùn)會(huì)獲得兩枚跳水金牌。六歲前學(xué)習(xí)體操，游泳，后轉(zhuǎn)跳水，2017年進(jìn)國家跳水隊(duì)。曾獲2021年東京奧運(yùn)會(huì)男子跳水冠軍。個(gè)人感想……注意：1．寫作字?jǐn)?shù)80左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AmongtheoutstandingfiguresshiningattheHangzhouAsianGames,WangZongyuanisabsolutelyanimpressiveone,whodemonstratedhisexceptionalpowerandwon2divinggoldmedalsforChina.BornonOctober24th,2001,WangZongyuanspentmostofhischildhoodpracticinggymnasticsinhishometown,Xiangyang,hubeiprovince.Thenhewasdiscoveredasatalenteddiver.Afterjoininginthenationalswimmingteamin2017,WanggothisfirstworldchampioninTokyoOlympicsin2001,whichopenedhisremarkablejourneyintheswimmingworld.NotonlydoesWangZongyuandevotehisownpowertothedivingeventofChina,buthealsosetsagoodexampletotheyoungswimmersinChina.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給中學(xué)生英語報(bào)社寫一篇新聞報(bào)道，報(bào)道杭州亞運(yùn)會(huì)兩枚跳水金牌獲得者王宗源的事跡?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累優(yōu)秀的：outstanding→superb完全地：absolutely→completely表現(xiàn)，顯露：demonstrate→show非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：BornonOctober24th,2001,WangZongyuanspentmostofhischildhoodpracticinggymnasticsinhishometown,Xiangyang,hubeiprovince.拓展句：WangZongyuan,whowasbornonOctober24th,2001,spentmostofhischildhoodpracticinggymnasticsinhishometown,Xiangyang,hubeiprovince.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】AmongtheoutstandingfiguresshiningattheHangzhouAsianGames,WangZongyuanisabsolutelyanimpressiveone,whodemonstratedhisexceptionalpowerandwon2divinggoldmedalsforChina.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】NotonlydoesWangZongyuandevotehisownpowertothedivingeventofChina,buthealsosetsagoodexampletotheyoungswimmersinChina.(運(yùn)用了部分倒裝句)4．（2023上·山東濰坊·高三統(tǒng)考階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，你班本周ClassReport的主題是AManofPerseverance。請你寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.人物事跡簡介；2.給你的啟示。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Goodmorning,everyone.Today,I’dliketoshareastoryaboutamanofperseverance.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Goodmorning,everyone.Today,I’dliketoshareastoryaboutamanofperseverance.ThomasEdison,thegreatinventor,facednumerousfailuresbeforehisgroundbreakingsuccess.Hemadecountlessattemptstoinventtheelectriclightbulb,experiencingoverathousandfailures.However,insteadofgivingup,hefamouslysaid,“Ihavenotfailed.I’vejustfound10,000waysthatwon’twork.”Histenacityandrefusaltoacceptdefeatultimatelyledhimtosuccess,foreverchangingtheworld.Thisstoryteachesmeavaluablelessonaboutperseverance.Itremindsmethatfailureisnotareasontoquitbutanopportunitytolearnandgrow.Itisthroughpersistencethatwecanovercomeobstaclesandachieveourgoals.Inconclusion,letusrememberthewordsofThomasEdisonandembraceperseveranceinourownlives.Thanksforyourlistening.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。題目要求考生寫一篇主題為AManofPerseverance的發(fā)言稿參加本周的課堂報(bào)告，需簡要介紹人物事跡，并分享自己得到的啟示。【詳解】1.詞匯積累無數(shù)的：numerous→countless,numberless,innumerable經(jīng)歷：experience→undergo,gothrough放棄：giveup→quit,abandon寶貴的：valuable→precious,treasurable戰(zhàn)勝：overcome→conquer,surmount阻礙：obstacle→barrier,impediment實(shí)現(xiàn)：achieve→accomplish,obtain2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Histenacityandrefusaltoacceptdefeatultimatelyledhimtosuccess,foreverchangingtheworld.拓展句：Histenacityandrefusaltoacceptdefeatultimatelyledhimtosuccess,whichhasforeverchangedtheworld.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Itremindsmethatfailureisnotareasontoquitbutanopportunitytolearnandgrow.(運(yùn)用了連接詞that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]Itisthroughpersistencethatwecanovercomeobstaclesandachieveourgoals.(運(yùn)用了Itis…that…強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)5．（2023下·湖北襄陽·高三襄陽市襄州區(qū)第一高級中學(xué)?？奸_學(xué)考試）進(jìn)入新時(shí)代，我們的身邊涌現(xiàn)出了許多青年榜樣：如零零后消防員，零零后志愿者等。為了向青年榜樣們學(xué)習(xí)，你校組織了主題為“WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility”的英語征文活動(dòng)，請你投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.青年榜樣的突出品質(zhì)；2.他們對你的影響；3.呼吁年輕人向他們學(xué)習(xí)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.請?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WeShouldShouldertheResponsibilityNowadays,manyyoungrolemodelshaveemergedinvariousfields:post-00sfirefighters,post-00svolunteers,etc.Theydemonstratetheirbraveryandambition,especially,theirsenseofresponsibility.Theymakemethinkaboutourresponsibility.Asastudent,studyisourpriorityandweshouldshouldertheresponsibilitytocompleteourstudiesseriouslyanddosolidwork.Onlyifweareequippedwithknowledgecanwebetterserveourcountry.Meanwhile,wehavetogrowupwithphysicalandmentalhealth,whichiswhatourbelovedparentsexpect.That’swhyweshouldnotshirkanyresponsibilityofloveandcare.Toconclude,Iappealtoalltheyoungpeopletolearnfromthemandshouldertheresponsibility.【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，現(xiàn)要求考生寫一篇“WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility”英語征文投稿。其內(nèi)容包括：青年榜樣的突出品質(zhì)、他們對你的影響以及呼吁年輕人向他們學(xué)習(xí)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累很多：many→plentyof特別：especially→inparticular考慮：thinkabout→reflecton應(yīng)該：should→besupposedto2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Theymakemethinkaboutourresponsibility.復(fù)合句：Whattheydidmademethinkaboutourresponsibility.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Onlyifweareequippedwithknowledgecanwebetterserveourcountry.（onlyif放在句首的倒裝句）【高分句型2】That’swhyweshouldnotshirkanyresponsibilityofloveandcare.（why引導(dǎo)的表語從句）6．（2023·河北·校聯(lián)考三模）假定你是李華，受校英文報(bào)約稿，請你寫一篇介紹某位名人的英語短文，刊登在校英文報(bào)People專欄，內(nèi)容包括：1.該人物的生平；2.他的主要事跡；3.你的評價(jià)。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:YuanLongping,knownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”,isoneofChina’smostfamousscientists.YuanLongpingwasborninSeptember1930anddiedin2021,aged91.Hecultivatedtheworld’sfirsthigh-yieldinghybridrice,whichhashelpedfeednearlyone-fifthoftheworld’spopulation.AfterfightingChina’sfoodshortages,heturnedhisattentiontoamuchbiggerchallenge,solvingworldhunger.Sincethe1980s,Yuan’steamhasofferedtrainingcoursesindozensofcountriesinAfrica,theAmericasandAsia,providingahugefoodsourceinareaswithhighrisksoffamine.YuanLongping’slegacyisnotonlytheprogressofhybridrice-hiscuriosity,devotion,courage,perseverance,diligence,cooperationandselflessnesshaveleftanindeliblespiritualwealthtousall.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放性作文。要求考生對于受校英文報(bào)約稿這一情況，寫一篇介紹某位名人的英語短文，刊登在校英文報(bào)People專欄?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累培育：cultivated→breed提供：offer→provide巨大的：huge→enormous財(cái)富：wealth→treasure2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：YuanLongping,knownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”,isoneofChina’smostfamousscientists.拓展句：YuanLongping,whoisknownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”,isoneofChina’smostfamousscientists.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Hecultivatedtheworld’sfirsthigh-yieldinghybridrice,whichhashelpedfeednearlyone-fifthoftheworld’spopulation.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Sincethe1980s,Yuan’steamhasofferedtrainingcoursesindozensofcountriesinAfrica,theAmericasandAsia,providingahugefoodsourceinareaswithhighrisksoffamine.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）7．（2023·湖南邵陽·統(tǒng)考二模）在2022年8月發(fā)生的重慶山火和2023年1月發(fā)生的瀘定地震中涌現(xiàn)出了很多青年逆行者榜樣人物：00后消防員，00后志愿者等。你校正在組織“WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility”英語征文活動(dòng)，請你投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1．青年榜樣的突出品質(zhì)；2．他們對你的影響；3．呼吁年輕人向他們學(xué)習(xí)。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．參考詞匯：00后：post-2000sgeneration／post-00s；3．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:WeShouldShouldertheResponsibilityRecentlymanyyoungrolemodelsemergedinthemountainfireinChongqingandtheLudingearthquake,inwhichpost-00sfirefighters,post-00svolunteersshowedtheirbraveryandambition,especially,theirsenseofresponsibility.Whattheydidmademethinkaboutourresponsibility.Asyoungpeople,wehavetoworkhardtoservethecountry.Asastudent,wehavearesponsibilitytocompleteourstudiesseriouslyandsteadfastly,enduringallkindsofhardship.Weshouldnotescapeanyresponsibilityofloveandcare.Inaword,allofusyoungpeopleshouldlearnfromthemandshoulderourresponsibility.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給學(xué)校組織的以“WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility”為題的英語征文活動(dòng)投稿，內(nèi)容包括青年榜樣的品質(zhì)、影響并呼吁學(xué)生向他們學(xué)習(xí)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累承擔(dān)，肩負(fù)：shoulder→undertake完成：complete→finish忍受：endure→bear總之：inaword→inshort2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Asyoungpeople,wehavetoworkhardtoservethecountry.拓展句：Asyoungpeople,wehavetoworkhardtoservethecountry,whichcanshowourloveforourcountry.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Whattheydidmademethinkaboutourresponsibility.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)主語從句)【高分句型2】Asastudent,wehavearesponsibilitytocompleteourstudiesseriouslyandsteadfastly,enduringallkindsofhardship.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語)8．（2023上·安徽·高三校聯(lián)考期末）假定你是李華，你們班本周將舉行一次英文主題班會(huì)，介紹為人類做出突出貢獻(xiàn)的人物。請你寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1.人物簡介；2.做出的貢獻(xiàn)；3.你的感想。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TuYouyouTuYouyouisagreatChinesemedicalscientist.Determinedtohelpthosesufferingfrommalaria,TuYouyoudevotedmostofhertimetofindingthecure.Luckily,hereffortspaidoff.In2015,shewasawardedtheNobelPrizeinPhysiologyorMedicinefordiscoveringartemisinin,whichisthekeytothetreatmentofmalaria.Behindhersuccesswerenumerousfailuresandsetbacks,butneverdidshegiveup.Sogreatishercontributiontotheworldthatshehasbecomeanidolofmanypeople,includingme.Inspiredbyherstory,Idecidetostudyhardersoastorealizemydream.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說明文，介紹一位為人類做出突出貢獻(xiàn)的人物，包括人物簡介及其所做貢獻(xiàn)并分享自己的感想?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累下定決心的：determined→resolved幸運(yùn)地：luckily→fortunately努力：effort→endeavor無數(shù)的：numerous→countless實(shí)現(xiàn)：realize→achieve2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Determinedtohelpthosesufferingfrommalaria,TuYouyoudevotedmostofhertimetofindingthecure.拓展句：Asshewasdeterminedtohelpthosesufferingfrommalaria,TuYouyoudevotedmostofhertimetofindingthecure.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】In2015,shewasawardedtheNobelPrizeinPhysiologyorMedicinefordiscoveringartemisinin,whichisthekeytothetreatmentofmalaria.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Behindhersuccesswerenumerousfailuresandsetbacks,butneverdidshegiveup.（運(yùn)用了介詞短語置于句首的全部倒裝及否定詞位于句首的部分倒裝）【高分句型3】Sogreatishercontribution