高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)+圣誕雨夜的奇跡：安娜、莫莉與胡安的溫暖故事+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)圣誕雨夜的奇跡：安娜、莫莉與胡安的溫暖故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文MaybethereisaFatherChristmas!AnnastoodanxiouslystaringatthepouringrainwhilelittleMollylookedupataprettydollinthewindowofthetoyshopontheedgeoftown."Mummy,"Mollysaid,"that'sthedollIwouldlikeFatherChristmastobringme."AtearrolleddownAnna'scheekandsheknewitwouldbeimpossiblethisyear.TheyweresupposedtostartanewlifeinSpainoneandahalfyearsagobeforeherhusbandTimwascruellytakenfromthembyacar.TheirsmallamountofsavingswerequicklyspentonTim’sfuneralcostsandnecessities,leavingherinheavydebt.Toherrelief,thelocalpeoplehadhelpedtosupportherthroughthesedifficulttimesandespeciallyJuan,ownerofthelocalgrocerystore,asingleman,whowouldoftenputsomethingspecialintohershoppingbag,eventhoughhehimselfhadbeengoingthroughadifficultperiod—hismotherdiedofcancerandhewasbusyhandlingthesaleofhismother’shouseontheedgeoftown.4續(xù)寫原文Astherainstopped,AnnaandMollystartedwalkinghome.ShewasthinkingaboutbuyinganumbrellaafterpayingtherentwithherupcomingwagewhenMollyshoutedexcitedly,"Mummy,what’sthatontheroad?"Annalookeddownandsawabaglyinginthewater,whichwasobviouslylostbecauseofthesuddenrain.TheygothomeanddriedthemselvesbeforeAnnafocusedonthebag.Openingitandseeingbundlesofmoneyinside,shestoodbackinshockandcried,"Isthisapresentfromkindness?Icanpayoffmydebt,buyMolly’sfavoritedollandmynewumbrella...”Thenrealitysetin,Annawasaverymoralpersonandwouldneverstealeventheslightestlittlething,letalonebundlesofmoney.Shewenttobedwithallthoughtsinhermind.5段首句Para1：Earlynextmorning,Annaheadedwhereshedecidedtogo.Para2：Atsupper,Annahadanunexpectedvisitor—Juanwithgiftboxesinhishands.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8本文以人物為線索展開，講述了主人公安娜和她小女兒莫莉生活得很艱苦，但是當(dāng)?shù)厝擞绕涫钱?dāng)?shù)仉s貨店的老板胡安經(jīng)常幫助她們，在一個圣誕雨夜，安娜看到路上的一大筆錢猶豫過后還是將其交給警察，后來發(fā)現(xiàn)錢是胡安的，后來胡安作為報答給小莫莉一個洋娃娃的故事。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Earlynextmorning,Annaheadedwhereshedecidedtogo.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“第二天一早，安娜去了她想去的地方。”可知，第一段可描寫安娜將錢交給警察。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Atsupper,Annahadanunexpectedvisitor—Juanwithgiftboxesinhishands.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“晚餐時，安娜遇到了一位不速之客——胡安，手里拿著禮品盒?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼戝X的主人報答安娜。11續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材交給警察——舒心——感謝——送禮——感悟12續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材行為類①.弄清楚：figure/findout/makesense②.記錄下來：keptnoteof/writedown/goonrecord情緒類①.感謝：Thankfor/showone’sappreciation/showone’sgratitude/begrateful②.高度稱贊：thinkhighlyof/givehighpraiseof13續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材[高分句型1]Afterfiguringoutwhathadhappened,thepolicemenkeptnoteofherinformationandthoughthighlyofher.這句話運用了賓語從句。[高分句型2].Steppingoutofthestation,Annafeltafreshbreezeonherface,makingherrelievedandcomfortable.這句話運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。[高分句型3]Thatmorning,becauseofthesuddenrain,hewassohurriedtogetonthetaxithathelosthisbag.這句話運用了so…that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句。14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Annawalkeddirectlytothepolicestation.Afterfiguringoutwhathadhappened,thepolicemenkeptnoteofherinformationandthoughthighlyofher.Shefeltalittleshyandsaid,“Thehugemoneywouldbeagreathelpformetogetthroughthedifficulties,buttheownerwouldgetintogreattrouble,instead.”Steppingoutofthestation,Annafeltafreshbreezeonherface,makingherrelievedandcomfortable.16范文呈現(xiàn)SeeingAnna'ssurprisedlook,Juantoldherthathewastheownerofthebagandhecametoshowhisthanks.Thatmorning,becauseofthesuddenrain,hewassohurriedtogetonthetaxithathelosthisbag."Thankyousomuchforyourhelp."JuansaidtoAnnaandthenturnedtoMolly,handinghertheboxes"Hereyouare,littlegirl."Afteropeningtheboxes,Mollycriedwithgreatjoy,"Mom,look!Hereitis!ThedollFatherChristmasbringsme!"Lookingatherhappydaughter,Annasmiled,murmuring"MaybethereisaFatherChristmas!"17范文譯文安娜直接走到警察局。在弄清楚發(fā)生了什么事后，警察們記下了她的信息，并對她評價很高。她有點害羞，說：“這筆巨款對我度過難關(guān)有很大的幫助，但店主反而會惹上大麻煩?！弊叱鲕囌荆材雀械揭魂嚽逍碌奈L(fēng)拂過她的臉，讓她松了一口氣，也很舒服?？吹桨材润@訝的表情，胡安告訴她，他是包的主人，他來表示感謝。那天早上，因為突然下雨，他匆匆忙忙地上了出