遇險(xiǎn)脫險(xiǎn)-讀后續(xù)寫 高三英語上學(xué)期一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫小組討論，解答問題

step1研讀語篇（5min)及首句Step2回顧：在考場(chǎng)中，我們讀完語篇需要思考哪些問題？

順序是？矛盾沖突人物性格主題研讀首句，確定4，2，1，3首句畫出關(guān)鍵詞，進(jìn)行提問，弄清楚mainidea構(gòu)思每段情節(jié)，每個(gè)情節(jié)寫幾句話？（確定重點(diǎn)）原則：不增加新人物，不新增加段落，要解決矛盾沖突，不增加新的場(chǎng)景，主題積極向上評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：主題》情節(jié)》語言故事基本信息5w1h1.梳理故事基本信息WhenBrandoncamebackfromlockingthedoorofthebarn,heknewhissonLouiefellintotheholeandcouldnotswim.Butafterhejumpedintothewall,hecouldnotpullthemoutthewellbecausethepipewastooslippery.2.梳理問題/沖突AfterBrandonjumpedintothewall,hecouldnotpullthemoutthewellbecausethepipewastooslippery.Theygotstuck.3.如何解決這個(gè)問題？A3yearsoldson,Everett,stoodbythemailandfoundChrisandMarktosavethem.4人物性格Brandon:brave,impulsive(容易沖動(dòng)的）smart,lovehisson.Louie:careless,timid,helplessEverett:calm,smart5.主題Helpothers,thewisdomofthelittleboy,thelovebetweenthefatherandsons6.研讀首句，確定4，2，1，3Para.1Afterawhile,ChrisandMark,nearbyfarmers,weredrivingbythefarm.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2:Twentyminuteslater,Louieemerged(出現(xiàn)),

thenBrandon,bothcoldandwet._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第4句：位于第2段末，主題句:helpothers;thewisdomofthelittleboy;thelovebetweenthefatherandsons第2句：第一段末，承接第二段Twentyminutes….句,寫什么由給定的第二句決定。Thefatherandsonweresaved.第1句：承接給定的首句。寫什么由它決定。倆人看到了Everett招手求助。第3句：承接給定的第二句，寫什么由它決定。C與M拿出毛巾/父親筋疲力盡，緩過神來。4321研讀首句畫出關(guān)鍵詞，進(jìn)行提問，構(gòu)思兩段mainidea及具體故事情節(jié)Para.1Afterawhile,ChrisandMark,nearbyfarmers,weredrivingbythefarm.__________________________________________________________Para.2:Twentyminuteslater,Louieemerged(出現(xiàn)),

thenBrandon,bothcoldandwet.__________________________________________________________Para.1:ChrisandMarksavedthefatherandthesonfromthewell.Para.2:expressthankstoChrisandMark,examinetheson,praiseEverett.1.WhenChrisandMarkweredrivingbythefarm,whatdidsee?_A3yearsoldboy,Ewaswavingtostopthecar.2.WhatChrisandMarkwouldask?What’swrongwithyou?3.Howdidtheboyanswer?Myfatherandbrotherweretrappedinthewell.4.Then,whatdidtheydo?

TookE,andheadedforthewell.5.Howdidtheysavethefatherandtheson?Whetherwasitsuccessfully?

Tools:ropes,貼近農(nóng)民的身份特點(diǎn)

_________________________________________________________________________________________________研讀首句畫出關(guān)鍵詞，進(jìn)行提問，構(gòu)思兩段mainidea及具體故事情節(jié)Para.1Afterawhile,ChrisandMark,nearbyfarmers,weredrivingbythefarmPara.1:ChrisandMarksavedthefatherandthesonfromthewell.Para.2:expressthankstoChrisandMark,examinetheson,praiseEverett.1.WhenChrisandMarkweredrivingbythefarm,whatdidsee?_A3yearsoldboy,Ewaswavingtostopthecar.2.WhatChrisandMarkwouldask?What’swrongwithyou?3.Howdidtheboyanswer?Myfatherandbrotherweretrappedinthewell.4.Then,whatdidtheydo?

TookE,andheadedforthewell.5.Howdidtheysavethefatherandtheson?Whetherwasitsuccessfully?

Tools:ropes,貼近農(nóng)民的身份特點(diǎn)

_________________________________________________________________________________________________1.看到三歲小孩招手（孩子神態(tài)描寫）—2.停車詢問，得知情況（語言描寫）

——3.抱上孩子，驅(qū)車前往地點(diǎn)——

4.拿出工具，成功救出被困父子。1.看到三歲小孩招手（孩子神態(tài)描寫）—2.停車詢問，得知情況（語言描寫）

——3.抱上孩子，驅(qū)車前往地點(diǎn)——

4.拿出工具，成功救出被困父子。Afterawhile,ChrisandMark,nearbyfarmers,weredrivingbythefarm.

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ofasudden,theysawalittleboy,Everettwaswavinganxiouslyandurgently,asifsomeseriousmatterhappened.Theystoppedthecar,gotout,andaskedwhathappened.Everettweptwithtearsbrimmingoverhiseyes(眼睛里充滿了淚水）,and

said,hisfatherandbrotherweretrappedinthewellandwaitedforrescue.

Hearingthis,ChrisandMarktooktheboyimmediatelyanddrovethecartothehole.WhentheyArrivedatthespot,Withoutasecondthought,theygrabbedathickropefromthecar,threwoneendintothewaterandtiedtheotheraroundatreenearby."Holdit!Andclimbup!"shoutedChris,peeringdown（向下看；俯視）Para.1Afterawhile,ChrisandMark,nearbyfarmers,weredrivingbythefarmPara.2:Twentyminuteslater,Louieemerged(出現(xiàn)),

thenBrandon,bothcoldandwet.Para.2:expressthankstoChrisandMark,examinetheson,praiseEverett.1.WhatdidBrandonsaytoChrisandMark?Withoutyourhelp,wecouldn’tgetridofthetrouble.Thankyousomuch!Ifitconvenientforyou,pleasecometomyhomeandhaveadinner.Iwanttothankyouforyourhelp.2.Whatabouttheirreaction?Theydeclinedandleftfirst.3.Brandonexaminedthesonandcomforthim.4.HowdidBrandonpraiseEverett?Youareabigboyandsaveus.HowcleveryouareYouaresomething.(你太了不起了）1.表達(dá)感謝--2.倆人回應(yīng)--3.父親檢查Louie情況，安撫他--4.夸贊Everett.--5.父子三人回家(三人被送回家）Para.2:expressthankstoChrisandMark,examinetheson,praiseEverett.

Para.2:Twentyminuteslater,Louieemerged(出現(xiàn)),

thenBrandon,bothcoldandwet.Themomenttheywereout,Brandon,asifallenergywasdrained(v.耗盡）outofhim,（筋疲力盡）collapsed（v.倒塌）onthefloor.WhenBrandonfinallycamebacktolife（恢復(fù)）,thefirstthingwastoexpressthanks.“Thanksforsavingus!Butforyou,wewouldn‘thavebreathedthefreshair,”（要不是你，）saidBrandoninagratefulandgenuinevoice.“Wejusthelpneighbors.ItisyourlittlesonEverettwhoisbraveandcalmenoughtosaveyou,”respondedChriswithagenuinesmilebeforeheofferedtosendtheBrandonsbackhome.Then,outofinstinct,BrandoncheckedLouieforhisinjuries,gavehimcomfortandspokehighlyofEverett.“Youareabigboyandsaveus.Howcleveryouare!Youaresomething!”saidBrandon.Everettsmiled.Loveisselflessandnotingisbetterthanhelpothers.1.表達(dá)感謝--2.倆人回應(yīng),告別--3.檢查Louie情況，安撫他--4.夸贊Everett.--5.父子三人回家Afterawhile,ChrisandMark,nearbyfarmers,weredrivingbythefarm.

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ofasudden,theysawalittleboy,Everettwaswavinganxiouslyandurgently,asifsomeseriousmatterhappened.Theystoppedthecar,gotout,andaskedwhathappened.Everettweptwithtearsbrimmingoverhiseyes(眼睛里充滿了淚水）,and

said,hisfatherandbrotherweretrappedinthewellandwaitedforrescue.

Hearingthis,ChrisandMarktooktheboyimmediatelyanddrovethecartothehole.Whentheyarrivedatthespot,Withoutasecondthought,theygrabbedathickropefromthecar,threwoneendintothewaterandtiedtheotheraroundatreenearby."Holdit!Andclimbup!"shoutedChris,peeringdown（向下看；俯視）Para.2:Twentyminuteslater,Louieemerged(出現(xiàn)),

thenBrandon,bothcoldandwet.Themomenttheywereout,Brandon,asifallenergywasdrained(v.耗盡）outofhim,collapsed（v.倒塌）onthefloor.WhenBrandonfinallycamebacktolife（恢復(fù)）,thefirstthingwastoexpressthanks.“Thanksforsavingus!Butforyou,wewouldn‘thavebreathedthefreshair,”（要不是你，）saidBrandoninagratefulandgenuinevoice.“Wejusthelpneighbors.ItisyourlittlesonEverettwhoisbraveandcalmenoughtosaveyou,”respondedChriswithagenuinesmilebeforeheofferedtosendtheBrandonsbackhome.Then,outofinstinct,BrandoncheckedLouieforhisinjuries,gavehimcomfortandspokehighlyofEverett.“Youareabigboyandsaveus.Howcleveryouare!Youaresomething!”saidBrandon.Everettsmiled.Loveisselflessandnotingisbetterthanhelpingothers.范文Afterawhile,ChrisandMark,nearbyfarmers,weredrivingbythefarm.Allofasudden,noticingalittleboywavinghisarmslikecrazyatthemailbox,theypulledover（停車）toinvestigate（調(diào)查，查看）.“Mydaddyandbrotherfellinthehole!”Everettweptwithtearsbrimmingoverhiseyes,Puzzled(adj.困惑的）astheywere,theypiledEverettintotheirpickup（擠進(jìn)小卡車）andaskedhimtoshowthemthehole.Onelookattheapproachingwellexplainedeverything.Withoutasecondthought（不假思索)theygrabbed（v.抓）athickropefromthecar,thre