英語復習教案：專題技能突破短文改錯之通讀全文糾正邏輯錯誤

學必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精學必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精學必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精專題技能突破(21)短文改錯之通讀全文，糾正邏輯錯誤【技能講解】通讀全文，了解短文的大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱、非謂語的主被動關系及行文邏輯。有時孤立的分析某個句子，其結構正確、語義通順，無錯可改，但如果聯(lián)系上下文,便會發(fā)現(xiàn)該句中有不合邏輯的地方,需做出改正。典例剖析1。[2015·課標全國卷Ⅰ]WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere。［答案］think→thought考查時態(tài)。由was，hoped和wouldbe可知，此處敘述的是過去的事情，故用一般過去時。2．［2015·課標全國卷Ⅰ]Wemustfindwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.[答案］your→our或the考查代詞。根據(jù)上下句語境，我們應該保護我們的環(huán)境,故改為our,也可用定冠詞the來限定。3．［2015·浙江高考］Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising。Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundit.[答案]is→was考查時態(tài).全文用的都是過去時，所以把is改為was。4．Infact，Idon’tliketogoanymore，soI’mafraidI'lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouwereme,wouldyoutalktohim？[答案］him→them考查代詞.根據(jù)上下文及their一詞可知，此處代詞指代錯誤，故將him改為them.5．Onaverage,thereare800tornadoesintheUSeachyear,causeabout80deathsand1,500injuries.［答案］cause→causing考查非謂語動詞。causing作結果狀語,表“自然而然的結果"用現(xiàn)在分詞。技能演練短文改錯（一）Amanhasbeenwaitingatthebusstop.Afterafewminuteslater,thebusarrivedanddidnotstop.Themanthoughtitwouldstopalittlefar,sohestartedrunningafterthebus.Fortunately,thebusneverstopped.Themankeptfollowthebusuntilhearrivedhome。Themanwasverygladthathecouldsavebitofmoney.Hehappilytoldhiswife,“Honey,todayIranafterthebusesuntilgettinghome。Ididn’thavetopaythefee.”Surprisingly，thewifeblamedher，“Youfool!Doyouknowhowmanyyoucouldsaveifyouranafterataxi？”答案:Amaneq\o(has，\s\do10(had)）beenwaitingatthebusstop。Afterafewminuteseq\o(later,＼),thebusarrivedeq\o（and,\s\do10（but)）didnotstop.Themanthoughtitwouldstopalittleeq\o(far，\s\do10(farther)），sohestartedrunningafterthebus。eq\o(Fortunately，\s\do10（Unfortunately）），thebusneverstopped。Themankepteq\o（follow,\s\do10(following))thebusuntilhearrivedhome.Themanwasverygladthathecouldsaveeq\o（∧,\s\do10（a）)bitofmoney。Hehappilytoldhiswife，“Honey，todayIranaftertheeq\o(buses,\s\do10（bus)）untilgettinghome.Ididn'thavetopaythefee。"Surprisingly，thewifeblamedeq\o(her，\s\do10（him）），“Youfool！Doyouknowhoweq\o(many，\s\do10(much))youcouldsaveifyouranafterataxi？"(二)LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo。daystriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it'sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonthatwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited。Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicturesincethescenerywassobeautifully.Thetimepassesquickly。Eveningcame.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetopofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood。IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow。答案:LastweekmyparentsandItookaeq\o(two。days,\s\do10(two。day））triptoEmeiMountaininSichuan。Aseveryoneknows，it’seq\o(∧，\s\do10（a））famousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals。Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnooneq\o（that,\s\do10（when))wearrivedatthefootofthemountain。Thethreeofeq\o(them，\s\do10（us）)wereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthemountain，wefedmonkeys，eq\o(visiting,\s\do10(visited)）templesandtoldstories。OnthewayupIwasbusytakingeq\o（picture，\s\do10（pictures)）sincethescenerywassoeq\o（beautifully,\s\do10（beautiful））。Thetimeeq\o(passes,\s\do10(passed))quickly。Eveningcame。Wespenttheni