專題16寫作方法梳理及專練20題-2021-2022學(xué)年七年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下學(xué)期期末考點(diǎn)大串講（牛津上海版）

專題16寫作方法梳理及專練20題（解析版）充實(shí)文章的內(nèi)容三要素（Enrichingthecontent）Beforewestart中考英語(yǔ)作文對(duì)于內(nèi)容（content）的要求是做到切題充實(shí)，清楚完整。因此，對(duì)于考生來說，在考場(chǎng)中快速審題，選擇合適的素材，并且能夠圍繞相關(guān)話題寫出一篇內(nèi)容充實(shí)的好文章是制勝法寶。真實(shí)又豐富的寫作內(nèi)容可以讓你的文章更具表現(xiàn)力，從而更有效地和讀者交流。Readandthink讓我們先看一篇作文的題目要求吧。Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Iwanttoinvent”（以“我想要發(fā)明”）為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly．（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）Itcanbeusedto...Itwillbeexciting/necessary/helpfulto...該作文題目具有強(qiáng)烈的未來感，需要大家發(fā)揮想象力，建議用夾敘夾議的方式描述自己想要發(fā)明的對(duì)象，并且合理闡述它的用途或優(yōu)點(diǎn)。針對(duì)此作文題目，大家可以從Whatdoyouwanttoinvent?Whydoyouwanttoinventit?Howcanitbenefithumanbeings?Howcanitchangepeople’slife?或WhatdoIneedtodotocreatetheinvention?等幾方面思考，確定文章的內(nèi)容。同學(xué)們想發(fā)明的物品五花八門，比如atimemachine，apairofflyingshoes，ahouseworkrobot，apairofhealingglasses，甚至還有apieceofinvisibleclothing等等。大家的想象力如天馬行空，但是當(dāng)我們確定了自己的寫作目標(biāo)之后，該如何描述我們的發(fā)明物呢？我們先來看兩個(gè)謎語(yǔ)，大家能猜到它們是什么嗎？謎語(yǔ)一：Iamroundandhardtotouch.Alongtheouteredge,Icanhaveridges.Ihaveanumberandyouwouldliketohavealotofme！謎語(yǔ)二：Iamoftensquareandsometimespeoplecutmeinhalf.Ioftenhavedeliciousstuffonmelikecheese,hamandtomato.Icanbebrownorwhite.第一個(gè)謎語(yǔ)的答案是Acoin，第二個(gè)迷語(yǔ)的答案是Apieceofbread，大家猜到了嗎？通過這兩個(gè)謎語(yǔ)，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)描述一個(gè)物體可以從以下幾個(gè)方面著手：在描述物品的過程中，建議大家針對(duì)該物品最主要的特征進(jìn)行描述，這可以幫助讀者在腦海中產(chǎn)生直觀印象。下面我們?cè)賮砜匆粋€(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的例子吧！Amagicsleepingpillow：itfeelsfluffy（蓬松的）anditsmellsminty（薄荷味的）.Itisaspecialsleepingpillowmadefromhightechmaterial,soitcanchangeitsshapeandsizeflexibly（靈活地）.大家描述完自己的發(fā)明物后，該如何將它的功能和用途向讀者闡述清楚呢？它將會(huì)給我們的生活帶來哪些便捷呢？我們?nèi)绾稳?shí)現(xiàn)自己的小小發(fā)明家的夢(mèng)想呢？本篇就讓我們來學(xué)習(xí)幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的寫作技巧，幫助大家充實(shí)自己的寫作內(nèi)容。Writingtip用舉例子、作對(duì)照、展示效果等方法充實(shí)文章內(nèi)容（Enrichingthecontentbygivinganexample,contrastingorshowingtheeffect）在審題階段考越并確定寫作的主題之后，我們可以用以下方法來充實(shí)文章內(nèi)容，使之在表述上更具說服力，內(nèi)容上更飽滿、更有層次。givingexamples（舉例子）makingacontrast（作對(duì)照）showingtheeffect（展示效果）我們來讀讀以下三個(gè)介紹發(fā)明物的段落，看看它們用了哪些方法？Matchthemethod（s）intheboxwiththerightparagraph.（配對(duì)。）A.givingexamplesB.makingacontrastC.shewingtheeffect1.Paragraph1Method(s):AIwanttoinventasmartpentohelpstudentssolvedifficultproblem,forexample,studentscanusethepentotranslatealongandplexsentence.Byusingthepen,therewillbeabetterwayforstudentstounderstandthesentenceclearly.2.Paragraph2Method(s):CFirstofall,Ithinkit'snecessarytoinventapairofsmartshoesbecausepeoplecansavetimeandmoneywhentheyweartheirshoesinsteadofdrivingacartogototheirdestinations.Moreover,withthehelpoftheshoes,peoplecankeepfitandmonitortheirhealthbytakingawalkinthem.3.Paragraph3Method(s):BWiththeinventionoftherobots,peoplewon'tneedtoworkforextrahoursorperformsomedangeroustasksintheirJobs.Nowadays,peoplehavetoworklonghoursanddonothaveenoughtimetodeveloptheirhobbies.Thankstotherobots,peoplewillhavemoretimetorelaxandenjoytheirlife.接下來讓我們動(dòng)筆修改以下語(yǔ)句，看看是否學(xué)會(huì)了用以上這些方法來充實(shí)文章的內(nèi)容。例1:Iwanttoinventatimemachine.Itcantakepeopletothefutureorthepast.我們可以這樣修改：Iwanttoinventatimemachine,whichcantakepeopleeithertothefutureorthepast.Itwillassistpeoplewiththeirjobs.Forinstance,itcanbeusefultohelpthepolicereturntothecrimescene.What'smore,itcantakescientiststothefuturesothatitwillbeconvenientforthemtoconductsomescientificresearch.我們可以嘗試使用舉例子的方式將時(shí)光機(jī)的功能展示出來，使文章更加直觀明了，生動(dòng)有趣。例2:I’dliketoinventapairofspecialglasses.Theycanbeusedtoprotectoureyes.我們可以這樣修改：I’dliketoinventapairofspecialglasses.Withtheseglasses,wewillgetintothehabitofprotectingoureyes.Forexample,ifwereadbooksforalongtime,theywilltellustorestforafewminutes.Andwhenweareabouttodosomethingharmfultooureyes,theywillwarnusimmediately.我們可以用展現(xiàn)效果和舉例子的方法介紹這副神奇眼鏡的功能。以上兩個(gè)例子只是修改建議。大家可以展開想象，選用本篇Writingtip的方法介紹自已頭腦中的時(shí)光機(jī)和神奇眼鏡！Timetowrite現(xiàn)在，就讓我們動(dòng)筆寫一寫。在正式寫文章之前，我們先思考一下如何構(gòu)思整篇文章。1.Thedescriptionoftheinvention（size,shape,color,taste,smell,etc.）2.Thefunction(s)oftheinvention（Whydoyouwanttoinventit?Howcanpeoplebenefitfromit?Howcanitchangepeople'slife?)3.HowtoachievemygoalTreasurebox參考句型：...enable(s)peopleto...Withthehelpof...,wecan......provide(s)peoplewith...It'snecessary/important/convenient/essential/...(forpeople)todo...Forexample/instance,...Withoutit，peoplecan’t...Ibelievethisinventionwillbring...topeople’slife.People'slifewillgreatlyimprovebecause...Wedon'tneedto...anylongerbecause......bewidelyused......willhaveabigeffecton......Remembertorevise寫好后，可以帶著以下問題修改：YesNo1.Isthecontentofmyartidedoselyrelatedtothetopic?文章的內(nèi)容是否體現(xiàn)了主題？YesNo2.Doesthecontenthaveenoughdetails(givinganexample,contrastingorshowingtheeffect,etc.)?我使用舉例子、作對(duì)照、展示效果等方法充實(shí)文章內(nèi)容了嗎？在修改前，我們不妨來看看其他同學(xué)是如何修改自己的作文的。Draft（初稿）Iwanttoinventapairofmagicshoes①Iwanttoinventapairofmagicshoes.②Theycanhelppeoplefly.③WhydoIhavetheideatoinventsuchapairofspecialshoes？④Becausethetrafficinourcityisabigproblem.⑤Therearealotofcarsinthestreetduringtherushhour.⑥Moreandmorepeopleowntwoorthreecars.⑦Sothetrafficisalwaysheavy.⑧Ifwehavesuchshoes,wecanflytoanyplacewewanttogo.⑨Peoplecanenjoymorefreedomintheirlife.⑩Therefore,Iwanttoinventapairofmagicshoeswhichcanhelppeoplefly.JasonLiu點(diǎn)評(píng)：如果能將文章分為三段，則脈絡(luò)會(huì)顯得更為清晰。句①—句②為第一段，句③—句⑦為第二段，句⑧—句⑩為第三段。另外，是否可以指繪一下這雙神奇的鞋子，以便讀者展開想象？小作者展示了發(fā)明這雙神奇鞋子的原因和效果，但原因部分比重大大。建議刪減原因部分，增加效果部分，來突出這項(xiàng)發(fā)明的功能。Revised（修改稿）IwanttoinventapairofmagicshoesIwanttoinventapairofmagicshoes.Theshoeswillhavecolorfulwingspoweredbysolarorwindenergy.Theycanhelppeoplefly.HowdidIgettheideatoinventsuchapairofspecialshoes?Becausethetrafficinourcityisabigproblem.Therearealotofcarsinthestreetduringtherushhour.Ifwehavemagicshoes,theycanmakeadifferenceinourlife.Wewon'tplainaboutthetrafficproblemsanylongerbecausewewillbeabletoflytoanyplacewewanttogoinaflash.What'smore,wecanenjoymorefreedominourlifeandtheairwillbemuchfresherthanbefore.IwouldliketolearnPhysicsbettersothatIcaninventapairofmagicshoestobenefiteverybodyontheEarth.JasonLiu點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章在開頭增加了對(duì)發(fā)明物的描寫，神奇的鞋子有著靠太陽(yáng)能或風(fēng)能推動(dòng)的彩色翅膀，是否很可愛？主體部分增加了對(duì)這項(xiàng)發(fā)明效果的介紹，突出展現(xiàn)了神奇的鞋子會(huì)帶來的社會(huì)變化。修改后的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰，內(nèi)容更豐富有趣？現(xiàn)在，就讓我們動(dòng)筆修改自己的作文吧。Let’sshareAIwanttoinventalanguagemachineLearninganewlanguagetakeslotsoftimeandenergy,soIwanttoinventalanguagemachinetohelpuslearnlanguages.Mylanguagemachinelookslikeawristwatch.ItcontainsthousandsofdigitaldictionariesandBluetooth.Whenwewearitinanothercountry,itcantranslatethenativelanguageandthensenditdirectlytoourbrain.Withthismachine,wewon’tbeafraidofcausingmisunderstandinganymore,especiallywhenweareabroad.Usingdifferentlanguagestomunicatewithforeignerswillbeapieceofcake.IamlookingforwardtothedaywhenIcanbecapableenoughtoinventmylanguagemachine.DannyLin點(diǎn)評(píng)：全文展現(xiàn)了小作者豐富的想象力。在他的筆下，他的語(yǔ)言機(jī)器輕巧如手表，但功能強(qiáng)大到可以儲(chǔ)存成千上萬的數(shù)字詞典，也可以厲害到通過藍(lán)牙直接將翻譯好的內(nèi)容傳送到我們的大腦。小作者通過使用對(duì)照和展示效果的方法，呈現(xiàn)了擁有此項(xiàng)發(fā)明的美好前景。BIwanttoinventatimemachineAsastudentwhoisexperiencingmodernlifenowadays,Iwouldratherlearnaboutourhistoryfromarealexperienceratherthanfromatextbook.That’swhyinventingatimemachinewillbemyfirstchoiceifIcanworkasagreatinventor.Mytimemachinewilllooklikeanordinaryhelicopter,butitwillbemorepowerfulthananyothertimemachinedescribedinnovels.ThemostimportantuseofmytimemachinewillbevisitingthebestschoolsintheTangDynasty.TheTangDynasrywasfamousforitseducation.Therefore,whenIvisitthoseancientschools,Icannotonlytrydifferentwaysofstudyingbutmunicatewithfamouspeopleaswell.Usingatimemachineisthemostvividwaytolearnhistory.I’mdeterminedtoabsorb（吸收）moreknowledgeandcultivate（培養(yǎng)）mytalent.Inthisway,Icanmakemytimemachineareality.AnneWang點(diǎn)評(píng)：小作者將自己對(duì)歷史的愛好融入他的習(xí)作，非常有趣且有思想。小作者先交代了發(fā)明時(shí)光機(jī)的原因，然后簡(jiǎn)要描繪了他的發(fā)明。介紹功能時(shí)，小作者用了舉例法和展示效果法，讓讀者身臨其境，產(chǎn)生遐想。結(jié)束語(yǔ)點(diǎn)出自己的決心，筒潔有力。寫作專練（共20套）一、材料作文1．請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給中文提示，以“Mybedroom”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，介紹你的臥室。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.房間不是很大，只有一張床，床的旁邊是書桌；2.床和書桌之間有一把扶手椅（armchair），床下有一些玩具；3.書桌上有一臺(tái)電腦和一些書，緊挨著書桌的書架，上面放滿各種不同的書；4.房間很干凈，我很愛我自己的房間。注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；2.詞數(shù)在70左右，短文的題目已給出，不計(jì)入數(shù)總詞數(shù)。Mybedroom________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion：MybedroomMybedroomisnotverybig.Thereisonlyonebigbed.Besidethebed,thereisadesk.Thereisanarmchairbetweenthebedandthedesk.Therearesometoysunderthebed.Thereisaputerandsomebooksonthedesk.Thebookshelfisnexttothedesk.Itisfullofdifferentkindsofbooks.Mybedroomisveryclean.Ilovemyownbedroomverymuch.【解析】【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，介紹自己的臥室的情況，包括物品的擺放情況等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，多用therebe句型，在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。2．動(dòng)物是人類的朋友，為了喚起居民對(duì)動(dòng)物的熱愛，社區(qū)的寵物中心舉辦了主題為“Mypet”的養(yǎng)寵物交流會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的材料，以“Mypetdog”為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹一下自己的寵物狗。Name:Paul

Age:18months

Weight:10kgLooks:brown,strong,bigeyesandearsFavouritefood:bonesFavouriteactivities:playingwiththebasketball,takingawalk要求：1.包含所給的要點(diǎn)，可以合理補(bǔ)充；2.不少于70詞。開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MypetdogIkeepadogathome.Heismybestfriend.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MypetdogIkeepadogathome.Heismybestfriend.IcallhimPaul.Paulisabrowndog.Heis18monthsold.Heweighs10kg.Paulishealthyandstrong.Hisbigeyesandearsmakehimlooklovely.Paulisclever.Hecandomanytricks.Andhelikesplayingwithmybasketballbest.Healsoenjoystakingawalkwithmeaftersupper.Helikesbonesbest.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Mypetdog”為題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇英文短文，介紹一下自己的寵物狗。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)以第三人稱為主；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。按照提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，內(nèi)容要寫全。注意保證語(yǔ)言通順，行文連貫；語(yǔ)法正確，無標(biāo)點(diǎn)和大小寫錯(cuò)誤。3．你是不是很想擁有自己的寵物呢？假如你想養(yǎng)一只兔子，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇60詞左右的英語(yǔ)作文。Whatpetdoyouwanttokeep?ArabbitWhydoyoulikeit?Clean,lovelyandeasytolookafterWhatshoulditbelike?White,smallHowwillyoulookafterit?FeedherwelleverydayManyofmyfriendskeeppetsathome.Iwantonetoo._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Myparentsalsolovesmallanimals.Iamsuretherabbitwillbehappywithusinmyfamily.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Manyofmyfriendskeeppetsathome.Iwantonetoo.I’dliketokeeparabbit,becauseitislovelyandclean.Asweallknow,rabbitsareusuallyeasytolookafter.Myrabbitshouldbeawhiteone.Shecan’tbetoobiginsize.IfIhavearabbit,Iwillfeedherwelleveryday.Ofcourse,Iwillkeephercleanandmakeherhealthy.Myparentsalsolovesmallanimals.Iamsuretherabbitwillbehappywithusinmyfamily.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示信息介紹自己喜歡的寵物。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一和第三人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)綜合使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹自己想養(yǎng)的寵物是什么，為什么喜歡，它長(zhǎng)什么樣子以及你將如何照顧它；第三段收尾。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。4．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的信息以“Myhometown”為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，描述你的家鄉(xiāng)——蘇州。要點(diǎn)提示：1.蘇州位于江蘇省的南部地區(qū)；2.是一座現(xiàn)代化的都市，有著悠久的歷史；3.靠近上海，坐高鐵（highspeedrailway）只需要半小時(shí)的時(shí)間；4.因園林而著名，毎年有成千上萬的游客來參觀這些園林；5.觀前街是蘇州最繁華的街道之一……注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文章須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐句翻譯，需適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫、通順。MyhometownMyhometownisSuzhou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyhometownMyhometownisSuzhou.ItisinthesouthofJiangsu(Province).Itisamoderncitywithalonghistory.ItisclosetoShanghai.Ittakesonly30minutestogotoShanghaibyhighspeedrailway.Suzhouisfamousforitsbeautifulgardens.Everyyear,thousandsoftouristsetoSuzhoutovisitthegardens.GuanqianStreetisoneofthebusieststreetsinSuzhou.Therearemanyniceshopsonthestreet.Itisalsoagoodplacetotrysomelocalfood.Ifyouareinterestedinoperas,youcangotooneofthelocaltheatrestoenjoyKunqu.Suzhouisawonderfulplaceforpeopletolivein.Iloveit.Weletomyhometown.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：閱讀題干可知，要求我們以“Myhometown”為題，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示介紹蘇州。寫作要包括所有要點(diǎn)：地理位置優(yōu)勢(shì)、歷史、景色及街道等。在寫作中，可適當(dāng)?shù)靥砑悠渌侠淼膬?nèi)容，使作文內(nèi)容更加豐富。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：這是一篇介紹類作文，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第三人稱為主，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的三單形式。例文采取三段式的寫作方式，第一段介紹蘇州的地理優(yōu)勢(shì)和歷史悠久；第二段重點(diǎn)介紹蘇州的景色文化——園林和街道；第三段簡(jiǎn)短總結(jié)，表示喜愛之情。5．請(qǐng)你以“Mybestfriend”為題寫一篇作文，介紹一下你最好的朋友Amy。內(nèi)容提示：1.學(xué)習(xí)用功，學(xué)東西很快，各門功課都很優(yōu)秀；2.對(duì)中國(guó)的歷史很了解，能寫很好的文章；3.非常喜歡動(dòng)物，她養(yǎng)了一只名叫Puppy的小狗，并把它照顧得很好；4.善良，樂于助人，經(jīng)常給有需要的孩子收集書本和衣服；經(jīng)常在公交車上給老年人讓座；……（自擬一點(diǎn)）注意：1.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容的需要作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；2.語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范，詞數(shù)80左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MybestfriendAmyismybestfriend.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Weallloveher.【答案】例文：MybestfriendAmyismybestfriend.Sheisahardworkingstudent.Sheworkshard.Andshelearnsthingsquickly.Shedoeswellinallherlessons.SheknowsalotaboutChinesehistory.Shecanwritegoodarticlesaswell.Amylikesanimalsverymuch.ShekeepsadogcalledPuppy.Andshelooksafteritwell.Sheiskindandhelpful.Sheoftencollectsbooksandclothesforchildreninneed.Sheoftengivesherseattotheoldpeopleonthebus.ShealsohelpsmewithmyEnglish.Weallloveher.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)所給要求以“Mybestfriend”為題寫一篇短文介紹一下自己的朋友Amy。做到要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第三人稱為主敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；可采取三段式：第一段直入主題介紹自己朋友的個(gè)人信息，學(xué)習(xí)情況等；第二段講述除學(xué)習(xí)之外好友的其他優(yōu)點(diǎn)特質(zhì)，可舉例子；第三段總結(jié)。寫作時(shí)做到層次分明、邏輯清晰，做到無單詞拼寫或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。6．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給中文提示，用英文寫一篇短文，介紹你的好朋友林海救火的事跡，詞數(shù)70左右。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.一天，林海走出校門時(shí)，抬頭看見一幢新大樓在冒煙，他大聲喊：“著火了，著火了！”與此同時(shí)，他拿出，撥打了119；2.人們聽到喊聲，立刻跑出來向大樓潑水，阻止火苗燃燒；3.五分鐘后，消防員趕來把火撲滅了；4.幸運(yùn)的是(luckily)……注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；2.第4要點(diǎn)須用1—2句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Oneday,LinHaiwentoutoftheschoolgate.Helookedupandsawlotsofsmokeingfromanewbuilding.Heshouted,“Fire!Fire!”Atthesametime,hetookouthismobilephoneandcalled119.Peopleheardhisshoutandgotoutquickly.Theypouredwatertostopthefirefromburning.Fiveminuteslater,firemencameandputitout.Luckily,nobodywashurt.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，內(nèi)容是根據(jù)所給的材料，用英文寫一篇短文，介紹一下你的好朋友林海救火的事跡。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來敘述作文內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)為主；首先介紹事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；其次介紹經(jīng)過；最后介紹結(jié)果如何。7．經(jīng)常參加戶外活動(dòng)對(duì)我們的身心都大有好處。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文，第4點(diǎn)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮1—2句。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。內(nèi)容提示：1.上周日，你與同學(xué)們一起去野營(yíng)；2.你們?cè)诤叴盍藥づ?，老師教你們?nèi)绾紊穑?.你忘記帶午餐盒（lunchbox），同學(xué)們與你分享午餐，大家一起在樹下享受美食和飲料；4.這次活動(dòng)帶給你……Takingpartinoutdooractivitiesisreallywonderful.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Takingpartinoutdooractivitiesisreallywonderful.LastSundayIwentcampingwithmyclassmates.Weputuptentsbesidethelake.Ourteachertaughtushowtomakeafire.Iforgottotakemylunchboxbutmyclassmateswerehappytosharetheirfoodwithme.Weenjoyedlotsofnicefoodanddrinkstogetherunderthetree.Thiscampingreallybroughtusalotoffunandwelearnedtohelpeachotherwhenhavingproblems.I’mlookingforwardtoanotherfundaynow.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示介紹自己上周末參加的一次野營(yíng)活動(dòng)，要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)?？刹捎靡欢问綄懽?，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容講述自己的經(jīng)歷，并表明這次活動(dòng)給自己帶來了什么。要做到無單詞拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。8．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以“Myfavouriteoutdooractivity”為題，寫一篇60詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。1.我最喜歡的戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)是野營(yíng)；2.原因：省錢，對(duì)健康有益；待在戶外可以欣賞美麗的湖光山色；3.曾經(jīng)（once）有一次在海邊野營(yíng)……4.本周末如果有空，我打算邀請(qǐng)我的幾個(gè)好友一起去野營(yíng)。Myfavouriteoutdooractivity__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyfavouriteoutdooractivityMyfavouriteoutdooractivityiscamping.It’sverycheapandit’sgoodformyhealth.Icanstayoutsideandenjoythebeautifullakesandhills.Once,Iwentcampingbythesea,andsawthesunrising.Itwassobeautiful.IfIamfreethisweekend,Iwillinvitemygoodfriendstogocampingwithme.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求以“Myfavouriteoutdooractivity”為題根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫短文介紹自己最喜歡的戶外活動(dòng)。要包含所有提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)結(jié)合一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)與一般過去時(shí)。文章可采用一段式寫作，介紹自己喜歡的戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)是野營(yíng)、喜歡野營(yíng)的原因、曾經(jīng)的野營(yíng)經(jīng)歷及周末的打算。要做到無單詞拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。9．假如你是一名來自美國(guó)的交換生，名叫湯姆，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“LifeinChina”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示：1.我現(xiàn)在在在陽(yáng)光鎮(zhèn)，這是個(gè)現(xiàn)代化的城鎮(zhèn)，乘地鐵去市中心只要10分鐘；2.我在北京陽(yáng)光中學(xué)上學(xué)，這里的老師和學(xué)生都很友好，并且樂于助人；3.我喜歡美味可口的中餐；4.我打算參觀中國(guó)的許多地方；5.我在這兒過得非?？鞓?。LifeinChinaMynameisTom.Iefrom____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LifeinChinaMynameisTom.IefromtheUSA.NowIliveinSunshineTown.ItisamoderntowninChina.Ittakesonlytenminutestogotothecitycenterbyunderground.Soit’sawonderfulplacetolive.IstudyinBeijingSunshineSecondarySchool.Theteachersandstudentsherearefriendlyandhelpful.IlikedeliciousChinesefoodverymuch.IamgoingtovisitmanyplaceinChina.Iamlivingahappylifehere.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料類作文寫作，以“LifeinChina”為題寫一篇短文，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭，根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)寫作，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該以第一人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；短文內(nèi)容需要包括：陽(yáng)光鎮(zhèn)和北京陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的基本情況，“我”最喜歡的食物和地方以及“我”在中國(guó)生活的感受。在寫作時(shí)要做到無標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，注意上下文邏輯緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)要具有條理性。10．請(qǐng)拫據(jù)以下中文提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇關(guān)于你家鄉(xiāng)的視頻的解說稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1.我們鎮(zhèn)上約有兩百戶家庭，我們彼此很友好，相互認(rèn)識(shí)；

2.一些家庭養(yǎng)牛，另外一些家庭種植小麥和水稻；

3.我家的房子在農(nóng)場(chǎng)上，有兩層樓，院子周圍都是花草樹木；

4.每天早上我能聞到花香，聽到鳥兒唱歌；

5.我喜歡這里的生活，我認(rèn)為這是個(gè)宜居之地。注意事項(xiàng)：

1.解說稿須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；

2.詞數(shù)在70左右，解說稿的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hello,I’mNancy.I’mgoingtoshowyouaroundmyhometown.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyoucaneandvisitsoon!【答案】Onepossibleversion:Hello,I’mNancy.I’mgoingtoshowyouaroundmyhometown.Thereareabouttwohundredfamiliesinourtown.We’refriendlyandknoweachother.Somefamiliesraisecows,andothersgrowwheatandrice.Myhouseisonthefarm.Ithastwofloors.Therearemanyflowersandtreesaroundtheyard.Everymorning,Icansmelltheflowersandhearthebirdssing.Ienjoythelifehere.Ithinkitisawonderfulplacestolive.

Ihopeyoucaneandvisitsoon!【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇英文視頻解說稿，介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)以第一人稱為主；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。按照內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫作，內(nèi)容要寫全。注意保證語(yǔ)言通順，行文連貫；語(yǔ)法正確，無標(biāo)點(diǎn)和大小寫錯(cuò)誤。11．假如你是張華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文向同學(xué)們介紹你的夢(mèng)想家園。要點(diǎn)：1.它在一個(gè)小村莊里，位于兩座山之間，旁邊有一條小河；2.河邊有許多樹，我可以與家人一起在河邊散步；河水干凈；我們還可以在河里游泳；3.附近有一所學(xué)校和一個(gè)公園，周末我可以在公園里放風(fēng)箏。要求：1.語(yǔ)言連貫，要點(diǎn)明確，語(yǔ)法正確；2.采用第一人稱；3.60詞左右，可以適當(dāng)拓展。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Hi,mynameisZhangHua.Letmetellyousomethingaboutmydreamhome.Itisinasmallvillagebetweentwohills,anditisnearasmallriver.Therearemanytreesneartheriver.Icanoftenwalkwithmyfamilybesidetheriver.Thewaterintheriverisveryclean,andwecanswiminit.Thereisaschoolandaparknearby.Iwalktoschooleveryday.Icanflyakiteintheparkattheweekend.Itisreallywonderful.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)列出來的要點(diǎn)介紹你的夢(mèng)想家園，注意要點(diǎn)齊全。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)以第一人稱結(jié)合第三人稱來介紹；時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；介紹所在的位置時(shí)，要合理選用適當(dāng)?shù)姆轿唤樵~。寫作時(shí)注意保持主謂一致，保證文中無單詞和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。12．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖為校刊英文版寫一篇征文，說明動(dòng)植物對(duì)人類的重要作用，呼吁大家保護(hù)、愛護(hù)它們。注意：1.短文必須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，并有適當(dāng)拓展；2.要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，書寫規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。ProtectMan’sBestFriendsAnimalsandplantsareourbestfriends.Theyhelpusinmanyways.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________