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1、2016屆高考英語二輪書面表達(dá)提屆高考英語二輪書面表達(dá)提高、升格及分類訓(xùn)練高、升格及分類訓(xùn)練一、快速升格你的作文一、快速升格你的作文使用高級表達(dá)使用高級表達(dá) whats more in the same way（同樣地）（同樣地） however because of In addition, furthermore similarly, equally, in comparisonin contrast, on the other hand, on the contrarydue to, owing to, on account of, thanks to, as a result of b

2、ecause in that, for the reason that, the reason for which lies in the fact that though/although in a word/in short/all in all today/now shoulddespite in spite of the fact that, whilein brief, in summary, to sum up, to summarize, to conclude, in conclusion nowadays, currently, at presentbe supposed t

3、o，be expected to sometimesvery good most of. if occasionally, from time to time, at timesfantastic, awesome, amazing, wonderful, excellentthe majority of.on condition that, as/so long as, suppose, provided that, only if(句首倒裝句首倒裝)as we knowsth. is very important I think It is universally acknowledged

4、 thatIt is generally accepted thatsth. should be put in the first place.sth. should be attached great significance to.We can not emphasize the importance of sth. too much.Personally, From my point of view, As far as I am concerned, In my opinionIf you study hard, you can make progress. Study hard ev

5、ery day and you can make rapid progress.Study hard every day or you may fail to achieve your goal.The harder you work, the more progress you make.Spare no effort to study, in which case you ll make great progress.Sparing no effort to study, you ll make great progress.grow fasttry ones best to do. Th

6、ank you very much for you help. Plenty of hard work is helpful to English study.increase rapidly / grow amazingly fastWe appreciate your help very much.We owe many thanks to your help.A large quantity of hard work will undoubtedly contribute to English study. spare no effort to do., do everything on

7、e can to do.，go all out to do.， make every effort to do.cant do sth. well 為了為了 to do. The day is coming.in order to do. , for the purpose of doingThe day is drawing near. The day is around the corner. The day is on the way.have troubledifficultya hard time (in) doing sth.be poor at sth.The day is ap

8、proaching.very nothing butThe film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.The film we saw last night was anything but boring. be helpful/useful be of great help/use; contribute toPlenty of memory work is helpful to English study. Plenty of memo

9、ry work is of great help to English study. Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study. have to do can not but / can not help but / have no choice but to do I had to go home for it was dark. I could not but go home for it was dark. I have no choice but to go home for it was da

10、rk. usually/often more often than not; as is often the caseUsually, the meaning of many words can be easily guessed. More often than not, the meaning of many words can be easily guessed. As is often the case, the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.be interested in be caught up in/be crazy a

11、bout/be absorbed in/be addicted toHe is very interested in collecting stamps. He is caught up in collecting stamps. help do sb a/the favorWould you please help me to turn down the radio?Would you please do me the favor to turn down the radio?during in the course of During the mountain-climbing, plea

12、se help each other and pay special attention to your safety. In the course of the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety. 使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu) 1.改變語態(tài)改變語態(tài) People suggest that we should protect the environment. (一般一般) 2.使用不定式使用不定式 He is so kind that he can help me.

13、(一般一般) So kind is he that he can do me a favor.(高級高級)3.使用過去分詞使用過去分詞 She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (一般一般) It is suggested that the environment be protected. (高級高級)He is so kind as to help me.(高級高級) Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. She walked out of the

14、 lab with many students following her.(高級高級) 使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu) 4. 使用使用V Vinging形式形式 When you arrive, please give me an email.(一般一般) 5.使用名詞性從句使用名詞性從句 It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up.(一般一般) 6.使用定語從句使用定語從句 The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.(一般一般) On arriving/your

15、 arrival, please give me an email.The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody.(高級高級) The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.(高級高級) 7.使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、感嘆句使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、感嘆句 Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.(一般一般) Not until 1920 did regular radio broadcasts begin. (高級高級)Th

16、ough Im weak, I will make the effort. (一般一般) I am glad to see the smile on my teacher face. (一般一般) It was not until 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began. (高級高級)Weak as/though I am, Ill make the effort. (高級高級) How glad I am to see the smile on my teacher face! (高級高級) 8. Every day, they have much

17、homework. They are too busy to remember the characters. （狀語從句） （ 獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）Every day, they have so much homework to do that they fail to remember the characters. （狀語從句）With so much homework to do every day, they have trouble in remembering the characters.（ 獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）Every day, so much homework do they hav

18、e that they fail to remember the characters. （倒裝） 9. It will make people pay attention to our mother tongue. It will help students learn Chinese well. It will raise the awareness of our mother tongue. （高級詞匯）It will have a positive effect on students Chinese learning. （高級詞匯）It will not only raise the

19、 awareness of our mother tongue, but also have a positive effect on students Chinese learning.（合并） 二、單句練二、單句練習(xí)習(xí)翻譯下列句子翻譯下列句子1不用說不用說早睡早起是值得的。早睡早起是值得的。 _2我深信我深信預(yù)防勝于治療。預(yù)防勝于治療。 _3在在各種各種運(yùn)動中，我運(yùn)動中，我尤其喜歡尤其喜歡慢跑。慢跑。 _4時間最珍貴時間最珍貴, 這是很容易證明的這是很容易證明的。 _ 5就我所知就我所知，下列方法對我，下列方法對我?guī)椭艽髱椭艽蟆?_It goes without saying that

20、 it pays to keep early hours.I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure.Among various kinds of sports, I am fond of jogging in particular.It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time.As far as my knowledge is concerned, the following ways are of great help to me. 6

21、毫無疑問毫無疑問，近視在我國的年輕人中是一個嚴(yán)重的問題。，近視在我國的年輕人中是一個嚴(yán)重的問題。_7根據(jù)我個人經(jīng)驗(yàn)根據(jù)我個人經(jīng)驗(yàn)，微笑已帶給我許多好處。，微笑已帶給我許多好處。_8在我的求學(xué)過程中在我的求學(xué)過程中,我忘不了學(xué)習(xí)英文所遇到的大困難。我忘不了學(xué)習(xí)英文所遇到的大困難。_9隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展，許多社會問題產(chǎn)生了。隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展，許多社會問題產(chǎn)生了。_There is no doubt that nearsightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country.According to my personal ex

22、perience, smile has done me a lot of good.In the course of my schooling. I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English.With the rapid development of economy, large quantities of social problems have come out. 10在這信息的年代，計(jì)算機(jī)扮演非常重要的角色。在這信息的年代，計(jì)算機(jī)扮演非常重要的角色。 _11世上沒有什么比到快餐店吃漢堡

23、更令我高興的。世上沒有什么比到快餐店吃漢堡更令我高興的。_ 12我們保持公共場所清潔是應(yīng)當(dāng)?shù)摹Ｎ覀儽３止矆鏊鍧嵤菓?yīng)當(dāng)?shù)摹?_13每當(dāng)我想到那個時刻，我就忍不住感到激動。每當(dāng)我想到那個時刻，我就忍不住感到激動。_In the age of information and communication, computer plays an extremely important role.Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fastfood restaurants. It is proper th

24、at we are supposed to keep the public places clean.Whenever I think of the very moment, I cannot but feel excited. 14人們相信閱讀增加我們的知識、擴(kuò)大我們的心胸。人們相信閱讀增加我們的知識、擴(kuò)大我們的心胸。_ 15青少年犯罪的主要理由是社會環(huán)境日益敗壞。青少年犯罪的主要理由是社會環(huán)境日益敗壞。_16俗話說得好：誠實(shí)為上策。俗話說得好：誠實(shí)為上策。_17人們學(xué)外語有三個理由。人們學(xué)外語有三個理由。_18為了維護(hù)健康，我們每天至少可做三件事。為了維護(hù)健康，我們每天至少可做三件事。_

25、It is generally convinced (that) reading increases our knowledge as well as broadens our mind.The main reason why the teenagers commit crimes is that social environment is becoming worse.As an old saying goes, “Honesty is the best policy.”People learn a foreign language for three major reasons.In or

26、der to keep healthy, there are at least three things we can do every day.19相反，相反，多數(shù)學(xué)生似乎還是對課外活動感興趣的多數(shù)學(xué)生似乎還是對課外活動感興趣的 。 _20政府應(yīng)嚴(yán)格執(zhí)法，另一方面，大眾也應(yīng)該培養(yǎng)減政府應(yīng)嚴(yán)格執(zhí)法，另一方面，大眾也應(yīng)該培養(yǎng)減少污染的好習(xí)慣。少污染的好習(xí)慣。_ 21換言之，我會盡最大的努力完成我的目標(biāo)。換言之，我會盡最大的努力完成我的目標(biāo)。 _ 22從此之后，我已發(fā)現(xiàn)微笑是日常生活中避免沖突從此之后，我已發(fā)現(xiàn)微笑是日常生活中避免沖突的最好辦法。的最好辦法。 _On the contrary, a

27、 majority of students, it seems, are still keen on afterclass activities.The government is expected to enforce the law strictly. On the other hand, the public also should develop the good habit of reducing pollution.To put it differently, I will spare no effort to attain (achieve, live up to, accopl

28、ish) my goal.Ever since then, I have found smile is the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily lives. 23更嚴(yán)重的是，我們不珍惜野生動物。更嚴(yán)重的是，我們不珍惜野生動物。 _24做這些簡單之事，我們一定可以快樂出門平安回家。做這些簡單之事，我們一定可以快樂出門平安回家。 _25唯有通力合作，我們才能期望情況不久有新的改觀。唯有通力合作，我們才能期望情況不久有新的改觀。 _ What is more serious is that we do not cherish

29、 wildlife. By doing these simple things, we surely/definitely can go out of the door happy and come back home safe every day.Only with combined efforts can we expect the situation to take on a new look in the near future.26最后但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助長青最后但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助長青少年犯罪的原因。少年犯罪的原因。 _27總而言之，好公民應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。

30、總而言之，好公民應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。_28因此我們可以得出結(jié)論，那就是世上自由最珍因此我們可以得出結(jié)論，那就是世上自由最珍貴。貴。_ In conclusion, a good citizen is supposed to observeobeyfollow traffic regulations.We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world.Last but no least, the deficiency in education is the cau

31、se contributing to the crime of the young.29如果我們能做到如上所述，毫無疑問，我們就如果我們能做到如上所述，毫無疑問，我們就能精通英語。能精通英語。_30目前根據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，中國學(xué)生半數(shù)以上患有近目前根據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，中國學(xué)生半數(shù)以上患有近視，位居世界第一。視，位居世界第一。_31中國在世界上人口最多，占到了中國在世界上人口最多，占到了20%，其次是，其次是印度，占到印度，占到17%。_ China has the largest population of the world, which accounts for about 20%, followed

32、 by India, making up about 17%. Currently, according to a survey, more than half of Chinese school children are shortsighted, ranking first in the world.On condition that we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that we can acquire a good knowledge of English. 寫作練習(xí)一寫作練習(xí)一 假設(shè)美國某中學(xué)的學(xué)生明天來你校訪問

33、交流，主題是高中生對文、理科的選擇。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，向他們介紹你所做的選擇，并說明選擇的理由。注意： 1. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 詞數(shù)120左右；3. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息。 參考詞匯：文科：arts；理科：scienceGood afternoon, everyone. Welcome to our school! _ Thanks! 短文改錯Good afternoon, everyone, Welcome to our school! I feel extreme honored here, on behalf of all the students

34、 in our school, to address your guests from America, share with you my experience of choosing the main subject between science and arts. At present, high school students faced with a choice between arts and science. In terms of me, it was not a easy choice to make. After careful consideration, thoug

35、h, I decided on science as my main subject of study. My reasons are as follow. To start, science graduates are in great demand than arts ones in China. Additionally, the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Furthermore, my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student. Last