考研大作文指導(dǎo)及范文解析

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上專心-專注-專業(yè)專心-專注-專業(yè)精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上專心-專注-專業(yè)大作文六、考研大作文框架結(jié)構(gòu)：3段12句左右160-250詞（英語二150-200詞）5-7個關(guān)聯(lián)詞（適可而止）5-7個從句（多多益善）1、Introduction：第一段，提出問題，圖畫描述（圖畫作文）/圖表描述（圖表作文）/現(xiàn)狀說明（情景或提綱作文），3句左右圖畫/圖表描述：General description：總體描述，人物+動作+環(huán)境或主題+對象+時間，1句Details 1, 2, 3：挖掘細(xì)節(jié)詞，串聯(lián)成句，1句Caption/Symbolic meanin

2、g：文字說明或象征寓意，1句2）現(xiàn)狀說明：（1）Background information：背景交代 （2）General talk of the topic：引出主題 （3）Thesis：State specifically what your opinion is，確立論點(diǎn) 2、Body： 第二段，分析問題，意義闡釋（圖畫作文）或原因列舉（圖表、提綱或情景作文），5句左右1）Topic sentence：Symbolic meaning，主題句，象征寓意，1句2）Argument：論證，3句左右，考研寫作四大論證手段（1）Cause and Effect：因果論證（2）Exemplifi

3、cation：舉例論證Numerous examples can be given, but this/these will suffice.I can think of no better illustration than the following one(s).This/These case(s) effectively clarify that（3）聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實(shí)：以小見大，把握象征寓意，個體想為群體，具體想為抽象 （4）正反論證： 3）Summary：小結(jié)，概括論證，總結(jié)本段，1句3、Conclusion：第三段，解決問題，建議措施/歸納結(jié)論，4句左右1）Concluding sente

4、nce：結(jié)論句，呼應(yīng)象征寓意，1句2）Suggestions 1、2：兩點(diǎn)建議（針對雙方提建議）或兩句評論，2句3）包裝結(jié)尾、展望未來：1句，考研寫作三大優(yōu)秀句型 （1）倒裝句：Only in this way can we solve this problem. 只有這樣我們才能解決這個問題。 （2）強(qiáng)調(diào)句：It is persistent work that is conducive to your grasping a considerable vocabulary.只有長期學(xué)習(xí)才有助于你掌握大的詞匯量。 （3）虛擬語氣：It is high time that we solved th

5、is problem. 我們早就該解決這個問題了。七、大作文：1.倫理道德：沖刺班二十大必背范文之十一Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. In the picture above is an old man tumbled on the road ac

6、cidentally. Unfortunately, a great many passers-by are hesitant about giving the old man a hand. Seeing that, nobody would like to be responsible for the accident.The above picture reminds me of the recent heated discussion about whether to assist the senior citizens who are suddenly sick or injured

7、. Such discussion is a shame for the society, for helping people in distress should be considered as the basic social morality and traditional virtue. Unfortunately, the debate indeed broke out after several help-givers were successively reported to be falsely identified as offenders and sentenced t

8、o pay economic compensation. Due to those cases, people worry that the assistance recipients, especially aged people with poor judgment, may fail to tell right from wrong and helping them will probably incur troubles. This thought halts peoples attempt to help and has indirectly murdered some aged p

9、eople. Several months ago, an old man died after falling because nobody dared to offer assistance.Such tragedy should never recur. To achieve it, firstly, helping aged people in need should be advocated. More importantly, efforts should be made to protect the benefits of those who provide help. Only

10、 in these ways, can we be sure that, on one hand, the elderly receive timely aid and on the other hand, warm-hearted people never suffer from loss. After all, just as Ernest Hemingway, the great American writer said, “I know only that what is moral is what you feel good after and what is immoral is

11、what you feel bad after”. (272 words)2、圖表作文：經(jīng)濟(jì)問題，2011年英語（二）真題，沖刺班二十大必背范文之十二Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you shouldinterpret the chart andgive your comments.You should write at least 150 words.Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)2008、2009年國內(nèi)轎車市場部

12、分品牌市場份額示意圖 （從左至右：國產(chǎn)品牌、日系品牌、美系品牌）The chart above demonstrates clearly that some changes have taken place in terms of the car market of China. Based upon the data of the chart, one can see that the percentage of domestic cars has been on a rise, while the sales percentage of cars made in Japan has wit

13、nessed been on a decline. In the year of 2008, the percentage of cars made in China was nearly 25%, while within no more than a year, it went up to nearly 33%. The percentage of cars made in Japan was 35%, while it went down to 25% in 2009.Its no difficulty for us to come up with some possible facto

14、rs to account for this trend. At the top of the list, with the rapid development of our economy and society, more and more people prefer civil products to foreign ones. Its reported that, approximately 55% of families in Chinese big cities are found cars made in China. In addition, we must admit tha

15、t the government appeals to us to support our native industries. Last but not the least, the fact cannot be ignored that, the cars made in China are increasingly qualified.Taking into account what has been argued, we can come to the conclusion that this established trend is positive and therefore ac

16、ceptable. And I am firmly certain that this trend will continue in the years to come. (232 words)3、2000年真題：環(huán)境問題，沖刺班二十大必背范文之十三Directions:A. Study the following two pictures carefully and write an essay in at least 150words.B. Your essay must be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET2.C. Your essay should

17、 meet the requirements below:Describe the pictures.Deduce the purpose of the painter of the pictures.Suggest counter measures.As is vividly/symbolically shown/described/depicted/illustrated/revealed/portrayed in the cartoons/drawings/portrayals/photos/photographs/pictures, with the rapid/speedy soci

18、al and economic development, the number of fishes has sharply decreased. In one picture, there were various kinds of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. On the contrary, in 1995 there was only one fish, but many fishing-boats.The purpose/aim of the pictures is to show us that due/utmost attentio

19、n/importance/significance should/must/has to be paid/attached to the decline of ocean resources. Owing /Due to/Because of over-fishing, the number of fishes has obviously shrunk. If we let this situation go/continue as it is, we do not know where fish will be in the near/forthcoming future. By that

20、time, our environment will suffer a great destruction.Therefore/Hence/Accordingly, it is imperative/necessary for us to take drastic/effective/some/several measures/steps/actions. For one thing, we should appeal to our governments/authorities to make/legislate/enact/issue/establish strict laws and r

21、egulations to control/regulate commercial fishing. For another, we should enhance/increase/cultivate the awareness/sense of people that the ocean resources are very/extremely vital/essential/crucial to us. Only in this way/by doing so can we protect our ocean resources. Also, I assume/maintain/recko

22、n that we humans can overcome/surmount this difficulty, and we will have a bright/brilliant future.4.青年面對社會（自立）/兩代關(guān)系：2003年真題，二十大必背范文之十四Directions:Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay about 200 words based on the followingdescribe the set of drawings and interpret its meaningpoin

23、t out its implications in our life.The set of drawings above vividly depict the destiny of a flower in different circumstances. As is shown in the first cartoon, the flower is placed in a comfortable greenhouse that shelters it from the threatening lightning and storm. With proper temperature, moist

24、ure and fertilizer, the flower is growing in full bloom. On the contrary, when removed from the greenhouse and exposed to the driving rain, the flower soon fades and withers, with the petals scattered on the ground.To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us that the flower growing in t

25、he green house cannot withstand the test of the storm, yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously. The delicate flower is naturally associated with young people, to be specific, the only children in our current society; the greenhouse epitomizes parents doting care and

26、abundant material supplies that can shield the children from the storms, or the harsh reality. Once the young people begin to seek independence and accept challenges from the real world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of difficulties.Accordingly, it is vital for us to der

27、ive positive implications from these thought-provoking drawings. On the one hand, we can frequently use them to enlighten the youth to be more independent in life. On the other hand, parents should be sensible enough to give their children more freedom to deal with troubles and problems. Only by und

28、ergoing more challenges and toils in adversity can young people cultivate strong personality and ability, and only in this way can they become winners in this competitive world. (271 words)5.青年面對社會（合作）：2008年真題，沖刺班二十大必背范文之十五Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In

29、 your essay, you should describe the drawing briefly, explain its intended meaning, and thengive your comments.You should write neatly on Answer Sheet 2.As is vividly depicted in the picture, two disabled men are running fast through teamwork although each of them has only one leg. Obviously, it is

30、teamwork that makes it possible for them to go anywhere they want to.Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the development of economy and society, competition is increasingly fierce. It is impossible for anyone to finish a work all by himself. Hence, people in mo

31、unting numbers put great emphasis on teamwork. In fact, it has been universally acknowledged that the ability of teamwork is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance the sense of tea

32、mwork in our society. We should bear in mind that teamwork is of great significance to both our society and ourselves. Every one should have the ability of teamwork. Only in this way can we achieve success and only in this way can our society become more harmonious to live in.6.流行文化（網(wǎng)絡(luò)）：2009年真題，沖刺班二

33、十大必背范文之十六Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should describe the drawing briefly, explain its intended meaning, and thengive your comments.As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, a large number of people are surfing on line within a st

34、retching spider web, either to entertain themselves or to meet the works needs. Unfortunately, it seems rather ironic to present people separated from each other by the spider web when they attempt to communicate. Undoubtedly, the spider web serves as a symbol of Internet, both connecting people and

35、 isolating them from each other.The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet. On the one hand, there is no denying that Internet is currently one of the most efficient media used for interpersonal communication. As a college s

36、tudent, I get on line every day to discuss news with other people on BBS, to study English by registering for web courses, to chat freely through MSN Messenger with my friends. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain face-to-face contac

37、t with their friends and colleagues. Once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate on real life. Thats why some people have lost the skill of direct contact and get alienated from others.Hence, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonabl

38、e way and restrain from overindulgence. After all, Internet is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach. (249words)7.文化問題：2010年真題，沖刺班二十大必背范文之十七Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.

39、 In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points)文字說明：佛、梁祝、解構(gòu)、人本、功夫、畢昇、儒、禮、后現(xiàn)代、老舍、莎士比亞、愛因斯坦、道、仁、天鵝湖、啟蒙、京劇等As is symbolically illustrated in the portrayal, there is a boiling

40、 hot pot containing various ingredients of multi-cultures. These pluralistic cultures can be categorized as celebrities home and abroad as Bi Sheng, Lao She, Shakespeare and Einstein, philosophical concepts as Buddhism, Taoism, Confucianism, Goodness, ritual, humanism, Enlightenment, post-modernism

41、and deconstruction, as well as performing arts as Beijing Opera, Gong Fu, Liang Zhu and Swan Lake. We are informed that the cultural “hot pot” is both delicious and nutritious. The purpose of the cartoonist is to show us that instead of being outdated and of little value in a rapidly modernizing wor

42、ld, cultural blending should be encouraged and maintained. On the one hand, mosaic cultures are part of the universal heritage of humanity and they are powerful means of bringing together diverse peoples and social groups. Consequently, cultural integration has become indispensable as a means of pro

43、moting further cultural development and maintenance. On the other hand, for China, as for any other rapidly developing country, there is a danger that age-old customs and traditions may become lost in the shadows of modernization. If Gong Fu, Beijing Opera or Swan Lake Ballet ever perished from the

44、earth, it would be a tragedy of immeasurable proportions.In my view, multi-cultures can be kept alive by the people with the time to do so, and is extremely vital in ensuring a communitys future development and prosperity. As a consequence of successful commercialization efforts, unwavering governme

45、nt support and growing interests overseas, the future of cultural blending looks brighter and more secure than ever before. (254 words)8. 職業(yè)道德（食品安全）：沖刺班二十大必背范文之十八Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) exp

46、lain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments.Recently, the problem of food safety has received increasing concern all over the country. In the portrayal presented to us, a large number of people are staring at all kinds of food safety problems, for instance, melamine in baby formula, Sudan R

47、ed in KFC, poisonous color, cancer-causing chemicals, and so on. To sum up, food safety is facing unprecedented great challenges.Food safety refers to that food shall be non-toxic and harmless, conforms to proper nutritive requirements and causes no harm to human health. It is a complex issue owing

48、to a good many fundamental causes: the first and most crucial factor is that a large number of industrial raw materials are directly used in food production. Taking Sanlu powdered milk for instance, the producers use industrial material melamine to improve protein content in baby formula, which fina

49、lly leads to infants kidney stone. Besides, other causes are the use of harmful chemical pesticides, the use of cheap harmful materials instead of harmless materials in food production, and so on.With due consideration of the above argument, it is imperative to ensure food safety. First and foremost

50、, the food safety management system should be perfected and utmost significance has to be attached by the authorities to food safety problem. What is more, in the long run, healthy food or green food industry should be vigorously advocated in a bid to ensure food safety, and then to ensure peoples h

51、ealth. (237 words)9.職業(yè)道德：工程質(zhì)量，沖刺班二十大必背范文之十九Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments.A newly-built but shabby bridge is undergoing extensive repairs. W

52、itnessing the growth of this young bridge, we may sigh with puzzlement：why is the supposed robust young boy suffering from fragile health? The construction contractors give a clue to the question.Poor construction quality has been a frequent target of criticism and the root cause for quality problem

53、s lies in peoples insatiable desire for financial interests. How does “money” shake the foundation of buildings? To answer this question, we should examine the process for constructing buildings. When choosing construction contractors, investors and program administrators are often more concerned wi

54、th candidates quoted prices, a predictor of the range of commercial benefits, than their qualifications, a guarantee for construction quality. The contractors, after winning the bid, may choose inferior materials for financial gains and then buy a pass for their built structures in quality checks. T

55、he unqualified constructions typified by the collapsed building in Shanghai gravely threaten peoples life and property safety and should not be allowed to exist. Measures should be taken to ensure construction quality. For one thing, laws and regulations should be tightened to ensure that people eng

56、aged in construction process fully take their responsibilities. For another, heavy punishments should be imposed to make irresponsible people pay an unbearable price for their misconducts. (214 words)10.交通問題：沖刺班二十大必背范文之二十Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawings. In

57、your essay, you should describe the drawings briefly, explain their intended meaning, and thengive your comments. The pictures vividly reveal that heavy traffic is becoming increasingly serious all over the world. In the first photo, there is traffic congestion on the road with numerous cars, trucks

58、 and buses. In the second picture, hundreds of people are waiting for a train.We can deduce from the pictures that the photographer is trying to attract our attention to the issue of heavy traffic. First of all, every year men and women crowd into cities in search of employment, a decent living, and

59、 the excitement and stimulation of urban life. As people in mounting numbers flood into cities, city services and facilities have been strained to a breaking point. In addition, since in a city with booming industry, land is precious and cannot be extravagantly used by traffic, traffic flows constan

60、tly rise to fill whatever scale of roads and highways are provided for them. It is imperative for us to improve this situation. For one thing, the number of private cars should be limited while more bus routes should be opened up because buses can accommodate more passengers. For another, more stree