2022屆高考英語大作文寫作精講課件

高考英語大作文寫作精講

如何審作文題1

如何為文章打造軀干，充實肉體，注入靈魂2如何越來越多地汲取素材，打開思路3江蘇高考英語作文1

生活中沖突時有發(fā)生。假設(shè)你班同學(xué)蘇華和李江打籃球時發(fā)生爭執(zhí),導(dǎo)致關(guān)系緊張.請你結(jié)合此事,并根據(jù)以下提示,用英語寫一篇短文,向?qū)W校英文報“HappyTeens”專欄投稿。（簡述起因背景）（主題內(nèi)容部分）敘事說理文一般套路述經(jīng)過析原因談做法第一步：將表格缺失項補(bǔ)充完全分析沖突發(fā)生的原因（補(bǔ)1、2條）談?wù)劚苊鉀_突的做法（寫2、3條最適宜）第二步：大致相處文章架構(gòu)。三段式？一整段？根據(jù)題干決定架構(gòu)以及每一段所寫內(nèi)容第三步：列出每條內(nèi)容，細(xì)節(jié)寫出所有可能用到的動詞、詞組、句式和形容詞副詞。開腦洞事情經(jīng)過部分舉例：shout，yell，bumpinto，quarrel，horrible，fierce，fury，intense，byaccident/accidently，第四步：思考與升華，開始落筆這一步很容易，只要歸納出一個核心點即可，往往顯而易見，也可以適當(dāng)創(chuàng)新。和語文作文不一樣，由于篇幅的限制不用立意很深第一段：引語：打開全文，簡述事情發(fā)生經(jīng)過（考察從句使用能力和邏輯能力）

Conflictswithothersarecommonineverydaylife.（一句引語）//Duringthebasketballgame

yesterdayafternoon,SuHuaandLiJiangbumpedintoeachother,tryingtocatchtheball.Thentheystartedshoutingandyelling,anditturnedintoahorriblequarrel.（兩句背景）1,引語要凝練，最好一句話2，時間地點人物，5w（whatwherewhenwhowhy）方式直陳+生動適量形容詞副詞=背景句*第一段考察的不是描述能力切記不要頭重腳輕（見上次英語講座漢堡原則）延伸與啟發(fā)：多種表達(dá)方式.....tryingtocatchtheball.Theatmospherehowever,gotmoreandmorefierce/intenseand(Then)theystarted.....適當(dāng)加入銜接句，不宜過長，體現(xiàn)邏輯，提高可讀性和畫面感第二段：主題內(nèi)容安排部分（語言文字功底，邏輯能力，語言掌控那個能力，個人積累）Tobehonest,itwasSu'sfaultbutLiwasalsotoblame—theywerenotcalmenoughandbothsaidsomereallymeanthings.Theycaredtoomuchaboutwinningandlosing.//Asamatteroffact,blocking,pushingandbumpingarejustpartofatoughgame.注意每一部分之間的邏輯銜接語（Asamatteroffact，what'smore,also,etc）生動非說理性語句適當(dāng)添加：·Astheoldsayinggose,Ittakestwototango.`Noneofthemmeansanyharmtoeachother.最后一段：談做法。（獨立思考能力，邏輯能力，語言組織能力）結(jié)語，收束全文，升華概括（表目的）Toavoidsuchconflicts,weshouldbekindtooneanother,whichisessentialtoenjoyingaharmoniouslife.Itisalsoavirtuetoforgiveandforget,especiallyinsuchacompetitiveandstressfulsociety.Insteadofblamingeachother,weshouldcommunicatemoreandputourselvesinothers'place.

Don'tbeself-centeredandtrytobeconsiderate.Wemustlearntohandleconflictscalmlyand

wisely.（結(jié)語扣題）審題！引申內(nèi)容！*點睛：putoneselfinsomeone'sshoes換位思考文字積累體現(xiàn)點：becommonin;bumpinto;startshoutingandyelling

;turnintoahorriblequarrel.

Tobehonest;betoblame

;careabout;

winningandlosing;.Asamatteroffact;blocking,pushingandbumping;partofatoughgame.

Toavoidsuchconflicts;bekindtooneanother;beessentialto;aharmoniouslife;Itisalsoavirtueto

forgiveandforget,acompetitiveandstressfulsociety.;Insteadof;putourselvesinothers'place.

self-centered;considerate.handleconflictscalmlyand

wisely.2上海高考英語作文

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現(xiàn)就展出場所（博物館還是社區(qū)圖書館）征集公眾意見(北京)，假設(shè)你是王敏，給上海博物館寫一封信表達(dá)你的想法。（提示求答）你的信必須滿足以下要求：1.簡述你寫信的目的及你對場所的選擇；2.說明你的理由（從便利性，專業(yè)性等方面對這兩個場所進(jìn)行對比）。I’vejustlearnedthatShanghaiMuseumistoholdafamouspaintingexhibitionandyou’recollectingpublicsuggestionsaboutwhichlocationtoholdit.I’mwritingthislettertosharewithyoumyopinions.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itismorereasonabletoholdthepaintingexhibitioninShanghaiMuseumthanincommunitylibraries.Myreasonsareasfollows.//

Ontheonehand,itismoreconvenientforpeopletoreachShanghaiMuseum,locatedinthecenterofthecity.Visitorscangotherebysubwayandbusandsoon.What’smore,ShanghaiMuseumismuchmoreextensivethancommunitylibraries,providingvisitorswithamorecomfortableenvironmenttoappreciatethefamouspaintings.

Ontheotherhand,ShanghaiMuseum,awell-knownanddistinguishedmuseumathomeandabroad,ismoreprofessionalinholdingpaintingexhibitions.What’sofgreatsignificanceisthatnotonlydoesitprovideadvancedfacilitiesandhigh-techmonitorsbutalsooffersprofessionalsecurityguardstoprotectthosefamouspaintingsfrombeingdamagedorstolenintheprocessofexhibition.

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Consequently,IstronglyproposethatthepaintingexhibitionistobeheldintheShanghaiMuseum.I’vejustlearnedthatShanghaiMuseumistoholdafamouspaintingexhibitionandyou’recollectingpublicsuggestionsabout

whichlocationtoholdit.I’mwritingthislettertosharewithyoumyopinions.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itismorereasonabletoholdthepaintingexhibitioninShanghaiMuseumthanincommunitylibraries.Myreasonsareasfollows.inmyopinion；frommypointofview；accordingtomypoint；asfarasIcansee/asfarasIamconcerned...；inmypointofview；Personally,Ithink...；Isupposethat,...；maintainthat,..；Inmyview,...hereiswhy;thereasonsfor......areasfollows;forthefollowingreasons;forseveralreasonsaddressedbelow;followingaremyreasons.....Ontheonehand,itismoreconvenientforpeopleto

reachShanghaiMuseum,located

inthecenterofthecity.Visitorscangotherebysubwayandbusandsoon.What’smore,ShanghaiMuseumismuchmoreextensivethancommunitylibraries,providingvisitorswithamorecomfortableenvironmenttoappreciatethefamouspaintings./

Ontheotherhand,ShanghaiMuseum,

awell-knownanddistinguishedmuseumathomeandabroad,ismoreprofessionalinholdingpaintingexhibitions.What’sofgreatsignificanceisthatnotonlydoesitprovideadvancedfacilitiesandhigh-techmonitorsbutalsooffersprofessionalsecurityguardstoprotectthosefamouspaintingsfrombe