高中英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)好建議信課件

Module6Unit1Aletterofsuggestion第一頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。1Samplewriting1DearCommitteeMembers,Iwishtomakeasuggestionaboutakindofarttoputintoournewartgallery.Ourdistrictiswell-knownforpaper-cuttingandthepeopleareveryskilledatit.Atthemomentthesepeopledonothaveanywheretodisplaythevarietyandskilloftheircraftsmanship.Iftheskillislost,theremaybenorecordofit.Thegallerywould

providethemwithanopportunitytopreservethisskill.Ifyouweretoallowthemtodisplaytheirexpertisehere,Ibelievewecouldmakeourdistrictfamousandencouragemoretouriststocomehere.Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestionfavorably.

Yoursfaithfully***第二頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。2Ourdistrictiswell-knownforpaper-cuttingandthepeopleareveryskilledatit.---1.skillofworkersAtthemomentthesepeopledonothaveanywheretodisplaythevarietyandskilloftheircraftsmanship.---2.noothergalleryIftheskillislost,theremaybenorecordofit.---3.theremaybenorecord1、2、3點(diǎn)強(qiáng)調(diào)(qiángdiào)建藝術(shù)館的必要性Thegallerywouldprovidethemwithanopportunitytopreservethisskill.---4.preservetheskillIfyouweretoallowthemtodisplaytheirexpertisehere,Ibelievewecouldmakeourdistrictfamousandencouragemoretouriststocomehere.---5.famous&moretourists4、5點(diǎn)強(qiáng)調(diào)(qiángdiào)建藝術(shù)館的益處第三頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。3Samplewriting2DearCommitteeMembers,Iwishtomakeasuggestionaboutthekindofartworkthatshouldgointoournewgallery.AsIhavecarefullyresearchedthesubjectandhavehadmanydiscussionswithresidentsinourdistrict,Ibelievemysuggestionwillbepopularwithmostpeople.Ihavediscoveredthatwehavemanyfineartistsinourdistrict.Wehavemanypainters,bothmodernandtraditional,somesculptorsandafewexcellentpotters.Wealsohaveagroupofpeoplewhomeetregularlytopractisetraditionalfolkart.Atpresent,noneofthesegroupshaveaplacetodisplaytheirwork.Thegallerywouldprovidesuchaplaceandwouldhelppeopleinthedistricttolearnmoreaboutourartists.Ibelieveagalleryoflocalartcraftwouldencouragetheartistsandwouldalsomakeothersproudofourlocaltalent.Idohopeyouwillconsidermysuggestion.Yoursfaithfully,第四頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。4一、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容〔一〕首段：說(shuō)明寫(xiě)作意圖。簡(jiǎn)潔、精煉?！捕持黧w段落：1.要點(diǎn)全面：包括給出的〔和要求擴(kuò)展的〕建議內(nèi)容和理由。2.條理清晰：要點(diǎn)清晰，順序合理(hélǐ)，之間要有連接詞或過(guò)渡語(yǔ)；理由充分，與建議內(nèi)容之間有必然的因果關(guān)系。3.合情合理(hélǐ)：建議內(nèi)容要入情入理，有合理(hélǐ)性和說(shuō)服力。4.禮貌得體：語(yǔ)言要委婉禮貌，使人易于接受，不能寫(xiě)成批評(píng)、命令或投訴信?！踩澄捕危合Ｍ麑?duì)方接受建議，并能對(duì)其有所幫助。二、時(shí)態(tài)：多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。第五頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。5常用(chánɡyònɡ)套語(yǔ)A．建議信開(kāi)頭常用(chánɡyònɡ)句式

1.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof…2.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.3.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.4.Iwishtomakeasuggestionabout…第六頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。6B.表達(dá)(biǎodá)建議〔body〕1.first,firstofall,firstly，secondly…then,afterthat,intheend,finally;Meanwhile,what’smore/besides/moreover…Consequently/therefore,asaconsequence/asaresult...2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthatyou(should)…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewiseto…6.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou(should)…7.Itwouldbeagoodideaifyoucould…第七頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。7C.建議信結(jié)尾(jiéwěi)常用句式1.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/practical/useful/helpful/beneficial.2.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.第八頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。8假設(shè)你叫孫軍，是恩施高中的學(xué)生(xuésheng)，要給市長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信，反映學(xué)校門(mén)前交通擁擠現(xiàn)象，包括以下要點(diǎn)：參考詞匯(cíhuì):穿行threadone’sway天橋overpass問(wèn)題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對(duì)著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家長(zhǎng)接送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過(guò)街在車(chē)輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。第九頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。9第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。雖然根底寫(xiě)作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分(shífēn)重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}：思考的問(wèn)題樣題分析第幾人稱(chēng)？（person）文章的題材是什么？要寫(xiě)的文章主題是什么(topic)怎樣安排信息點(diǎn)的順序？

(order)動(dòng)作是什么時(shí)候發(fā)生的？(時(shí)態(tài))(when)第一人稱(chēng)(dìyīrénchēnɡ)建議信建議(jiànyì)原因建議(jiànyì)內(nèi)容說(shuō)理邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)第十頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。10適當(dāng)(shìdàng)運(yùn)用模板第十一頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。11DearBob, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主題). Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此四句不同的句式提出建議) Asto,Isuggest(有時(shí)根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建議).I'msure(預(yù)測(cè)可能(kěnéng)的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心). I'mlookingforwardto(表達(dá)愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHua第十二頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。12第二步：搜索相關(guān)詞組(cízǔ)或句型

問(wèn)題建議1.學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰(pílín)，對(duì)著大街，頂峰期交通繁忙；2.加之孩子小,家長(zhǎng)接送，交通更擁擠；3.學(xué)生過(guò)街在車(chē)輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。

第十三頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。13學(xué)校(xuéxiào)與一所小學(xué)毗鄰,對(duì)著大街standnextto…primary…face/befacedwith…themainstreet…Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,facedwiththemainstreet.推薦(tuījiàn)句型：非謂語(yǔ)(wèiyǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)Standing/Locatednexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/facesthemainstreet.Next

toaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facedwith/facingamainstreet.倒裝第十四頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。14It’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhours.頂峰(dǐngfēng)期交通繁忙…..traffic….duringtherushhoursDuringtherushhours,therearesomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroadthat…Duringtherushhours,thereisalotoftraffic.so….that…with結(jié)構(gòu)(jiégòu)Withsomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroad,…第十五頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。15加之孩子小,家長(zhǎng)接送,交通(jiāotōng)更擁擠send…to…,fetch….,非謂語(yǔ)(wèiyǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)….Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,makingthesituationmoreserious.,which….第十六頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。16加之孩子(háizi)小，家長(zhǎng)接送，交通更擁擠What’smore,…pickup….make….Tomakethingsworse/what’sworse,manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.Inaddition/Additionally/What’smore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.第十七頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。17學(xué)生過(guò)街在車(chē)輛(chēliàng)中穿行危險(xiǎn)threadone’sway，whendoingItisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.固定(gùdìng)句型Itis+adj.for…todo….第十八頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。18Studentsarerisking

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tothreadtheirwayamongcars.潤(rùn)色(rùnsè)小建議2.Someareexposedtodangerwhencrossingtheocean/seaofcars.靈活運(yùn)用其它的短語(yǔ)(duǎnyǔ)進(jìn)行意譯：適當(dāng)(shìdàng)增加形容詞和副詞：itisextremelydangerous，itisofgreatdanger第十九頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。19政府(zhèngfǔ)應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。suggest/suggestion,

takesteps/measures/actiontodo…suchasMysuggestionisthatthegovernmentshould…表語(yǔ)(biǎoyǔ)從句固定(gùdìng)句型Itishightimethat…(虛擬語(yǔ)氣)Itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuilding…Isuggestthatthegovernmentshouldtakemeasuressuchasbuildinganoverpass.簡(jiǎn)單句第二十頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。201.Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems,…潤(rùn)色(rùnsè)小建議2.Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems,thegovernmentshould…A.適當(dāng)添加一些(yīxiē)意思〔過(guò)渡句〕3.Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuild…B.添加(tiānjiā)形容詞和副詞Istronglysuggest…,active/effectivemeasures第二十一頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。21第三步.連句成文(chéngwén)但要注意(zhùyì)：篇章的連貫性Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet.___________,it’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._______________childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.___________,it’sofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._________________,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.A.AsaconsequenceB.AccordingtothephenomenonstatedaboveC.WhenitcomestotrafficjamsD.WhatmakesthingsworseisthatA.C.D.B.第二十二頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。22反面(fǎnmiàn)范例第二十三頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。23反面(fǎnmiàn)范例第二十四頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。24反面(fǎnmiàn)范例第二十五頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。25不推薦(tuījiàn)字體第二十六頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。26優(yōu)秀(yōuxiù)作文范例優(yōu)點(diǎn)：運(yùn)用(yùnyòng)therebe句型，介詞短語(yǔ)，從句，非謂語(yǔ)，套用句式等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語(yǔ)言功底。第二十七頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。27優(yōu)秀作文(zuòwén)范例優(yōu)點(diǎn)：該考生最大的特色是運(yùn)用了大量的高級(jí)詞匯等來(lái)提亮句子，使得(shǐde)文章更彰顯深厚的語(yǔ)言底蘊(yùn)。第二十八頁(yè)，共31頁(yè)。28假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信向你咨詢(xún)?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)回信。要點(diǎn)：⑴參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； ⑵看中文書(shū)刊