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概要是一篇較長文章本質(zhì)思想的簡潔重述，它要求用盡量少的語言對原文的主旨進行復述。概要不是簡單的換句話說，更不是評論，而是作者思想中最基本部分的準確再現(xiàn)。Howtogetahighmar《考試說明》中評分標準規(guī)定概要寫作閱卷時按5個檔次給分，其中最高檔次第五檔（21-25points）：理解準確，涵蓋全部要點；能準確使用相應的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；完全使用自己的語言；有效使用了語句間的連接成分，使完成的概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。contents內(nèi)容languagesills語言structure結(jié)構(gòu)agoodsummaryalltheeypointsgrammar,vocabularytightandcoherent連貫yourownwordsabout60-80wordsrightspelling,properpunctuationHowtowritingagoodsummary定位findouttheessentialinformationB改寫rewritetheinformationinyourownwordsC核查checthesentencesandaddsomeconjunctionsA定位通過閱讀定位語篇的核心信息，包括核心單詞，核心短語和核心句子。（句子為主，以單詞和短語為輔）

typeskeyinformation記敘文narration人物+時間+地點+事件（起因+經(jīng)過+結(jié)果）說明文exposition描寫某事物的性質(zhì)功用。即“對象+性質(zhì)功用+利好”；針對某個問題提出解決方法或措施。即“問題+解決方法”；介紹某現(xiàn)象及其原因和結(jié)果。即“現(xiàn)象+原因+結(jié)果”議論文argumentation論點+論據(jù)(+結(jié)論)1確定文體thetypesofthepassage√√2消減事例Intheearly16thcentury,eanstoblocoutdisease,asmedicaloSodidtheingofEnglishin15463省略細節(jié)（盡量減少實事，大膽省略實事）essentialinformationB改寫在核心信息的基礎(chǔ)上進行語言表達形式的改寫，對原文的語言表達形式盡可能實現(xiàn)大規(guī)模的改變。

改寫過程中，原則上字數(shù)不超過原句，不改變原文的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)，充分考慮語句壓縮。1使用近義詞或反義詞houYangwillrememberhisfirsttasasareporterToresearchwhethersucha“sithsense”reallyeists,RobertBaeredtwoeentsNeverwillhouYangforgethisfirstassignmentasajournaliststudyifcarriedout/did/madeShebroughthomealotofboosandmagaines2把短語變?yōu)閱卧~CleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealthCleaningawaydirtbenefitshealth3使用廣義詞generalwords代替具體詞specificwordsShebroughthomeseveralChineseandEnglishnovels,afewcoeandNewswee,andsometetboosHedidn’tliethecityHehatedit4消除重復5把直接引語的主要信息變?yōu)殚g接引語Thebosssaidtohim,“Tillyou’remoreeperiencedyoucancoverastory”HedisliedthecityThebosssaidthatwithmoreeperiencehecouldcovernews6主動句和被動句互換RobertBaer,aedtwoeentsTwoeentswerecarriedoutbyapsychologist7基本句型間靈活轉(zhuǎn)換DirtonthesinwasameanstoblocoutdiseaseSVPSVODirtonthesincouldgettingillYouwillobtainalltheinformationifvariousquestionsareased8特殊句式（強調(diào)句，倒裝句，therebe）和正常語序句式的轉(zhuǎn)化OnlyifyouasmanydifferentquestionswillyouacquirealltheinformationToresearchwhethersucha“sithsense”reallyeists,RobertBaer,…thereisreallyasithsense9把從句變?yōu)槎陶Z介詞短語，非謂語動詞短語Iftheintervieweeagrees,youcanusearecordertogetthefactsstraightWiththeinterviewee’sagreement,arecordercouldbeused________________________________________Thesinisanecessaryorgan,whichcanserveasabarrieragainstoutsidedangersBaerconcludesthatpeopledonothavetheabilitytosensewhenthey’rebeingstaredat10各種從句的靈活轉(zhuǎn)化Hisconclusionisthatpeoplearenotequippedwiththeabilitytofeelothers’observationC核查核查連貫性優(yōu)先考慮使用最短連接詞（but、then、later、finally、besides、thus、therefore、yet、however）核查字數(shù)（60-80words）核查標點和語法StemarystepscontentsThe1ststep定位核心信息The2ndstep在核心信息基礎(chǔ)上，進行語言表達形式改寫（改詞，換句型）The3rdstep核查連接詞，語法和標點2016年《考試說明》概要寫作樣題段落核心信息功能1…thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.論點+論據(jù)2Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease….France/EnglandInEurope3…sincethe18thcentury…cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.4nowadays…anAmericanimmunologist,encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.…thereisnothingfiedaboutattitudestodirthave,eist,changingopinions，viewpointseChangingviewpointstowardsdirteistPeople’sviewpointstowardsdirtarechanging…SVPIntheearly16thcentury,eanstoblocoutdisease…France/EnglandInEuropeItwasthoughtthat…/Peoplebelievedthat……;…;eeSVPillness,gettingillIntheearly16thcentury,eEurofromgettingillIntheearly16thcentury,eEurogettingillSVOsomeEuropeancountries…sincethe18thcentury…cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealthDoingAisgoodtoBItisgoodforBtodoAovedirtsincethe18thcenturyremove,wash…offbenefityourhealth,eep…h(huán)ealthySincethe18thcentury,peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycaneepushealthy…Nowadays…anAmericanimmunologist,encourageschildrentomunesystemnow/atpresentsomescientistsadvise,suggest,holdtheviewpowerfulepose…toNow,moremunesystemMoreandmoreedirtmayhelmunesystem…eIntheearly16thcentury,itwasthoughtthatdirtonthesincouldgettingillHowever,ovedirtsincethe18thcenturyNow,anincreasingnumberofmunesystemDon’tforgettomaeyoursummarytight!Onceue,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforeverIfyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestmentYouoneyforit,andyoutoocareofitNowadaysindustryhaseItischeaawaythantoreThishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearth’sresourcesJustthinofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyleThinoftheeaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisboughtAndweshoaterial!OurindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildrenThiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnowWhenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotaecareofwhatwehaveButwhycan’tweactbeforethishappensWhycan’twetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue概要寫作難點1Howtogettheeypointsquiclyandcorrectly如何快速、準確地捕捉要點抓住主題句或關(guān)鍵信息，忽略次要信息Para1：Onceue,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforeverIfyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestmentYouoneyforit,andyoutoocareofitdetailedeampletopicsentencecharacteristics忽略具體事例概要寫作難點2Howtoepresstheeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly如何靈活詮釋，規(guī)避抄襲的嫌疑Onceue,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever_________________,industrialgoods

weremade________________________Sometimeago;Inthepast;Decadesagotobeusedforalongtime;tofunctionwellforalongtime;durable持久的近義詞替換Decadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurableYouoneyforit,andyoutoocareofitsuchmoneyontreasure;treatitindly;Yousuchmoneyonitandtreasureituseitcarefully;Para1Decadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurableYousuchmoneyonitandtreasureitNowadaysindustryhaseItischeaawaythantoreThishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearth’sresourcesJustthinofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyleThinoftheeaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisboughtAndweshoaterial!Para2NowadaysindustryhaseItischeaawaythantoreThishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearth’sresourcesJustthinofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyleThinoftheeaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisboughtAndweshoaterial!topicsentencedetailedeamplescharacteristicsresult忽略具體事例1Nowadaysindustryhase2Itischeaawaythantore3Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearth’sresourcesModernIndustrymadeusbelieve;convincednotanent;Modernindustryhasconvincedusthatanentshort-lived近義詞替換2ItischeaawaythantoreTothrowthemawayischeaItismoreethantothrowthemaway改變主語（形式主語）正話反說、反話正說Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearth’sresourceswhichhasresultedinagreatwasteoftheearth’sresources改變句式resultinModernindustryhasconvincedusthatanentTothrowthemawayischea,whichhasresultedinagreatwasteoftheearth’sresourcesPara2Para3：提煉相關(guān)信息OurindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildrenThiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnowWhenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotaecareofwhatwehaveButwhycan’tweactbeforethishappensWhycan’twetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue過渡句Weneedtosaveresourcesbeforeit’stoolateThiswastefulnesshascausedusalotoftroubleWearerunningoutofresourcesandweneedtotaeactionThiswastefulnesshascausedusalotoftroubleWearerunningoutofresourcesandweneedtotaeactionWeneedtosaveresourcesbeforeit’stoolatePara3ThiswastefulnesshascausedusalotoftroubleWearerunningoutofresourcesWeneedtosaveresourcesbeforeit’stoolateDecadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurableWesuchmoneyonitandtreasureitModernindustryhasconvincedusthatanentTothrowthemawayischea,whichhasresultedinagreatwasteoftheearth’sresourcesThiswastefulnesshascausedusalotoftroubleWearerunningoutofresourcesWeneedtosaveresourcesbeforeit’stoolate71WPolishyourwriting有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊However,Therefore,ThefoodweeatseemstohaveagreateffectonourhealthAlthoughsciencehasmadebigstemonlyusedtoeeeatsandotherfoodadditives（添加劑）causedcancer

Yet,theseadditivesremaininourfood,anditisdifficulttonowwhichthingsonthewrafulTheadditiveswhichweeatarenotallsodirectFarmersoftengiveals,andbecauseofthis,ilofcowsSometimessimilartingsaresualsnotfortheirhealth,butjusttomaeaersaresimalsinordertogetahigheraretAlthoughsomecountrieshavetriedtocontrolsuchthings,thepracticecontinues（201W）ThefoodweeatseemstohaveagreateffectonourhealthAlthoughsciencehasmadebigstemonlyusedtoeeeatsandotherfoodadditives（添加劑）causedcancer

Para1：1Thefoodweeatseemstohaveagreateffectonourhealth2Althoughsciencehasmadebigsteaingfoodmorefittoeat,ithas,atthesametime,mademanyfoodsunfittoeat3Someresearchhasshownthatanillnessisrelatedtofoodandfortypercentofcancerisrelatedtofoodaswell1Ourfoodaffectsourhealth2Althoughsciencehasgreatlyimearestillunsafetoeat3Someresearchhasshownthatanillnessisrelatedtofoodandfortypercentofcancerisrelatedtofoodaswell3Researchhasostofourdiseasesarecausedbyfood,includingcancerOurfoodaffectsourhealthAlthoughsciencehasgreatlyimearestillunsafetoeatResearchhasostofourdiseasesarecausedbyfood,includingcancerPara1：Para2：Yet,theseadditivesremaininourfood,anditisdifficulttonowwhichthingsonthewrafulTheadditiveswhichweeatarenotallsodirectFarmersoftengiveals,andbecauseofthis,ilofcowsSometimessimilartingsaresualsnotfortheirhealth,butjusttomaeaprofit

1Yet,theseadditivesremaininourfood,anditisdifficulttonowwhichthingsonthewraful2Theadditiveswhichweeatarenotallsodirect3Sometimessimilartingsaresualsnotfortheirhealth,butjusttomaeaprofit

1Wecanhardlytellwhethertheadditivesinourfoodareharmfulornot2Theyaffectourbodyindirectly3Sometimessimilartingsaresualsnotfortheirhealth,butjusttomaeaprofit

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Itisnecessarytolimit“screentime”ifpeoplewanttoloseweightWearesue”Itisnecessarytolimit“screentime”ifpeoplewanttoloseweightoreallerilinsteadofsodaSticingtosmallerportionsandavoidingsugarydrinscontributetoweightlossWatchingoutforportionsiesanddriningwaterinsteadofsugarydrinsarealsoaeytoweightlossorelateronSotheygetmorecaloriesthantheywouldhaveiftheyatebreafastInfact,sthanpeoplewhoeatbreafastIfyoureallyputtheaboveintopracticeatonce,youwilldefinitelyreduceyourweightgraduallyAndwishyouhaveagoodfigurePeopleshouldavoidsippingbreafastSippingbreafastisactuallynotawisewaytoloseweightPeoplewillhaveagoodfigureiftheytaetheabovesuggestionsChangingsomehabitsmaybeagoodwaytoloseweightTaingmoreaemuchdifferencetoe”SticingtosmallerportionsandavoidingsugarydrinscontributetoweightlossPeopleshouldavoidsippingbreafastPeoplewillhaveagoodfigureiftheytaetheabovesuggestions58WFirst,Meanwhile,Besides，F(xiàn)inally，Ratseatourfoodormaeitsodirtythatitisn'tfitforbylayingdownustbecleverandcunningSomescientistshavebeentryingtofindthebestwaytotheseholestotheeSotheynowtheirmanydaystogetoverthefearTheyarealsofrightenedtogonearaethinghasbeentaenawayIfaeeIftherocistaenaway,theywillstillrunroundthe,eventhoughitwouldbequic