高中英語真題-短文改錯(cuò)-2

短文改錯(cuò)(一)(2015·課標(biāo)全國Ⅱ)One

day，little

Tony

went

to

a

shopping

center

with

his

parent.It

was

very

crowded.Tony

saw

a

toy

on

a

shop

window.He

liked

it

so

very

much

that

he

quickly

walked

into

the

shop.After

looks

at

the

toy

for

some

time，he

turned

around

and

found

where

his

parents

were

missing.Tony

was

scared

and

begun

to

cry.A

woman

saw

him

crying

and

telling

him

to

wait

outside

a

shop.Five

minutes

later，Tony

saw

parents.Mom

said，“How

nice

to

see

you

again！Dad

and

I

were

terrible

worried.”Tony

promised

her

that

this

would

never

happen

again.答案：One

day，little

Tony

went

to

a

shopping

center

with

his

.It

was

very

crowded.Tony

saw

a

toy

a

shop

window.He

liked

it

so

very

much

that

he

quickly

walked

into

the

shop.After

at

the

toy

for

some

time，he

turned

around

and

found

his

parents

were

missing.Tony

was

scared

and

to

cry.A

woman

saw

him

crying

and

him

to

wait

outside

shop.Five

minutes

later，Tony

saw

parents.Mom

said，“How

nice

to

see

you

again！Dad

and

I

were

worried.”Tony

promised

her

that

this

would

never

happen

again.解析：第一處：parent→parents由下文的his

parents

were...以及倒數(shù)第二句中的媽媽說的話中可知托尼是和爸爸、媽媽一起去的，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式parents。第二處：on→in表示在商店的櫥窗里，用介詞in。第三處：去掉very句中使用了so...that...結(jié)構(gòu)，very多余，故將其去掉。第四處：looks→looking該動(dòng)詞位于介詞after后，要用動(dòng)詞的ing形式，故把looks改為looking。第五處：where→that或去掉wherefound后是一個(gè)賓語從句，句子意思和成分完整，應(yīng)該用只起連接作用的that引導(dǎo)，也可以省略。故把where改為that或去掉where。第六處：begun→began本文描述的是過去的經(jīng)歷，and連接的兩個(gè)并列成分應(yīng)當(dāng)時(shí)態(tài)一致，故此處用一般過去時(shí)，把begun改為began。第七處：telling→told由and可知，此處和謂語動(dòng)詞saw并列，故用過去式。第八處：a→the這里指的是前文提到的shop，所以用定冠詞the修飾，表特指。第九處：saw后加his這里特指托尼的父母親，所以用物主代詞his修飾parents。第十處：terrible→terribly修飾形容詞worried要用副詞形式。(二)(2015·陜西)My

soccer

coach

retired

in

last

week.I

wanted

to

do

anything

special

for

him

at

his

retirement

party.My

mum

makes

the

better

biscuits

in

the

world，so

I

decide

to

ask

her

for

help.Mum

taught

me

some

basic

step

of

baking.I

insisted

on

doing

most

of

the

baking

myself.I

thought

the

biscuits

were

really

well.My

only

mistake

was

that

I

dropped

some

on

the

floor

after

I

was

packing

them

up.At

a

party，my

coach，with

a

biscuit

in

his

mouth，asked

surprisingly

who

made

them

and

joked，“I

might

have

to

retire

again

next

year

just

get

some

more

of

these

biscuits.”My

favorite

picture

at

the

party

is

of

my

coach

and

me

enjoy

the

biscuits

with

happy

laughter!答案：My

soccer

coach

retired

in

last

week.I

wanted

to

do

special

for

him

at

his

retirement

party.My

mum

makes

the

biscuits

in

the

world，so

I

to

ask

her

for

help.Mum

taught

me

some

basic

of

baking.I

insisted

on

doing

most

of

the

baking

myself.I

thought

the

biscuits

were

really

.My

only

mistake

was

that

I

dropped

some

on

the

floor

I

was

packing

them

up.At

party，my

coach，with

a

biscuit

in

his

mouth，asked

surprisingly

who

made

them

and

joked，“I

might

have

to

retire

again

next

year

just

get

some

more

of

these

biscuits.”My

favorite

picture

at

the

party

is

of

my

coach

and

me

the

biscuits

with

happy

laughter!解析：第一處：去掉in用last，next等表示的時(shí)間狀語前不用介詞，故去掉in。第二處：anything→somethinganything用于疑問句和否定句中，something用于肯定句中，故將anything改為something。第三處：better→best表示比較的范圍是in

the

world，故改為最高級(jí)。第四處：decide→decideddecide意為“決定”，此處時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)與全文時(shí)態(tài)一致，故改為decided。第五處：step→stepsstep是可數(shù)名詞，前面有some修飾，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式。第六處：well→good系動(dòng)詞be后接形容詞作表語，副詞不能充當(dāng)表語，故改well為good。第七處：after→when/while句意為：我唯一的錯(cuò)誤就是當(dāng)我正在打包的時(shí)候掉地上了一些。根據(jù)句意可知將after改為when或while。第八處：a→the第一段第二句中有提到party，此處為第二次提到，故用the表特指。故將a改為the。第九處：just后加to分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，might

have

to是謂語部分，從而get不再是謂語動(dòng)詞，故只能是非謂語動(dòng)詞。此處表示目的，故用不定式。第十處：enjoy→enjoying此處my

coach

and

me作介詞of的賓語，enjoy與my

coach

and

me之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞形式。(三)(2015·四川)Hi,

Janice，It's

been

a

month

since

I

came

to

this

new

school

and

I

really

want

share

with

you

some

of

the

problems

I

have

been

experiencing.As

I

tell

you

last

time,

I

made

three

new

friend

here.We

hang

out

together

during

lunch

and

after

school.We've

been

spending

a

lot

of

time

sing

in

karaoke

bars.It's

been

three

Saturdays

now

and

it

really

costs

me

many.And

I

started

to

see

this

as

a

timewasting

activity!

In

fact，I

don't

like

to

go

anymore,

so

I'm

afraid

I'll

lose

their

friendship.How

do

you

think

I

should

do?

If

you

are

me，would

you

talk

to

him?Please

help

with

me

and

give

me

some

advice.Grace答案：Hi,

Janice，It's

been

a

month

since

I

came

to

this

new

school

and

I

really

want

share

with

you

some

of

the

problems

I

have

been

experiencing.As

I

you

last

time,

I

made

three

new

here.We

hang

out

together

during

lunch

and

after

school.We've

been

spending

a

lot

of

time

in

karaoke

bars.It's

been

three

Saturdays

now

and

it

really

costs

me

.And

I

started

to

see

this

as

a

timewasting

activity!

In

fact，I

don't

like

to

go

anymore,

I'm

afraid

I'll

lose

their

friendship.

do

you

think

I

should

do?

If

you

me，would

you

talk

to

？Please

help

with

me

and

give

me

some

advice.Grace解析：第一處：want后加towant

to

do

sth.為固定搭配，意為“想要做某事”。第二處：tell→told根據(jù)從句中的時(shí)間狀語last

time可知該動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過去，故應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。第三處：friend→friendsfriend為可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)前面的數(shù)詞three可知此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將friend改為friends。第四處：sing→singingspend

some

time(in)

doing

sth.是固定搭配，意為“花時(shí)間做某事”。故將sing改為singing。第五處：many→much此處說的是在卡拉OK唱歌這件事讓作者花費(fèi)了很多錢，浪費(fèi)了很多時(shí)間。many指代可數(shù)名詞，much指代不可數(shù)名詞。故將many改為much。第六處：so→but逗號(hào)前說不想再去了，而后面又說害怕失去友誼，由此可知逗號(hào)前后為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而非因果關(guān)系。故將so改為but。第七處：How→What該句中do

you

think為插入語，分析句子成分可知?jiǎng)釉~do后缺少賓語，而how為疑問副詞，在句中作方式狀語，作賓語應(yīng)用what。第八處：are→were根據(jù)下文的would可知此處為if條件句的虛擬語氣。與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)相反，應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。故將are改成were。第九處：him→them上文提到作者交了三個(gè)朋友，再結(jié)合上文中的their

friendship可知此處指代那三個(gè)朋友，為復(fù)數(shù)。故將him改為them。第十處：去掉with固定搭配help

sb.

with

sth.意為“幫助某人某事”，help后賓語為人時(shí)不用介詞。故去掉with。(四)(2015·浙江)My

old

classroom

was

interesting

because

three

side

of

the

classroom

were

made

from

glass.I

enjoyed

sit

close

to

the

windows

and

looking

at

the

view.On

the

lefthand

side

of

the

class，I

could

easy

see

the

football

field.In

the

mornings，it

was

full

of

students

exercising.The

view

from

the

back

of

the

classroom

is

also

splendid.Close

to

the

school

there

was

a

beautiful

park

with

many

trees

around

them.Farther

in

the

distance，I

could

not

enjoy

the

view

of

snowy

mountains.On

the

right

side

of

the

class

was

the

road.I

was

always

interested

to

see

the

drivers

in

hurry

in

the

morning.The

position

of

the

classroom

with

its

view

made

me

felt

like

I

was

dreaming.If

I

was

only

a

child

when

I

studied

in

that

classroom，I

will

never

forget

it.答案：My

old

classroom

was

interesting

because

three

of

the

classroom

were

made

glass.I

enjoyed

close

to

the

windows

and

looking

at

the

view.On

the

lefthand

side

of

the

class，I

could

see

the

football

field.In

the

mornings，it

was

full

of

students

exercising.The

view

from

the

back

of

the

classroom

also

splendid.Close

to

the

school

there

was

a

beautiful

park

with

many

trees

around

.Farther

in

the

distance，I

could

not

enjoy

the

view

of

snowy

mountains.On

the

right

side

of

the

class

was

the

road.I

was

always

interested

to

see

the

drivers

in

hurry

in

the

morning.The

position

of

the

classroom

with

its

view

made

me

like

I

was

dreaming.

I

was

only

a

child

when

I

studied

in

that

classroom，I

will

never

forget

it.解析：第一處：side→sidesside是可數(shù)名詞，前面有數(shù)詞three修飾，故應(yīng)改為復(fù)數(shù)形式。第二處：from→of墻壁由玻璃制成，看得出原材料，故將介詞from改為of。第三處：sit→sittingenjoy后接動(dòng)名詞作賓語，故將sit改為sitting，和looking

at

the

view構(gòu)成并列結(jié)構(gòu)。第四處：easy→easilysee是動(dòng)詞，需要用副詞來修飾，故將easy改為easily。第五處：is→was全文用的都是過去時(shí)態(tài)，故將is改為was，與全文時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。第六處：them→it此處代詞代替的是the

school，故將them改為it。第七處：刪掉not本文主要是談?wù)撏高^玻璃墻能欣賞到外面的景色，因而是能欣賞到山上的雪景，故此處的否定意義不符，故去掉not。第八處：in與hurry之間加ain

a

hurry意為“立即；匆忙”，為固定搭配。第九處：felt→feelmake使役動(dòng)詞后用動(dòng)詞原形作賓語補(bǔ)足語，構(gòu)成make

sb.do

sth.結(jié)構(gòu)，意為“使某人做某事”，故將felt改為feel。第十處：If→Although/Though句意為：盡管當(dāng)我在那個(gè)教室讀書時(shí)還只是個(gè)孩子，但我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記它。根據(jù)語境可知，這是一個(gè)讓步狀語從句，故將If改為Although或者Though。

短文改錯(cuò)(一)(2015·課標(biāo)全國Ⅱ)One

day，little

Tony

went

to

a

shopping

center

with

his

parent.It

was

very

crowded.Tony

saw

a

toy

on

a

shop

window.He

liked

it

so

very

much

that

he

quickly

walked

into

the

shop.After

looks

at

the

toy

for

some

time，he

turned

around

and

found

where

his

parents

were

missing.Tony

was

scared

and

begun

to

cry.A

woman

saw

him

crying

and

telling

him

to

wait

outside

a

shop.Five

minutes

later，Tony

saw

parents.Mom

said，“How

nice

to

see

you

again！Dad

and

I

were

terrible

worried.”Tony

promised

her

that

this

would

never

happen

again.答案：One

day，little

Tony

went

to

a

shopping

center

with

his

.It

was

very

crowded.Tony

saw

a

toy

a

shop

window.He

liked

it

so

very

much

that

he

quickly

walked

into

the

shop.After

at

the

toy

for

some

time，he

turned

around

and

found

his

parents

were

missing.Tony

was

scared

and

to

cry.A

woman

saw

him

crying

and

him

to

wait

outside

shop.Five

minutes

later，Tony

saw

parents.Mom

said，“How

nice

to

see

you

again！Dad

and

I

were

worried.”Tony

promised

her

that

this

would

never

happen

again.解析：第一處：parent→parents由下文的his

parents

were...以及倒數(shù)第二句中的媽媽說的話中可知托尼是和爸爸、媽媽一起去的，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式parents。第二處：on→in表示在商店的櫥窗里，用介詞in。第三處：去掉very句中使用了so...that...結(jié)構(gòu)，very多余，故將其去掉。第四處：looks→looking該動(dòng)詞位于介詞after后，要用動(dòng)詞的ing形式，故把looks改為looking。第五處：where→that或去掉wherefound后是一個(gè)賓語從句，句子意思和成分完整，應(yīng)該用只起連接作用的that引導(dǎo)，也可以省略。故把where改為that或去掉where。第六處：begun→began本文描述的是過去的經(jīng)歷，and連接的兩個(gè)并列成分應(yīng)當(dāng)時(shí)態(tài)一致，故此處用一般過去時(shí)，把begun改為began。第七處：telling→told由and可知，此處和謂語動(dòng)詞saw并列，故用過去式。第八處：a→the這里指的是前文提到的shop，所以用定冠詞the修飾，表特指。第九處：saw后加his這里特指托尼的父母親，所以用物主代詞his修飾parents。第十處：terrible→terribly修飾形容詞worried要用副詞形式。(二)(2015·陜西)My

soccer

coach

retired

in

last

week.I

wanted

to

do

anything

special

for

him

at

his

retirement

party.My

mum

makes

the

better

biscuits

in

the

world，so

I

decide

to

ask

her

for

help.Mum

taught

me

some

basic

step

of

baking.I

insisted

on

doing

most

of

the

baking

myself.I

thought

the

biscuits

were

really

well.My

only

mistake

was

that

I

dropped

some

on

the

floor

after

I

was

packing

them

up.At

a

party，my

coach，with

a

biscuit

in

his

mouth，asked

surprisingly

who

made

them

and

joked，“I

might

have

to

retire

again

next

year

just

get

some

more

of

these

biscuits.”My

favorite

picture

at

the

party

is

of

my

coach

and

me

enjoy

the

biscuits

with

happy

laughter!答案：My

soccer

coach

retired

in

last

week.I

wanted

to

do

special

for

him

at

his

retirement

party.My

mum

makes

the

biscuits

in

the

world，so

I

to

ask

her

for

help.Mum

taught

me

some

basic

of

baking.I

insisted

on

doing

most

of

the

baking

myself.I

thought

the

biscuits

were

really

.My

only

mistake

was

that

I

dropped

some

on

the

floor

I

was

packing

them

up.At

party，my

coach，with

a

biscuit

in

his

mouth，asked

surprisingly

who

made

them

and

joked，“I

might

have

to

retire

again

next

year

just

get

some

more

of

these

biscuits.”My

favorite

picture

at

the

party

is

of

my

coach

and

me

the

biscuits

with

happy

laughter!解析：第一處：去掉in用last，next等表示的時(shí)間狀語前不用介詞，故去掉in。第二處：anything→somethinganything用于疑問句和否定句中，something用于肯定句中，故將anything改為something。第三處：better→best表示比較的范圍是in

the

world，故改為最高級(jí)。第四處：decide→decideddecide意為“決定”，此處時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)與全文時(shí)態(tài)一致，故改為decided。第五處：step→stepsstep是可數(shù)名詞，前面有some修飾，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式。第六處：well→good系動(dòng)詞be后接形容詞作表語，副詞不能充當(dāng)表語，故改well為good。第七處：after→when/while句意為：我唯一的錯(cuò)誤就是當(dāng)我正在打包的時(shí)候掉地上了一些。根據(jù)句意可知將after改為when或while。第八處：a→the第一段第二句中有提到party，此處為第二次提到，故用the表特指。故將a改為the。第九處：just后加to分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，might

have

to是謂語部分，從而get不再是謂語動(dòng)詞，故只能是非謂語動(dòng)詞。此處表示目的，故用不定式。第十處：enjoy→enjoying此處my

coach

and

me作介詞of的賓語，enjoy與my

coach

and

me之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞形式。(三)(2015·四川)Hi,

Janice，It's

been

a

month

since

I

came

to

this

new

school

and

I

really

want

share

with

you

some

of

the

problems

I

have

been

experiencing.As

I

tell

you

last

time,

I

made

three

new

friend

here.We

hang

out

together

during

lunch

and

after

school.We've

been

spending

a

lot

of

time

sing

in

karaoke

bars.It's

been

three

Saturdays

now

and

it

really

costs

me

many.And

I

started

to

see

this

as

a

timewasting

activity!

In

fact，I

don't

like

to

go

anymore,

so

I'm

afraid

I'll

lose

their

friendship.How

do

you

think

I

should

do?

If

you

are

me，would

you

talk

to

him?Please

help

with

me

and

give

me

some

advice.Grace答案：Hi,

Janice，It's

been

a

month

since

I

came

to

this

new

school

and

I

really

want

share

with

you

some

of

the

problems

I

have

been

experiencing.As

I

you

last

time,

I

made

three

new

here.We

hang

out

together

during

lunch

and

after

school.We've

been

spending

a

lot

of

time

in

karaoke

bars.It's

been

three

Saturdays

now

and

it

really

costs

me

.And

I

started

to

see

this

as

a

timewasting

activity!

In

fact，I

don't

like

to

go

anymore,

I'm

afraid

I'll

lose

their

friendship.

do

you

think

I

should

do?

If

you

me，would

you

talk

to

？Please

help

with

me

and

give

me

some

advice.Grace解析：第一處：want后加towant

to

do

sth.為固定搭配，意為“想要做某事”。第二處：tell→told根據(jù)從句中的時(shí)間狀語last

time可知該動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過去，故應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。第三處：friend→friendsfriend為可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)前面的數(shù)詞three可知此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將friend改為friends。第四處：sing→singingspend

some

time(in)

doing

sth.是固定搭配，意為“花時(shí)間做某事”。故將sing改為singing。第五處：many→much此處說的是在卡拉OK唱歌這件事讓作者花費(fèi)了很多錢，浪費(fèi)了很多時(shí)間。many指代可數(shù)名詞，much指代不可數(shù)名詞。故將many改為much。第六處：so→but逗號(hào)前說不想再去了，而后面又說害怕失去友誼，由此可知逗號(hào)前后為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而非因果關(guān)系。故將so改為but。第七處：How→What該句中do

you

think為插入語，分析句子成分可知?jiǎng)釉~do后缺少賓語，而how為疑問副詞，在句中作方式狀語，作賓語應(yīng)用what。第八處：are→were根據(jù)下文的would可知此處為if條件句的虛擬語氣。與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)相反，應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。故將are改成were。第九處：him→them上文提到作者交了三個(gè)朋友，再結(jié)合上文中的their

friendship可知此處指代那三個(gè)朋友，為復(fù)數(shù)。故將him改為them。第十處：去掉with固定搭配help

sb.

with

sth.意為“幫助某人某事”，help后賓語為人時(shí)不用介詞。故去掉with。(四)(2015·浙江)My

old

classroom

was

interesting

because

three

side

of

the

classroom

were

made

from

glass.I

enjoyed

sit

close

to

the

windows

and

looking

at

the

view.On

the

lefthand

side

of

the

class，I

could

easy

see

the

football

field.In

the

mornings，it

was

full

of

students

exercising.The

view

from

the

back

of

the

classroom

is

also

splendid.Close

to

the

school

there

was

a

beautiful

park

with

many

trees

around

them.Farther

in

the

distance，I

could

not

enjoy

the

view

of

snowy

mountains.On

the

right

side

of

the

class

was

the

road.I

was

always

interested

to

see

the

d