2022屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪專(zhuān)題應(yīng)用文復(fù)習(xí)-邀請(qǐng)外教出行課件

高考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文復(fù)習(xí)邀請(qǐng)外教出行作文（15分）

假定你是高二（1）班的李華，計(jì)劃本周末和同學(xué)們?nèi)ケ本W林匹克森林公園進(jìn)行徒步活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)給外教Lucy寫(xiě)封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)安排：（如活動(dòng)時(shí)間，行走路線等）；2.需要做的準(zhǔn)備工作；3.詢(xún)問(wèn)對(duì)方意向。注意： 1.詞數(shù)不少于60;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.?開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Interaction（交際性：互動(dòng)）

Willyoubeavailable?Wouldyouliketogiveitatry?Isthisappealingtoyou?Astrongappealtoyou,isn’tit?Soundsgreat,doesn’tit?Tone（交際性：語(yǔ)氣）

LessformalHow’severythinggoing?

Arrangement（內(nèi)容：介紹活動(dòng)安排）

Start/end/lengthActivity—walkingMorethanwalkingpurpose(route,distance,time,pace)(game,party,barbecue...)所用語(yǔ)言關(guān)鍵詞匯Iamwritingtoinviteat/in/onthisSaturdaytheOlympicForestParkwalk/hike(jog,run...)Grade2Class1建議：advice(Uncountablenoun)；adviseV.sbtodosuggestion(CountableNoun);suggestV.(that)sb(should)do準(zhǔn)備：prepare...fortheactivity;preparation××Class1,Grade2我寫(xiě)信想邀請(qǐng)您參加我們的徒步走活動(dòng)。徒步活動(dòng)定在周日早晨8點(diǎn)開(kāi)始,大約三個(gè)小時(shí)。我們會(huì)走公園一半的路，會(huì)很累。我建議您穿合身的衣服和包頭鞋,這樣你就會(huì)走得輕松而舒服。一定帶上水和帽子，萬(wàn)一天氣熱太陽(yáng)曬。如果有時(shí)間，您能來(lái)嗎？如果有問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)聯(lián)系我。我寫(xiě)信想邀請(qǐng)您參加我們的徒步走活動(dòng)。IamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusinhikingthisSunday.TakeahikingwithusHikewithus徒步活動(dòng)定在周日早晨8點(diǎn)開(kāi)始,大約三個(gè)小時(shí)。Thehikingisscheduledtokickoffat8.amthis

upcomingSundayandrunfor3hours.Asplanned,thehikingwillkickoffat...我們會(huì)走公園一半的路，會(huì)很累。Wewillcoverhalfof(therouteof)thepark,whichisdefinitelytiring/challenging.Wewillcoverhalfof(therouteof)thepark,whichissupposedtobetiring/challenging.我建議您穿合身的衣服和包頭鞋,這樣你就會(huì)走得輕松而舒服。Isuggestyouwearfittedclothesandclosed-toeshoessothatyouwillhavearelaxingandcomfortablehiking.Tomakesureyouwillhavearelaxingandcomfortablehiking,fittedclothesandclosed-toeareyourperfectchoice.一定帶上水和帽子，萬(wàn)一天氣熱太陽(yáng)曬。Dobringsomewaterandwearacapincaseitishotandthesunisburning.您能來(lái)嗎，如果有時(shí)間？Willyoumakeittojoinusifyouareavailable?Willyoucomeandjoinusifitisconvenientforyou?Whynotgiveitatryiftimeisavailableforyou?如果有問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)聯(lián)系我。Ifyouhaveanyquestion,feelfreetoask/contactme.Don’thesitatetoaskme.范文賞析DearLucy,IamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusthisSundayforawalkingactivityintheOlympicForestPark,whichisthelargestparkinBeijing.Therearemanywalkingpaths,withlengthsof3k,5k,and10kwithinthepark.Andweplantowalk10k.Itwillbeverychallenging.Ifyou’reinterestedinit,pleasemeetusat9:00onSundaymorningatthesouthgateofOlympicForestPark.

Ifyouwanttobreatheinthefreshairandgetmuchexercise,whynotcome?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua要點(diǎn)一：活動(dòng)安排交際性：寫(xiě)作目的陳述Asforpreparation,you’dbetterwearsneakerstoguaranteeyourcomfortandawind-jacketincaseitiswindy.Inaddition,youcantakesuncreamtoprotectyourskinfromthesunlight.Abottleofwaterisalsonecessary.

Ifyouwanttobreatheinthefreshairandgetmuchexercise,whynotcome?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua要點(diǎn)二：所需準(zhǔn)備要點(diǎn)三：詢(xún)問(wèn)意向高分作文賞析15分要點(diǎn)齊全；結(jié)構(gòu)合理活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和準(zhǔn)備工作都很清晰學(xué)生很明顯使用了本學(xué)期學(xué)習(xí)的詞組很多。過(guò)程性學(xué)習(xí)痕跡明顯語(yǔ)氣略顯客氣14分書(shū)寫(xiě)漂亮，要點(diǎn)齊全；結(jié)構(gòu)合理活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和準(zhǔn)備工作都很清晰；詞匯豐富，句式多樣，沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤；交際得體，體現(xiàn)了很強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力建議該學(xué)生使用顏色比這個(gè)略淺的筆14分要點(diǎn)齊全；結(jié)構(gòu)合理活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和準(zhǔn)備工作都很清晰詞組表達(dá)很豐富；非謂語(yǔ)，從句使用也很正確書(shū)寫(xiě)還有進(jìn)步的空間語(yǔ)氣略顯客氣12分書(shū)寫(xiě)漂亮，要點(diǎn)齊全；結(jié)構(gòu)合理活動(dòng)細(xì)節(jié)以及準(zhǔn)備工作都很豐富；句式多樣，交際得體。不過(guò)其實(shí)仔細(xì)看一下，這篇文章從開(kāi)篇的willbestartat8to12，together用成動(dòng)詞；后文中還有諸如therehave；toourdelightisthat等表達(dá)使用不當(dāng)；最后joinwithus.建議該同學(xué)注意改錯(cuò)。不過(guò)這篇作文正好說(shuō)明書(shū)寫(xiě)的重要性同話題作文假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校將舉辦新年聯(lián)歡會(huì)。請(qǐng)你給外教Linda女士寫(xiě)一封郵件邀請(qǐng)她參加。郵件內(nèi)容包括：1.通知聯(lián)歡會(huì)事宜。2.希望Linda表演節(jié)目。3.詢(xún)問(wèn)對(duì)方意向。

DearLinda,Howisitgoing？I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoourNewYear'sParty．MyclassmatesandIplantohaveapartytocelebratetheNewYear．WearegoingtohavethepartyinourclassroomonDecember29th．Thepartywillstartat2o'clockintheafternoon．Attheparty，wewillsingsongs，playgames，anddance．Ihopeyoucancometoourpartyifyouareavailablethen．Nothingisneededtopreparefortheparty,for