高中英語短文改錯(cuò)課件--公開課

1、How to do proof-reading短文改錯(cuò)Class 198 Senior 1Mr. Wu In our everyday lives, if we make some mistakes, we should correct them, and then we are still a good fellow. Chairman Maos words 1. I can go to home now.2. I like history of China.3. I am fond at English.theWrong wordMissing wordofUnnecessary word

2、高考短文改錯(cuò)的考察方式高考短文改錯(cuò)的考察方式 下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。 增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意:1.每句不超過兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤； 2.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 3.只允許修改10處,多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。 從錯(cuò)誤比例上看，基本上是從錯(cuò)誤比例上看，基本上是 1：1：8多多 缺缺 錯(cuò)錯(cuò)一般以三種題型出現(xiàn)一般以三種題型出現(xiàn): :增加增加,刪除或修改刪除或修改。設(shè)問的角度有三個(gè)設(shè)問的角度有三個(gè)：詞法、句法和行文邏輯詞法、句法

3、和行文邏輯。動(dòng)詞形動(dòng)詞形， 名詞數(shù)名詞數(shù)還要注意還要注意形和副形和副代詞代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟介詞介詞短語須關(guān)注短語須關(guān)注習(xí)慣用法習(xí)慣用法要記住要記住冠詞連詞冠詞連詞常光顧常光顧 A Limerick請(qǐng)先念一遍請(qǐng)先念一遍“咒語咒語”吧吧復(fù)雜句子復(fù)雜句子不放過不放過.一、動(dòng)詞一、動(dòng)詞形形 1.1.動(dòng)詞的動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)和和語態(tài)語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤錯(cuò)誤. . 高考鏈接高考鏈接1： but once I started the car, my mind goes blank . (2017 全國(guó)）全國(guó)）went It is always crowded with customers at meal times,

4、some people even had to wait outside.（2016 ）have2.主謂不一致主謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤的錯(cuò)誤.高考鏈接高考鏈接: : I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全全國(guó)卷國(guó)卷) was3 3. 非謂語動(dòng)詞非謂語動(dòng)詞 錯(cuò)誤高考鏈接高考鏈接: : The instructor kept repeating the words, “Speed up”“Slow down”“Turning left”.（2017全國(guó)卷）全國(guó)卷）

5、Turn I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out of a building. (2011全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷)disappointed5. He used to getting up early to take physical exercise. werelikes excitingget1.Not only the students but also the teacher like the film. 2. When they came here tomorrow, I will show them.3.

6、 They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. 4. I found the game excited and my dad explained the rules. practicecomePractice二、名詞二、名詞數(shù)數(shù) 指指名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式的用法錯(cuò)誤。的用法錯(cuò)誤。高考鏈接高考鏈接2：The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up”“Slow down”“Turn left”.（2017全國(guó)卷）全國(guó)卷）words In

7、 early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady, around three per weeks.(2011）week1.Dont lose hearts, youll be successful in time. 2.I need some more informations. heartinformationpractice不可數(shù)名詞不可數(shù)名詞progress, furniture, weather, fun, news, information, advice Practice 三、還要注意形和副三、還要注意形和副

8、形容詞和副詞的誤用形容詞和副詞的誤用高考鏈接高考鏈接3： It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of the road.（2017）sudden2 2比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)的混用或誤用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)的混用或誤用. . The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.(2009）faster還要注意形和副還要注意形和副 高考鏈接：高考鏈接： Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another Unfortunatel

9、yA few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car.(2017全國(guó)卷全國(guó)卷）later 1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. 2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from mine. 3. His father looks much more happier today.angrily clear 4. So I grateful accepted the off

10、er. gratefullypracticePractice四四、 代詞代詞格，格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟細(xì)領(lǐng)悟3. it3. it作形主、形賓作形主、形賓、指代時(shí)有缺漏指代時(shí)有缺漏 (make, find, think)或或固定搭配固定搭配. .高考鏈接高考鏈接4：With the help of Katia, a roommate of me (2011 ）mineIt was only when we did their chemistry project together that I began to understand (2010 ）He found difficult to learn mat

11、h well.ourit1. 1. 人稱代詞，反身代詞，不定代詞人稱代詞，反身代詞，不定代詞2. 2. 代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致的錯(cuò)誤代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致的錯(cuò)誤. .2. I was learning to express me in simple English. 3. I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 4. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. myselfeverythingit1.Som

12、e students may also save up for our college or future use .theirpracticePractice五、五、介詞短語介詞短語須關(guān)注須關(guān)注，習(xí)慣用法習(xí)慣用法要記住要記住 1. 1.主要考查主要考查固定短語，固定介詞固定短語，固定介詞的搭配。的搭配。2.2.介詞的介詞的多用，漏用多用，漏用和和誤用誤用3 3.時(shí)間狀語前有指示代詞時(shí)間狀語前有指示代詞this, thatthis, that或或one, one, next,lastnext,last等修飾時(shí)不用介詞等修飾時(shí)不用介詞. . eg. I was so much nervous t

13、hat I could hardly tell which direction was left.五、五、介詞短語介詞短語須關(guān)注須關(guān)注，習(xí)慣用法習(xí)慣用法要記住要記住高考鏈接：高考鏈接： Two years before, I travelled to Brazil and I rented for a car.(2012 浙浙 江卷江卷)ofIt was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road.practice1.Im sure they will laugh to me and see meas

14、a fool. 2. At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill.3. When a young man starts to earn hisown living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food .4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money.atforonPractice連詞連詞butbut，andand，or, soor, so和和althoughalthough的邏的邏輯性用法錯(cuò)誤輯性用法錯(cuò)誤高考

15、鏈接：高考鏈接：六六、冠詞連詞冠詞連詞常光顧常光顧He was right here in the front of me. (2011）I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor. . . 冠詞冠詞a, ana, an和和thethe的用法錯(cuò)誤的用法錯(cuò)誤and1. I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light.2. He will stay

16、 there one and two days.3. Every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying. 4. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella. andoran The smaller piece is that you want, right ? It is known to us all, all efforts will be paid. Practice makes perfect, that is very important for us .七七、復(fù)雜句子復(fù)

17、雜句子不放過不放過whatAswhich1.單詞拼寫不改單詞拼寫不改.2.大小寫不改大小寫不改.3.詞序不改詞序不改.4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改.5.原意不改原意不改.五不改原則五不改原則考查目標(biāo)1 1）識(shí)別錯(cuò)誤）識(shí)別錯(cuò)誤 并正確校正語篇的能力并正確校正語篇的能力2 2）綜合運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)的能力）綜合運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)的能力3 3）準(zhǔn)確理解語篇，掌握內(nèi)容及行文邏）準(zhǔn)確理解語篇，掌握內(nèi)容及行文邏輯的能力輯的能力 下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。 增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,

18、并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意:1.每句不超過兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤； 2.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 3.只允許修改10處,多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。解題步驟解題步驟1. 通讀全文，掌握大意通讀全文，掌握大意2.整句理解，上下兼顧整句理解，上下兼顧3.復(fù)讀全文，復(fù)讀全文，檢查驗(yàn)證檢查驗(yàn)證動(dòng)詞形動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)名詞數(shù)還要注意還要注意形和副形和副代詞代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟介詞介詞短語須關(guān)注短語須關(guān)注習(xí)慣用法習(xí)慣用法要記住要記住冠詞連詞冠詞連詞常光顧常光顧 A Limerick請(qǐng)先念一遍請(qǐng)先念一遍“咒語咒語”吧吧復(fù)雜句子復(fù)雜句子不放過不放過再叮囑幾句：再叮囑幾句：1.單詞拼寫不改單詞拼寫不改.2.大小寫

19、不改大小寫不改.3.詞序不改詞序不改.4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改.5.原意不改原意不改.解題步驟解題步驟1.1.通讀全文，掌握大意通讀全文，掌握大意2.2.整句理解，上下兼顧整句理解，上下兼顧3.3.復(fù)讀全文，檢查驗(yàn)證復(fù)讀全文，檢查驗(yàn)證五不改原則五不改原則 At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitt

20、ing room. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights was shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his1.

21、_father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!3._They put them in the corner of the sitting4._On_chose_tall_it動(dòng)詞形動(dòng)詞形介詞短語常?？?，習(xí)慣用法要記住介詞短語常常考，習(xí)慣用法要記住還要注意形和副還要注意形和副代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟room. Jim was covered it with a lot of5._Christmas light. The sitting room

22、 looked6. _really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. _a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas8. _tree lights was shinning brightly. Jim and his9. _parents singing and dancing happily.10._was_lights_beautiful_andwerewere動(dòng)詞形動(dòng)詞形還要注意形和副還要注意形和副動(dòng)詞形動(dòng)詞形名詞數(shù)名詞數(shù)冠詞連詞須關(guān)注冠詞連詞須關(guān)注 I was a high school student then, from the low-income family. So I have to support my family. My first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant. I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of losing th