英語寫作高分必備：2.3高考概要寫作高分技巧含答案

1、3.高考概要寫作高分技巧%劇研析（浙江高考）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Parents everywhere praise their kids Jenn Berman, author ofTheA to Z Guide to RaisingHappy and Confident Kids, says, a We ve gone to the opposite extremes a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict . "By giving kids a lot of praise, p

2、arents think they ' re building their children ' s conwdencejn fact, it may be just theopposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that ' s insinceremake kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents' .p

3、raise has put 廿Still, don' t go too far in the other direction Not giving enoughpraise can be just as damaging as giving too much Kids will feel like they ' re not good enough or that you don'ast aaresuHd, maysee no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amou

4、nt of praise? Experts say that the quality ofpraise is more important than the quantity . If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward“ We shouldespecially recognize our children' s efforts to

5、push themselves and workhard to achieve a goalsays D onahue, author of Parenting WithoutFear: Letting Goof Worry and Focusingon What ReallyMatters." Onething to remember is that it' s the process not the end product thatmatters. ”Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team Bu

6、t if he' s out therevery day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it

7、is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate( 相稱的)to the amount of effort our child has put into it . 練考場審題Step 1精準審題謀篇布局文體議論文時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時原文分析第一段:指出父母過多表揚孩子的弊端第二段:指出表揚得太少也不好第三、四段:給出建議，要根據(jù)孩子實際付出的努力而非最終的結(jié)果來表揚孩子Step 2頭腦風暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:extreme, enthusiasm, insufficient praise, an appro

8、priate amount of, based on, rather than(2佳句 Experts warn about two extremes when it comes to parentspraise for their children. Therefore,the given advice is that an appropriate amount ofpraise should be given based on process rather than the result Step 3斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點1:專家警告家長們不要太多或太少表揚孩子。一般表達：Experts w

9、arn parents not to praise their children too much or too little.句式升級（時間狀語從句）專家警告說，父母對孩子的表揚存有兩個極端。Experts warn about two extremes when it comes to parents, praisefortheir children .要點2:因此，家長們應(yīng)該基于過程而不是結(jié)果表揚孩子。一般表達：Therefore, parents should praise children based on the process rather than the result.句式升

10、級（表語從句，被動語態(tài)）因此，給出的建議是，適當?shù)谋頁P應(yīng)該基于過程而不是結(jié)果。Therefore, the given advice isthat an appropriate amount ofpraise should be given based on process rather than the resultStep 4銜接過渡斐然成篇Experts warn about two extremes when it comes to parentspraisechildrens lack of enthusiasm to explore new thingsr theyre afrai

11、dfor their children . On the one hand, too much praise might lead tothey won ' t meet parents ' expectOnonse other hand, insufficient praise might let children consider efforts pointless.Therefore, parents should praise children based on the process rather than the result.讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右

12、的內(nèi)容概要high tea ” in someIf you ' ve heard people say they are havingexclusive, smart hotel lobby, you can smile to yourself, knowing that “ high tea “ isnsesdrved to tourists with fancy lodging.“ High tea “ doesn ' t refer to the'thanceganfixitves,the pure-white table linens, or the luxur

13、y surroundings of a high-class salon. It is actually the main meal of the day, served between 6:00 and 7:00 p. m. The “high” in the phrase comes from the time of the day, meaning “l(fā)ate ” or “ high ” in the afternoonFor a long time, the lower and middle classes could afford only one meal per day.In o

14、rder to make it through to the next day, the mainmeal would be taken after work and would consist of anything from the remnants of lunch to the very basic food staples of the time:a slice ofbread, a hunk of cheese, a piece of sausage, all of which were eaten while drinking their evening tea. However

15、, as the country advanced, the common people got wealthier, and evening meals began to be supplemented with heavier foods like roast beef, fish, eggs, vegetables, and potatoes.Sometimes referred to as a “ meat tea ” , or athe te“rmham tea ”“ high tea ” has been replaced with the modern equivalent of

16、 d.innerIn contrast, “ low tea ”or, “ afternoon tea ” is served earlier in the afternoon, usually between 4:00 and 5:00. Originally started by Anna, the Duchess of Bedford, the tradition began when Anna needed a little sustenance to tide her over.Tidbits were served with tea, and Anna invited friend

17、s to share conversation over these small snacks before the affair of the eveningmeal.In reality, people who have beautifulteas ”withiefasnacnydpastrcakes nowadays, are partaking of thelow tea ”or “ light tea ” thatso many years ago in Annas timeWhile the refreshments are pretty, they arelight” and t

18、he【參考范文】emphasis of theafternoon tea ” is on the presentation oafnthde tea,the conversation of the guests.As the filling between two days by the poor historically, high tea isnow the main meal, served between 6:00 and 7:00 p. m.（要點1） Incontrast, afternoon tea was once served by Anna, the Duchess of

19、Bedford, before the big meal to her guests with snacks. （要點 2 ） Gradually, with the improvement of people s living stadnidnanredrs, grew out of high tea, and people are focusing on conversation over afternoon tea. （要點3）2閱讀下面短文, 根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60 詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。The U. S. Fish and Wildlife Service（ FWS） has issued

20、 a major update to the nation s policy on elepha. nt iTvhoerymeasure bans almost all ivory sales and trade in the U. S. It was already illegal to import elephant ivory from other countries . The new restrictions cover ivory that has already been imported.Officials hope the move will help stop poachi

21、ng of elephants.African elephants are a threatened species, in large part because of illegal hunting. Conservation groups estimate that between 30, 000 and 50, 000 wild elephants have been killed by poachers each year since 200. 8The main reason why poachers target elephants is for their ivory, whic

22、h is very valuable. The U. S. is the second-largest market for ivory, behind China. Anti-poaching groups say the new ban makes an important statement .The new ivory ban includes very few exceptions. Some antiques and objects that contain a relatively small amount of ivory, can still be bought and so

23、ld. The new restrictions replace a complex set of rules that made it both difficult to know what ivory was legal to sell and easy to cheat the system. For example, it was legal to trade ivory objects that had been made before elephants became endangered. Unfortunately, some ivory dealers got around

24、this rule by deliberately making new items appear older. These and other strategies meant it was relatively easy to sell illegal ivory in the U. S.The FWS s new restrictions close such loopho.lesConservationists agree that one of the most important ways to protect elephant populations is to give poa

25、chers fewer ways of making money from their kills. The less demand for ivory there is, the less appealing it will be to poach elephants.Some people are worried that the new ban will turn people who currently own antique items containing ivory, like musical instruments and trinkets, into lawbreakers.

26、 Conservationists applaud the restrictions, however. The U. S. is also hoping other nations will follow in its footsteps with more restrictive ivory rules . As it becomes more challenging to sell ivory products, the hope is that poaching will slow and elephant populations will grow.【參考范文】Ivory produ

27、cts benefit dealers so much that poachers spare no effort to kill elephants without mercy, leaving them dying out. （要點 1） To protect the endangered species, FWS bans any ivory sales and trade, including those imported long ago. （要點2）Though there are concernsfrom some, conservationists stand by the b

28、an strongly. （要點3） Also,America is expecting other nations to follow suit to make the elephants multiply quickly. （要點4）閱讀下面短文, 根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60 詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Hunger is a result of poverty, but it also causes poverty. In many countries women, although they do much of the fanning, lack access to training, credit

29、 or land. Conflict, poor or corrupt management of natural resources, displacement of small farmers by natural disasters, and financial and economic crises that eliminate jobs at the lowest levels, all contribute to creating conditions that push the poorest into hunger .To break this vicious cycle, t

30、he United States launched, in 2010, Feed the Future Initiative, which aims to reduce global hunger, poverty, and undernutrition by focusing on smallholders, increasing investments in agriculture and supporting country-owned plans for improving food security and nutrition while generating opportuniti

31、es for economic growth and trade.Back then, the U. S. government selected 19 countries in Africa, Asia and Latin America to participate in the initiative, based on 5 criteria.Since 2010, Feed the Future has helped 9 million people living in the participating countries, pull themselves out of poverty

32、.The passage of the U. S. Global Food Security Act of 2016 endorsed Feed the Future s approach and ushered in a new eUra. of the S. government global food security investment. A new, corresponding global food security strategy developed by the U. S.government is guiding Feed the Future s work as the initiative into itssecond phase.On August 31st, USAID Administrator Mark Green announced that Bangladesh, Ethiopia, Ghana, Guatemala, Honduras, Kenya, Mali, Nepal, Niger, Nigeria, Senegal, and Uganda were se