Unit6Period4Writing（課件）-八年級英語上冊（牛津上海版）

Unit6Nobodywins（I）WritingAtwo-dayholidayonHolidayIslandDays:26July---27JulyPlace:HolidayIslandPeople:35studentsfromGreenwoodSchoolProgrammeofactivities:ActivitiesstudentswouldliketodoThesixmostpopularactivitiesTimeActivityDay1/TuesdayDay2/WednesdayMorningAfternoonEveningProgrammeofactivitiesAbarbecueReasonswhyyouarrangeitlikethatItiscooltoswiminsuchhotweather.Itisenjoyabletoplaywithfriendstogether.Itiswonderfultoenjoythebeautifulviewwhilecycling.Sometimesstudentsaretired,it’sagoodwaytohavearest.A:Whichactivitymightbebetterforthefirstmorning?B:Volleyballmightbebetter.C:Whydoyouchoosethatactivity?B:Ichooseitbecauseit’snotveryhotinthemorningtoplayvolleyball.D:Ithinkswimmingmightbebetterforthefirstafternoon,becauseit’scooltoswiminsuchhotweather.DiscusstheprogrammeofactivitiesA:Whichactivitymightbebetterfor______?B:_____mightbebetter.C:Whydoyouchoosethatactivity?B:Ichooseitbecause________.D:Ithink______mightbebetterfor_______,because________.DiscusstheprogrammeofactivitiesinterestingexcitingfunwonderfulenjoyablehappyrelaxourselveshavearestenjoythebeautifulviewOnTuesdaymorning,theywill

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.TimeActivityDay1/TuesdayDay2/WednesdayMorningAfternoonEveningSwimmingVolleyballAquizcompetitionSailingCyclingAbarbecueProgrammeofactivitiesHolidayIslandholidayNextmonth,35luckyGreenwoodstudentswill

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.willgoswimmingwillplayvolleyballwillgosailingwillgocyclingwillhaveabarbecueHolidayIslandholidayEveryone__________homeonThursday,28July.Theferry_________HolidayIslandat9a.m.It_______backatnoon.Wearesurethatallcampers__________

themselves.willreturnwillleavewillbewillenjoyHolidayIslandholidayNextmonth,35luckyGreenwoodstudentswillspendtwowholedaysonbeautifulHolidayIsland.TheywillarriveontheislandlateonMonday,25July.EarlyonTuesday,theywillbegintheiractivities.Paragraph1---

dateonholiday,timetostart,placetovisit,peopleHolidayIslandholidayParagraph2---activities(reasons)HolidayIslandholidayEveryonewillreturnhomeonThursday,28July.TheferrywillleaveHolidayIslandat9a.m.Itwillbebackatnoon.Wearesurethatallcamperswillenjoythemselves.Paragraph3---date/timetoleave,theexpectationfortheholidayCityBeachholidayDateonholiday---?Timetostart/toleave---?Place---CityBeachPeople---40studentsfromShangbaoMiddleSchoolActivities---?CityBeachholidayDateonholiday---?Timetostart/toleave---?Place---CityBeachPeople---40studentsfromShangbaoMiddleSchoolActivities---?AssignmentUsing1．家鄉(xiāng)是每個(gè)人心底的根，是每個(gè)人心中最特別的地方。你的家鄉(xiāng)正在開展主題為“MyHometown,MyLove”的演講活動(dòng)，請用英文寫一篇演講稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹我的家鄉(xiāng)，如：美景、美食、風(fēng)俗、人文、家鄉(xiāng)的變化等；2.歡迎游覽我的家鄉(xiāng)及游覽注意事項(xiàng)，如：最佳游覽時(shí)間、交通方式等。注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右；2.可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SamplearticleUsingSamplearticleUsingSamplearticleUsingSamplearticle【答案】例文：MyfavoriteplaceHaveyoueverbeentoBeijing?Ihavebeenthereseveraltimes.It’sreallyawonderfulplace.IfellinlovewithitwhenIfirsttraveledthere.OnegreatthingisthatIlearnedalotaboutChinesehistorythere.IvisitedthePalaceMuseum,theSummerPalace,theTiananmenSquareandtheGreatWall.Theywerereallyfantastic.Andthereweremanyshoppingcenters.Thepeopletherewerealsoveryfriendly.IwillneverforgettheexperienceofvisitingBeijing.What’smore,IenjoyedBeijing’smostfamousdish—BeijingRoastDuck.I’msureIwillgotoBeijingagainsoon.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，描述去過的地方；第二步，描述去過的景點(diǎn)；第三步，描述自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①fantastic了不起的②experience經(jīng)歷③famous著名的[高分句型]①IfellinlovewithitwhenIfirsttraveledthere.（時(shí)間狀語從句）②Andthereweremanyshoppingcenters.（Therebe句型）Using5．暑假已經(jīng)過去，相信大家都去了不少有意義的地方吧！在旅行中，我們會遇見不同的人，欣賞不同的風(fēng)景。這些旅行都會給我們留下深刻的回憶。請以“MyTripto________”為題，描述自己在暑假的一次旅行。參考要點(diǎn)：1.旅行的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、出行方式、同行的人……；2.旅行中的所見所聞（天氣、活動(dòng)、食物……）；3.你的感受。要求：1.書寫工整,卷面整潔；2.80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。MyTripto________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Samplearticle【答案】例文MyTriptoShanghaiThesummervacationhadjustpassed.IwenttoaplaceandwantedtosharewhatIsawwithyou.Assoonasthesummervacationstarted,IwenttoShanghai.Sinceitisfarfrommyhome,Ineedtogotherebyplanewithmyparents.Afterlandingthere,Iwassurprisedbytheselargebuildings.Thetrafficisalwaysverybusyandthere