上海中考真題范文初中英語作文

1、.上海中考英語備考訓練：寫作一， 一等文要求，1， 結構三段式：第一段：簡單明了，開門見山。如我們想表達小強很強壯，直接說 XQ is extremely strong. 觀點明確，一句足矣。第二段：分析為什么他強壯。A. 每天吃10頓飯，He has ten meals everyday! 詳舉吃的是什么。B. 每天運動2小時，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 詳舉做了什么運動。第三段：結論，與第一段呼應，但不能完全照，要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day

2、!2，內容和要點：話題topic必須符合題意，提示的要點必須寫全，一個都不能漏寫。確定主題、要點是要發(fā)表觀點，還是舉出例子。如果有具體提示，寫作就等于翻譯，把提示內容變換句式翻譯到位，全面切題。如果沒有提示，自已提煉，找到主題, 跟主旨無關的話不要寫。3，邏輯合理：遞進：first, second, third, finally, to begin with, first of all, in addition, whats more, moreover, on the one hand, on the other hand, the last but not the least。轉折：but

3、, yet, however, as far as I am concerned, in the meantime。總結：in a word, all in all, in conclusion。4，語法和亮點：單詞拼讀和語法必須準確，不可以有錯誤。在此基礎上，用幾個有難度的詞匯，編幾個高級的句型。一般詞匯和簡單句型要限量用，不可占字太多。 二， 三段十句話：1，三段布局：高考作文題型多樣, 有命題作文和材料作文。材料作文是根據(jù)給出的書面材料, 按要求作文。話題主要三方面：學生學習生活，學生日常生活，社會熱點現(xiàn)象。無論哪種文體：記敘文、議論文，夾敘夾議文，應用文、說明文、圖片描述文都可以用三段

4、法：引入，具體，結尾。記敘文：A. 背景介紹：時間、地點、人物、事件。B. 故事發(fā)展經過結果。C. 結局和感受。 議論文：A. 發(fā)表觀點。B. 論據(jù)理由。C. 結論呼應論點。圖片文：A. 描述圖片內容，提煉觀點。B. 論據(jù)理由。C. 結論呼應論點。日記寫法同一般記敘文或議論文。通知，書信，演講稿在引入部分寫話題，意圖，主題；在具體部分寫活動要求，具體內容，觀點陳述；在結尾部分寫活動時間、地點、聯(lián)系方式、結語、總結、希望或號召。2， 十句成篇：Passage 1,1） Topic 話題2） Thesis 論點Passage 2,3） Transition 過渡句4） Argument1 論據(jù)15

5、） Detail 1 論據(jù)1的支持句6） Argument2 論據(jù)27） Detail 2 論據(jù)2 的支持句8） Argument3 論據(jù)39） Detail 3 論據(jù)3的支持句Passage 310） Conclusion 總結以上為議論文的三段十句結構。根據(jù)具體情況可調整加減。其它文體在此基礎上略作修改即可。三， 具體各類題型寫法：1， 描述圖片類：P1圖片描述, 圖片主旨。P2 過渡句加論據(jù)和支持句。視字數(shù)調整論據(jù)和支持句個數(shù)。P3總結。2， 夾敘夾議文：寫法1，P1 話題記敘或描述。P2 觀點或感想，寫2個論據(jù)和2個支持句。P3總結。寫法2，P1 話題和觀點。P2 事件起因、經過、結果

6、以證明論點。P3 總結說明事件，再次證明話題和論點。寫法3，P1回憶記述事件。P2感受、觀點。P3總結。3， 兩主旨議論文：有時需要寫兩個主旨，如第一個為什么喜歡讀書，另一個喜歡讀什么書?；虻谝粋€水為什么珍貴，另一個怎么節(jié)約水?？梢苑殖蓛纱蟛糠謱懀篜1 話題、一個論據(jù)和支持句。P2 過渡句、另一個論據(jù)和支持句。P3 總結4，建議型議論文：寫法1，傾向建議：提出一個問題，簡單說明該問題，并針對此問題給出多個建議：P1寫信目的，一個問題。 P2 針對這個問題若干建議。P3總結希望。寫法2，問題建議并重：提出兩個問題，然后給出相應的兩條建議：P1 寫信目的。P2提兩個問題并說明。P3針對兩問題給兩建

7、議。寫法3，傾向于問題：提出一個問題，詳細闡述問題并分析原因，結尾給出一個建議。P1寫信目的。P2提出一個問題，原因及危害等。P3 建議、總結。5， 說明文和純事實新聞報導：同純記敘文，不涉及議論，只將起因、經過、結果寫清即可。重事實輕情義。四， 寫作四步驟：1， 審題：主題，體裁，人稱，時態(tài)，內容要點。在試卷中畫出要點。2， 框架：打草稿：一定要打草稿，正式寫作再梳理錘煉。3， 成文：一要凝練，二要變化。使用過渡詞、從句、不同句型和詞組搭配。4，檢查：內容要點，語法錯誤。名詞查單復數(shù)和冠詞，動詞查時態(tài)語態(tài)和主謂一致。變換句式：不用過于簡單的結構?？傊赫J真審題, 提煉要點; 緊扣主題, 擴詞

8、成句; 表述準確, 連句成文; 通篇檢查, 確保無誤。五， 英文文章開頭有兩種可以選擇：1，每段開頭空兩格，四或五個字符，段落之間不空行。標題和文章間不用空行。2，每段開頭頂格寫，段落之間空行。標題和文章間不用空行。兩種都可以，但是空格與不空格不能混用，第一種用的比較多。上海中考英語寫作訓練：真題范文2018 VI. Writing(作文)(共20分) Write at least 60 words on the topic My progress(以“進步了”為題,寫一信不少于60個詞的短文,標點符號不占格)你在生活或導習中一定取得過不少進步,比如生活枝能的獲得、學習方法的掌握、良好習慣的養(yǎng)

9、成。請選取其中一個方面,結合自身經歷,談一談你是如何取得這一進步的。（注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關信息,否則不予評分。)The following is for reference only(以下表達僅供參考)used to do/betry my best to domake progress in( doing)My ProgressI used to be poor in English, especially in speaking English as I was too shy to open my mouth.Things have been changed si

10、nce I had a new English teacher who was very kind and told me the correct way to learn English. With his encouragement, I gained confidence and began to speak a little. In the meantime, I spent more time in English learning and try my best to improve my English. I listened to English broadcasting an

11、d imitated the pronunciation. I also went to English Corner to practice my spoken English with foreigners every Sunday. Step by step, I have made substantial progress in learning English. Not only can I read English novels now, but also I can speak English fluently.As a proverb says, “Nothing is dif

12、ficult if you put your heart in it.” Im proud of my progress.2017 VII. Writing（作文）（共20分）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Theres always hope”（以“常懷希望”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）面臨困惑的時候、經歷變化的時候、感覺挫敗的時候、遭遇逆境的時候來自內心的堅持、他人的幫助、社會的關愛和科技的發(fā)展等，總能讓人常懷希望。請選取一個方面談談你的理解（可結合自身或他人的經歷）。The following is for referen

13、ce only （以下表達僅供參考）get out of difficulty give a hand never lose hopeTheres Always HopeDifficulties and failures are unavoidable in our lives, However, I believe theres always hope as long as you dont give up.I used to be poor in English. The grammar, the vocabulary, the pronunciation and writing were

14、 continuously torturing me. I almost lost my heart and thought about giving up. Luckily, I met a good teacher who was so kind that he spent hours helping me to correct my mistakes and teaching me excellent methods. He always gave me generous praise for any minor progress of mine. With his encouragem

15、ent, I gained confidence and tried my best to overcome all the difficulties. Day by day, I have made substantial progress. Not only can I read English novels now, but also I can speak English fluently.As an old saying goes, “Where there is a will ,there is a way.” No matter how difficult things seem

16、 to be, lets cherish hope and never give up.2016 Writing（作文）Write at least 60 words on the topic“Im ready”（以“我準備好了”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）你對明天一定有著美好的憧憬為此，你已經做好了哪方面的準備？請結合你的經歷或特長等，選取一個角度具體談談你是如何做準備的（ independent be good at responsible take part in hardworking it helps me toIm ReadyWhen I was young,

17、 my mother usually read books for me as soon as she had time. I was attracted by the fascinating world of stories so I made a determination to become a writer.To achieve the dream, I have been doing my best all the time. First of all, I pay great attention to my Composition classes. Furthermore, I j

18、oin school writing group and take part in writing contest, which makes me practice a lot in writing. Last but not the least, I keep connection with a famous writer who helps me to improve my writing ability substantially. All in all, through hard working I am good at writing now.How happy I will be

19、when my books that will enrich childrens life are published someday! I hope my dream will come true . Im ready.Im readyI always say to myself: Im ready! before a competition or a speech, though it seems that I will never be ready for them absolutely. I am ready! ,which makes me so confident that I c

20、an pay all of my attention to what I do efficiently. Of course, as a saying says: Practice makes perfect. Essential preparation is necessary. We should make every effort to prepare for what we do .Say to ourselves: Im ready ，and it will help us play our best card！2015 Writing (作文) Write at least 60

21、words on the topic “ I want to invent _ ”(以“我想要發(fā)明_”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格) （注意：1、在答題紙上將題目補充完整。2、短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。）The following is for reference only. (以下表達僅供參考) It can be used to It will be exciting/necessary/helpful toI Want to Invent a Family Robot DoctorI want to invent a family ro

22、bot doctor because it is very helpful to us.First of all, a family robot can cure illnesses for people at home immediately after you feel sick or get hurt, which is very convenient and efficient, especially in emergency situations. Whats more, as we all know, nowadays hospitals are always occupied b

23、y patients who are anxious to be taken care as soon as possible, so family robot doctors can reduce the pressure of hospital and alleviate the patients anxiety. Last but not the least, with the help of a robot doctor, people can get duly advice for healthy diet and live a better life. In a word, a f

24、amily robot doctor is substantially useful for our society.In order to achieve my dream of inventing a family robot doctor, I will do my best and learn hard.I Want To Invent A Family Doctor RobotI want to invent a family doctor robot, which can be used to cure the illness without going out of their

25、home. As far as Im concerned, it will be extremely helpful and useful because of the following reasons:First, you can see the doctor immediately at home when you feel sick or get hurt. It can save us a lot of time, especially in emergency situations. Furthermore, hospitals today are always filled wi

26、th patients, not everyone can be taken good care of. However, with the help of our robot doctors, you can talk to your personal doctor one to one whenever you want.In short, family doctor robots can make great contribution to our society.I want to invent a time machineAs a student who is experiencin

27、g unprecedented modern life nowadays, I would rather learn about the history and the future life of human being from a real experience than learn from a textbook. Thats why if I can work as a great inventor, inventing a time machine will be my first choice. The most important usage of my time machin

28、e will be visiting one of best schools in Tang Dynasty. As we all know, Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded education. Therefore, when I visit the school of the ancient city, I can not only try different ways of studying but communicate with people from different countries as well. Using a ti

29、me machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is both a record of mankind and a mirror of past, I am looking forward to the day when my time machine comes out.2014. Writing (作文) Write at least 60 words about the topic “ This time next year“ (以“明年此時”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)你是否想象過，明年此時，你的生活

30、會發(fā)生怎樣的變化？你對自己或他人有怎樣的期待？你能為此做些什么？）The following sentence patterns are for reference only. ( 以下句型僅供參考)I hope to /I hope that. Perhaps I will. It will be exciting / necessary / terrible to .This Time Next YearIt is exciting to imagine what I will be this time next year. Life is changeable and I will be

31、 different.First, Ill be a senior student next year. I really hope I can achieve my dream and attend my favorite high school. Furthermore, I will get many new friends with whom I will spend my precious moments. Perhaps I can take part in a summer camp abroad as my English will be good enough to comm

32、unicate with foreigners. Of course, to realize the wishes, hardworking is still necessary for me. Finally, it is high time that I should help my mother with more housework.Anyway, I will be better, kinder and more diligent this time next year. Let me look forward to it.This time next yearIts excitin

33、g to imagine what the happy life will be like.At this time next year, I will be a senior high student, and I will make a lot of new friends. I hope to be more independent so that perhaps I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English. Also I will help my parents do housew

34、ork in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone.Life will be totally different, but Im really looking forward to it.This time next yearLife is changeable, and thats why everyone longs for the future, which is full of challenge as well as hope.Perhaps I will have achieved my goal this

35、 time next year, studying in a senior high school. Despite that, diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in English. Basically, it is important to concentrate in class and take notes carefully. Then, I will benefit from reading English books. What is more, going abroad is of great u

36、se in improving my oral English. Only in this way can I progress in English endlessly. Make plans and go for what I want. And I believe when the challenge is coming, the hope is also around the corner.2013 Writing(作文) Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”(“如何保護自己”為題，寫一篇不少于6

37、0個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)提示：自我保護是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。請談談你在生活中怎樣進行自我保護(可結合生活中的某一個情景或具體事例，如：面對災難如何自救，如何預防受騙或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等)。Phrases for reference(以下短語僅供參考)：Askfor help calm downin danger prevent.FromHow to Protect MyselfLife is precious. Protecting myself is the most important thing to do when I am in danger.Then i

38、f an earthquake hits my city, what can I do to protect myself? First of all, I must calm down as panic is of no help. Second, I should try to run out instead of hiding in a building. Taking lift is prohibited during an earthquake and what I can only do is walking downstairs. In the meantime, I shoul

39、d be aware of the falling objects to avoid being hit. Finally, if I still have difficulties in escaping I can cry out and ask others for help.In conclusion, when a disaster comes I should calm myself down and manage to survive.How to protect myselfAs a student, I think it important for me to protect

40、 myself from dangerous situations. First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help. Then, as is know to all, calling 119 immediately is the most effective way to save myself. As well as that ,it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators.In conclusion, with posit

41、ive attitude and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires.How to protect myselfEveryone in my family was awaked by the unusual shaking. The first word that came to my mind was earthquake. When I looked outside of the window, I found everyone running here and there, and I

42、could hear the shouting from the neighbors. Despite the fact that I was in danger, I told myself to calm down and think about the ways to protect myself in an earthquake. I should get outside instead of hiding inside the building. I couldnt take the lift but walk downstairs. No sooner had I got outs

43、ide than I asked the police for help. And I should always be aware of the unexpected drop overhead. Following these ways, I managed to prevent myself from being hurt, and survived the earthquake. I believe that these are useful ways to protect myself in an earthquake.2012 Writing (作文): Write a lette

44、r in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根據(jù)所給情景寫一封不少于60詞的信) Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. (假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因為過于在意考試結果而感到焦慮。請給她寫一封信，談談你的看法，并給她一些建議。) May

45、1, 2018Dear Betty,Regret knowing that you are especially anxious about the coming exam. I fully understand you as I was once in the same situation. I would like to give you some advice.First, please breathe deeply when you feel worried, which can help you calm down. Second, try to spare some time to

46、 take part in recreational activities such as walking, running or chatting with friends. This can alleviate the pressure and refill you with enough energy. Third, consult your teacher about your problems and try to prepare the exam efficiently. In a word, anxiety is of no help, let us focus on the p

47、rocess instead of the result.Hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely,JoeKnowing that you care too much about the result, I am quite worried. Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result. There are some effective ways to calm down. Above all, keeping reminding yourself

48、to stay in peace is the most helpful. Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activities like sports. Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you.As is said by Steve Jobs, “the journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get throug

49、h this situation.2011 Writing (作文) Write at least 60 words about the topic “Im a member of “(以“我是的一員”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格子”提示： 你可以作為任意興趣小組或者社團的一員，或者作為家庭，班級，社區(qū)額的一員，寫出你的經歷，感受等。Use the following points as a reference , Are you glad to be a member of ？What do you do in it? How do you feel as such a m

50、ember? Im a Member of a Reading ClubI am glad to be a member of a reading club because reading is my hobby and taking part in the clubs activities gives me great pleasure.In the club, the members read together and share opinions about books every weekend. Sometimes we go to mountains, rivers or park

51、s to have outdoor reading meeting, which brings us relaxations and exercises. We also invite famous writers to make speeches about their works, from whom we learn how to write.Being a member of the club, I feel very happy. After I joined the club, not only have I read many excellent books, but also

52、I have made a few good friends who have the same interests with me.As an old saying goes.”Reading makes people more intelligent.”The reading club enriches my life and benefit me a lot.I am a member of reading clubWhen I was only a little girl, I took up reading as my hobby. Now Im a member of a read

53、ing club. Im very glad about it. All of the members share our own books with each other. Even if we read the books from morning till night, we never get tired of reading. We enjoy ourselves all the time. In my opinion, reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body. To be such a member makes my

54、 life more and more colorful.2010 Writing (作文) : Write at least 60 words about the topic Im proud of myself. (以“我為自己感到自豪”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分）Use the following points is a reference.（以下內容僅供參考）What kind of person are you? What makes you proud of yourself? (Give an

55、example / examples.)Why are you proud of yourself?Im proud of myselfI used to be quiet girl and speak a little in my class. I want to change my character and become a bit outgoing. How can I begin? I got an idea of setting up a reading club for my school . On the one hand, I can speak more and be ac

56、tive through the work, on the other hand, I can do something benefitting my classmates.As an old saying goes,” Action is more important than idea.” First, I summoned some classmates who take up reading as hobby like me together. Second, I ask my teacher for help and prepared a schedule for the club.

57、 Third, we had a trial reading meeting to see how we should go on . Step by step, a reading club was set up in my school, where we can read together and get new friend. During the experience, my character has been changed a lot. I overcame my shyness and became brave to speak.I am proud of myself be

58、cause not only can I speak in public now, but also I set up a reading club for my school.2009 IX. Writing (作文) :Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”. (以“我想為學校做件事”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文) Use the following points as a reference. (以下內容僅供參考) What do you want to do for your school? Why do you want to do it? How are you