英語六級寫作替換用詞訓(xùn)練

1、六級寫作講義(VIP)一, 簡單的自我介紹, 學(xué)生狀況的了解二, 開始總論 ( 介紹學(xué)習(xí)方法 )三, 進(jìn)入寫作的總論評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)iDj英語作文網(wǎng)四、六級作文在準(zhǔn)備和對策上基本一致，因?yàn)閮烧咴u分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)基本一致(除了字?jǐn)?shù)上的差距：四級120詞、六級150詞)。英語考試的作文大多可分為：1、正反論證；2、原因現(xiàn)象描述類；3、圖表；4、名言諺語。所謂的書信作文，無非就是在這四類的基礎(chǔ)上，套用信件的格式而已。 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的解釋: 這些考區(qū)的考官將會在電腦前批閱作文，因此考生們最好使用黑色水筆做答，以保證掃描效果。寫作考試就好像一次“博弈”。在寫作考試中，考生是真正擁有最多信息的人，考官僅僅只能被動地接受你所給的

2、信息。所以，作文中遣詞造句時請切記兩點(diǎn)：一、“不會說的”處理；二、經(jīng)典句的應(yīng)用. 作文只在考核他們的語言表達(dá)能力。避免犯錯誤?？傮w評分1. 找：idea2. 掃：從，寫作方法（例，數(shù)）3. 感：文字，文法，文體，文筆2分作文Whats happened to your pants? 形散神更散 不成句，不分大小寫5分作文 表達(dá)方式錯誤 詳見：最經(jīng)典的中國英語8分作文 表達(dá)方式貧乏三大法寶1) there be 2) more and more 3) I think（Some people think Other people think I think）11分作文 表達(dá)方式：因?yàn)閎ecause

3、, in that, for the reason that, because of the fact that, on the basis that, on account of/that, inasmuch as “一些人認(rèn)為”的基本原理14分作文 言之無文，行而不遠(yuǎn)寫作的格式有兩種：齊頭式(full block form)和縮進(jìn)式(indented form)。采用齊頭式，要求所有段落的首行都在左邊頂格，段落中間空行?？s進(jìn)式要求每段首行縮進(jìn)45個字母。iDj英語作文網(wǎng)第二、 構(gòu)思簡單，少犯錯誤。 請大家一定記住，（思維。標(biāo)點(diǎn)，時態(tài)一致，單復(fù)數(shù)，結(jié)構(gòu)。6分原則。寫完后的檢查） iDj英語作

4、文網(wǎng)行文大多可以套用“中心句1、2、3”模式。即每段第一句是topic sentence，改編自該段相對應(yīng)的提綱，后面的1、2、3是銜接詞，每個1、2、3后接分支觀點(diǎn)。這種表達(dá)，中心突出，層次分明，同時也節(jié)省了考生構(gòu)思結(jié)構(gòu)的麻煩。銜接詞是文章邏輯關(guān)系的體現(xiàn)，所以不妨盡可能多的使用。比如，“起”的過渡詞：nowadays, at present, first of all, firstly；“承”的過渡詞：second, besides, moreover, furthermore, obviously, in addition, in other words；“轉(zhuǎn)”的過渡詞：however,

5、on the other hand, but, instead, conversely；“合”的過渡詞：therefore, so, as a result, in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion。十大閃光點(diǎn)（求求大家）1. 提問法2. 總結(jié)法3. “一些人認(rèn)為”4. 從句：賓語從句、定語從句5. 并列句6. 理由詞匯7. 理由段公式8. 路線句型9. 數(shù)據(jù)的表達(dá)10. 結(jié)語書信的訓(xùn)練信件類型：訂購信、退貨信、投訴信、建議信、道歉信、感謝信、邀請信、咨詢信、安排信、通知信、倡議信、求職信和辭職信十三種。 主考類型：求職信、投訴信、訂購信、咨詢

6、信、倡議信、建議信和邀請信七種。 未考類型：求職信、投訴信、訂購信和咨詢信四種。 特殊要求主要體現(xiàn)在以下兩個方面：一是要求信息點(diǎn)覆蓋全面。至少應(yīng)當(dāng)包含：時間、地點(diǎn)、人物、主要事件（或觀點(diǎn)）等。二是突出了語言的準(zhǔn)確性、格式和語域。五大信函寫作策略： 1. 求職信 開頭段：表明信息來源，說明寫作意圖（時間、地點(diǎn)）。主體段：介紹自己相關(guān)的工作經(jīng)歷、學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，以此證明你能勝任這個職位（人物）。 次要段：表明自己申請這個職位的理由（事情）。結(jié)尾段：等待回音，聯(lián)系方式。2. 投訴信 開頭段： 說明與收信人的相關(guān)性，點(diǎn)明你寫作的意圖（人物、關(guān)系）。主體段： 寫明投訴的原因，要展開說明，或者講具體理由，或者談

7、問題的具體體現(xiàn)方式（事情）。結(jié)束段：表達(dá)你希望上述問題得到盡快解決的強(qiáng)烈愿望，并對有關(guān)人員做出的努力表示感謝（時間、地點(diǎn)）。 3. 訂購信 開頭段： 開篇點(diǎn)出寫信的目的，定購你要的東西（事情）。 主體段： 詳細(xì)說明你訂購貨物的規(guī)格、大小、顏色、尺寸等（時間、地點(diǎn)）。 結(jié)束段：表示對方回函以便確認(rèn)（人物）。4. 咨詢信開頭段： 明確寫信的目的，說明寫這封信的目的是尋求某信息或幫助（事情）。主體段：詢問具體問題，強(qiáng)調(diào)所需信息的重要性（時間、地點(diǎn)）。結(jié)束段：表達(dá)獲取信息的強(qiáng)烈愿望，提供聯(lián)系方式以便收信人與你聯(lián)系，并對有關(guān)人員表示感謝（人物）。批文 2002年1月 Range-finderA Lett

8、er to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus.January 12th, 2002Dear Mr. President, 1. As（邏輯問題） one of your university students, I am not very satisfied with our canteen service. This letter is from one of your university students. I am not very satisfied with our canteen servic

9、e. 或者使用定語從句：This letter is from one of your university students, who is not very satisfied with the canteen service.1. The first reason is that there are many students coming from other places.（邏輯問題）My first suggestion for the canteen is that it ought to offer dishes of various kinds to students com

10、ing from all parts of the nation.2. They may *be not not be accustomed to the local food at the beginning of *the term their university life. 3. So our canteen should provide much more kinds of *food foods (fish, sheep, water, oil, beer, people) for them to choose from.1. Secondly, the price of the

11、food is higher than we can afford（絕對化）.2. I hope the price of some food can be *decreased lowered a little.3. Then we can have a larger choice than before（至今唯一沒有問題的一句話）.1. In addition to *above suggestions the suggestions above, I want to reflect that many students will have lunch after classes（沒有具體

12、時間段）have lunch during lunch time (coffee time).2. At that time, the canteen will become too crowded （第二句沒有問題的話）.3. So we hope that you can arrange some more seats for students（邏輯問題）. 1. *There These are my suggestions *of (my own) for / on our canteen service.2. I really hope you can take some measu

13、res to make the canteen service better and better （經(jīng)典的more and more結(jié)構(gòu)）to better our canteen service.3. Thank you very much. （第三句沒有問題的話）書信的格式Dear Sir / Madam, To Whom It May Concern Mr what-is-his-name Yours faithfullyDear Mr. / Ms / Mrs. / Miss（全名/名）, . Yours sincerely / trulyDear Tom, (With) Best w

14、ishes, Yours Tommy, Yours (ever) Hai, Love2002年1月 Range-finderA Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus.January 12th, 2002Dear Mr. President, 1. Im very lucky to attend read for Ph.D. / MA / BA / BSc at / pursue higher education at this world-famous world-renowned univ

15、ersity, but Im afraid Im not content at least 2/3 of the students would not be fully satisfied with the canteen service on campus.1. 小跑Firstly, the quality of the dishes should be improved. 修改稿：Firstly, we could not enjoy dishes of various kinds / suiting different tastes.2. *Undou(b)tedly, there ar

16、e a lot of delicious 質(zhì)量好dishes, but all the year, they are the same. 修改稿：Although there are a lot of delicious dishes, yet we could not see big/substantial change in the menu around the year.3. More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day.4. 小結(jié)So I think the most urgent

17、 problem is variety. 修改稿：The canteen, therefore, ought to offer an even greater variety of foods.1. Secondly, the price is *a bit too中式表達(dá)方式 high. 修改稿：Secondly, we ought to have the right to enjoy dishes suiting different pockets as well.2. Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not onl

18、y delicious but also *cheaper inexpensive food.1. Finally, the environment is so noisy that we cant enjoy our meals in good mood.2. I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax.1. *Those These *presented suggestions suggestions presented are not just of my own, but also of many other stu

19、dents.2. We hope our *respectable respected president will pay attention to our suggestions.1. *By the way, the canteen workers are very patient and always smiling.2. So I think if our university offers them better conditions, they will offer us better service.Best wishes,求職信（139）Dear Sir or Madame,

20、I am writing to apply for the position / post / title of part time part-time English teacher you advertised in the newspaper yesterday （時間）. Enclosed with this letter is my personal resume curriculum vitae, which will give you further information about me.I am 24 years old （有簡歷）and I am a quite extr

21、overt （性格）person. I studied English Literature in at Nankai University from 1996 to 2000 and got a degree of bachelor Bachelor. After graduation, I worked in at a high school Anshan Middle School as a an English teacher. There were good comments from my students leaders / supervisors during my teach

22、ing. From For all the above reasons reasons above, I feel sure that I am the right person that you are looking for.Thank you for your consideration of my application letter (/). I am looking forward (to) a an interview at your earliest convenience. I could be contacted at the number 23131245 from 6

23、pm to 10 pm（時間段）. Yours Sincerely,Jason Lee求職信（317）Dear Consul,I am writing to apply for the post of visa clerk at American Consulate General upon my boyfriend (and your interpreter) Peters advise after serious consideration.Confidently speaking, I am well prepared for the demanding and challenging

24、work in your consulate. During my past 1.5-year service at UA (United Airlines), I adopted myself perfectly to the bilingual working environment and was therefore promoted to the position of CSO (Client Service Officer) prior to annual appraisal, which shall have been substantially justified on the

25、ground of my ability to manage a workload within set timeframe under minimum supervision, sound capability as an interpreter and translator, familiarity with visa application assessment (some of our clients need to apply for transit visa), high standards of client service, and capacity to play as a

26、team member. My initiative and enthusiasm have been highly appreciated by my colleagues and supervisors in and out of my section.Compared with the working conditions in our office, however, yours are more attractive to ambitious applicants including me to a greater extend. Firstly, your office kindl

27、y offers opportunities of self-development, which shall be beneficial to my study of advanced interpretation course and further training of communicative skills. Secondly, your office applies flextime system, which undoubtedly demonstrates the mutual understanding between managerial staff and your l

28、ocally engaged staff. Thirdly, your office enjoys better reputation of openness and integrity, whose clients enjoy the first and foremost place. Fourthly, you provide better package and welfare system. Last but not the least, my friend and former colleagues have successfully verified the correctness

29、 of my assumptions above.I would like to express my very willingness and eagerness to exert my utmost to the development of your consulate. Your kind consideration of my application shall present me the golden chance to prove myself an asset to you. I will be very much honored to receive your timely

30、 reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you.Yours Sincerely,Julia留學(xué)（157）Dear Emma,Sorry I havent written for ages. Ive been so busy over the last year and I never seem to have a minute to myself.Id like to study electrical engineering at university in Australia next year and I hope you can give m

31、e some advice. I think I would prefer Melbourne because I know a few people from my visit last year.This year Im doing math and physics at school and I hope to do well in my exams. However, I really dont know which university to apply to, so could you send me some information about different college

32、s? Also can you find out what qualifications I need? For instance, as an overseas student, do I have to take an English test?I hope you dont mind doing this for me. It is much better to get this information from someone who lives in the country, so I hope to hear from you soon.Many thanks!Yours,Tom道

33、別(235)Dear All,As you are now aware I am moving to the British Immigration Office. I am not having a farewell bash, but I would like to say see ya round nonetheless. I had been planning to say something truly inspirational, something that you would endlessly ponder, something that you would discuss

34、at great intellectual length amongst yourselves, something that would remain with you for the rest of your lives and perhaps tell your children and grandchildren. However, greatness seems to have escaped me. So, instead, what I will say is this; what makes the difference between a job and a good job

35、 is not only the work you do, but just as importantly, who youre doing it with (so to speak). I consider myself extremely lucky to have been doing it with people who are me mates (read my friends for those not colloquially inducted). I have enjoyed our time doing it together and although, geographic

36、ally, I am making a vertical movement of only five or six meters, my friendships and experiences in this office are unique and have their own place in my heart.Thanks to you Bernie for your guidance during this time of personal transition. I have been watching and learning. Thanks to Jack and the bu

37、siness staff for your patients with my incessant requests for pronunciation and the ease with which you have made working in the new section.Thank you everyone.Peter回顧到應(yīng)用文模版1. 問候型Long time no see.2. I havent written to you for ages because Ive been so busy over the last year and I never seem to have

38、 a minute to myself.3. Long distance separates no bosom friends.4. Though we have never seen each other, yet I have long heard of you.5. How nice it was to hear from you at last!6. 告知型You will be very glad to hear that7. With great delight I learned that8. To tell a piece of good news, I have/am doi

39、ng9. I am writing this letter to tell/inform you that10. I have just received your kind letter regarding第三段1. 客套型Thanks for your precious time.2. Thanks again for your kind help / assistance.3. Thank you in advance.4. 展望型I am looking forward to seeing/meeting you here in Shanghai China.5. 寄語型Your ti

40、mely reply to this letter is highly appreciated by all the people concerned.6. I would appreciate it if you contact me as soon as possible.7. I am looking forward to your reply / hearing from you soon.8. Write to me a.s.a.p.9. Remember: I shall always my fingers crossed for you at any rate.10. Shall

41、 you come across any problem, please do not hesitate to let me know.11. Please let me know if I can help you any further.12. I hope this information will help you.13. Please feel free to contact me for more information / further confirmation.14. I trust these suggestions will be of use to you. 對立觀點(diǎn)回

42、復(fù)到議論文模版例文12000年6月 Range-finder(149)A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET).1.1開篇提問Is it necessary? 總結(jié)并另啟一段 修改稿What is your opinion?To which extent do you agree or disagree with 1. 簡單句this idea / notion / concept / suggestion / proposal2. 復(fù)

43、雜句it when, as someone put it, the test of written English has already （使負(fù)擔(dān)）posed / placed / put a heavy burden / workload on students / examinees / candidates?1.2語法錯誤 +一方面On the one hand / On the one side of the coin / For one thing Many people（一些人）, the majority十大閃光點(diǎn)之三“一些人認(rèn)為”Some無數(shù)的numerous/myriad

44、(a myriad of)大量的A great / large / huge / (in)considerable / significant / noticeable number / amount / quantity / portion of對半的almost / nearly / some / close to / approximately half of大多的the (vast / overwhelming) majority of一些/另一些（抽象意義）：some others, majority minoritythink(s)（認(rèn)為） so because spoken En

45、glish is widely （普遍/經(jīng)常）generally / universally / constantly / frequently used employed in *(the) everyday life.1.3 反問 （強(qiáng)調(diào)句型：助，倒，反）If a person language learner who is only / merely good at written English cant （文體不正式：省文/略，口語詞匯，只字片語）cannot speak it, 反問how can he communicate with others?2.1 贅言，邏輯錯誤 +另一

46、方面On the other hand / On the other side of the coin / For another, Some people the minority（對應(yīng)關(guān)系工整） 十大閃光點(diǎn)之三“一些人認(rèn)為”people公眾the public各行各業(yè)people from all walks of life / the circle/community/walk of education學(xué)生examinees / testees / students特殊人群readers / drivers 支持/反對者followers objectors, dissenters co

47、nsenters參與者participants / candidates / interviewees think(s) claims spoken English is less important than not as essential as written English because in that / in light of the fact that / based on the observation that / inasmuch as *they *think 邏輯錯誤most science books are written in English2.2 One ca

48、nnot understand comprehend / appreciate the content if he can only speak English.2.3 And 強(qiáng)遞進(jìn)詞開頭furthermore, the test of spoken English The oral test of English, furthermore / moreover, is not so fair as it seems.2.4 A teacher can give the candidates / examinees scores according to his own like 之流 (

49、產(chǎn)生好感take a liking for / to sb. /愛好have a liking for = be / feel attached to / be additive to)3.1 非正式文體開頭Anyway (1)Nevertheless, I think my humble / personal / *stupid (Forest Gump stupid be on the slow side, expect a baby, pregnant, be in the family way)opinion (2)however is that / the writer (3)how

50、ever is with the view opinion that it is necessary.3.2 語法錯誤 A test of spoken English can encourage stimulate / motivate / urge us to spend more time speaking English pay more attention to / attach greater importance to the practice of spoken English in the spare time.1.3 語法錯誤 It *(is) also *contribu

51、te(s) to our written English learning.1.4 I will try my best make/exert an effort to / 加倍努力redouble ones efforts to *study learn spoken English *(hard) and practice it as often as human possible.Human強(qiáng)調(diào)1.5 *I think牽強(qiáng)附會where there is a will there is a way.*Some *people *think we should read selective

52、ly. 十大閃光點(diǎn)之三“一些人認(rèn)為”think認(rèn)為assume / argue / hold (the opinion) / claim / suggest / declare / say / assert / state / believe / insist/ maintain / doubt / suspect that支持give / express / show / demonstrate ones support for贊成/反對vote / ballot for/againstcast ones vote / ballot for / againstside with / stan

53、d on the side of接受take the advise / follow the suggestion / accept the opinion / idea that意見是ones viewpoint is that / be with the view that2.2 They argue that 經(jīng)典垃圾句型with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.2.3 It is impossible for us to read all the bo

54、oks. 煉句：將2、3組合在一起They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published , which makes it impossible for us to read them all.2.4 Whats more To make the matter worse, (there are many) bad books (that) are poisonous harmful / dangerous / hazardous / nox

55、ious to our mind, and we shouldnt read them.2.5 Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively. （必須/一定）have to (must) = be obliged to = be bound to1.1 But others may not agree.3.2 They emphasize stress, point out , put / lay emphasis on , give emphasis to t

56、hat todays society is not what it was. 煉句：Others, however, do not agree by emphasizing that todays society is not what it was3.3 雙”if”引導(dǎo)正反論述If one man has many kinds a wide range of knowledge hell have more chances to succeed.3.4 If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing little in other fie

57、lds others, he may be useless of no great use.3.5 Since we must have many kinds of knowledge keep up with the trend of the society, we must read extensively. 4.1 Whos right?4.2 I think both of them have something right.4.3 But I think we should read extensively first. 單刀式：Weighing / Balancing the pr

58、os and cons of the argument, I am inclined to stand on the side that 4.4 We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field. 十大閃光點(diǎn)之二總結(jié)法1. 玫瑰All roses have thorns.2. 花園No garden is without weeds.3. 金幣Every coin has 2 sides.4. 利劍Every sword has 2 edges.5. 利弊Every advantage has its

59、disadvantages.6. 眾口Its hard to please all.7. 仁智 So many people, so many minds.8. 偉人Great minds think alike.9. 毒肉One mans meat is another mans poison.10. 過及Throw the baby out with the bath water.詳見：諺語參考書 回復(fù)到諺語 單一觀點(diǎn)恢復(fù)到議論文模版2003年1月 Range-finderIt Pays to Be Honest1.1 開門見山Nowadays, 經(jīng)典句型Todays world is n

60、ot what it was.many people in increasing number / a growing number of people / an increasing number of / the number of people who is on the rise choose not to be honest in our modern society. 十大閃光點(diǎn)之四從句（主語，賓語，表語，定語，狀語，同位語） 賓語從句引出觀點(diǎn) 定語從句引出人事物 修改稿As is known to all, dishonesty, unfortunately, is no lon