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HowtoStopCellphoneAddictionRevisionandWritingtopicHowtoStopCellphoneAddictio1AdvicefromGrandadrevisionAdvicefromGrandadrevision2Harmfuleffectsofsmoking(P18)RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingAdviceonquittingsmokingAdvicefromGrandadHarmfuleffectsofsmoking(P18dodamageto_________________
RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingHarmfuleffectsOntheaddictbecomingpregnantheartandlungsbeunabletoenjoy_____________sportssmell____________preventscouplesfrom______________________easilyOnotherpeopleterribleaffectthehealthof_________________non-smokersdodamageto_________________Advice231prepareyourselfRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingbreakthehabitgethelpifneededkeeptryingbedetermined56relax4Purposeoftheadvice?Reasonfortheadvice？Purposeoftheletter:PersuadeJameswhois_________tocigarettesto______smokingandstrengthenhis_______.Reasonfortheletter:GrandadhopesobecausehewantsJamestoliveas____________________________ashehas.quitresolvelongandhealthyalifeaddictedAdvice231prepareyourselfRevisNeitherdid
Iknowthat…(P18,L22)Everytimeyoufeellikesmokingacigarette,remindyourselfthat…(P19,L6)ButIdid
finallymanage.(P18,L18)Infact,itis
thementaladdictionthat
makesitreallyhardtoquitsmoking.(P20,Ex2)Itseemsamazingthat…(P18,L2)It
wouldbeagoodideato…(P23,Ex3)Itistimetoquitsmoking.(P18,L27)WhatIdidknowwasthat…(P18,L23)usefulsentencepatternsinU3RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writing倒裝V非名從狀從定從強調(diào)NeitherdidIknowthat…(P18,LWritingTask
Jane’sProblemandyourAdviceRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingRevisionPre-writingWhile-writi7DearClassmates,Ifoundmyself________________terribly.Everyday,Ispendsomuchtimein___________________thatIcan’tconcentrateonmy__________.Worsestill,myeyessometimesfeel______afterwatching….Last,therelationbetweenmeandmy________________aregettingworsebecausewelack___________talks.Iknow_______________isharmfultome,butIjustdon’tknowhowto______it.Couldyoupleasegivemesome______onit?YoursSincerelyLiHua
playingmycellphonefamiliesorfriendsface-to–facecellphoneaddictionquitadviceRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingaddictedtocellphonehomeworkpainfulDearClassmates,playingmycelDearClassmates,Ifoundmyself________________terribly.Everyday,Ispendsomuchtimein___________________thatIcan’tconcentrateonmy__________.Worsestill,myeyessometimesfeel______afterwatching….Last,therelationbetweenmeandmy________________aregettingworsebecausewelack____________talks.Iknow_______________isharmfultome,butIjustdon’tknowhowto______it.Couldyoupleasegivemesome______onit?YoursSincerelyProblemsandAdviceplayingmycellphonefamiliesorfriendsface-to–facecellphoneaddictionquitadviceRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingaddictedtocellphonehomeworkpainfulaffectJane’s_________healthmentalaffectJane’s_________healthphysicalaffectJane’s_________relationsocialWhattrouble
isJanein?Sheis__________cellphone.addictedtoProblems?Advice?consultafriend/teacherinstudyaskafriendorfamilytokeepitsetatime
limitdevelopyourinterestinanexercisedooutdooractivitieswithafriendsetagoaltoyourphysicalfitnesshaveface-to-facecommunicationsetsomeruleswhengatheringDearClassmates,ProblemsandBBEI'mreallyconcernedabout...,soI'mwritingto...Firstly,…Inaddiction,…Lastly,…Itisagoodideato…IfIwereyou,Iwould…Iwouldappreciateitifyoufindtheseproposalsuseful.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.structureAdvicetoJaneRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingBBEI'mreallyconcernedabout.RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingDearJane,I’msorrytolearnthatyouusethecellphonetoomuch
andI’mwritingtoofferyousomeadvice.Firstly,youcansetalimittothetimespentonyourphone.Itcanhelpyou
nottousethephonetoomuch.Secondly,youcankeepyourselfbusybydoingmeaningfulmatterslikehomework,houseworkorsports.Theycankeepyouawayfromcellphoneanddogoodtoyourhealth.Lastly,listallthebadthingsaboutaboutmisusingacellphone.Theycanhelpyoubedeterminednottouseit.Ihopemysuggestionsareusefulandwouldbehappyifyoucanstopit.YoursLiHuaSampleanddiscussionRevisionPre-writingWhile-writiAdvancedexpressionsessaypolishingAdvancedexpressionsessay12RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingDearJane,I’msorrytolearnthatyou
andI’mwritingtoofferyousomeadvice.Firstly,youcansetalimittothetimespentonyourphone.Itcan.Secondly,youcankeepyourselfbusybydoingmeaningfulmatterslikehomework,houseworkorsports.Theycankeepyouawayfromcellphoneand.Lastly,listaboutmisusingaphone.Theycan.
Ihopemysuggestionsareusefulandwouldbehappyifyoucan.sufferfromcellphoneusethecellphonetoomuch
addiction遭受手機上癮之苦Advancedexpressions阻止你濫用手機helpyounottousethephonetoomuchpreventyoufromabusingyourphone對你身心健康有益dogoodtoyourhealth.arebeneficialtoyourphysicalandmentalhealthallthebadthingsallharmfuleffects有害影響增強你戒手機上癮的決心helpyoubedeterminednottouseit.strengthenyourresolveonquittingcellphoneaddiction.和我一樣過健康有意義的生活stopitleadashealthyandmeaningfulalifeasIhave.usefulsentencepatternsinU3RevisionPre-writingWhile-writiVarioussentencepatternsessaypolishingVarioussentencepatternsessay14Neitherdid
Iknowthat…(P18,L22)Everytimeyoufeellikesmokingacigarette,remindyourselfthat…(P19,L6)ButIdid
finallymanage.(P18,L18)Infact,itis
thementaladdictionthat
makesitreallyhardtoquitsmoking.(P20,Ex2)Itseemsamazingthat…(P18,L2)It
wouldbeagoodideato…(P23,Ex3)Itistimetoquitsmoking.(P18,L27)WhatIdidknowwasthat…(P18,L23)usefulsentencepatternsinU3倒裝V非名從狀從定從強調(diào)RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingNeitherdidIknowthat…(P18,LRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingDearJane,
I’msorrytolearnthatyousufferfromcellphoneaddictionandI’mwritingtoofferyousomeadvice.Firstly,youcansetalimittothetimespentonyourphone.Itcanpreventyoufromabusingyourphone.Secondly,youcankeepyourselfbusybydoingmeaningfulmatterslikehomework,houseworkorsports.Theycankeepyouawayfromcellphoneandarebeneficialtoyourphysicalandmentalhealth.Lastly,listallharmfuleffectsaboutmisusingaphone.Theycanstrengthenyourresolveonquittingcellphoneaddiction.IhopemysuggestionsareusefulandwouldbehappyifyoucanleadashealthyandmeaningfulalifeasIhave.RevisionPre-writingWhile-writiDearJane,
Learningthatyousufferfromcellphoneaddiction,I’mwritingtoofferyousomeadviceonhowtoquitit.Firstly,itisadvisabletosetalimittothetimespentonyourphone.Itcanpreventyoufromabusingyourphone.Secondly,everytimeyoufeellikereachingforit,dohomework,houseworkorsportsinstead.Notonlycantheykeepyouawayfromcellphonebutalsotheyarebeneficialtoyourphysicalandmentalhealth.Lastly,listallharmfuleffectsaboutmisusingaphone,whichcanstrengthenyourresolveonquittingyourcellphone.IdohopemysuggestionsareusefulandwouldbemorethanhappyifyoucanleadashealthyandactivealifeasIhave.(119)RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingDearJane,RevisionPre-writingWcellphoneaddictioninothersituationsfurtherdiscussionRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingcellphoneaddictioninothers18Outdoors,theyareusingcellphoneswhen…drivingacarRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingridingamotorcycleridingabikeHarmfuleffects：distract(分散)attention;causetrafficaccident;livesatriskAdvice:remindoneselfofsafetyproblemsinstreetsOutdoors,theyareusingcellpIndoors,Theyareusingcellphoneswhen
theyarestayingwith…friendsfamiliesrelativesharmfuleffects：lackface-to-facecommunication；feellonely;affectthehabitofothersadvice:caretherealpersonaroundyou;haveface-to-facecommunication;setsomeruleswhengatheringRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingIndoors,TheyareusingcellphShantouNationalCivilized(文明)Cityenvironmentspirit(精神)RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingShantouRevisionPre-writingWhilDearCitizens,Recently,cellphoneaddictionhasbecomesoseriousthatitharmsourspiritualconstructiongreatly.I’mheretoappealtoyoutoquitit.Whenyouareoutdoorsdriving,ridingorwalking,+suggestions…
Whenyouareindoorswithfamiliesorfriends,+suggestions…It’stimethatwe…andIdohopethatwebecomecivilizedbothinenvironmentandspirit.
Mayor(市長)ofShantouDearCitizens,MayorDearCitizens,Recently,cellphoneaddictionhasbecomesoseriousthatitharmsourspiritualconstructiongreatly.I’mheretoappealtoyoutoquitit.Whenyouareoutdoorsdriving,ridingorwalking,itissuggestedthatyouleaveyourphoneaside.Everytimeyoureachforit,remindyourselfthatyouareriskingthelivesofyoursaswellasothers’.Whenyouareindoorswithfamiliesorfriends,youaresupposedtocaretherealpersonaroundyouandhaveface-to-facecommunication.Ifneeded,youcansetsomeruleswhenyouaregathering.It’stimethatwestopabusingourcellphonesandIdohopethatwebecomecivilizedbothinenvironmentandspirit.YoursSincerelyMayorDearCitizens,HomeworkPolish(潤色)yourownessay“AdvicetoJane”(handitintomorrow)RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingHomeworkPolish(潤色)yourownes24HowtoStopCellphoneAddictionRevisionandWritingtopicHowtoStopCellphoneAddictio25AdvicefromGrandadrevisionAdvicefromGrandadrevision26Harmfuleffectsofsmoking(P18)RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingAdviceonquittingsmokingAdvicefromGrandadHarmfuleffectsofsmoking(P18dodamageto_________________
RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingHarmfuleffectsOntheaddictbecomingpregnantheartandlungsbeunabletoenjoy_____________sportssmell____________preventscouplesfrom______________________easilyOnotherpeopleterribleaffectthehealthof_________________non-smokersdodamageto_________________Advice231prepareyourselfRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingbreakthehabitgethelpifneededkeeptryingbedetermined56relax4Purposeoftheadvice?Reasonfortheadvice？Purposeoftheletter:PersuadeJameswhois_________tocigarettesto______smokingandstrengthenhis_______.Reasonfortheletter:GrandadhopesobecausehewantsJamestoliveas____________________________ashehas.quitresolvelongandhealthyalifeaddictedAdvice231prepareyourselfRevisNeitherdid
Iknowthat…(P18,L22)Everytimeyoufeellikesmokingacigarette,remindyourselfthat…(P19,L6)ButIdid
finallymanage.(P18,L18)Infact,itis
thementaladdictionthat
makesitreallyhardtoquitsmoking.(P20,Ex2)Itseemsamazingthat…(P18,L2)It
wouldbeagoodideato…(P23,Ex3)Itistimetoquitsmoking.(P18,L27)WhatIdidknowwasthat…(P18,L23)usefulsentencepatternsinU3RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writing倒裝V非名從狀從定從強調(diào)NeitherdidIknowthat…(P18,LWritingTask
Jane’sProblemandyourAdviceRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingRevisionPre-writingWhile-writi31DearClassmates,Ifoundmyself________________terribly.Everyday,Ispendsomuchtimein___________________thatIcan’tconcentrateonmy__________.Worsestill,myeyessometimesfeel______afterwatching….Last,therelationbetweenmeandmy________________aregettingworsebecausewelack___________talks.Iknow_______________isharmfultome,butIjustdon’tknowhowto______it.Couldyoupleasegivemesome______onit?YoursSincerelyLiHua
playingmycellphonefamiliesorfriendsface-to–facecellphoneaddictionquitadviceRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingaddictedtocellphonehomeworkpainfulDearClassmates,playingmycelDearClassmates,Ifoundmyself________________terribly.Everyday,Ispendsomuchtimein___________________thatIcan’tconcentrateonmy__________.Worsestill,myeyessometimesfeel______afterwatching….Last,therelationbetweenmeandmy________________aregettingworsebecausewelack____________talks.Iknow_______________isharmfultome,butIjustdon’tknowhowto______it.Couldyoupleasegivemesome______onit?YoursSincerelyProblemsandAdviceplayingmycellphonefamiliesorfriendsface-to–facecellphoneaddictionquitadviceRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingaddictedtocellphonehomeworkpainfulaffectJane’s_________healthmentalaffectJane’s_________healthphysicalaffectJane’s_________relationsocialWhattrouble
isJanein?Sheis__________cellphone.addictedtoProblems?Advice?consultafriend/teacherinstudyaskafriendorfamilytokeepitsetatime
limitdevelopyourinterestinanexercisedooutdooractivitieswithafriendsetagoaltoyourphysicalfitnesshaveface-to-facecommunicationsetsomeruleswhengatheringDearClassmates,ProblemsandBBEI'mreallyconcernedabout...,soI'mwritingto...Firstly,…Inaddiction,…Lastly,…Itisagoodideato…IfIwereyou,Iwould…Iwouldappreciateitifyoufindtheseproposalsuseful.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.structureAdvicetoJaneRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingBBEI'mreallyconcernedabout.RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingDearJane,I’msorrytolearnthatyouusethecellphonetoomuch
andI’mwritingtoofferyousomeadvice.Firstly,youcansetalimittothetimespentonyourphone.Itcanhelpyou
nottousethephonetoomuch.Secondly,youcankeepyourselfbusybydoingmeaningfulmatterslikehomework,houseworkorsports.Theycankeepyouawayfromcellphoneanddogoodtoyourhealth.Lastly,listallthebadthingsaboutaboutmisusingacellphone.Theycanhelpyoubedeterminednottouseit.Ihopemysuggestionsareusefulandwouldbehappyifyoucanstopit.YoursLiHuaSampleanddiscussionRevisionPre-writingWhile-writiAdvancedexpressionsessaypolishingAdvancedexpressionsessay36RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingDearJane,I’msorrytolearnthatyou
andI’mwritingtoofferyousomeadvice.Firstly,youcansetalimittothetimespentonyourphone.Itcan.Secondly,youcankeepyourselfbusybydoingmeaningfulmatterslikehomework,houseworkorsports.Theycankeepyouawayfromcellphoneand.Lastly,listaboutmisusingaphone.Theycan.
Ihopemysuggestionsareusefulandwouldbehappyifyoucan.sufferfromcellphoneusethecellphonetoomuch
addiction遭受手機上癮之苦Advancedexpressions阻止你濫用手機helpyounottousethephonetoomuchpreventyoufromabusingyourphone對你身心健康有益dogoodtoyourhealth.arebeneficialtoyourphysicalandmentalhealthallthebadthingsallharmfuleffects有害影響增強你戒手機上癮的決心helpyoubedeterminednottouseit.strengthenyourresolveonquittingcellphoneaddiction.和我一樣過健康有意義的生活stopitleadashealthyandmeaningfulalifeasIhave.usefulsentencepatternsinU3RevisionPre-writingWhile-writiVarioussentencepatternsessaypolishingVarioussentencepatternsessay38Neitherdid
Iknowthat…(P18,L22)Everytimeyoufeellikesmokingacigarette,remindyourselfthat…(P19,L6)ButIdid
finallymanage.(P18,L18)Infact,itis
thementaladdictionthat
makesitreallyhardtoquitsmoking.(P20,Ex2)Itseemsamazingthat…(P18,L2)It
wouldbeagoodideato…(P23,Ex3)Itistimetoquitsmoking.(P18,L27)WhatIdidknowwasthat…(P18,L23)usefulsentencepatternsinU3倒裝V非名從狀從定從強調(diào)RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingNeitherdidIknowthat…(P18,LRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingDearJane,
I’msorrytolearnthatyousufferfromcellphoneaddictionandI’mwritingtoofferyousomeadvice.Firstly,youcansetalimittothetimespentonyourphone.Itcanpreventyoufromabusingyourphone.Secondly,youcankeepyourselfbusybydoingmeaningfulmatterslikehomework,houseworkorsports.Theycankeepyouawayfromcellphoneandarebeneficialtoyourphysicalandmentalhealth.Lastly,listallharmfuleffectsaboutmisusingaphone.Theycanstrengthenyourresolveonquittingcellphoneaddiction.IhopemysuggestionsareusefulandwouldbehappyifyoucanleadashealthyandmeaningfulalifeasIhave.RevisionPre-writingWhile-writiDearJane,
Learningthatyousufferfromcellphoneaddiction,I’mwritingtoofferyousomeadviceonhowtoquitit.Firstly,itisadvisabletosetalimittothetimespentonyourphone.Itcanpreventyoufromabusingyourphone.Secondly,everytimeyoufeellikereachingforit,dohomework,houseworkorsportsinstead.Notonlycantheykeepyouawayfromcellphonebutalsotheyarebeneficialtoyourphysicalandmentalhealth.Lastly,listallharmfuleffectsaboutmisusingaphone,whichcanstrengthenyourresolveonquittingyourcellphone.IdohopemysuggestionsareusefulandwouldbemorethanhappyifyoucanleadashealthyandactivealifeasIhave.(119)RevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingDearJane,RevisionPre-writingWcellphoneaddictioninothersituationsfurtherdiscussionRevisionPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingcellphoneaddictioninothers42Outdoors,theyareusingcellphoneswhen…drivingacarRe
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