利弊分析型作文課件

1、Advantage & disadvantage這種題型往往要求先說(shuō)明一下某一事物或社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度（利或弊）出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度（或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè)） 說(shuō)明事物現(xiàn)狀 事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)（或一方面） 你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀（或前景）的看法說(shuō)明利弊題型利弊分析型作文第一段：導(dǎo)言+優(yōu)點(diǎn)。簡(jiǎn)述事物或現(xiàn)象并列舉說(shuō)明其優(yōu)點(diǎn)。第二段：列舉說(shuō)明其弊端（注意以表轉(zhuǎn)折的過(guò)渡詞引導(dǎo)）。第三段：簡(jiǎn)要評(píng)論利弊關(guān)系或簡(jiǎn)述個(gè)人體會(huì)。結(jié)構(gòu)模式利弊分析型作文Model I Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant

2、 role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First -(的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一). Besides -（的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that -(的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn))To make matters worse,-(的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn)) Through the above analysis, I believe

3、 that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to -(我的看法) (From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, -(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè)） Nowadays, there is a widespre

4、ad concern over （the issue that）作文題目. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in _題目議題 . Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, 優(yōu)點(diǎn)一 . And secondly 優(yōu)點(diǎn)二. Just as a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, 討論議題 is no except

5、ion, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, 缺點(diǎn)一. In addition, 缺點(diǎn)二_. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 討論議題 into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the 討論議題.Model

6、IIThe Positive and Negative aspects of Computers It is generally accepted that computers benefithuman beings in many ways. Computers are being used widely in the world today for the simplest reason that they are far efficient than human beings. Computers have much better memories and can store huge

7、amounts of information, and they can do calculations in a fraction of the time taken by a human mathematician. In fact, computers can do many of the things we do. They can pay wages, reserve seats on a plane, control machines in factories, etc.NowadaysThe Positive and Negative Effects of Computers (

8、1)it is very convenient and economical to do anything on the internet. The globe will be like an office or home. This is the unprecedented charm of the computer. In short, computers have been making the whole world much more advanced and civilized than ever before. However, computers have been creat

9、ing many problems. Firstly, viruses arise frequently, bringing great troubles to many people. Secondly, some computer “experts” make huge amount of money by cheating a computer system, and they are very difficult to catch. What is more, some people transmit pornographic information or pictures on th

10、e Internet, which is harmful to young people. Despite their disadvantages, computers have brought us far more benefits than troubles. The Positive and Negative Effects of Computers (2)08.06四級(jí)考試作文題目： Recreational activities提綱 1. 娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)多種多樣 2. 娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)可能使人們受益，也可能有危害性 3. 作為大學(xué)生我的看法此次作文難度適中，沿襲了往年的?？碱}型argumenta

11、tion型，討論某一主題的利弊。本次題目recreational activities涵蓋面寬，因此考生可以把話題縮小到某一個(gè)范圍，對(duì)于大學(xué)生而言，對(duì)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)上的娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)可能更有話可說(shuō)，所以可以把這個(gè)很泛的話題限制在網(wǎng)絡(luò)娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)。而對(duì)于網(wǎng)上活動(dòng)的利弊想必同學(xué)們都可以說(shuō)出一二，好處比如能夠開(kāi)闊眼界、增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，弊端就是很容易上癮，影響學(xué)習(xí)生活；而個(gè)人的看法就是用其精華棄其糟粕，即利用其好處，對(duì)不好的地方避而遠(yuǎn)之。 Sample1:Recreational Activities 21st century has brought with it an unprecedented variety of r

12、ecreational activities ranging from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of online ones, the latter of which is a great appeal to the young generation. So Id like to narrow my topic down to online recreational activities. It goes without saying that various activiti

13、es brought by modern technology have greatly broadened our horizon and brought much excitement to us. With access to the Internet, you can get to know people from any country in the world and you can talk with them, play games with them - a temptation very hard to resist, and even see them via web c

14、am. The disadvantage, however, is that anyone who lacks self-control would very easily get lost and become addicted to the online world, which in turn might seriously affect their life, work and interpersonal relationships. As a college student, I think what really matters is to make better choice a

15、nd exert more discipline. Wed better take advantage of good online recreational activities to enrich our lives and broaden the scope of knowledge. When it comes to those addictive, time-consuming and less meaningful activities, I think to stay away from them is a wise decision. Sample2:Recreational

16、Activities In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities. Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help peo

17、ple relax physically; while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally.However, some people think that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives. Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselve

18、s in those activities. At last they are lured away from their study or their work.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them. Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful too

19、l for our development.In-class practice:上網(wǎng)（surf the Internet)已成為越來(lái)越多人生活的一部分，請(qǐng)談?wù)勆暇W(wǎng)的利弊 Surf the Internet With the development of science and technology, internet plays a more and more important role in our life. There are a lot of advantages using internet, among which the following are the most obvio

20、us in my mind. First, The convenience internet bringing to us is self-evident. We can easily get access to various kinds of information and know whats going on around the world staying at home. Second, internet makes our life more colorful and wonderful. We can watch movie, TV, and play games as we

21、like. It helps us to relax whenever we need to. Third, internet is time-saving and energy- saving. We dont have to spend so much time in the library or market as we used to do; neither do we have to search from piles of books to find out a piece of information we needwe hand it to internet. But ever

22、y coin has two sides: there is no exception for internet. More and more people take advantage of internet to cheat others, and cybercrime is increasing rapidly. Besides, many people are addicted to internet, resulting in great harm. Yet we cant go without internet. Then we should make good use of it

23、 and try to avoid its side effects.Practice : Private Cars寫(xiě)成4段的首段寫(xiě)法：1.In recent years, with fast economic growth, private cars have appeared in many families in China. Peoples attitude toward private cars varies widely.2. With the increase in the general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese fam

24、ilies begin to afford a private car. Yet, peoples opinions of private cars vary from person to person/ public attitude toward it varies greatly/ widely./ is quite of the contrary./ differs sharply.3. In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to publ

25、ic attention/ in the limelight. Peoples views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely.寫(xiě)成3段的首段寫(xiě)法：With the development of modern society/ science and technology, / With the improvement of peoples living standard, more and more people can own private cars.cars are entering ordinary families.the

26、 growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言)支持段的主題句：Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages of owning a private car.There is no doubt that private cars

27、 benefit people hugely.支持段的分論點(diǎn)： 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation. 舒適 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm. 炫耀 Third, only a private car can show a persons social status/ achi

28、evement/ success/ prosperity in his or her career.否定段的主題句： However (Nonetheless/ Nevertheless/ But), there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides. While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introd

29、uce/ make. Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits. However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults. Yet other speak of the problems private cars hav

30、e brought. They complain that. However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced. Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences否定段的分論點(diǎn)： 占有空間 On the

31、 one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space. 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen. 污染環(huán)境 Whats more/In addition, private cars give off/ discharge/ release CO which pollute the environment/ air.注意：所謂上義

32、詞是指抽象、概括和籠統(tǒng)的，就是比較superordinate的詞；而下義詞就是具體的東西，即subordinate的東西。第四段（總結(jié)段）的寫(xiě)法： Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages. As for the above problem, Im sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only

33、a matter of time for the problems to be solved. Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us. Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort a

34、nd independence a private car can bring will not be elminated. Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain: private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life.Sample2: With the fantastic spur both in

35、industry and in economy in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But there have been two quite different views on this phenomenon. Some claim that there are many advantages brought about by car

36、s. First, the automobile industry provides jobs for countless workers and strong support for other industries. Second, if conditions permit, owning a car can make us work more efficiently. Finally, life will become more convenient. A car allows one to move freely and with a car there is no need to w

37、ait for the bus in the cold or under the burning sun. However, others strongly object to the increase in developing private cars. They hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run in the street, a large volume of poisono

38、us gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic congestion so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is

39、the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second. In my opinion, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollutio

40、n, more traffic accidents and more angrgy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Traffic accidents kill thousands and thousands of people each year and cripple more. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore I am against developing private cars.In-cla

41、ss practicePrivate Tutoring1、為孩子聘請(qǐng)家教目前非常普遍 2、家教的利與弊 3、你的看法 However, private tutoring has its own disadvantages, for one thing, it takes up so much of the pupils time that they can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment, which are essential for their physical and mental health. For anothe

42、r, some teachers, busy “shuttling” from one family to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties. Whats more，some teachers are eager to help pupils do well in the test, offering the so-called tips for test-taking rather than help them acquire what is more meaningful Generally speaking, i

43、ts disadvantages outweigh its advantages. Greater emphasis should be laid on classroom teaching and practice, on the improvement of teaching quality and on the tapping of the pupils potentials. Only in this way can we generation be healthily brought up.Correction: Private Tutoring Nowadays private t

44、utoring is very popular with students on campus. More and more students choose to be tutors in their spare time. After class on the weekend they will spend time working as private tutors. There are various reasons for students to work as tutors. I maintain three of them are very important. Firstly,

45、students from poor families want to earn money to relieve their parents burden. Secondly, many students who are studying in Normal College expect to obtain practical experience for the future. Lastly, some students want to associate with society in this way. Up to now, I havent taken any part-time j

46、ob like tutoring because I am busy with compulsory courses. In my opinion, at present laying a solid foundation in studies and improving my analytical ability are more important than earning money or obtaining experience. Assignment:Making Friends Online為什么許多人熱衷于網(wǎng)上交友？網(wǎng)上交友的利與弊。我的看法。Model: Making Frie

47、nds Online With the rapid development of IT technology, Internet has become a most advanced means of communication for people. As a result, more and more people enjoy making friends online. Just as every coin has two sides, making friends online has become a double-edged sword for people. On the one

48、 hand, Internet provides us with wider social circles in which we can meet and make friends with people in all parts of the world, and we can broaden our horizon by making friends of different races, sexes, cultures and professions. On the other hand, since Internet is a virtual world, we can easily

49、 fall into the traps hidden behind it. The Advantages of Planning for Success Everyone hopes for success in life, but not everyone can succeed, even after years of hard work. So what is the best way to increase our chances of success? Is it to take every risk or chance that comes along and hope for

50、the best? Some people certainly do achieve success this way, but they are rare. As a matter of fact, our chances of succeeding are much greater if we carefully plan for our success.優(yōu)點(diǎn)分析型作文 Planning for success is beneficial to us in several ways. For one thing, by planning we can clearly identify ou

51、r goals and the steps we must take to achieve them. If we dont know what we want to achieve, we are unlikely to make much progress. Planning also helps us keep our goal in mind and, thus keep working toward it. Another benefit of careful planning is that we will not miss any opportunities or deadlines due to carelessness or inattention. Finally, by planning for our success, we will be sure to develop the skills and knowledge we need to achieve our goals. Opportunity will do us no good if we lack the abili