2023學(xué)年完整版高中英語(yǔ)Module5TheGreatSportsPersonal -

HowtoBeautifyYourWriting如何讓你的作文“亮”起來(lái)四川省蓬安中學(xué)校英語(yǔ)組顧永連Step1Lead-inDoyouhaveanydifficultyinwriting?Words?phrases?Sentences?Howtobeautifyyourwriting?Step2PresentationUsebamboostandardstobeautifyyourwriting!竹式標(biāo)準(zhǔn)4看：一看竹干：主題突出全面；二看竹節(jié)點(diǎn)：連接過(guò)渡恰當(dāng)；三看竹節(jié)：句式正確多樣；四看竹葉竹枝：詞匯短語(yǔ)提亮。4美化：Beautifyvocabulary——“竹葉”didn’tdo:________________thinkthat:__________believe:___________important:__________easily:____________Beautifyexpressions——“竹枝”moreandmorestudents:___________inmyopinion:_________thinksthimportant:_______________Beautifyconjunctions——“竹節(jié)點(diǎn)”首先：遞進(jìn)：最后：轉(zhuǎn)折：總結(jié)：舉例：強(qiáng)調(diào)：事實(shí)上:Beautifysentencepatterns——“竹節(jié)”好用易學(xué)的高級(jí)句式加分點(diǎn):簡(jiǎn)單句中分詞的使用+1；it句型+1；強(qiáng)調(diào)句+1;定語(yǔ)從句/同位語(yǔ)+1;倒裝句+1.Step3PracticeWords:“好竹葉”——高級(jí)替換，低級(jí)淘汰outsideworldisbeautiful.→Theoutsideworldis____________.isgoodtodoexerciseeveryday.→Itis______todoexerciseeveryday.3.Iamhappytohearfromyou.→Iam_______tohearfromyou.Phrases:“好竹枝”——多用短語(yǔ)和語(yǔ)塊isimportanttohaveashortbreakfromaclass.→Itis________tohaveashortbreakfromaclass.2.Youdesperatelyneedmyhelp.→Youaredesperately__________myhelp.entranceexaminationisnear.→Theentranceexaminationis____________.Conjunctions:“好竹節(jié)點(diǎn)”——無(wú)縫銜接Itried.Irealizeditwasindeedhelpful.Ithelpsusrelaxourbody.Italsohelpsusrefreshourmind.→Idid____realizeitwasindeedhelpful_____Itried.________,ithelpsusnotonlyrelaxourbody_________refreshourmind.Sentencepattern:“好竹節(jié)”——形式多變1.巧用分詞Iknowyouareintrouble.Iwanttogiveyouahand.美化：2.巧用形式主語(yǔ)“it”Peoplesaythatlisteningtomusiccanreducestress.美化：3.巧用強(qiáng)調(diào)句Properstresscanmakeusstronger.美化：4.增分定語(yǔ)從句Manystudentsdosports.Itdoesgoodtotheirhealth.美化：5.增分同位語(yǔ)Stressisakindofdifficulty.Itisnormalforeveryone.美化：6.增分倒裝Wecanachieveourgoalsonlyinthisway.美化：Step4ConclusionBamboostandard:好竹枝葉，好竹干，好竹節(jié)點(diǎn)，多變竹節(jié)。Step5ProductionDrawyourownbamboostandardandshowus!Writedownwhatyouhavelearnedtoday.Step6Homework假如你是李華,你聽(tīng)說(shuō)好友小明因?yàn)楦咧袑W(xué)習(xí)壓力太大想輟學(xué)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示給他寫(xiě)一封信:1.勸小明正確對(duì)待壓力,并提出減輕壓力的幾個(gè)方法;2.希望小明