高考英語應用文寫作-課件

寫作

---基于結構、內容和語言的視角

寫作11.培養(yǎng)應用文寫作邏輯思維。2.熟悉應用文篇章結構特點。3.牢記應用文語言表達特點。4.精選寫作題材與范文分析。1.培養(yǎng)應用文寫作邏輯思維。20102應用文的評分原則、細節(jié)和樣文賞析從結構、內容、語言的視角應對應用文寫作03如何改進你的應用文寫作0102應用文的評分原則、細節(jié)和樣文賞析從結構、內容、語言的3假定你是李華，計劃組織一次郊游，請給你的英國朋友Chris寫封郵件邀請他參加。內容包括：1.參加者；2.時間、地點；3.活動：登山、野餐等。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80字左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。邀請信2017年6月浙江省高考應用文假定你是李華，計劃組織一次郊游，請給你的英國朋友Chris寫4一.應用文的總評分原則與細節(jié)嚴謹?shù)男形慕Y構:第一部分應為問候語和寫信目的第二部分mainbody活動內容第三部分表達對方應邀的愿望完整的內容、豐富的語言和句式詞數(shù)少于60或多于100,扣2分內容要點遺漏，或篡改要點，降一檔標點符號大面積不規(guī)范,扣1-2分書寫較差,影響交際,可將分數(shù)降一檔格式不對,扣一分（一）總評分原則應用文的總分為15分,這一次的均分去零分卷后為9.1。（二）具體評分細節(jié)一.應用文的總評分原則與細節(jié)嚴謹?shù)男形慕Y構:（一）總評分原5一.應用文的樣文賞析DearChris,

[I'mLiHuaandI'mwritingtoextendmyearnestinvitationforyourparticipationintheoutingorganizedbyme.]Aimingtogainabetteracquaintancewithexoticculture,Ihaveinvited

teenagersIknowallovertheworldtogetactivelyinvolvedin

thisevent.

Forthesakeofconvenience,theoutingfallsinHongKongat9a.m,onJuly6th.Brimfulofintriguingactivitieslikeclimbingandhavingapicnic,thisouting

isboundtobeahugesuccess.Aresponseatyourearliestconveniencewillbehighlyappreciated!

Yours,

LiHua

14分行文結構清晰;適當添加細節(jié)使內容完整；語言表達能力強;詞匯和句式豐富;完全達到了預期的寫作目的開頭段：自我介紹+寫信目的適當?shù)募毠?jié)添加：活動的目的、意義（第二句）中間段：活動內容（語言表達地道、詞匯豐富、有理有據(jù)、行文流暢）結尾段：表達愿望（恰當使用應用文套話）一.應用文的樣文賞析DearChris,14分行文結6一.應用文的樣文賞析DearChris,I'mLiHua.Iintendtoorganizeatrip.I'llinvitemyfriendswhoyou'llgetonwellwith.WewillgotoHuangshannest

Wednesdaywherewecanvisit

beautifulnaturalviews.Ofcourse,theactivitieswhich

arefantastic.Forexample,climbingthemountainandhavingapicnic.Atthesametime,we'lltakephotosinordertomemoryourtrip.Ibelieveifyoujoinus,you’lllovetheviewsfromthebottomofyourheart.I'mlookingforwardtotravelingwithyou!

Yours,LiHua

行文結構比較完整，若寫信目的自成一段可使文章結構一目了然；覆蓋了主要內容;有些語言方面的錯誤,但不影響理解;整體而言,基本達到了預期的寫作目的;8分一.應用文的樣文賞析行文結構比較完整，若寫信目的自成一段可71.應用文的分類2.應用文的特點3.應用文寫作中存在的問題4.解決的策略及實踐二、應用文寫作

---基于結構、內容和語言的視角

二、應用文寫作

8失物招領尋物啟事倡議書請假條告知函發(fā)言稿（演講稿、

致辭等）通知（書面、口頭）報道……（一）、應用文的分類（Classification）投訴信感謝信邀請信道歉信求助信求職信建議信推薦信申請信祝賀信詢問信失物招領（一）、應用文的分類（Classificatio9（二）、應用文的特點Clearinstructure（結構清晰）Substantialincontent（內容充實）Appropriateinlanguage（語言得體）（二）、應用文的特點Clearinstructure10（三）、應用文寫作中存在的問題1.卷面不潔2.文體不辨3.格式不妥4.結構混亂5.讀者不明6.要點不全7.過度添加8.語法錯誤9.套語連篇10.觀點缺乏（三）、應用文寫作中存在的問題1.卷面不潔6.要點不全11內容完整性格式規(guī)范性語言得體性應用文內容完整性格式規(guī)范性語言得體性應用文12問題分析卷面不潔2.文體不辨3.格式不妥4.結構混亂5.要點不全6.過度添加7.觀點缺乏8.語法錯誤9.套語連篇10.觀點缺乏結構內容語言問題分析卷面不潔5.要點不全結構內容語言13例1：

假定你是李明。你校邀請了英國伯明翰大學的ElliotSmith教授來做關于莎士比亞生平的講座。請你作為主持人向參加講座的同學用英語介紹講座情況。內容包括：

1.講座的教授和講座的內容；

2.講座后有自由交流時間；

3.對教授的講座表示歡迎。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.參考詞匯：伯明翰大學：theUniversityofBirmingham主持稿例1：假定你是李明。你校邀請了英國伯明翰大學14例2：

假設你是淘寶店“Beauty&theBeast”的店主張林，因為給客戶李華發(fā)錯了兩件襯衫的尺碼和顏色，特向李華書面道歉，愿意提供換貨服務，并且打八折優(yōu)惠以彌補過失。內容包括：

1.自我介紹；

2.誠懇道歉并說明原因；

3.愿意提供免郵費服務和八折優(yōu)惠；

4.如果對方不同意換貨，退貨也可以。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。道歉信例2：假設你是淘寶店“Beauty&t151.卷面不潔，字跡不清1.卷面不潔，字跡不清16高考英語應用文寫作-課件17高考英語應用文寫作-課件18解決對策：每天一練，日見效果閱卷時的視覺疲勞,速度快，如卷面的不美觀，書寫差，有時對作文成績的影響不是1-2分，而是5-6分，所以要把書寫放到第一點強調。解決對策：每天一練，日見效果19高考英語應用文寫作-課件20行文結構2.文體不辨3.格式不妥4.結構混亂行文結構2.文體不辨212.文體不辨2.文體不辨22稱呼署名3.格式不妥稱呼署名3.格式不妥23高考英語應用文寫作-課件244.結構混亂無分段4.結構混亂無分段25解決對策：仔細審題，明確格式分分段落，結構清晰投訴信感謝信邀請信道歉信求助信求職信建議信推薦信申請信祝賀信詢問信請假條告知函倡議書書信、郵件、假條等DearXXX,(稱呼)

Yours,(落款)

XXX

解決對策：仔細審題，明確格式投訴信書信、郵件、假條等26失物招領(標題)

Found

(署名)尋物啟事(標題)

Lost(署名)書面通知(標題)

Notice

(署名)出通知單位/個人口頭通知Ladiesandgentlemen,/Boysandgirls/……,mayIhaveyourattentionplease?

發(fā)言稿(演講稿\致辭)Ladiesandgentlemen,/Fellowstudents/Boysandgirls/……Thanksforyourlistening.

報道(標題)征文（標題）ContributionWanted失物招領(標題)Found27書信的結構開頭段：

（自我介紹）背景介紹+寫信目的

IamLiHua,aseventeen-year-oldstudent(from…seniorschool).Ihavelearned/beeninformedthat…

NowIamwritingtoapplyfortheposition/expressmygratitude…中間段：

具體問題（主題句）+具體分析（拓展句）

TherearefourmainreasonsthatIamqualifiedforthejob.Firstly,…Besides,…What’smore,…Additionally,…Herearesomedetailsfortheactivity.I’dlikeyoutoknowhowmuchyour…meanttome.Ireallyfinditextremelyhardtodo…Hopefullyyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldprobablybecomemuchbetter.Ihavebeenlookingforwardtodoing…However,…IbelieveifyouwereI,youwouldmakethesamechoice.Isincerelyhopethatyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.結尾段：客套話

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanwritemebackassoonaspossible.Iwouldfeelgreatlyhonoredifyou…(求職信)(邀請信)(感謝信)(求助信)(建議信)(道歉信)書信的結構開頭段：（自我介紹）背景介紹+寫信目的中間段：28內容完整5.要點不全6.過度添加7.觀點缺乏內容完整5.要點不全295.要點不全內容包括：

1.自我介紹；

2.誠懇道歉并說明原因；

3.愿意提供免郵費服務和八折優(yōu)惠；

4.如果對方不同意換貨，退貨也可以。5.要點不全內容包括：306.過度添加Wewillgatheratourschoolgatebefore8.am,whichislocatedonChongShiRoad.Pleasegettoourschoolgatebefore8:00am,whichmaybeprettyearlyforbothteachersandstudentsatweekend.YoumaytakeacamerawithyoubecauseI’mprettysurethattheawesomeviewonthetopofthemountainwilldeeplyimpressyouandyouwillhaveastrongdesiretorecordit.6.過度添加Wewillgatheratours31學校發(fā)現(xiàn)最近經常有學生違反學校規(guī)定，通過美團、餓了么等手機APP訂購外賣。假設你是新華中學學生會主席李華，請你代表學生會擬一份書面通知。重申禁令陳述禁令原因呼吁同學樣自覺遵守學校規(guī)定beharmfultohealthbreaktheschoolrules7.千篇一律，缺少獨到觀點學校發(fā)現(xiàn)最近經常有學生違反學校規(guī)定，通過美團、餓了么等手機A32解決對策：相互探討，相互借鑒；

仔細思索，考慮全面；觀點深刻，見解獨特；解決對策：相互探討，相互借鑒；33陳述禁令原因-----觀點收集：1.點外賣需要手機，將手機帶到學校來不僅會分散我們的學習注意力，還會造成其他的負面影響。Toordertakeout,youmusttakemobilephonesintocampus,whichwilldistractourattentionfromstudy,andexertothernegativeimpactonstudents.2.外賣的食品安全不能得到保障，而學校食品都是經過權威部門檢測，可以放心食用。Thesafetyoftakeoutcan’tbeguaranteed,whilethefoodprovidedbyourschoolcanteensarehealthytoeat,becauseitisinspectedbyauthorities.3.點外賣不僅浪費時間還浪費金錢，因為學校的飯菜價格合理，口味多樣，品種豐富。It’sawasteoftimeandmoneytoordertakeoutbecauseschoolcanteensprovidefoodwhichisrichintastesandvariety.

陳述禁令原因-----觀點收集：344.外賣往往盛放在塑料盒里，塑料很難降解，會對環(huán)境造成污染。Takeoutisusuallykeptinplasticcontainers,whichishardtobreakdownanddoesharmtotheenvironment.送外賣的人員隨意進出校園,會給校園管理增加困難,對學生的安全也是一種潛在的危險.Thefactthatthedeliverymenoftakeoutenterourcampusatwilladdstothedifficultyofourschoolmanagement.Besides,itisapotentialdangertothesafetyofstudents.4.外賣往往盛放在塑料盒里，塑料很難降解，會對環(huán)境造成污染35Notice

Recently,somestudentshaveorderedfastfoodonAPPssuchasMeituan,Eleme.TheirbehaviorshaveviolatedtheschoolrulessoI’mheretorestatetherestrictionthatorderingtakeoutisbanned.

Deliciousasfastfoodis,studentswilllosetheirbalanceofdietsiftheytakelong-termtakeout.Moreover,thesourceoffoodcan’tbeguaranteedsinceproducersaddharmfulsubstancestothefoodforhigherprofit.What’smore,somethievesmaypassthemselvesoffasthedeliverymanwhichisathreattostudents’possessionsandsafetyoncampus.Inaword,thebanisbeneficialtoallofyousoIappealtoeveryoneobeyitautomatically.

students’union----陳汪怡

36語言豐富得體地道8.語法錯誤9.套語連篇10.不得體不地道語言豐富得體地道8.語法錯誤378.語法錯誤（母語干擾）twoT-shirtsinwrongsizeandcolorProfessorTuwillcometoourschoolandgiveusalecture,whichiswelcomedbyShaoxingNo.1HiddleSchool’steachersandstudents.時態(tài)、語態(tài)誤用；主謂不一致；詞性混用；從句使用中缺乏語法結構；……8.語法錯誤（母語干擾）twoT-shirtsinw389.套語連篇Wewillappreciateitifyouareabletojoinusandtakepartinthisconsequentialactivity.First,pleasegettotheschoolgateat8:00am.Afterthatwewillsetouttogetherbybus.Intheend,wewillcomebackat5:00pm.Lastbutnottheleast,youcanbringacameratorecordthehappymoment.Withahistoryof80years,ourschool,whereyouareinnow,isequippedwiththreebuildings.9.套語連篇Wewillappreciateiti39解決對策：夯實語言基礎，多實踐多積累，仔細研讀范文。解決對策：夯實語言基礎，40假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知第十二屆國際未來商業(yè)領袖峰會（InternetFutureBusinessLeaderSummit）將在上海舉行，并歡迎中學生參加。請你寫一封電子郵件申請參加。寫作要點：自我介紹（包括英語能力）。參加意圖（增加商業(yè)知識、提高領導力、加強交流）。希望獲準。申請信假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知第十二屆國際未來商業(yè)領袖峰會（I41背景介紹+寫信目的Ireadaboutyourannouncementofthe12thInternationalFutureBusinessLeaderSummitpostedontheInternet.Ilearnaboutthe12thInternationalFutureBusinessLeaderSummitadvertisedonline./Igettoknow….Iamwritingtoapplyforparticipationinit./Iamwritingtoexpressmydesiretoparticipateinit.2.自我介紹（著重描寫自身優(yōu)勢:英語很棒、交流技能很強、對商業(yè)很感興趣、有參加此類活動的經驗……）haveagoodcommandofEnglish,speakEnglishfluently,beskilledincommunication,haveexperienceinattendingsuchsummits,beenthusiasticaboutfinancialactivities背景介紹+寫信目的423.申請參加的意圖即活動意義（增長商業(yè)知識、提高領導力、加強交流、積累經驗、拓寬視野、把中國推向世界、讓世界更加了解中國、搭建中國與世界溝通的橋梁）enrichmybusinessknowledge,myleadershipcanbegreatlyboosted,theactivitycanpromotetheexchangeofviews,accumulateexperience,buildupfriendshipwithpeersofthesameinterestfromallovertheworld，exposeChinatotheworld,enabletheworldtohaveabetterunderstandingofChina4.結束語（祝愿或希望）Idesirethatmyapplicationcanmeetyourapproval.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.3.申請參加的意圖即活動意義（增長商業(yè)知識、提高領導力、加43DearSirorMadam,I’mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.Ireadaboutyourannouncementofthe12thInternationalFutureBusinessLeaderSummitpostedontheInternet.I’mwritingtoapplyforanopportunitytojoininit.

Ithinkmyqualificationscanmeetyourrequirements.TwoyearsofEnglishlearningenablesmetocommunicatefluentlyinEnglish.Inturn,throughthesummit,Icandeepenmyunderstandingofbusiness,improvemyleadershipandcommunicatewithstudentsfromothercountriesaswell.Idohopetobeadmittedtoyoursummit.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Regards,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,44開頭段的好句：Iamwritingtomakeasincererequestforanopportunitytoparticipateinit.Iamwritingtoexpressmygreatdesireforadmissiontoit.Iamwritingtoapplyforaccesstoit./admissiontoit.Ihappenedtoknowthatthe12thInternationalFutureBusinessLeaderSummitwouldbeheldinShanghai,whichappealstomeagreatdeal.中間段的好句：EconomyorbusinesshaskeptmespellboundsinceIwasachild.---陶沂希IamdedicatedtolearningEnglishfromchildhoodtokeeppacewithtimes.Sothere’snoproblemformetocommunicatewithnativespeakers.–錢俊珺開頭段的好句：45ItcanbewellprovedbytheprizesIhavegotinthevariousEnglishCompetitionsthatIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.—方寒ItisnouseshowingoffhowIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,butIdohavenotroublecommunicatinginEnglish.---張豪Remarkablescoresonpapersneversatisfyme.Iholdtheviewthatonlyface-to-facecommunicationcanpromoteslanguageskills.Thatpartlyaccountsformyrequest.---何志臻Withoutdoubt,ifIcouldbeadmittedtothissummit,itwouldbringmesomebenefits.----沈紀年ItwillbeaperfectplatformwhereIcanenrichmybusinessknowledge,strengthenmyleadershipaswellaspromotemutualunderstandingandcommunication.–鐘澤宇Itcanbewellprovedbythep46AsanEnglishcluborganizer,IhavebeenengagingmyselfinEnglishlearningheartandsoul.Inreturn,IhaveagoodcommandofspokenEnglish.Attendingthesummitwillsurelygetmewellequippedwithbetterleadership.---魯家泊結尾段的好句：Ibetmyqualificationwillmeetyourrequirements.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.--王詩引Iwillbeobligedtoyouifyouoffermeapreciousopportunitytoattendthesummit.---夏俊豪IwillbemorethangladifIamblessedwiththisopportunity.—桂宇凡AsanEnglishcluborganizer,47三、如何改進你的應用文寫作Tip1:詞塊的積累Tip2:英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉Tip3:應用文可以模板化的一些東西專題教學---掌握技巧三、如何改進你的應用文寫作Tip1:詞塊的積累48詞塊的積累(Adv;Adj)

Adv:relyheavilyon;quarrelbitterly；highlysuccessful;reluctantly;

deliberately；beamplyrewarded；equallypleased;Adj:a

rewardingcause;particularlyappealing;amazing;a

remarkableachievement;enjoytremendouspopularity;promptaction;animpressivereminder;(marvelous;distinguished;splendid;decisive;incredible/inevitible;)詞塊的積累(Adv;Adj)Adv:49詞塊的積累(Verb)enablesbtodosth;ensureone'ssuccess;enrichone'sschoollife;encounternumerouschanllenges;enhanceefficiency;refreshone'sspirit/sb;relieveguilt/anxiety/stress;removeobjections/doubt;relaxoneself;restoreone'sconfidence;reassuresb;recallmemories；reveal;replace;containmyfeelings;concealthefact;詞塊的積累(Verb)enablesbtodosth50Noun體貼consideration;

同情sympathy寬恕forgiveness;

慷慨generosity;感激gratitude;

好客hospitality;忠誠loyalty;

分享sharing；容忍tolerance；理解understanding;見解

insight；志向

ambition;執(zhí)著,信奉commitment;勤奮devotion;diligence；毅力

perseverance；persistence熱情passion=enthusiasm=zeal;智慧wisdom;創(chuàng)造creativity;合作cooperation;

新奇的事物

noveltyNoun體貼consideration;51詞塊的積累(詞組)1、提高improve/enhance/promote/2、努力struggle/strive/sparenoefforts/3、得到gain/acquire/obtain/4、提供，給offer/present/grant/provide/supply5、表達convey/extendone'sgratitudeto...6、實現(xiàn)achieve/realize/fulfill/attain7、記得bear..inmind/neverfade8、有利于contributeto/makefor/9、影響beaffected/influenced/beimpactedby10、應該；besupposedto

期待beexpectedto；一定beboundto

；保證beguaranteedto11、忙于；從事beoccupied/beinvolved/engagedin...12、喚起對...意識arouse/evoke/

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早期學習英語對學生以后的成績提高有幫助。EarlyexposuretoEnglishwillhelpchildrenimprovetheiracademicperformance.e.g.Yourpresenceandblessingswillbehighly/greatlyappreciated.英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉一、巧用名詞英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉55二、形容詞作狀語活動：登山、野餐等Brimfulofintriguingactivities,like...areboundtobeahugesuccess.（2017浙江高考）保證補交作業(yè)（2106嘉興）Guiltyaboutit,IassurethatIwillaccomplishmyassignmentcarefullyandhanditinassoonaspossible.E.g.Theoldgoatrolled,dead.英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉二、形容詞作狀語英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉56三、定語從句(which非限制性定語)teenagersIknow;你設計的閱覽室和你留下的英語原著thereadingroomyouelaboratelydesignedandtheEnlgishnovelbooksyouleft未能完成英語老師Mr.Chen布置的作業(yè)而道歉(2016嘉興）Iammorethanapologeticforfailingtoaccomplishthehomeworkyouhaveassigned.說明原因(2016嘉興）Iwasinhospitalwithacontinuousfever,whichthuspreventedmefrombeingengagedinanyacademicactivity.英語常用句子的熟悉和錘煉三、定語從句(which非限制性定語)英語常用句子的熟悉57四、非謂語theoutingorganizedbymeAimingtogain

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